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Home»Fan Fiction»I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 12)
Fan Fiction Naamkaran

I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 12)

LaddoBy LaddoNovember 9, 2017Updated:November 9, 20173 Comments3 Mins Read
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Sry frnds for late submission but I was admitted to hospital so I was unable to update it so I beg your pardon and please do comments and encourage me to write…
Pervious epi: riyali engagement is announced.
The episode start with avneil and riyali chat.
A:so Ali and riya from today onwards you are no more riya and Ali…
Riyali makes a confused face.?
Neil smiles seeing riyali puzzled faces..
N:guys, avni is saying true… You are no more riya and Ali…
A:from now you both are riyali…??
Riyali smiles.
A:n Ali take care of my sister don’t try to hurt her.
Ali:yes ma’am I know… N I promise that I’ll never hurt riya and I’ll be always for her…
Riya smiles hearing Ali… (Sanam re plays)
A:and you miss… Sry Mrs riya (Neil smiles)take care of my best friend don’t try to hurt him and be by his side always…
R:yup avni always by your best friend side… And if I don’t be his side I know that if anything happens to me you’ll always be on Ali side…
Avneil and Ali:shut up riya !! Is this the way to speak…
R:sry guys…
They share a group hug(lafzon ka yeh rishta nahi of ishqbaaz plays)
Neela and hetal comes to them…
H:pandit ji has fixed the date of engagement after 2 days…
N:just 2days to prepare for riyali engagement aunty ?
Neela:yes Neil beta and yes I’ve a order for avni and Neil
A:yes ma’am
N:yes aunty…
Neela:Neil you will not work more as you are unwell and avni will be with you at your house ? to take care of you… You both have to just buy engagement ring for riya and Ali…
N:but aunty how all work will be done without avni … N it’s no need to send Avni with me…
Neela: yes you are grown up enough that you need not to follow my orders…
A: but maa!!
N: sorry aunty… We’ll do as you say…
Avni nodes in agreement…
After sometime… Riyali and avneil went to shop for purchasing ring for riyali
A: bhaiya best design of rings. .
Shop:yes ma’am sure…
Ali phone ring..
Ali: excuse me guys important call…
Ali leave from there
A man come an intentionally pour juice on riya…
M:sry ma’am..
R:it’s ok bhaiya… (To avneil)I’ll be back …
Avneil busy in selecting rings…
Avni is selecting for Ali and Neil for Riya…
They both said together…
Avneil:I find it
Both takes the ring and Neil moves to avni…
N:lady don I found a ring…
A:Mr perfect me too ..
They show each other the ring…
Before they could say that the shopkeeper interrupt
Shop: please made each other wear the ring… You will know how it look in hand
Avneil: exchange rings ??
Shop:yes please…
Avneil exchange it (aae dil h mushkil instrumental plays)
Some one click there pic…

Precape: avneil lost???

Author’s note:sry guys for not posting… I was unable to post because of being admitted to hospital… So forgive me and hope you enjoyed my writing and please do comments ???

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Laddo

    I'm a strong girl with a open mind.. I can do any thing for my family and friends.. my country is everything for me... I think that enough about me

    3 Comments

    1. Irem on November 9, 2017 4:39 pm

      Good yaar.keep writting.

    2. lillianalieben on November 10, 2017 2:31 am

      its kk laddo. no need to be sry and i hope u r fi9 ri8 now. coming to the ff, its ossum and i loved it. if u can update long episodes then plz do it. update soon and take care

    3. ahk26barbie on November 10, 2017 6:55 pm

      Its too good yaar.Keep writing.No need to say sorry.Take care.Keep writing dear.

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