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Home»Colors»Bepannah»INSTORE FOR US… it’s her story (shot 9)
Bepannah Beyhadh Fan Fiction

INSTORE FOR US… it’s her story (shot 9)

MeghuBy MeghuFebruary 19, 20214 Comments4 Mins Read
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Lakshmi is working in the hospital…

Adi:Dr. I have AIDS

Lakshmi smiles seeing him.

Lakshmi:what are you doing!

Adi:I was checking sounds from my body,

Lakshmi:I thought you checking those two heart in your body,

Adi:how can we have two heart. We have two kidney and just one heart…oh! You are talking about the letter!

Lakshmi:how can I forget about the letter? You have written such an adorable letter.

Adi:what is this Lakki? You fall for my letter listening only a small portion…

Adi makes her sit and takes out the letter from his purse.

Adi: I will start from here. If I have helped someone today,their gratitude should not be towards me. But towards you, because whatever I am today, it’s all because of you.

Lakshmi holds him with love and runs her hand through his hair like usual.

Adi:I always knew that you are my mom. But when did you become my best friend? Whatever…

Aditya’s phone interferes..

Servant:Hello…sir Maya mam is having high fever. Come home soon.

He reaches home and gives her medicine,

Maya:I am troubling all of you.

Aditya:will you drink some more water?

Maya:I drank now.

Adi:dinner? Sleeping tablet!

Maya:kya…

Adi:what will you have to shut up and sleep. So much for troubles. I hate all these formalities. I won’t talk to you.

Maya:sorry…

Adi: if you again talk of troubling me,I will punch you. If you need anything,just call me.

He leaves.

Maya:Adi…

He comes and sees her.

Maya:I checked if you can hear !!!

Adi:I can hear pretty much, You know this house has a speciality, if one is sleeping the other can’t get sleep.

Maya:heh?!

Adi:I have a disturbed pattern of sleep.

Maya:so here is what you can do.

Maya gives the advice to Adi( The advice which Arjun had given her before)

Adi is in bed. He closes his eyes.

He is in the world of imagination.

Adi: I wish to spend my entire life with you, I Love You…

Adi smiles and Maya is seen opposite to him.

He gets up tensed. He lost his sleep.

Morning, Adi is talking to his mom…

Adi: How will I tell her? Having casually asked each other not to talk about love. How can I talk now? She had lot of pain because of love.

Lakshmi:when did you started thinking so negative? Talk to her. Let’s see what happens next…

Adi:it will be awesome if she accepts. But it will turn ugly if she rejects me. I can’t even face her.

Maya walks in calling him. Adi cuts the call.

Maya: Morning…

Adi:Ha! How is the fever now?

Maya:it subsided yesterday night itself.

Adi:oh! Fine.

Maya: Dad called me, he asked me to come,so I have to go.

Adi:No worries,there is a train.you can board it.

Maya: fine..I will get ready then.

She walks out…

Maya reminisces seeing Aditya in her dream and confessing her love similarly…

Maya sits tensed.

Adi: let’s take my friend’s car.

Niel: oh!this is Maya. Nice to meet you,

Adi:we will return soon.

Niel: okay bye.

They get in and leave. There was an unusual silence between them.

They reach station. Aditya is really sad about the fact.

Adi: so,take the medicine.

Maya gets in the train,

Maya:I will. I am sorry,if I troubled you.

Adi:want to go back injured?

They smiles. Both are looking each other’s eyes.

Train slowly starts moving.

Adi:so it’s time to bid final good bye. All must end right.

Maya:thank you for all the care.

Adi;why are you thanking me? It’s all free.

Maya:we will meet somewhere… may be here for your marriage.

Adi:I have decided that I will not marry.

Maya:you are insulting me now.

Adi:you don’t have any doctorate in love! Leave now!

Adi stops walking along the train. Aditya stands in paltform.Maya also stands.

Muffled events from the past where they had said the same and others…

They realise it’s mutual feeling. Aditya looks at her compartment and maya sees him.

Adi:do you?

Maya nods yes happily.

Both are on cloud nine. Adi gets into the last compartment and runs. Maya runs to him. They hug each other and feels so elated.

Maya:Adi,I can’t breathe.

Aditya leaves her from his tight hug.

Adi: it’s not my fault,I didn’t propose you.

Maya:neither me did.

Adi: all the fault is on love. Can we hug a little longer?

Maya:there is lot of time for you to get down.

They hug.

Aditya gets down in the next station. His mother gets elated hearing the good news.

Maya and Adi talks throughout the journey

Sorry friends… it has been too long. Thank you shesha,Jasmine rahul and zingo dear…

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    4 Comments

    1. Jasminerahul on February 19, 2021 6:46 am

      Adi saying to lekshmi that if anyone wants to express gratitude towards him they should do that to him as he is like this bcz of her.adi in love.wow.how adiya realised that their feelings are mutual n the hug was beautiful.loved the pics

    2. Kifu on February 19, 2021 1:22 pm

      Very nice episode ☺️☺️..i was boring so I started reading your FF and it’s very superbb..loved adi and maya buy still feel sad for.arjun though he died🥺🥺

    3. Shesha485 on February 19, 2021 5:08 pm

      Nice episode. Loved the conversation between Aditya and Lakshmi. Maya telling the method of sleep which was suggested by Arjun, was cute. Loved the marriage and insult wala dialogue
      Adiya realizing their feelings and hugging each other without proposing by words is beautiful

    4. aftauing on February 20, 2021 8:51 pm

      When Will you upload next episode??

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