Fan Fiction

I’m Incomplete without U [ avneil, riyali, khatam ] (Chapter 1)

Hlw frnds.. its been my first ff.. I has been silent reader… I love avneil so here comes my first chapter of my ff…

Scene of Mehta house
K:avni bachcha
A:yes chachu
K: leaving for office/police station
A: yes chachu…

K:can u bring my medicine???
A:u don’t want to request me chachu u hv to order me …(smiling)
K:OK baba.. sry… I’m going to correct my sentence… Avni bachcha bring my medicine… OK that’s fine
A:yup now better(smiles)
Maaaaa
N: coming bachcha

Neela comes
A:riya and Aman
N:riya went to Ali café n Aman to college
A:OK I leave too… Byee
N:there

Avni reaches police station
All staff: jai hind(saluting)
A:jai hind(saluting back)
Avni goes in there cabin(avneil shares same cabin reason will be revealed later)
A:DD
DD:ma’am
A:I’m leaving for case 1143… When Neil arrives tell him
DD:OK ma’am
Avni leaves
Neil enters he see avni leaving..

All staff:jai hind(saluting)
N:jai hind(saluting back)
N:DD avni kha gae??
DD:sir vo case 1143
N:ok… (In heart)apne aap ko pta nahi kya smjhte h … Akele chale gae .. kuch ho jaega tb…
DD :sir vo case223
N:yes DD …

DD:sir the man is going to sign a deal in panveel hills…
N:I’m leaving for panveel..inform avni..
DD:pr sir akele..
N: DD (glaring)
Neil leaves
Avni see him leaving while entering in police station..

A:DD Neil kha gaya
DD: ma’am vo drugs case…
A: akele(with concerned and anger)
DD: ma’am Maine mna keya tha…
A(in heart)ha vo kiske sunta hi kha h..
(To DD) kha gaya h…
DD: panveel hills…
A:ok… I’m leaving for there..

Avni leaves …
Neil reaches to the area..and start searching someone..
A man with rod comes and hit his head from back..
Blood ozes from his head n he get unconscious..
Man calls a lady..
Man: ma’am kaam ho gaya..

Lady: good… Pura kaam hote hi tmhare Pura payment mil jaega
Man:kl mera aadmi uska kaam khatam kr Dega..
Lady:thek h…

Avni reaches there and think where are u Neil … Kha ho …
She moves ahead and see Blood strains..
Seeing Blood strains and gets worried…

Neil is seen unconscious..
Screen is divided into two parts…one shows avni and second Neil … The screen freezes..

Precape: romance in air..

Laddo

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