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Home»Fan Fiction»An Intangible Feeling (RAGSAN FF) Part 9
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An Intangible Feeling (RAGSAN FF) Part 9

MmpBy MmpMay 26, 201732 Comments8 Mins Read
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Kajal look at swara who was coming towards them smiling widely. Ragsankaj look at her confused. “What happened…???? Why are you showing your Battisee (teeths)” asked kajal. “He does’t love mishu di” said swara grinning. “Who don’t love my Jaanu… I will break his legs” ragini twisted her lips. Swakajsan look at her with wide eyes. “Did she just tell that she will break someone’s leg…!!!!” asked sanskaar shocked looking at ragini who was opening her another chocolate. Swakaj nodded their head still shocked. Ragini smile at trio and asked “Now tell me who don’t love her…??” “No one…I don’t trust you now..who knows you will really break his legs” said swara scared. Sankaj laugh looking at her. “Tell naaa” whined ragini. “No” “Tell” “No” “Tell” “No” “Tell naa pleaseeeee” ragini blinked her eyes. swara huffed and muttered “Laksh …Laksh Maheshwari..!!!!”

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Arjadi was laughing madly wheras laksh was cursing them. “You should just see his face that time” laugh Adi. “I missed it yaar…!!!” arjun made a sad face chuckling. “Uda Lo..Uda Lo..!!! mera bhi din aayega (Laugh…Laugh…!!! My day too will come.) “But what is the problem lucky..she is beautiful, smart and (with a wink) HOT too” teased adi suppressing his laugh. “Then go and marry her….!!!! And I will marry Mishu” he teased back. “Oyeee…Bhabhi hai wo teri..!!! (O… She is your Bhabhi…!!!)” exclaimed adi instantly. Laksh and arjun brust into laughter and give hifi to eachother. “You two are really bad” adi pouted. “O really..!!! Who were teasing a mintue before..!!!” laksh placed hands on his waist. Adi smiled sheepishly. Arjun laugh and encircled his both hands around their neck. “You both are too much” he shakes his head and trio laugh.

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“What Bhaiiii….!!!!! Bhai loves Mishu di” asked sanskaar shocked. ” Oye Mandbudhi…!!! She said he does’t love her” ragini patted his head. He mouth shaped a big ‘O’ and swakaj chuckle. “You are giving me shock after shock…!! You…!!!ย  Not so looking Kid…..!!!!” said he shocked. Ragini giggled slightly. “So why were YOU smiling with this news” Kajal placed her hand on her waist Narrowing his eyes at swara. Swara became nervous suddenly. “She love him ..!! That’s why…!!!” said ragini casually eating her chocolate. “THADDD” a loud sound came suddenly which brings swakaj to out of their shocked state. They look down at sanskaar who was layind on the floor unconcious. Kajal sprinkled some water on his face and he open his eyes slowly. “WHAT IS SHE..???” asked he in trance looking at ragini whose mouth was fully smeared with chocolate. Swakaj chuckled again. ” What are you guys doing on ground ” asked ragini innocently and sanskaar gave a million dollar expression seeing her innocent look.

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It was their last period of class before lunch break. Ragini look at Sanskaar who was concentrating on board and writing something in his copy. ” Boring Padhkau Insaan….!!!!” murmured she annoyed. Kajal look into the direction she was looking and elbowed swara. ” Kya Hai…??? (What..???)” shouted swara ,who jerked from her dreamland due to kajal,unknowningly . All heads turned towars swara and she realized where she was. Their teacher look at swara managing his glasses on his nose with his index fingure. “Sorry Sir…!!” said swara with a sheepish smile.The teacher gave her a annoyed look and continued his class.

