Hlw frnds i was a silent reader.. I love avneil the most.. so today I’m going to start my first fanfiction on avneil.. riya Ali Aman and Kareena will be in supporting role
I’m providing a character sketch of my every character of my story
Harleen Khanna(bebe): grandmother of our Neil
Prakash Khanna:father of Neil and Kareena
Shewta Khanna:mother of Neil and Kareena
Neil Khanna: ACP….loves her sister Kareena the most
Kareena Khanna:MBA student..loves her bhai alot he is her everything
Dayawanti Mehta:evil dadi of avni Aisha ..right now in jail for murder of her son Ashish and daughter in law Aisha..
Ketan Mehta:chachu of avni and father of riya… Positive role..loves avni riya and Aman
Hetal Mehta: riya mother…
Neela Parikh: avni second mother..same as the show
Nano: maternal grandmother of avni
Avni Aisha/avni Mehta:lady cop assistant of Neil..love her mother brother and sister alot they r here everything
Riya Mehta: cousin sister of avni..love avni alot .. works in Ali cafe
Aman Mehta/amol Mehta: brother of avni.. loves riya avni and his neela maa a lot..a MBA student..
Ali:best and childhood frnd of avni..loves riya..
DD: avneil colleague and frnd
Thanks for reading..hope you enjoyed my writing..
Plz do comments.. it’s my first ff so plz comment and point out my mistake…
9 Comments
The way you introduce about all the character at the beginning of your episode is very beautiful. Introduction is the 1st thing which every reader is looking for. According to me, It is a complete introduction. All the best for your next story. You are Most welcome.
Thanks barun for ur lovely comments
All the best laddo..keep rock ur FF..I’m very exciting …
Thanks
U leave se -ve character of riya ,ali ,aman ,ketan ,avni and neil othervise u describe every thing with wonderful and excellence manner
Best of luck for your next story
Sry I didn’t get what I want to say..what did I leave
Laddo it wad wonderful just didn’t like Avni’s character . She can be another acp but not under neil. It is just my thought. At last i say an author plans best for his her story. Good luck. I wish u the best. Also read my stories on Avneil. 1st is Avneil Sweetest Love Story. 2nd ff is Tu dhadkan mere dil ki. Wajah tum ho
Thanks for your lovely advice
Dp friends ever thank each other. Also do read my ffs