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Home»Fan Fiction»In love with angel – Ragsan- Part 4
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In love with angel – Ragsan- Part 4

PalchinBy PalchinDecember 24, 201838 Comments5 Mins Read
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Here goes next part sissy’s…

Pune comes.
San: where shall I leave u?

Ragini just smiled. Sanskar waved at her.

San: hello madam. Where is ur home?

Rag: Pune.

San: in Pune where?

Rag: (innocent smiles) Pune.

San: whom u know in Pune?

Rag: u both.

San audible to jai: I think she’s crack.

Sanskar stopped jeep.

San: get down.

Rag: why?

San: our destination is this only. U go where ur home is.

Sanskar gave her some money.

San: take auto and go.

He left Ragini there and went.

Jai: wat Yaar. Y u left her mid way. I think she’s new here.

San: already we a problem of this idol. I don want another prob rite now.

Jai: alright.
Jai found ragini’s nose ring fell on seat.

Jai: sanskar. If we sell this then atleast we may get 3 to 4 thousand.

San: try it. Now we are reaching mehra’s godown.

Both reached there. Mehra was already waiting for them. He got happy seeing them.

San: jai he seems so happy now. Wat if he comes to know abt idol.

Jai: think Idea if escaping.

Meh: welcome boys. U have done it. Come I’ll show u how precious thing u delivered to me.

San: no no. It’s ok. No need. Our work was to deliver and we did. Now do our payment. We have to go.

Meh: u shud see boys. Pandit ji open it and do pooja of idol.

San: but it’s Rahu kaal. Not gud time. Tmrw is auspicious day.

Pandit: I too think same.

San: thank God. We saved.

Meh: ok. I’ll transfer money to ur account. U may leave now.

Jaisan went from there. They go to shop to sell that nose ring. Shop owner was seeing it again and again.

San: jai it’s not fake na.

Jai: seeing that girl, I don’t think so.

Own: ok. Here take ur money. It’s different one.

He gave them 1 lakh. Jaisan mouth was opened. They got shocked.

Own looks at them like wat?

They just leave taking money.

San: jai. Just think. Only nose ring cost is 1 lakh. She was wearing so many ornaments. They may nearly 1 crore I think.

Jai: let’s search her.

San glares at him. Where u’ll search her.?
His face fell.

Otherside Ragini was going on road. She was luking at money gave by sanskar. Some guys saw her and goes to her.

Boy1: hey dear. I think u r new to this city.

Rag: yes how do u know?

Boy2: we r gud boys. we help others. So we guessed. Come we will give u lift. Ragini went with them in car.

Here jaisan were doing party with that money.

They were thinking abt ragini’s jewelry.

Here boys took Ragini to a unknown place far from city. Ragini get down from car and runs from one place to other happily.

Rag: wow. How beautiful it is. Really earth is very beautiful.

Boy2: u r also not less. U r also beautiful.

Rag: really?

Boy4: yes. Ur lips, ur waist, ur eyes. Everything is beautiful.

Rag: u r also not less. Ur curly hair, this tattoo and this one earring also beautiful.

Boy3: we brought u to do rape.

Rag sits on a big stone there.

Rag: but environment is not like raping.

Boy1: environment? Do u need any band baaja for creating environment? Don’t u scare by seeing us?

Rag: no.

Boy2 to others: I think she’s undercover cop. Now a days police became smart. Don’t know in which way they trap us.

Boy4: stop nonsense.to Ragini: hey from where u r?

Rag: heaven.

Boy1: which language u know?

Rag: all.

Boy3: all?

Rag: yes.

They test her talking in different languages. And she answered.

Boy1: who’s ur father? Where’s ur city?

Rag: my father is gandarv Raj. My city is heaven.
She points towards sky.

FB shown

Ragini was walking lost in some thinking. Just then naradmuni arrived. He sees us.

Naradmuni: hey gandharva daughter Ragini. Where u lost?

Ragini: naradji. I want to know abt earth. How it is?

Naradmuni: it’s very different than heaven. They live luxurious life. Here m alone who transfer msg from one God to other. But in earth, a single watsapp send MSG’s to many in a second. Here we have only ‘madira’ to drink. There different kinds like rum, beer, whiskey. Here only rambha, urvashi and menka to entertain. but there deepika, Katrina, Aliya and many more. We don’t get words to describe earth.

Ragini got excited and went to her father.

Rag: dad. I want to go earth and live like human.

