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Home»Fan Fiction»I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 2)
Fan Fiction Naamkaran

I’m Incomplete without U (Chapter 2)

LaddoBy LaddoSeptember 5, 2017Updated:September 7, 201710 Comments4 Mins Read
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So frnds thank for ur lovely comments..the comments encourage me to continue my ff… As I was pretty sure if I didn’t got reviews I’ll just back out… So enough of my bak bak ..
The episode start with…
Ali café
Riya and Ali are working together …a customer arrives
R:Ali I’ll take the order
A:ok riya
Riya leaves to take order
R:sir what would u like to place as an order
Man:I’ll get what I want
R:yes sir of course … It’s our duty to fullfill ur demand
Man:will u plz come with me to spent a night with me..
(Looks evilly to riya..riya feels uncomfortable by his stare)
R:sir plz!!
Man:jaaneman plz
(Man falls on the ground…)

Scene shift to kaman
Aman is leaving from the college..he see Kareena standing
A:hey Kareena
K:hlw Aman
A:kiska wait kr rahe ho
K:vo bhai
A:Neil bhai ka … Tb to wait krte rah jaoge..
K:yes I think so
A:come I’ll drop u
Kaman leaves

Ali café
Ali punches the man from behind and the man falls on the ground..
A:how dare u to talk to her like this .. I’m gonna kill u
R:Ali relax..
A:what relax he is …
(Riya cups Ali face)
R:Ali relax.. I had called DD..
DD comes ..
R:DD
DD:riya ji r u alright
R:yes DD … When I hv Ali with me then nothing can happen to me..
Ali riya shares an eye lock (Tere sang yra khus raang bhahara plays…)

Panveel hills
A:where r u Neil …
(Avni see the stain of blood and get worried)
A(in mind)khaha tha maine is ldk se ki akele mt Jana pr isko mere ek bhi baat samjh me khaha aate h …yr Neil kha ho tm..
Hey bhagwan ji is ldk ki raksha krna..
Avni start following the stain of blood..he saw Neil lying unconscious on the floor ..and some mens r also there keeping eye on Neil …
A:I had to make Neil out of here …but how …
Man r talking that they will kill Neil on the very morning just after sometime their killer will arrive..
Hearing this avni was hell shocked…
A man says I’m going home u keep eye on him…
After the man leaves only one man is left..
Avni goes to save his hero …
She goes and attack him by clutching his neck in her arms and then just rotates the neck and the man is …..(aap log samjh gae hope)
Avni runs to Neil..
A:Neil aakhe kholo …plz Neil open ur eyes..
Mai tmse lade bina nahi rah skte…
Her tears starts rolling down from her cheeks and the fear to loose her hero is clearly seen in her eyes..
A tear falls on Neil’s cheeks
N:ahh!!(holding his head)
A:Neil tm theek to ho na..(hugs him tightly..)
N:ha avni mai theek hoon (hugging her back)
Avneil r hugging each other tightly. .
Song plays .

Aae dil h mushkil.
N:aahh(in pain)
Avni breaks the hug…
A:bahut dard ho raha h..(tear her stool and ties it in Neil injury)
N:ha..
A:aur aao akele .. bda hero banane chale the..
N(in mind):tm ho na mujhe bachane k leye…
A:chalo … Ab chale ki tmhe yahi rahna h.
Neil try to get up put feels dizzy.. and is about to fall..
A:(holding him before he falls)aaram se Neil..
Neil nods..
Avni makes him walk … Neil’s one hand was on avni’s waist an other holding her hand tightly …
Neil was glancing avni…(aae dil h mushkil instrumental plays)
The reach near avni car …
Avni leaves Neil to open the gate of car… As soon as avni leaves Neil’s hand he was about to fall…
Avni holding his hand before he could fall
A: Neil..
N:I’m fine..Paani..
A:ek min.. is door ko pakad ke khade raho.
(Shows him the opened car door of passenger seat ..)
Avni brings water and make it drink Neil …
N:bs..
A:ok ..chalo ab chale ghr Mr perfect (teasingly)
N:chalo jhasi ki rani
Both smiles
Avni makes him sit in the car..
They share an eye lock …(aae dil h mushkil instrumental plays)
Screen freezes..at avneil eye lock

Precape: avneil stuck in the forest..

Writer’s note:hope u all enjoy my writing…
Plz do comments and encourage me to perform and write better

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Laddo

    I'm a strong girl with a open mind.. I can do any thing for my family and friends.. my country is everything for me... I think that enough about me

    10 Comments

    1. anisha on September 5, 2017 8:44 am

      again stuck in a forest.. in every ff it happens.. nice concept u have … keep going.., loving it…

    2. Shanaya on September 5, 2017 8:46 am

      Unique & nice story line … Keep it up, really lovely 🙂

    3. Sweetgirl7 on September 5, 2017 11:48 am

      Laddo it is unique. I loved it. Story line is little bit similiar to my on ef on avneil but still it is interesting. Want to read all my avneil ffs. Join wattpad and post ur story theee. I am SamilovesAvNeil at wattpad. Do pm me there. And also post it on india forums. I am SweetgirlSami1 at india forums or short form if. Do pm and buddy me there and poat ur story there too

      • someone on September 5, 2017 1:13 pm

        y u dont post it in telly updates.. i cant join wallpad

    4. Sanya on September 5, 2017 12:59 pm

      Ya I also love it

    5. Dimple on September 5, 2017 1:34 pm

      Its too good yarr… Keep going

    6. naira on September 5, 2017 4:09 pm

      Nyc but u can make it more better & plzzz I really don’t wanna see kaman they r not valued in serial also & this Ff is so nyc & interesting…..so you plzzz think once again about kaman ?

      • Laddo on September 5, 2017 8:09 pm

        Kaman r just in supporting role.. nothing much.. only avneil and little riyali story will be there

      • Laddo on September 5, 2017 8:10 pm

        Kaman r just in supporting role.. nothing much.. only avneil and little riyali story will be there…

    7. luvIBN on September 6, 2017 7:15 am

      Kool I liked it.

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