“Why were you elbowing me in the class…??? ” asked swara when they settled in canteen. “Nothing will tell some other time” said kajal looking at ragsan. “Ohhhoooo…..Am I seeing my bro sitting with aย  gorgeous Kid” laksh look at him in shock whereas sanskaar gave a ” shut Up” look on his brother’s over acting. “And she is not a kid…!!! Not after what she told today…!!!” said sanskaar making faces. “Really…!!!! Tell me also naa what she told today” tease laksh. kajal who was sipping her juice coughed badly. “Do you really want to know..!!!” this time asked swara in a teasing tone. Laksh’s expression change suddenly. “No I Don’t..!!” said he making faces and went from there. In the whole coversation ragini was eating her third chocolate which she took before leaving home as her daily dose.Sankaj look into his directon confused whereas swara chuckle.then trio look at ragini and shakes their heads in disbelief.

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“Kajal…!!! Are you okay..???” asked arjun when he see kajal standing alone in front of her class after college. She nodded and gave him a smile. ” Should I drop you home..???” asked he smiling back and kajal wide her eyes. “Am I dreaming …!!! Jaan You are asking me to drop me home…!!!” exclaimed kajal with a shocked face. ” O God …!! She is back again with her Jaan chant ” murmured he annoyed. ” No I think you are absolutely fine… So you can go yourself” said he . ” No…!!! You only drop me. ” kajal encircled her arms around his neck. Arjun wide his eyes and jerked her. “Chaley..?? (Shall we go…??) ” said she giving a tight smile. He hummed and murmered ” O GOD …!!! Where I get myself into all over again..!!” but in heart he was happy to see that beautiful smile on her face after the last incident.

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“There came your Jaanu ” said sanskaar to ragini when he look at mishu coming into the parking area. Mishu smiled at swara and sanskaar and they smiled back. Mishrag bid bye to them and left from there. ” I too leave now..” said swara and he nodded with a smile. Laksh who just entered into their look at them alone and frown. “What were you doing with her..???” asked laksh to sanskaar narrowing his eyebrows. “Are you Jealous..????” tease he to laksh. “Why will I be jealous” said he avoiding eye contact. Sanskaar gave a teasing smirk. “Wipe off that stupid smirk from your face and Let’s go…!!!” said he annoyed and headed towards his car. Sanskaar gave a laugh and start his bike.

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“Did you reach safely..?? “asked adi on phone. Mishu smiled and think to tease “Why all of the sudden this much concern haan..?? ” Adi smile and tease back “Because now you are my girlfriend…!! And I should be concerned about my would be wife naa..!!! ” Mishu blushed hard listening ‘would be wife ‘ for her from his mouth. “Adityaa ” whishpered she. “Haayeeeeee all of a sudden my name looks so beautiful in your voice ” he fall on his bed dreamily. Mishu turned crimson red and cut the call.

“Why are you looking like a tomato jaanu..??” said ragini coming into the room. “Woh..woh…” mishu stammer. “I got to know jaanu..!! But I am angry on you that you didn’t tell me ” ragini angrily pouted. “I was about to tell you but” stopped mishu. “But what..??” questioned she. “Nothing ” mishu pouted. “Then tell naaa…I am waiting “said she excited. “But you said you know that ” mishu narrowed her eyebrows and ragini bite her tongue. “Woh…I..Haan…I know… But I want to hear it from you ” said ragini with a wink. “He proposed me and I said yes” said she in one breath closing her eyes tightly. “What…!!!!!” ragini wide her eyes. Mishu opened her single eye and look at her innocently. “Who..?? “asked ragini shocked. “Who.. What who..!! Aditya..!! who else ” said mishu twisting her lips. “Finally I got to know “ragini grinned. Mishu wide her eyes realizing that she blurted out everything.

