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i’ll be ur shadow even in dark (one shot)

administratorBy administratorApril 24, 201678 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hello guyz meher here… m again back with another one shot…this is mostly on sanskar’ pov…

“I’ll be ur shadow even in dark”

“One Shot”

Sanskar was sitting in hospital corridor n was thinking !!
“We got married… yeah i got married that too arrange marriage… shocking na.. it was shocking for me as well.. i always want to marry a girl of my own choice.. a girl who can adapt herself in dynamic environment.. who can be my partner.. my soul mate.. who can care me lyk mum… who can guide me lyk father.. i thought for extreems… either modern girl or typical indian.. no in btwn typ.. n lol destiney plays itz cards… i got married to a indo-western girl.. either in thoughts or in dress .. she is unique.. bt my bd luck i hvnt notice her.. it was first night after our marriage.. n we both were in room surrounded by akward silence..beautiful decorations.. rose pettals.. dim light.. damn romantic … we sat on bed.. either edges.. n finall she broke the silence “hy m swara?? N u” i was shocked what the hell… i kno who r u.. n my badluck now u r my wife bt still i reply “m sanskar.. sanskar maheshwari”
She then said.. ” u r hot … ur wife is lucky”
My senses stopped working i was thinking is she tryng to ??..”

A nurse came n ask him to sign few pprs… he signed those pprs n again went into thoughts…

“That night we keeps on talking n finally slept at 4… dude she is quite intresting.. that was my openion after first night
I woke up at 11 n…. i open my eyes n they were about to pop out of socekt..as i saw an angel infront of me.. “damn this angel is ur wife sanskar” my soul reassures me… she was wearling a straight cut front open jacket stlye sute … with open hair… she serve my bed tea to me… n i asked.. “hw u kno i hv A habbit of bed tea??” She smile.. n her slightly curved lips took my breath away… ” sanskar m ur wife aapke bare me sab pta rkhna mera farz b h or marzi bhi”
She left n i kept on thinking y she said… “marzi” i brushed the thoughts n get ready…
Days passes on… n we hardly talk not cz we dont want to… bt cz we dont hv anything to talk upon…. then my family left for their home as i live in mumbai n all in kolkata… we were all alone… in those days.. she use to care me lyk mum.. i never feel mum’s absense… she prepares breakfast.. i eat that… she prepares lunch.. i try to eat that cz i dont hv tym for eating due to work load… she prepares dinner … i want to eat that bt late night meetings doesnt allow me to hv dinner.. i came home n daily saw her sleeping on dining table with two served plates… damn she didnt hv anything or tu thoos thoos ke kha raha tha … one day i blurt my frustation on her… I came late n hvnt hd anything since morning n that tym i was tired enough to eat..so i walk towards my room.. n she calld “sanskar.. hv dinner first”..
“What did u say??”
“I said hv ur dinner” she said in a firm tone.. “who the hell r u to
Order me… m sanskar maheshwari.. no one orders me.. n what r u tryng to prove that u r a good wife n m nt a good husband… haan u want me to feel guilty… but let me tell u .. i will never feel guilty.. i will never care for u.. get lost !!” I kno i was too harsh on her… her reply shocked me…she clamly handed over that plate to me n said in choaking voice ” sanskar don’t test my patience… i dont expect anything in return frm u only lil respect… if u cant respect me.. dont disrespect me n my actions… cz i will nt change.. n u will feel guilty when i leave u… indeed u will” and she left.. and that was the last day i saw her smile… my actions my words hurted her alot.. we both stick to or words she didnt change her action .. neither i…. i became more n more harsh towards her.. she daily prepares lunch n dinner for me… n i didnt even touch that.. but still she doesnt say anything.. i was surprised to see her patience level… ”

This thoughts were disturbed by doctor’s call “mr maheshwari”
San: ya doc hwz she now ?? Plz do anything bt save her.. arrange best things for her but save my wife.
Doc: we r tryng our level best… lets hope for the best… but i will not give u any false hope.. prepare urself for worst..

He sat in shock n again recalls his journey” it was karwachauth… she asked me to come home early.. n i forgot… i came back in morning @ 8 …. i saw her n felt that i forgot something but what..?? She was preparing breakfast n i saw her
Hands trembling…she was about to fall but i held her..i took her in my arms n call doctor.. tht day for the first tym i saw her innocent face … her cherry red lips… her long silky black hair… my wife… yes after 4 months of mrriage i finally notise her… doctor came n told me…that it was cz weakness… then i curse myself hw could i forget about abt her fast… doctor left n i try to prepare something for her as she cant prepare or i shld say she is not in a state to prepare… so i went in a new galaxy.. surrounded by lots of aliens… differnt different typs of creatures .. n weapons.. oh god so many weapons… normally ppl call this galaxy as “kitchen” i chant ‘hanuman chalisa’ took a deep breath n enter the kitchen.. i kno hw to prepare khichdi only… bt that too i prepare way long back… but still i try n after an hour finally me n my khichdi both r ready…. i went in room n saw her lyng on bed… i cant resist from gazing her… her beautiful face… she slowly opens her eyes n gave me a slight smile n said “sanskar aap aa gye… m sry i hvnt prepare anything yet.. aap bas 15 min do.. i will prepare breakfast for you” she tried to get up bt i held her.. n firstly completes the ritual of vrat.. i feed her frm my hands… n then i asked “y dont u call me… just call me once n remind me about ur fast…i will come home” she looked at me with teary brown eyes… her eyes were asking me y i care for her.. not only her eyes bt my heart is also same thing… n then she replied “u only ask me not to call u in any condition so hw could i?” Her reply was so damn innocent n true..then i rember i asked her not to disturb me in my office…i said that to her after a week of our marriage.. n she doesnt call me ever.. that day changed everything… my heart… my view… my feelings for her… only one remains same she n her luv… ”

