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Hey guys!! I am back with my third ff. I just hope you guys like this because I have been working on this ff since I started Pyaar Ho Toh Aise, so this is a polished ff and hopefully this will make up for my last two crappy ffs I wrote.
This one might be a bit longer than Pyaar Ho Toh Aise but hopefully not as long as Everything Is Fair In Love And War
Just a fair disclaimer, if you are new let me just tell you that each episode can be about 1000-2500 words
… so let’s get started !!!
PS: “” means their thoughts
Is Love After Marriage Possible?? – Episode 1
A beautiful girl is sitting on her bed late at night. She has a long mehndi on her hand to her elbow and is wearing a pretty red chura (red bangles)!! She is currently writing in her diary
Today is my last day as a bachelorette!! Last few moments, I actually can’t believe that I, Sanchi Mishra, am getting married to Kabir Kapoor. He’s my head and he’s just so Khadoos, I don’t know if I will ever be happy with him. But since I am essentially restarting my life, I guess I can make an effort… right??
But you know that the only reason why I am getting married is to make my parents happy and lower their burden…
I do not have any expectations for this marriage and any expectation from Kabir. All I need is a man who can respect me and won’t use me to have kids and WILL NOT treat me as a trophy wife. That’s it!! 3 expectations …………
So this girl is our Sanchi, a little harsh but we won’t be invading her privacy… too much. Let’s see what Kabir Kapoor has to say
Kabir is standing at his balcony…
In His Thoughts
Kabir: “ Last day as a bachelor… my entire room has been changed for the woman who will supposedly be behind my success. Sanchi Mishra. But I am only marrying her because of my parents. But Sanchi isn’t a bad girl, she is … nice and I like her for who she is. She can be stubborn and obnoxious but she isn’t someone I hate. WHAT AM I THINKING. Anyway beside that…. Mom Dad have done a lot for me so I can do something for them. This marriage is a new beginning for me and I will try to put some effort.
But I wonder why Sanchi said yes, she and I used to argue so much but now we barely talk at home and even on those so called dates she barely even looked at me. Whatever I will see tomorrow ”
The Next Day
Kabir is wearing a golden sherwani with a golden pagaradi and Sanchi is wearing a designer red gold lengha…
Kusum and Shailesh Talking To Kabir
Kusum: Please don’t be mean to Sanchi
Shailesh.: Please at least give her a chance
Kusum: Just say nice things to her
Shailesh: Compliment her
Kabir: I think I got this but thanks anyways
Shailesh: He is finally getting married
Both Kusum and Shailesh high five
Kabir is sitting down at the mandap doing some rituals while Sanchi is mentally preparing herself in front of the mirror.
Sanchi: You can do this Sanchi!! If your parents can sacrifice a little so that you can have a better future then you can sacrifice a little too!! And Kabir isn’t that bad. Breathe in …. and out ”
Sanchi is taken down to the mandap and she sits right beside Kabir and both start the rituals and eventually get to the pheras and after they take everyone’s blessings they go to the banquet hall rooms just to relax and Mishra’s wanted to spend some last few moments.
Isha: So now you are Sanchi Kabir Kapoor
Sanchi: Sanchi Mishra Kapoor
Pragya high fives Sanchi
Pragya: You want me to sneak in some vodka
Jaya: What were you saying Pragya
Pragya: I was asking if she wanted some juice
Isha and Pragya walk out
Jaya: I can’t believe that you (Sanchi) are finally married and that to Kabir Kapoor, the most eligible bachelor.
Suniel: Humari nanhi se gudiya ka jaane ka time hogya
Once Jaya leaves
Suniel: Just remember beta, as long you are respectful to everyone and to everything then you will be fine. I have full faith in you that wherever you go that family will be the luckiest family in the world.
Sanchi teared up and hugs Suniel
Suniel: Hey Sanchi
Veer: Well, Dr. Kabir is officially married. Ab meri baari
Kusum lightly hits Veer,
Kusum: Let me tell Savitri this
Veer: Arre aunty, it’s not my fault Kabir didn’t enjoy his years but let me naa
Veer runs out
Kusum starts fixing Kabir’s pagdi and then sits in front of Kabir
Kusum: Respect, respect Sanchi and her feelings. She is leaving her entire world to start a new world with you. Don’t be Khadoos Kabir in front of her okay.