Gandharva Raj (Ronit Roy): wat? U r angel. U forgot that? U want to go earth? There selfish people live. They are cruel. They r greedy. They have only few years to live. But u r angel. Immortal. U live in heaven where only happiness is there. And u want to go that earth?

Rag: without sorrow how we come to know abt value of happiness. I want to feel that dad. I want to live like human.

Dad: I don’t permit u.

Rag: I’ll go. It’s my final decision.

Dad angrily: I curse u. be an Idol on earth.

Suddenly Ragini turns into idol and fell in earth.

Precap: FB continues.

How’s this part guys? I posted all FF next part today only.

Hope u’ll like.

Love you all??

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Palchin

    Hello m palchin from Karnataka. Fan of Varun Dhawan. Love to watch his movies. Writing is my passion. My hobbies ? many. My watty id is @palchin2995 Do follow if u r on watty

    38 Comments

    1. RAGSANIAN on December 24, 2018 1:50 pm

      Amazinggggggggggg sis

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:03 am

        Thanku Ragsanian

    2. Vini on December 24, 2018 1:54 pm

      Awesome eagerly waiting for all updates.

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:04 am

        Thanku Vini

    3. Maha on December 24, 2018 2:37 pm

      Superbbbbbbb duperrrr

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:05 am

        Thanku maha

    4. Ria on December 24, 2018 2:50 pm

      Awesome di.. Funny one..

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:08 am

        Thanku ria

    5. Ishu on December 24, 2018 3:35 pm

      Superb

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:10 am

        Thanku Ishu

    6. Pinky on December 24, 2018 4:01 pm

      Amazing interesting.

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:11 am

        Thanku pinky

    7. Ragsan on December 24, 2018 4:34 pm

      Awesome cover picture was awwwwwww.

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:25 am

        Thanku Ragsan. Even I too liked

    8. Geet on December 24, 2018 5:51 pm

      Superb

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:50 am

        Thanku geet

    9. Vani on December 24, 2018 6:56 pm

      Nice dear

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:50 am

        Thanku vani

    10. Tara on December 24, 2018 7:22 pm

      Awesome

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:50 am

        Thanku Tara

    11. Anisha on December 24, 2018 9:44 pm

      Sanskaar is so weird , he was praising Rago when she was a Lifeless gold idol but when she turned as a girl not for a single second he admired her ?? and was so rude with her??

      I’m so scared what will happen to this innocent angel now??those goons are disgusting ??I want to kill them????

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:52 am

        Thanku Ani. Coz sanskar doesn’t know that it’s Ragini only. And he’s tensed coz of missing idol so dint pay much attention to her

    12. Moni on December 24, 2018 10:00 pm

      Superb

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:52 am

        Thanku moni

    13. Manu on December 24, 2018 10:43 pm

      Amazing!!

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:53 am

        Thanku manu

    14. Tanvi on December 24, 2018 11:19 pm

      Awesome….

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:53 am

        Thanku Tanvi

    15. Karishma on December 25, 2018 12:22 am

      Awesome part di. Ragini’s dad is very cruel. How can he curse his own daughter that too for a very small thing ??. And how did she get out from her curse ??

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 10:54 am

        Thanku karishma. In next part it’s cleared

    16. Jasminerahul on December 25, 2018 2:08 am

      sad that sanskar didnt give lift to ragini n when they came to know of the value of her jewellery they want her back.ragini n those guys scene was funny.wow ragini is the daughter of indra.how naradamuni compared heaven to earth was funny.surprised to see ronit roy as indra.ih shocking that by cursing her he turned her into an idol n thats how she fell into the earth.guess by sanskar’s touch she got moksha

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 11:37 am

        He’s gandharva. Not Indra. Sanskar is a little thief also who does illegal things so he wanted ragini’s jewelry. Abt her father rudeness and moksha Wil b cleared in next part.

    17. RAGSANIAN on December 25, 2018 9:02 am

      Amazinggggggggggg sanskar is so rude stupid.

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 11:38 am

        Thanku Ragsanian. Nice name. Rude stupid

    18. Sug on December 25, 2018 10:34 am

      Ossssssssoommmmmmmmmmmmmm hope that boys don’t do any wrong with ragini.

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 11:38 am

        Thanku sug. They won’t

    19. Ammy on December 25, 2018 11:51 am

      Awesome dear.thanks for updating all of your stories I love all

      • Palchin on December 25, 2018 9:09 pm

        Thanku Ammy ??

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