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Home»Fan Fiction»THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ OS -SHOT 3
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

THE INSEPERABLES – ISHQBAAZ OS -SHOT 3

VHMBy VHMApril 23, 201759 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hello this VHM signing back with a new OS …….i thought I will end this OS may be in two to three shots but I guess this will take much more episodes …….i will try to wind up as soon as possible …….this os is on the current story line of IB with spoilers taken into account….please do ignore the grammatical mistakes….

Anika came outside Oberoi mansion along with Sahil and looked the mansion teary eyed………..OmRu came to her running…………

Om ‘’Bhabhi how can you accept your defeat so easily…why didn’t you claim your rights? What is wrong is wrong …if the mistake is by elders or youngers…….and this time choti maa is wrong……’’

Rudra ‘’ Om I am much angry on Shivaay bhayya…at this situation too he stayed silent…how could he forget what all Anika Bhabhi did for him…..he had every chance to support Anika bhabhi and make choti maa calm…no ..he didn’t do that…..how can he act so rude ?’’

Om ‘’ yes Rudra you have a point’’

Anika ‘’ No Om and Rudra, you both are wrong…..’’

OmRu looked at Anika in disbelief………

Om ‘’after all this you still are supporting Chotimaa and Shivaay….you can be good or very good…but there is a limit for goodness too…you know what too much of sweetness in any dish makes it uneatable…….’’

Anika ‘’ I am not behaving too sweet…but I am being honest and saying truth’’

Rudra ‘’ but we are not getting anything’’

Anika ‘’Rudra and Om I don’t want to explain anything.. trust me I am okay… yes I am ok…I have suffered a lot and am used to it………but I cannot stay happy in this home making Pinky aunty unhappy……in all these Shivaay will suffer the most…….’’

Sahil ‘’ yes bhayya …Anika didi already said that her stay here is not permanent ……but…’’

Anika pressed Sahil’s hand and Sahil stopped speaking further……….

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Shivaay ‘’ but Sahil I promised you that I will take care of you and Anika and you both are my family too………and today I failed miserably to keep my promise……if I need to apologise anyone it’s only you…..’’

Shivaay spoke out after listening to their conversation standing behind the window curtain and left towards his room……Shivaay found a letter waiting on his bed which read as……

‘’Shivaay I know you are upset with me, upset with Pinky aunty …I know I took a big step to leave OM and OF and above all leave you…but trust me at this point to settle things this is required…..Shivaay don’t be angry on pinky aunty…she is the best mom anyone could ask for….she loves you a lot Shivaay and she is insecure seeing your concern for me…….assure her that you will always stand for her and then see everything would be normal…..i know that you know all this but I wanted to say this……….

Shivaay somewhere in the corner of my heart I still believe you have accepted me as I am…..no surname, no lineage, an orphan……i believed we are inseperable…but time has played it’s move and yet another time we are getting separated…….your silence today spoke everything……and I know and understand what you are going through…..at this moment I don’t want you to be in a fix…..so let me leave ……if life gives other chance I will ask it to not separate me from you….thank you for giving me the best moments of my life…….
—————-Anika , an orphan, Sister of Sahil ‘’

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‘’ but where will you go Anika bhabhi? ‘’ asked Om

Anika ‘’ somewhere , where even my shadow doesn’t fall on this family………’’

OmRu ‘’but how can we leave you alone at this time? ‘’

At the same time Khanna comes ………..

Khanna ‘Anika ji …please come with me…I will take you to the place where you can happily reside’’

Anika ‘’ thank you Khanna ji….but I will not be able to come with you as I don’t want to take help of anyone related to this house.i will stay anywhere else’’

Khanna ‘’ Anika ji…you have always helped my boss…and I respect you a lot for that…so please let me help you…..i promise if you don’t like the place I will not force you to stay back…’’

Anika ‘’Nahi Khanna ji … please donot force me on this and let me go…….’’

She turns to go greeting OmRu.. leaving everyone helpless……….when they listened to a voice

‘’ SHE WILL GO WITH ME……….I WILL TAKE CARE OF HER FROM NOW ON………. ‘’

Everyone turned to see who the person was and it was Mahi

OmRu were very angry and ran to him and caught him……

Om ‘’how dare you come here….and how dare you speak in between our family matters? I will call the police and give you to them’’

Anika ‘’ leave him Om …leave him……..he is not bad…he is very good person……’’

Om left him and looked at her in shock……

Om ‘’Bhabhi you are saying this…’’

Anika ‘’yes Om …I am saying this………leave him’’

She turns towards Mahi and says ‘’Mahi , why did you come here….i said you I will take time but will set everything right…then what was the need to come here at this time?’’

