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Home»Zee TV»Apna Time Bhi Aayega»In love with you (ATBA FF) – Part 10
Apna Time Bhi Aayega Fan Fiction

In love with you (ATBA FF) – Part 10

Pari19By Pari19October 21, 202111 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hiii …. not receiving much replies on my story
… feeling unhappy for that . People removed the atba tab from their phones…..

Let’s move forward.

Veer and Rani are in the car on their way to Mumbai.

Veer – What my wifey is thinking?
Rani – Nothing…
Veer – Don’t worry.  I won’t fight with you for 3 months.
Rani – You never fight with me . You are the best.
Veer – Showering much love on me.
Rani – Shhhhhhh

They reached Mumbai . Went to their apartment. Rested for something and went to buy groceries and food items .

After coming home …..

Veer laid on the bed .

Rani – Veer Singh Rajawat! Get up . Go and get changed.
Veer – I am tired .
He removed his shirt .

Rani – What are u doing ?
Veer – What… I used to live like this before marriage.
Rani – This is after marriage !

Veer pulled her closer and put his fingers on her lips 💋.
Veer – shhh . Don’t shy away from me . Hmm.
Rani – I am not shying away . Just leave me. Let me go .
Veer – No . I won’t leave you till you kiss me.
Rani – No . I won’t kiss .
Veer – You have to and you will .
Rani – No
Veer pulled her close and kissed her. Rani smiled and left.

She went and changed . She asked veer to change . Veer disagreed to change his clothes .

Rani lied on veer’s chest .

Veer – You are not having any problem that I told you to come here with me . Soory I didn’t asked you if you would like to come .
Rani –  No . I am happy that you thought about me .
Veer kissed her . Rani put her hand on his chest and they both slept .

Next day ….

Rani – Good morning  Veer
Veer – good morning has not happend till now . Let me sleep a little more 😴.
Rani – Okay

Rani got ready and came ….

BACK TO RAJAWAT HOUSE 🏠 —

Vikram came downstairs .

Vikram – Bhabhisa! I am hungry now . Give me breakfast.  Getting late for court.
Kiara – Your Bhabhisa is not here .
Vikram – ohhh . Nobody is missing bro .

Kiara – By the way.. I am here with you ❤
Vikram – Not now 🙅‍♂️  Kiara.  At night  when I will come back then .
Kiara – urgh ! Why are you not romantic?
Vikram pulled her close and said .

Vikram- I am not romantic . Hmmm.
Kiara – I was just teasing you .
Vikram – hmm . I can see.

Rajeshwari comes and coughs . They get away .

Precap- Vikram and Kiara have a cute moment . Veer and Rani try to live in the new house . Rani cooks something untasty for ver .

Hii guys thats a bit for now . Readers please comment so that I can know what do you feel . Otherwise if I get no  respones . I will stop writing .

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    11 Comments

    1. avnika on October 21, 2021 7:05 pm

      writings are really awsome pls do post continuesly .everyday i just searching for ur new post .really love it

    2. Puja Priya on October 21, 2021 7:56 pm

      Please aap FF likhna band mat karna aap acha likhti ho..and by the way this is my favourite show ❤️ and I miss this show very much 🥺❤️😘

    3. Kitty on October 21, 2021 8:37 pm

      Another nice episode…thanks @pari! Please keep them coming! Missing khushi…hope all is well.

    4. Elena on October 22, 2021 3:27 pm

      🌹Hello everybody! Thank you @Pari19 for your creativity.🌺 Please write more. We read and enjoy🥰

      • Kitty on October 22, 2021 8:22 pm

        Hi @ Elena ! Nice to c u here

      • A on October 23, 2021 10:11 am

        Hi @Elena it’s nice to see we have all gathered here! I hope all is well with you guys🥺🤗

    5. Beautiful on October 22, 2021 9:49 pm

      You write too good.. Its difficult to put your imagination into words and then make your audience feel the same imagination through your words… So its not everyones cup of tea… So don’t stop writing and please upload next part asap

    6. Anesha on October 23, 2021 2:49 am

      Amazing ranveer and kivi scenes…hot hot hot🙈🙈
      Looking forward to part 11…Please keep going❤❤❤

    7. A on October 23, 2021 10:16 am

      Loving the story so far, please keep writing @Pari19. I finally am caught up with everything. I hope everything is okay with everyone❤️
      I don’t know what gave Veer the idea that Rani can cook, poor guy, they both might starve in Mumbai😳
      Vikram is all serious and business-like as well as funny and teasing, how will he survive without his bhabisa and teasing Veer?🤣
      Rani sa walking in at the wrong moments and stopping the romance is getting me lol😂😂😂

      • A on October 23, 2021 10:17 am

        Just leaving this here, @Khushi we all miss you, please come back🥺😭

    8. Khushi on October 23, 2021 8:15 pm

      Hi guys I am back..and well done to @Pari for keeping up on the fan fictions. I have updated mine too and explained why I was absent for long..but it should be published soon. I missed you all too..😥

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