Kusum smiles and Kabir smiles back
Kabir: Veer told you
Kusum: No all the interns
Kabir rolled his eyes and heads out with Kusum.
Sanchi comes downstairs with a teary eye. She looks back at the banquet hall and then walks forward crying and hugging her father.
Suniel: Sanchi … don’t cry you know I can’t see you cry
Sanchi: Papa… how can I … leave you
Suniel: Sanchi… you are my brave princess
Jaya and Sunny come to Sanchi
Sanchi continues to cry making Sunny and Jaya cry too.
Then teary Isha and Pragya bring a thali of rice and Sanchi throws the rice back into Jaya’s pallu (i think that’s what it’s called). Sanchi finally gets into the car and Suniel pushes the car and his princess away.
In The Car, (limo with a soundproof black windows in between back and driver)
Sanchi is sobbing and Kabir is looking at Sanchi… but then he hesitantly holds her hand. But Sanchi shoves it away
Kabir: I just want you to know that everything will be okay but for now… here
He hands her his handkerchief.
Sanchi smiles at him
Sanchi: Thank you
Kabir: “Okay then”
Sanchi: “ What have I gotten myself into?? ”
Sanchi and Kabir get out of the car and go to Kusum who is waiting for her precious son and daughter-in-law at the door. She does their aarti and Sanchi steps into the vermillion water and goes in while Kabir follows her.
Kusum: I know you two are tired but we just have one more ritual…
Kanchi are taken to the family/living room and Kusum calls for a large bowl of milk and when it comes
Kusum: I will put this ring in the milk and whoever finds it first wins… ready
Kabir and Sanchi hesitantly start looking for the ring and after a few seconds Kabir pulls out the ring.
Kusum: Ladkiyon tum Sanchi ko uske room mein le jao
Kabir’s cousin sisters take Sanchi into her room and when Kabir gets up to leave
Vivaan: Bhai aap kahan itni jaldi mein chale
Kabir: I’m tired Vivaan
Vivaan: You can sit right back down
Has been decorated with scented candles and rose petals and heart shaped balloons.
Sanchi: My luggage
Kriti: Right there Bhabhi
Meera: You can sit right here and Bhai will be here shortly
Kriti: Meera di are these walls soundproof
Meera: Should be… anyway guard the gate
Both giggle and walk out
Sanchi sits down on the bed and once the girls leave…
Sanchi: Should I wait for him or no??
Just then Kabir comes in and places his pagdi on the vanity and walks towards Sanchi
Sanchi: “Punch or kick”
Kabir sits next to Sanchi and raises her ghunghat
Kabir: “ What the heck do I do ”
Sanchi looks away
Kabir: And I know that you must be tired like I am but I just wanted to talk to you… after we change
Sanchi: Thank god
Kabir goes into his closet and Sanchi starts removing her jewelry and bobby pins
Kabir: “ What the heck should I do?? I am not about to do it with her today!! Whatever I am tired so I’m going to sleep ”
Sanchi: “Just don’t make eye contact ”
Once both get comfortable, they both sit on the bed.
Sanchi: Good Night
She laid down and looked the other way. Soon both drifted off to a peaceful sleep
Kabir hears Kriti and Meera knocking and goes to open the door…
Kriti: Someone had a busy night
Kabir: Why are you here??
Meera: Tai-ji was saying that both of you have an hour and half to get ready and come downstairs
Kabir closes the door and sees Sanchi sitting up
Kabir: We have to get ready
Just then Vivaan knocks
Sanchi: I’ll get it you can shower
Sanchi opens the door
Vivaan: Bhabhi… Maa wanted to tell you that you don’t have to wear something extremely traditional
Sanchi sighed in relief
Vivaan: You’re welcome
So Sanchi and Kabir get ready… Sanchi in a red punjabi suit and Kabir in a white kurta…
Kabir extends his hand but Sanchi goes out the door.