Mahi ‘’you will help me ? did you see yourself…you are now at a position where you need to first help yourself…how will you help me?’’

Anika ‘’I know…but I never step out if I say something’’

Mahi ‘’no…now you listen to me….it’s already late but I cannot make it much more late’’

Anika ‘’ Mahi listen to me……’’

Mahi ‘’ Anika please…I know how to teach these rich people a lesson……they…these people do not know or understand the value of you…but I know…….i have seen how good you are…. and it’s their bad luck to make you go away from them………you come with me…….i don’t have any bad intentions and I never had ……I will treat you with utmost respect, till your so called husband and family begs me to send you back to them……please don’t say no…..i will work hard…I will work honestly and support you…….so come with me Anika’’

While all this happened Khanna informed Shivaay about Mahi and Shivaay came out running………..

Shivaay ‘’ you …’’ he said looking at Mahi and continued ‘’what’s all this ? Why did you come here you duplicate ?’’

Mahi ‘’ don’t call me duplicate ….my name is Mahi……’’

Shivaay ‘’ whatever it is….why did you come here ?’’

Mahi ‘’ to take Anika and Sahil with me..’’

Shivaay ‘’what? How dare you? She is my wife…..did you get it …she is my wife’’

Mahi ‘’ ohh so you remember she is your wife and yet at this time you have left her alone to live on her fate ‘’

Shivaay ‘’enough……..i am bearing you because you saved me….though I don’t trust you but I still trust Anika and … and Anika said that you are bad but not kameena…else by this time you would have been behind the bars….so it’s better you leave from here…..’’

Mahi ‘’ I don’t want to argue ….’’

Mahi turned towards Anika and said ‘’ Anika …you both are coming with me…..come let’s go’’

Shivaay ‘’Anika will not go with you or anywhere else…………..she will stay here….in Oberoi Mansion’’

Shivaay turned towards Anika and said ‘’Anika get inside’’

Anika stood still…….Shivaay shouted ‘’ didn’t you hear ……..Get inside…..’’

With all this arguments Shakthi, Pinky and Tej came outside…………

Pinky ‘’ Oh my mata …what is this farzi and Anika doing here? Didn’t you leave yet Anika?’’

Anika turned to go when Shivaay said to her mom

‘’Mom, Anika will stay in Oberoi mansion’’

Pinky ‘’what? Have you gone mad? How can she stay here?’’

Anika ‘’ I cannot stay here anymore Shivaay…please understand…I already explained you’’

Shivaay ‘’will you both let me complete ’’ he continued looking at Pinky ‘’You asked Anika to not keep any relation with me……you asked her to stay away from me……we both agreed…so we both will not stay in same room…..’’

He turned towards Anika and said ‘’this way your decision of leaving me ALONE ’’ he stressed the word ALONE and continued ‘’in this way your decision of leaving me alone will also get fulfilled….atleast you can do this for me even if my wish doesn’t matter to you….’’

Anika was in thoughts………

Pinky ‘’I can’t bear her in this house anymore Shivaay and this is final’’

Shivaay ‘’ you have to mom because I have announced her as my wife infront of the whole world and if tomorrow media comes to know, we, infact YOU have kicked her out then it would be a major loss for my reputation…a loss that will be much bigger than the loss caused by blood lineage and surname matter…………so until I settle things she will stay here….’’

Pinky ‘’but’’

Shakthi ‘’ he is right Pinky…you said Shivaay’s and Oberoi’s reputation is very important for you so you have to accept what Shivaay is saying………’’

Pinky ‘’ okay…but you have to settle this soon…I can’t bear her for longer time’’

Shivaay ‘’ it’s already late …so we will discuss what needs to be done tomorrow………for now Anika will stay in guest room along with Sahil’’

Shivaay sets his hair and leaves looking at Mahi proudly………….Mahi walks away from there….

Pinky sighs disappointedly , looks at Anika and Sahil angrily………….

OmRu ran after Shivaay to talk something………

Tej and Shakthi left from there with a sigh of relief for that moment…………Pinky also left

Anika sees Mahi going and runs to him and says ‘’ Thank you Mahi for supporting me………I will keep my promise and will set everything right……I will meet you tomorrow ‘’

Mahi left from there…….

Anika went to Khanna and said ‘’Thank you so much khanna ji….i am lucky I got an other brother in your form…….thank you’’

Khanna ji just nodded his head and left from there

Sahil ‘’ what will we do now Anika didi…where will we go now? ‘’

Anika ‘’ I am not able to decide anything Sahil……..but i think we need to stay back in Oberoi mansion until I and Shivaay will get separated legally’’

Sahil ‘’ I never want this to happen dii…..i cannot see you in so much pain ‘’

Anika ‘’you are there for me Sahil and that is enough……….i am not in any pain as I am used to it…so now let’s go inside’’

Anika and Sahil entered back to Oberoi mansion and Rudra helped both of them in settling in guest room…….

