Sry frnds for not posting. It is so because my papers are going on … But as soon as my papers will be finished I’ll post regularly.. sorry for that
Episode start with avneil having an eye lock while changing Neil clothes..
Neil’s phn rings breaking avneil eye lock
N: ji mom
S: tillu are you at homes ??
N: yes mom.. I’m with avni discussing on a case..
S: tillu then not let’s avni beta to go home this time..ok
N:ok mom
Shewta cuts the call
Shewta calls Neela
S:hlw! Neela ji
N: ji shewta ji..
S: don’t take tensions ji avni is safe with my super cop tillu..
N:ok shewta ji.. avni already informed me that she is with Neil
S:and I tells tillu not to sends her home it’s night.. they will be to gathers..do u hv any problems neela ji
N:no..no…not at all I trust Neil
S:ok Neela ji.. by and gn
N: bye shewta ji. And thanks for caring about avni..
S:oh ho neela ji she is like my daughter’s..
N: hmm … Gn
S: gn
Scene shift to avneil..
Neil is sleeping peacefully on the bed but avni was not comfortable on sofa
A:(herself)aur kha ki Mai sofe pr so jaunge …so ab.. kaise so mai is pr. .. ghr pr to pure ek bed pr sote the..
Avni tries to sleep.. suddenly avni notice something and take her gun out..
Moves towards the main door of Neil’s house..
Avni calls DD
A:DD without siren come with police Jeep..
DD:but ma’am
A:no but.. quick..in 5 min
DD: ma’am
Avni opens the door and found that man spying on them
Avni hit him with back of her revolver..
The man faints …
Avni drags him outside in the road..
A:DD where are you.
DD arrives
DD: ma’am
A:DD take him to police lockup..I’ll interrogate him tomorrow
DD:ma’am
DD leaves for there …
Avni goes in and found that Neil is not on the bed.. she get worried..
A:where did Neil go.??
Avni hears a sound and shouts neeiill…
Avni went to the wash room and found Neil lying on ground and trying to get up but fails ..
A:Neil ..(runs towards him)
Avni makes him stand …
A:r u fine ?!
N: relax avni bs thoda sa chakkar aa gaya tha..
A: when you was unable to walk then why you didn’t called me..
N:I called you but you was not there.. Where were you..
A: vo mom ka call
N: ok avni..
Avni make him lye on the bed..
Aae dil h mushkil instrumental plays..
Morning..
Avni makes breakfast(here avni Is a great cook)
N:it smells nice
A:come sit
Avneil sat for breakfast…
N:(after having a bite,)wow avni!!?
A:I know I’m a great cook?
After having breakfast.
A:I’ll change the dressing
N:no I’ll get it done by someone..
A: oh hlw Mr perfect.. I’m doing it na
Avni dress his wounds
Avni leaves from there and is on the way to Mehta house..
He meets Ali Infront of the gate …Ali looks worried…
A:what happened Ali you look worried..
Ali:I need ur help will you …
A:ha bol na Ali u r my best frnd n I’m always there for you…
Ali feels relief hearing that
Precape: double date?????♥️♥️
Writer’s note: thanks for reading?hope you enjoyed my writing.plz do comments and encourage me to write ahead..
7 Comments
Totally different & unique stories from others prove that your thinking concept is really amazing. The way you express avni’s caring concern towards Neil, is really beautiful. Your storyline is too interesting to read. Please keep writing like this beautiful way. All the best for your exam.
Totally different & unique stories from others prove that your thinking concept is really amazing. The way you express avni’s caring concern towards Neil, is really beautiful. Your storyline is too interesting to read. The feelings of avneil towards each other is not reveal in your episode that means a twist is waiting for us. Pleasekeep writing like this beautiful way. All the best for your exam.
Thank you barun for ur support. Ur comments is the most encouraging one.thank u.it means a lot??
laddo,u express avni’s care to neil very beautifully.as itis said,we write to express not to impress.the concept of ur story is very lovely to read.and the storyline is going well.the precapis well maintained as to keep cre for the readers…and the feelings,they are revealed very much according to their time,and that keeps a twist in the story waiting for all readers.please keep ur unique style of writing always and all the best for exams.me too having exams.it will end on 27th….good luck.may u score ur best.and which standard are u in?
I’m a student of class 11. ? Thank u for your comment and encouragement?
oh.welcome.u not need to thx me
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