Both walk downstairs sit down at the dining table
Vivaan: Oh ho Bhaiya
Kabir glares at them
Meera: I feel so sorry for Sanchi, Kabir’s glares for a lifetime
Sanchi: I signed up for it
Kriti: Tsk tsk tsk, Breaking News: Sanchi Mishra, a sweet innocent girl, married to Kabir Kapoor, the king of all glares. Kya hoga iss bechari ka
Chachi: You mean Sanchi Kabir Kapoor
Sanchi: Actually, I …
Chachi: You were saying
Sanchi: Nothing Chachi-ji
Meera, Vivaan, and Kriti high five each other
Kabir: Can we eat now
Kusum: Come on guys you are always teasing Kabir
Meera: Where is Dad
Vivaan: And my dad
Kusum: They will be here any minute to settle down
Shailesh: Good Morning Everyone
Chachu: Good Morning
Vivaan: Good Morning Dad and Chachu
Meera Kriti: Good Morning Tao-ji and Dad
Kabir Sanchi: Good Morning Dad (Sanchi doesn’t say Dad)
Shailesh: Sanchi every morning we all say good morning at the dining table, just a small tradition
Sanchi nodded her head and everyone started eating
Vivaan: So when will you two go on a honeymoon
Kanchi look at each other
Vivaan: Sorry Dad
Kusum whispers to Shailesh
Kusum: Ab toh bahu bhi aagi now at least come one notch down
Shailesh: Some other day
Chachu: When will Kabir and Sanchi be joining work again
Shailesh: How would I know
Kabir: Next week
Sanchi looked at Kabir.
Kabir: Maa we are doctors, we have patients to handle
Meera: Bhabhi yeh Kabir ka motto hai. I am a doctor and I have patients to handle
Sanchi: I mean he’s not wrong, our work is much more important since we are constantly saving lives. We don’t just go to an office, sit there in front of a computer and come back.
Vivaan: Dang Bhabhi
Vivaan: Now I feel bad
Sanchi: Oh sorry I am not trying to offend you.
Vivaan: I was just kidding
Sanchi: Then why don’t you finish eating your sandwich
Shailesh: Good Job Sanchi
Vivaan: How rude
After breakfast, everyone sits in the living room
Meera: Bhabhi here
Kriti: So where are you going for your honeymoon
Sanchi: … I don’t know
Meera: If you really want to go then you have to push Kabir into the topic
Sanchi: “Like I want to go”
Kriti: Accha toh aapko hum sabhi ka intro dete hai
Meera: Woh hai Tao-ji, your father-in-law. Strict hai but on the inside he is the sweetest man ever. Self-made man unfortunately kabhi kabhi Bhai aur inki banti nahi hai since Bhai joined the medical field. He is a proud father but will rarely show it. Just know he loves everyone equally
Kriti: Next is sweet sweet Taiji, your mother-in-law. She loves to cook, go to kitty parties, and joke around especially with Bhai and Taoji. She is the most understanding mother as well. As gone through all the ups and downs along with Taoji.
Meera: Secret ki baat, if you ever pass by their room. You might hear the names Shah-jahan and Mumtaz
Meera: Next our parents, they also love to joke around with everyone. Joy and happiness to everyone. Expert at making fun of everyone so be careful around them. But when needed they can be extremely strict, not usually though
Kriti: Vivaan, he handles the business and is the biggest prankster. He gets it from Taiji. Very sweet and protective of us.
Meera: Best brother and our best friend… don’t tell that to him. Last but not least, Bhai, aapke patidev. Khadoos hai, egoistic hai, strict hai, blunt hai but once you get to know him he is just like us awkward, gentle, caring and extremely protective
Kriti: So that’s our family
Sanchi: Thanks!! Was really needing that
Meera: Don’t say thank you, we just want to make your life easier in this complicated family
Chachi: What are you whispering to Sanchi
Meera: Nothing mom
Chachu: Just don’t tease our beautiful bahu
Kriti: That’s your job Dad
Chachi: Good one
Hope you guys enjoyed this first episode!! But I know not a lot of you did not like it because of how I made Sanchi’s character in this ff. But I promise it will be fine soon!! This is just the beginning but unfortunately it will be like this for a couple of episodes. Sorry
Sanchi’s first day at Kapoor Mansion (continuation)
Pag Phera Rasam
Sameer is BACK
Hope You Have An Amazing Day!!!