NOTE: THE NEXT EPISODE WILL BE A BIT LATE AS I AM YET TO TYPE IT……..BUT I ENSURE EVERYDAY AN EPISODE IS DEFINITELY UPLOADED…..SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE IN ADVANCE

Precap : An unexpected Truth revelation ………..

So let me know how you felt reading this ? any sort of comment good or bad is welcome….i will respond at the earliest !!!

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59 Comments

  1. Sairan on April 23, 2017 8:34 am

    OHhhh god… Mahi the savior.. Fantastic turn the story has taken

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:33 pm

      Thank you so much Sairan……yeah Mahi the savior……

  2. dwet on April 23, 2017 8:40 am

    Amazing.

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:33 pm

      Thank you so much dwet ……..

  3. Fffan1234 on April 23, 2017 8:55 am

    Superb

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:33 pm

      Thanks a lot Fffan1234…….

  4. sri on April 23, 2017 8:56 am

    Kidikitod episode ????and thank you for not being angry on me about spy ff

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:34 pm

      Thank you sri……i can’t even pretend to be angry cutiepie…..

  5. gayathri.visu on April 23, 2017 9:06 am

    Firstly very sorry di for not commenting on prev shot. Trust me that part make me crying. So I stopped reading in the middle. Then after sometime again I started to read and thought to comment. But I feel thats too late. Definitely that part is very emotional. Shivaay is right, both(AniKy) takes decision but they didn’t thought about his feelings & decision.
    Coming to this shot this is really unexpected….MAHI helps Anika!!! But how??? And why Shivaay proudly looks Mahi?? Is he knows something?? And precap!! I can’t wait di…I m getting mad. I know u says everyday u upload 1 shot. But I can’t stop myself asking this…please di post next part very very very……soon. Don’t make ur sis as mad(just kidding…)
    And very imp di… THANKS FOR UR WISHES DI. I also wish u always stay happy with ur life’s HEART, PART & LIGHT!!!(HOPE U UNDERSTAND DI).
    Once again sorry for boring comment.

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:36 pm

      no worries Gayathri…..and thank you for such an amazing comment….iam so sorry i made you cry……..well next part i will upload today iam yet to type it……..thank you for the wishes…i understood what you meant………..

  6. anujohnson on April 23, 2017 9:07 am

    This was nice dear..but yet again I missed the last episode..I will read it now…please please send me the link please its my request…

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:37 pm

      thank you so much Anu…..here you go with the links of previous episodes…..

      https://www.tellyupdates.com/inseperables-ishqbaaz-os-shot-1/
      https://www.tellyupdates.com/inseperables-ishqbaaz-os-shot-2/

    • anujohnson on April 23, 2017 2:53 pm

      Yaar pls pm me the links of the further episodes so that I don’t miss it…

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 6:48 pm

      Sure Anu i will make sure i will post link to this OS/FF once it is published in Portal

  7. Adhya on April 23, 2017 9:07 am

    Fabulous….Amazing yaar…oh god plz change this Pinky ..cant able to see her drama ….Waiting for next episode

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:39 pm

      hanks a lot Adhya…..V’s should change Pinky’s character….but until there is no negative character how will the heroism and heroinism come out……will upload next part soon Adhya

  8. Aisha on April 23, 2017 9:27 am

    Awesome

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:40 pm

      Thank you so much Aisha……..

  9. nikitajai on April 23, 2017 9:27 am

    It is awesome dii… You made me speech less…. Hats off to your writing skills….

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:41 pm

      aweethank you so much Nikita…..i donno what will i write further not yet decided how will the story proceed …but definitely write something sensible and believable

  10. San on April 23, 2017 9:38 am

    Nice epic……love Mahi in this epic and Khanna too a nice person……

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:43 pm

      thank you so much san….you will know who is good and who is bad in upcoming episodes

  11. LINCY ARNAV on April 23, 2017 10:07 am

    Awesome update. I just loved it. I really didn’t expect that mahi would come for anika’s support… pls post next part as soon as possible….I’m waiting eagerly for it.

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:43 pm

      thank you so much Lincy Arnav…….i will upload next part today itself

  12. Lilly on April 23, 2017 10:45 am

    Superb epi

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:43 pm

      thank you so much Lilly

  13. aryaraju on April 23, 2017 10:46 am

    Good one ?

