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Home»Zee TV»Apna Time Bhi Aayega»In love with you (ATBA FF) – Part 5
Apna Time Bhi Aayega Fan Fiction

In love with you (ATBA FF) – Part 5

Pari19By Pari19October 5, 20216 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hello…
I’m back with next part of my fan fiction.

Here a new day with fresh morning πŸŒ„.
Its Sunday and Veer is at home.

Veer opens his eyes and see nobody around.
He went downstairs and asked shanti about rani. She replied that she is in the kitchen. Veer went there.

He stood behind Rani but she was not aware that he was behind her.

Rani was preparing something near the stove and was not aware of it. She burnt her hand and veer shouted “Rani “.

He put her hand under the running tap .

Veer – Are you okay?
Rani – hmmm..
Veer – You should be careful .
Rani – hmmm..

He took her to their room and applied ointment on her burnt hand .

Veer ( angrily)- What was that ?
Rani – What was that ?
Veer – You don’t know what I am talking about?
Rani – No
Veer – You should be careful .
Rani – Why are you scolding me ?
Veer – What else should I do then? I have told you millions of times to be careful while you work in the kitchen.
Rani hugged him . β™₯
While hugging, Rani said –

” You care but don’t show. That’s not fair. You promised me that you will never scold me then how come you step back from your promise. ”

Veer – I was not scolding you. I get worried for you. Veer kissed her.

In the afternoon in ranveer’s room πŸ’

Veer and Rani were sitting and watching TV. Rani was sitting in veer’s arms.

Rani – You are very difficult to understand.
Veer – So what do you think about yourself. Are you easy to ?
Rani – We were talking about you.
Veer- Not we ,only you.

Rani got more close to him . She kept her hand on his chest .

Veer – See now other times you are angry and you go . See now you are romantic.

Rani punched him . Veer hugged her β™₯ .

Then Rajeshwari enters.

Rajeshwari – What you both are doing ?
Rani – See mom. He is teasing me .
Veer – No .. I… I was not teasing her. She is trapping me.
Rajeshwari- ha ha … you both are too cute. May god bless you.

Precap – Veer does not comes home. Rani gets worried. He is not receiving calls. Veer comes home . He is drunk.πŸ₯΄

Hello
I hope you all are enjoying reading the parts. Please comment and tell me your opinions about my story. Till then Good bye πŸ‘‹
Take care πŸ™‚ ❀ Stay happy 😊 πŸ’• ❀ πŸ’› ☺ πŸ’– 😊 πŸ’• ❀ πŸ’› ☺ πŸ’– 😊 πŸ’• ❀ πŸ’› ☺ πŸ’– 😊 πŸ’• ❀ πŸ’› ☺ πŸ’– 😊 πŸ’• ❀ πŸ’› ☺ πŸ’– 😊 πŸ’• ❀ πŸ’›

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    6 Comments

    1. Pari19 on October 5, 2021 7:15 pm

      Hiii…
      Next part will be a bit funny….
      Hope u enjoyed…
      Please reply and tell ur opinions..πŸ¦‹

      • Anjela on October 5, 2021 9:27 pm

        A very excellent episide Dear Pari. Really enjoyed reading. You wrote very well too. Loved the care that Veer has for Rani n how he takes care of her. Rsni was that busy in her work in the kotchen , she did not realise that she burnt her hand.
        Rani asks Veer wby he is shouting as he said that he wouldn’t shout.
        They eere both watching tv n had their small arguments again n Rajeshwari comes in n asks what is going on. Ranveer start blsming each other n Rajeshwari just tells them that both are cute n says may god bless them. Very well written n well done. πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ’žπŸ₯°πŸ€—. All the emotions, feelings n reactions were portrayed perfectly ❀ 😍 😘. β€πŸ˜πŸ˜˜βœ‹βœ‹πŸŒ»πŸŒΈπŸŒΊπŸ’πŸŒΉπŸ“πŸŒπŸŠπŸŒ”πŸ‰πŸ«πŸ«πŸ¬πŸ¬πŸ§πŸ§πŸ¦‹πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ¦‹. Lots of love, hugs, kisses n loads of blessings flying over to you ❀ 🌹 πŸ¦‹. Kerp.upmthe good work Dear Pari. Very proud of you. ❀. Looking forwards to the next episode πŸ‘ πŸ‘€ 😍. Until then, please take care n stay safe. 😍😘❀. Love you loads ❀ πŸ’žπŸ₯°πŸ€—πŸ¦‹πŸŒΊπŸ’πŸŒΉπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ¦‹β€.

    2. Avneet on October 6, 2021 3:25 pm

      Next part kab aayega please tell me…..

      • Pari on October 6, 2021 5:59 pm

        @Avneet ek se do din ke andar

    3. Kitty on October 7, 2021 11:06 am

      I enjoyed it @pari…let’s see what drunk dacter sahab does πŸ€”πŸ€”

      • Pari19 on October 7, 2021 3:23 pm

        Tamasha

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