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I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 4)

Sry frnds for not updating on time..and thanks for lovely comments..
Here the episode start with avneil changing the tyre.. lightening strike with a thunder..
A:wow rain…
N:avni come we’ll change it otherwise it will start raining..
Avneil change the tyre…(aae dil h mushkil instrumental plays)
Scene shift to the man..
Man:damm can’t u fight with a girl n win ..
Other man:she is dangerous.. more dangerous than Neil Khanna..
Man: today I’ll end Neil’s story..
He leaves in anger …..

Avneil lost in each other eyes..
Gun shot heard…
A:Neil …(panic)
N:relax avni I’m fine
A:get inside the car…fast …Neil quick
Both sat in the car and avni drive the car as fast as she can
N:relax avni … R u afraid that u r driving so fast??(teasingly)
A:(in anger)do u think I’m afraid to die … Ni I’m not … They r trying to kill u Neil … And can’t let them give a single scratch on ur body..
N: omg..Lady cop …
A:and this wound which they had given to you(showing his injuries)they will have to pay for it… And it’s my promise Mr Neil Khanna..
N:relax jhasi ki rani.. concentrate on driving…
Men start shooting towards their car…
Avneil:now they r gone.
Neil fills their(avneil)guns…
N:stop the car jhasi ki rani..
A:ok Mr perfect..
She stops the car and both came out ..

Firing start from they men and avneil..
Avni shot one man..Neil impressed
N:wow… I’m impressed…
A:I’m very impressive..
Avneil smile..
Avneil keeps firing and suddenly a fires to Neil …
A:Neeeeiiiilllll
Avni pulls Neil towards her but the bullet hit Neil arms and blood start ozing out. .
Avni shoot the man on his head. .
Avni runs to Neil
A:Neil r u ok
N:relax avni I’m fine . ..
A:let’s go to hospital… We’ll make it be dressed…
N:no avni… we’ll go to police station..then I’ll go to my home …
A:our house??
N:yes otherwise mom will be worried for me seeing my wound..
A:I’ll drop u to ur house …
N:no need u will be late ..
A:I had solution of this problem too
Avni calls someone
A:hlw. …maa
N:yes bachcha ..
A:maa I’ll not come house tonight..I’ll be with Neil …we r discussing some problems.
N:ok bachcha..
Neil:with me???(shocked)
A:yes..
They reaches to Neil house..

Avni makes Neil sit …
Wait I’ll dress it first..
N:(refusingly) antiseptic..jale ga…
A:(teasingly)Bahadur police vala bnta h aur antiseptic ki Jalan se drta h…
N:yr. Avni
A:ok sry baba
Avni do dressing of Neil…(aae dil h mushkil plays)
N:esssshhh(in pain)
A:Jao so..
N:n u… Mere ghar me ek hi room h..tm kha jaoge..ok I have a solution tm bed pr so Jao mai couch pr
A:no thanks tm so bed pr..
N:avni.
A:bs jao …kuch ni sunana mujhe..
Neil moves towards his cupboard…
A: kha ja rahe ho…
N:kapde..
Neil take a shirt from his cupboard and tries to take off the one he is wearing…but fails.. avni notice that he is struggling
A:let me do this ..
Avni change Neil clothes …they shares an eye lock..
Aae dil h mushkil instrumental plays..
Scene freezes at avneil eye lock

Precape: Ali takes avni’s help

Writer’s note:hope you enjoyed my writing…plz do comments and suggest me my wrong and right of the chapter…

Laddo

I'm a strong girl with a open mind.. I can do any thing for my family and friends.. my country is everything for me... I think that enough about me

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