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:44 pm

      thank you so much Aryaraju

  14. navz on April 23, 2017 11:10 am

    Omg!!!mahi came to anikas rescue.wow.what a twist and shivay came back to take his wife.
    Dii u r superb in ur way .loved this part also as i always do. What is that unexpected truth now.??i know that we have a lot of stuff waiting for us in store.
    Now ur chotii will not ask for next part upload as u promised before that u will do it for sure.???☺☺

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:45 pm

      thank you chotii……yeah some more stuff yet to be created……..will upload next part today itself

  15. AHSANA on April 23, 2017 11:46 am

    It’s was an awesome emotional episode dear. I’m waiting for your next shot, update soon……….

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:45 pm

      thank you so much Ahsana……..will update soon definitely……..

  16. Bhavana on April 23, 2017 11:52 am

    Wow! that came as a shocker, I really didnt expect that mahi would come in annika’s support..
    Very well written….amazing epi…loved it!
    Plzzzzzzzz update asap!

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:47 pm

      thank you so much Bhavana……..he he he these days many of my friends are saying i am giving shocks……….but this story will be quite simple and easily predictable ……….will update today itself

  17. zaveesha on April 23, 2017 1:10 pm

    Nyc episode….waiting for next…

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:47 pm

      thank you Zavesha……will finish typing today itself and post at the earliest

  18. alekhika20 on April 23, 2017 1:17 pm

    Fab updt

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 2:47 pm

      Thank you so much Alekhika20

  19. Arpita on April 23, 2017 2:16 pm

    VHM dear, you made me speechless. And most imp that maahi supported my didi..ok no prblm.try to post next part soon.

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 6:43 pm

      Thank you so much Arpita……….yes Mahi supported Anika and the reason you will know in upcoming episodes…will upload in sometime………please do post your opinion in upcoming episodes too

  20. ruksy on April 23, 2017 3:59 pm

    Is it the spoilers related to Annika being pinky and shakti’s daughter? Amazing update loved it

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 6:44 pm

      thank you for posting your comment Ruksy…i am so very happy that you liked it… i never read any such spoiler of Anika being daughter of Pinky and Shakthi …i can definitely say she is not so in my OS/FF……..

    • ruksy on April 23, 2017 7:23 pm

      I saw that spoiler on instagram

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 7:37 pm

      Ohh is it? i don’t check instagram…..i check telly updates and India forums and sometimes telly express for spoilers ……nothing else…..but thank you for letting me know

  21. RainRose6263 on April 23, 2017 4:02 pm

    This is soo good VHM. I envy you of how you write, You really make it come to life and I hope that this will happen in Ishqbaaz

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 6:46 pm

      Thank you so much RainRose6263………i am so happy to read your comment but to be honest i am not so much talented …it’s just i like writing …….thank you again

  22. Jerry_36 on April 23, 2017 4:28 pm

    Only claps….amazingly wonderful.
    #speechless #mindblowing
    #lovedit #postsoon❤

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 6:46 pm

      thanks a lot Jerry………what more to say…..i am so happy reading your comment…and i am eagerly waiting for your next update

    • Jerry_36 on April 23, 2017 6:52 pm

      Di actually I am having fever but still I have posted the next chapter as I think the next update will take time☺

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 7:32 pm

      OMG … you have fever…did you check with the doctor and are you taking medicines properly….Jerry episodes can be uploaded later but health should be the priority…get well soon dear……we all can wait for the updates ….i just pray that you are back to your form at the earliest

    • Jerry_36 on April 23, 2017 7:37 pm

      Thank you so much di for your concern. I am taking the medicines. Hope I will get soon?

  23. Shivika on April 23, 2017 5:41 pm

    Awesome…
    Mahi is a sweet heart & Omru r d best devars….
    Khanna is d best employee of OM….
    Pinky is ridiculous…..
    I’m jst loving it….
    Waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 6:47 pm

      Thank you so much Shivika……..i am happy you liked this shot …will post next one soon

  24. Nida on April 23, 2017 6:22 pm

    Fab I just loved it

    • VHM on April 23, 2017 7:34 pm

      Thank you so much Nida…..are you sure you liked this…because your usual long comment is missing…….mmmmm……i will try to make you satisfied in next updates

  25. Vivikhta on April 24, 2017 2:54 pm

    Heyyo, Harika di!
    Oh my god!
    How do u write like this?
    I won’t waste a lot of time in praising u and your khidkitod work because I did that earlier itself, so now I will just say that this was so emotional and whenever I read your stories, I know to expect the unexpected.
    Update ASAP
    Lots of love

    • VHM on April 24, 2017 8:04 pm

      Thank you so much Viviktha…am glad you liked this…next two shots are already in the TU portal

  26. Ankita on April 24, 2017 10:26 pm

    Awesome update.. lo it..

  27. shuklarashi on April 25, 2017 11:33 am

    Awesome

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