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Home»Fan Fiction»ishq ki kahaani part 16
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

ishq ki kahaani part 16

niku16By niku16June 14, 2017Updated:June 14, 201724 Comments5 Mins Read
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part – 16

in om –
rudra – saoumya , all packed and ready and can we leave now
soumya – u just go to chopper , I am coming
rudra – kk
rudra goes inside the chopper and was waiting for soumya

soumya came running and sees chopper , she felt a fear that how she will climb up

she was trying to climb when rudra gives his hand to soumya for help , soumya was satring at rudra in a gaze

rudra – sumo , abb climb up naa , what u are thinking

soumya climbs up and chopper flies away

abhi and anika enters the area
it is all crowded by people , different type of smell of perfumes were mixed in the air , anika was thinking what kind of place it was there

anika(pov)
what type of place it is
anika it’s a mask party , we have to wear the mask , abhimanyu with this handed over the mask to me and took me to the dance floor
, first the the music was normal , we all were dancing separately but then it changed into romantic one and with this my heart started throbbing fast , really I had to dance with abhimanyu , yaa yaa I call him cheeku but he not important to me like shivaay , thinly suddenly he said he was going to bring drinks and I nodded yes

shivaay (pov)-
aah let me wear this mask and I ll dance with her , till that damn abhianyu comes , she is my girl and no one dares to come close to her , I ll not leave u abhimanyu deewan , we would have something neck to neck

pov ends

with this shivaay goes and takes anika in his hand , first anika resist but she feels that the touch of the hands is known to her yes he was his shivaay
anika(in slow voice , quite astonished) – shivaay
shivaay(shocked ) in mind – did she said my name , did she know I m here , no she must be thinking I m abhimanyu , yaa our outfits are quite same

shivaay make anika closer and start dancing

anika(pov)- I knew he was shivaay , I too was nenjoying the game , my shivay was getting jealous , then shivaay started putting his finger from my neck to shoulder and I shivered , it was like a current flowed from my spine , I was enjoying it at my inside
(pov) ends
shivaay sees abhimanyu coming towards anika and leaves her

abhi – anika now shall we dance
anika (hesitating)- aah cheeku , I m not feeling well , and we have enjoyed a lot , now can we go back home

abhi – kk my darling lets go

they both leaves while shivaay too leaves and runs his car fast as he has to reach before abhi and anika comes

chopper has landed safely to the hometown of soumya , it’s the west Bengal side

they both have reached to the home
soumya(screaming) – ayyi , ayyi whare r u
aayi – soumya
rudra just runs back soumya
soumya cries seeing the condition of her ayyi , her aayi is laying on bed , her head is very hot due to fever , she was coughing hard , soumya could not understand what has happened to her ayyi and why she did not tell anything on phone
soumya – ayyi , yh kyaa ho gya app ko , r u fine

soumya crying loudly

aayi – soumya , I want to tell u something
soumya – haan aayi , btaa dena , phle app rest karo
aayi – soumya , I don’t know how much time I had now but I want to tell u something
soumya – yaa ayyi speak
ayyi – soumya beta , just open that drawer
soumya was wondering about the drawer , where she has signaled , it was the place where her mother had always a lock and she never let anyone open it ir talk about it
her mother told the key and she opened it

soumya found that the drawer was empty but containing only a locket
soumya held it in her hands

aayi – soumya , it is your locket

locket has so many stars with the moon , it was just a beautiful locket

aayi – soumya beta , I have one more thing to tell u
soumya sitting beside her ayyi , holding her hand tightly
soumya – haan ayyi boliye
aayi – soumya , u r not my child

so guys its very wrong I m only getting 14 , 15 comments , it really hearts when u doont comment , I want silent readers to give their view too and I thanks all of them who appreciate my work , they motivate , if this continues than I will stop writing my ff

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    24 Comments

    1. Aysha on June 14, 2017 5:15 pm

      It ia awesome

    2. Stutii on June 14, 2017 5:24 pm

      Amazing dear love it.? I was just eagerly waiting for ur ff and when I saw ur ff I hurriedly opened it….love it plz post next part soon??????

    3. Dhar on June 14, 2017 5:33 pm

      Woah , she’s Anika’s sis. Plzzzz do post the next update ASAP

    4. Aashi on June 14, 2017 5:40 pm

      awesome
      so AniMya are sisters
      update soon

    5. Sairan on June 14, 2017 5:47 pm

      Awsomee episode fantastic

    6. Vignesh on June 14, 2017 5:59 pm

      It’s was awesome ff dear.. thr wil b a lot of silent reader like me who was eagerly waiting for ur ff so dnt worry.. i oso guest tat sumo was anu sister.. waiting for the next next update eagerly.. hope u wil update next ASAP.. ??????????????

    7. nikita_jai29 on June 14, 2017 6:11 pm

      It is awesome dear..

    8. salma on June 14, 2017 6:16 pm

      Awesome update….plzz update soon thank u ??

    9. Tina on June 14, 2017 6:50 pm

      Loved it . Plzz post next part soon

    10. madhu.r on June 14, 2017 7:01 pm

      Super sis

    11. alekhika20 on June 14, 2017 7:14 pm

      Amazing update

    12. kanfi on June 14, 2017 7:17 pm

      Hey niku..
      Its ammazingg,.
      Day by day,plot is becoming intrstingg

    13. UF on June 14, 2017 7:22 pm

      AWESOME INTERESTING NICE SUPERB???

    14. Honey on June 14, 2017 7:45 pm

      Wonderful..pls update soon

    15. [email protected] on June 14, 2017 8:03 pm

      Amazing

    16. gayathri.visu on June 14, 2017 8:05 pm

      Amazing dear… AniYa are sisters? Eagerly waiting for next part dear.

    17. Anju on June 14, 2017 8:09 pm

      Awesome

    18. Lauren on June 14, 2017 8:58 pm

      Amazinggggg dr!!! post nxt soooooooon

    19. Niriha on June 14, 2017 10:28 pm

      Awesome…

    20. fffan1234 on June 15, 2017 12:18 am

      Very nice dear

    21. Ankita27 on June 15, 2017 12:23 am

      superb update..

    22. Madhuani on June 15, 2017 1:23 am

      Awesome…

    23. Banita on June 15, 2017 2:52 am

      It’s Superbb dr…… Is soumya anika’s sis….. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt… Pist ASAP…

    24. swapna on June 15, 2017 4:38 pm

      Super.post asap

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