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Home»Fan Fiction»I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 3)
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I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 3)

LaddoBy LaddoSeptember 7, 20175 Comments3 Mins Read
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Thank u frnds for much support and encouragement…

So here the episode start…
Avni makes Neil sit in the car…while making him wear seatbelt they share an eye lock…
Avni phn rings breaking their eye lock.
The name is shown DD
A:yes DD
DD:ma’am where are u both..
A:we are just coming…
DD:ma’am …
Avni ends the call
N:avni maa must be worried. ..
A:hmm. … I’ll call shewta aunty
Avni call shewta
S:hlw beta avni
A:aunty namaste..vo Neil aur mai ek Saath h..
S: tillu is with u..
A: actually aunty we are discussing about some case and the Neil will be at his home…
S:ok beta..
Avni sits in the car..
A(in mind)maa must be worried.. I should call her..
Avni calls neela

Neela:bachcha where r u..
A:maa I’m with Neil and may be I’ll be late as we r discussing some case ..
Neela:ok Bachcha..take care
A:maa don’t wait for me hv dinner and go to sleep…
Neela:ok mere maa
Avni cuts the call…
She saw Neil Neil’s seat hv blood near his head..
A:Neil … It’s bleeding…
Avni opens the dashboard and take out first aid kit…
N:give it …I’ll manage…
A:hmm…I know u r Mr perfect…but just keep silent…
Avni cares his wound..
N:ahh(winches in pain)
She blows her wound…
A:o Mr perfect chill…hold my hand (giving his left hand as she knows Neil can bear anything but can’t bear the pain which he feels while applying antiseptic lotion..)
Neil holds avni’s hand…
Avni apply lotion and Neil holds her hand that much tightly that its hurting her but she know Neil needs her…(kaun tujhe yu pyaar krega plays..)

Avni dressed hid wound and drive from there…

Scene shift to the man whom avni had beaten..
A man comes and see that man lying finished and Neil no where …
Man:daam !!bhaag gaya. What I’ll say to boss…
He called his men and ask them to find Neil …
Avni was driving… The nails are kept in the road and her car tyre punctured…
A group of men surround the car and ask Neil to come out..
Avni come out of the car..
N:avni wait…
A:sit quietly inside the car …and don’t dare to come out …
N: but avni..
A:shhh!!ek baar me samjh me nahi aata h…
Avni comes to the men..
Men1:Neil come out…
A:kya kaam h Neil se
Men2: Neil…
A:usko haath lagane se phale mujhse nipat lo…come ..
All the man laugh hearing her…
Man3:tujhse (and laughs)
A:ha Neil ko haath lagane se phle mai tm log ka haath kaat dongi ..(protection and anger is whelming from her eyes)
Here in car Neil says to himself:today they are finished and smiles. .
All man attacked avni…
Avni start beating them…
(Aise dhakad h plays)
Neil smiles seeing and enjoys that how her love is fighting to save him…
Suddenly a man comes from back to attack avni … Neil shouts avvvnnniii….
Avni kick him by her legs…
Neil is impressed seeing her skills…
All men run away..
Avni come back to Neil …
Before Neil could say something avni spoke Neil theek ho na tm
N:o jhasi ki rani tm lad kr aa rahe ho mai to yahi baitha tha tbse..
Avni smiles…
She see punctured tyres …
A: yr ab ghr kaise jaenge..
N:let’s change it..
A: hmm Mr perfect..
Avneil changes the tyre and it’s thunder start striking the sky..
Avneil see each other…
Screen freezes


Precape:avni at Neil’s house..

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Laddo

    I'm a strong girl with a open mind.. I can do any thing for my family and friends.. my country is everything for me... I think that enough about me

    5 Comments

    1. Alia on September 7, 2017 10:58 am

      Amazing

    2. Khyathi on September 7, 2017 11:52 am

      Its going good. Please continue.nd update daily

    3. Dimple on September 7, 2017 3:07 pm

      Really awesome loved it…. Waiting for the next epi…

    4. Sweetgirl7 on September 7, 2017 3:41 pm

      Laddo once again u did an awesome work. Sorry i was late as of exams. I can be late again though as it will end on 27th. Keep it up and do post this on wattpad and india forums

    5. luvIBN on September 8, 2017 3:46 pm

      Laddo u tho gave another laddo to us yaar. It’s cool. Avni is doing dhobi paccad and Neil is enjoying seeing his love like that that’s wow.

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