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“How was your day sanskaar “asked ap when all set for dinner. “Mom I am too there ” whined laksh. “Okay..How was your day..??” asked she. He remembered sanskaar with swara. “Bitter ” said he giving a glare to sanskaar who was enjoying his dinner patiently. “Did you met that girl today..??” asked dp excited all of the sudden to sanskaar and he chocked. “Today he met another girl dad” said laksh with twisted lips. “Mera beta h.. Ek se iska kya hoga (He is my son..what will he get with one girl only) I am proud of you my son ” exclaimed dp with a wide smile. Sanlak shut their eyes tightly knowing what coming next. There their father sitting all wet and their mother was standing beside him giving a deadly glare. “Why you always tell secrets openly…I never do that ” said hp looking at dp’s condition. And the next moment a stamp on his foot he received from his beloved wife who was looking at him with a tight smile. Sanlak nodded their head in disbelief and continued their dinner peacefully, because they know no questioning session will start after this atleast for today.

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So guy’s after a long time I am back with IF.
Hope youย  like it.
Do let me know how’s it..!!

Till then
Be happy n keep smiling.

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    Wattpad id-ragika1 You can read my other work there too. And just be happy n keep smiling.. ?

    32 Comments

    1. ???? on May 26, 2017 9:08 am

      I love kajunnnnn……….. Their chemistry……. awesome…… Bolo koun hai jo mishu di ko love nhi krta……… Darr gye sb Rag se……. Lollllzzzzz…………. Chocolate khane se uska Dimaag bhut chlta hai…. Jo choco khaate hai unka sharp mind hota????????ragu ne sacchi hi kehla diya………. Ooossssmmmmmm……… Gundi chhupa rustam ginuuuuuu…… Lovd it……… Missd
      it……… Update others also ?????

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 1:59 pm

        Aww.. Thank you so much dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    2. keerthu on May 26, 2017 10:21 am

      Awesome dr……………… Waiting your next ff dr……….

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:33 pm

        Thank you keerthu..:-)

    3. Sindhura on May 26, 2017 10:25 am

      Awesome

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:34 pm

        Thank you dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    4. crystal089 on May 26, 2017 11:01 am

      it was awesome loved it its really amazing ragu is so cute yaar update soon

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thank you crystal.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    5. Anisha on May 26, 2017 11:11 am

      Nice chappy.Ragi can u pls write more RagSan scenes?

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thank you ani..:-) And bear me with this just 2 or 3 chappy. After that it will be maximum ragsan n less others.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    6. Sreevijayan on May 26, 2017 11:12 am

      Hhayeee..ragu is such a darling…loved it soo much dear….

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thank you sree..:-)

    7. Asw on May 26, 2017 12:21 pm

      Amazing keep going

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:30 pm

        Thank you dear

    8. CrazygirlS.P on May 26, 2017 2:03 pm

      Superbly awesome sweetheart, I love it??????โคโคโค

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:30 pm

        Thank you sam..:-)

    9. aleeza on May 26, 2017 2:36 pm

      Awesome

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:31 pm

        Thank you ale..:-)

    10. Makku on May 26, 2017 4:02 pm

      Superb, awesome akka. I was laughing like an idiot throughout the part. That dialogue of Ragini after Sanky falls down,” What are you guys doing on the ground” was awesome. Ragini is full of life. I loved, loved, loved all the scenes akka. Ap,Dp and Hp scenes were hilarious.Update next part soon akka.

      Bye akka. Take care.

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:32 pm

        Happy that you like it. Thank you so much dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    11. maha on May 26, 2017 5:35 pm

      amazing

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:32 pm

        Thank you maha..:-)

    12. vini on May 26, 2017 6:05 pm

      Awesome

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:34 pm

        Thank you vini..:-)

    13. nive on May 26, 2017 6:41 pm

      awesomeee

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:35 pm

        Thank you nive..:-)

    14. sug on May 26, 2017 8:31 pm

      Awesome

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thank you dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    15. aditi on May 26, 2017 9:31 pm

      Amazing show more ragsan scenes

      • Mmp on May 26, 2017 10:04 pm

        Thank you dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    16. A.xx on May 27, 2017 3:48 pm

      Amazing and love ragsan xx

    17. Ammy on May 28, 2017 8:31 pm

      awesome

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