Hii frndzz..Presenting the Tale of Om.. Om narrates as a writer of tiz 2S..At the OS end,The start of the 2ndS comes…
“I strt mix the colors Red n Orange..for drawing curly hairs of a girl….”..
“..Wish to hear music…while drawing…So,I playing songs….
Draw with hearing songs make me imagine new styles of art..”….
….
…”Now..Eyes…
Eyes of a girl..or a boy?”…
I strted spinning the brush…n think…
..B?G? G?B?..
Comes to a decision..
Maybe its gud if close the eyes by a cloth…
While seeing,I decided to draw a small story..Many boxes for drawing a story:
1st: draw a girl whom eyes r closed by a white cloth…
2nd:N drums….playing..
3rd:A boy enters….
With”I m coming”..
N 4th: Opens the cloth which covered her eyes..
5th:Her eyes open….
6th:She see the boy with showing her face in a small mirror…
7th:The girl shocked while see herself..
8th:”A cap on her head..It has Rabbit Bunny ears”
9th:The girl shocked while seeing her..
10th:”The boy dances fast beat .of drums.with seeing The girl…”
11th:”The girl signs “sSh” in her fingers….
12th:She feels something colorfully on her face….
13th:While touching the face,her hands get mixtures of colors…
14th:The Girl seeing her hands…
15th:The Girl’s smiley eyes n lips..
16th:The Boy takes something from his bag n throw…towards the girl..
Pink color….”…
17th:n smiles
18th:The girl (childishsmile)smiles n close her eyes,turning back…
19th:With a side face of the smiley girl,I write “Ishq..”in pinkcurved…
20:The boy smiles n said”Ishq is coming”…
…Baaz coming on his side…
I cut the 19th n 20th box n join tat….
Ishqbaaz….Soon n I m coming to See U”……
All tiz played on TV..
“Kshi….Ishq Soon??!!”
A mild voice made Sona turn…n see Dev’s hand makes a little spin of paintbrush…
“Ishaana..Ishq Soon??!!”
A mild voice made Ishaana turn…n see Om n his right hand holds A Laptop..
Hope U like this frndzz.. While thinking for “Luv’s 1st Sec” tiz 2S comes in mind..Due to getting less leisure times,coming with 2Shot..VerySoon ‘ll get Xtra times…I ‘ll write more..Sorry for tiz frndzz….
Tanq frndzz…Tanq for reading n write ur thoughts after reading…..
Tanqqq……
18 Comments
I don’t understand
Before “All tiz played on TV”..all scenes r seen by Sona n Ishaana in TV as Om’s promo for Ishbaaz..In comic books,Boxes separates the every scenes..Like Pogo’ s MAD,Om narrates everything in promo..While the promo is ending,Sona call by Dev n Dev in artist style n Ishaana call by Om n Om in Dev style in their homes..Sorry Manvi for confusing..
So confused
Before “All tiz played on TV”..all scenes r seen by Sona n Ishaana in TV as Om’s promo for Ishbaaz..In comic books,Boxes separates the every scenes..Like Pogo’ s MAD,Om narrates everything in promo..While the promo is ending,Sona call by Dev n Dev in artist style n Ishaana call by Om n Om in Dev style in their homes..Sorry Sabina for confusing..Maybe it is gud if I tried to made describing every seq ..
I am not able to understand a single word of this ff
Sorry Sneha..I just write the thoughts without nil modify
Om made a comic book style of Ishqbaaz promo..Sona n Ishaana in their homes see tiz..in TV..Dev with brush like Om n Om with laptop like Dev..Hope U understood..
Not nice…..
Tanqqq Ashriti..I need a review like Urs.. Losing my full hope in writing stories,I just write the thoughts without a single modify..5 comments here more than my actual stories..Sorryyy yaar
Hey Harshan I am able to understand a lil bit and it’s nice but plzz make it clear ?
Sure Ayushi..I always believe in “If U wish to create something Gud without hurting others,U just do that..It makes Ur work gud”..Bt,While writing sometimes I lost tiz belief after realizing abt need of supporting in tiz presence of shift works daily ..Needs at least – ve reviews for enrich me..Even here crosses 5comments..It makes me enrich..Without prepars,I just write always..I know it needs modify…Sure..In coming ones,I ‘ll rectify tat..
Sorry I can’t understand what u wrote plz make it clear
Sorry Bshama..I just made Om is preparing a comic book style of Ishqbaaz promo..Sona n Ishaana see that promo in Tv in their homes..Dev comes with painting brush like Om to home like Om as Dev to see Ishaana..
Listen i think i understood pls say if im right……. i think:(i dont understand the characters though)
That all these which u hv named *1st 2nd 3rd …. and alll* are like a promo that we see on the tv….. this is being watched by two girls= sona & whatever she is (is she ishaana?)……… this is being sort of very colourful….and this promo is in a flow with colours flying from here to there……then sona and the other one see this promo ….. just then dev and om come …. dev is holding a paintbrush and om is holding a laptop
Please say if im right or wrong
S..Sakshi..Crct..U r right!!!The numbers r actually like the story boxes in comic books..Om made that in paper like PoGo’s MAD..in Tv..S..She is Ishaana..Dev comes to see Sona like Om’s style n Om as Dev’s style..
Now I am completelyyyyyy clear…. literally you must become an author….. but one thing …..as many are not being able to understand……frame it like …if…. someone else writes u can also understand…… but if you start to excel in that minor fault in ur writing…… im sure you ll be able to write so so sooooo much better… and that ‘ll be lovely..
Tanqq Sakshi..for most valuable comment..If U luv DevShi,I wish U could read “Where is DevShi?” or If U luv Ishkara,I wish U could read “PinkishPuzzle”..n plz review tat..Before tat..I write a crystal clear story now..I ‘ll follow ur advice..in it.n my upcoming writings….I hope I’ll try my level of work better in coming ones..Hope our frndzz ‘ll luv tat..Tanqq Tanqq..Happyy to hear “literally you must become an author”..Tanq for encouraging..