He was praying to god to save his wife… to save his lyf.. n cursing himself for that incident…

“I hv realised my luv for her… so i wanted to propose her in a grand way… i ask her to get ready… i came n pick her… we were sitting in car n she was very exited she asked me ” sanskar aap kaha le ke ja rahe ho mujhe ??” I said ” hv patience princess… i hv a surprise for u” then i drove fast inorder to reach there soon n β˜…β˜…BOOMβ˜…β˜… our car has collided with another car… swara roll off the car i got little hurt on head … i look at adjecent seat n found her noware…then i saw ppl gatherd at a distance.. i smhow reached there n saw my swara lyng btwn pool of blood… my heat sinked… what hv i done… she is in this state cz of me only… i took her hospital.. n here m praying for her well being only her words were running in my mind ” u will feel guilty when i leave u… indeed u will” yes m feeling guilty for not saving u.. ”

Again doctor calls him ” mr maheshwari..”
He immediatly get up n went to doc ” is she fyn ??”
Doc: yes she is… but she is weak take care of her.. San: when can i meet her?
Doc: when she gains her senses…

FIVE HOURS LATER

Swra finally opens her eyes n i proposed her first n then i say sry
“I love u swara plz never leave me…. n sry cz of me u r in this condition”

“I love u too sanskar… i will never leave you… i will be ur shadow even in darkness…”

THE END

so guyz done with another one shot.. tell me.. hwz it πŸ˜‰

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78 Comments

  1. Kritika on April 24, 2016 4:45 pm

    Its osum..as soon as the os ended…I hav a big bright smile on my face…:)

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:06 pm

      Thnku sweety !! Where were u i was missing u β™₯

  2. Iqra on April 24, 2016 4:46 pm

    awesome

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:08 pm

      Thnku

  3. IREENA on April 24, 2016 4:48 pm

    it was really Good.

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:11 pm

      Thnku β™₯

  4. radha radhe on April 24, 2016 4:49 pm

    awesome

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:12 pm

      Thnkyou

  5. Falguni on April 24, 2016 4:50 pm

    Hi Meher nice OS..
    but u have to put some romance also.. but really hilarious that first night n then Galaxy omg who calls kitchen Galaxy i m chukling like an idiot … but all over i like the concept Arrange marriage i believe in that πŸ™‚

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:18 pm

      Thnku falguni…
      U r saying me to put romance n i was about to put tragedy… lol..

      our great sanskar calls kitchen as galaxy πŸ˜›

      N yup i too believe in arrange marriage πŸ˜‰

  6. Pooja on April 24, 2016 4:59 pm

    Awsm dear
    Indeed emotional……:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:18 pm

      Thnx dear

  7. Pooja on April 24, 2016 5:00 pm

    Awsm dear
    Indeed emotional……:-) πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  8. Sumita on April 24, 2016 5:03 pm

    Nice meher.i like alot ur os .its all time heart touching

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:19 pm

      Thnku dear.. thnx for reading n bearing πŸ˜›

  9. Anjali on April 24, 2016 5:06 pm

    <3 <3 <3
    Loved the galaxy part

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:39 pm

      Thnku anji… i hope u dont mind calling u anji

    • Anjali on April 24, 2016 8:27 pm

      Ofc not…..???? why would I mind???

      And I’m so sorry for not commenting in ur ff….. have been busy these past few days…. but will surely comment after this week…. but I absolutely loved it….
      ???

    • meher on April 24, 2016 9:33 pm

      I can understand yr… u guyz r just lyk me.. i read all ffs on sunday only.. sare parts πŸ˜› us week k.. except sujata’s ff… that i read regularly.. πŸ˜›

      N vese b itz exam season … πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰ β™₯β™₯β™₯

  10. NΒ£@ on April 24, 2016 5:06 pm

    Hii… Meher, i have read all your one shots and fanfictions.. They are truly amazing.. Good Job.. Lots of Love..Stay Blessed.. Keep Smiling.. πŸ™‚

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:09 pm

      Thnku.. for reading this os n for reading other too…
      Lods of luv
      Keep reading β™₯ πŸ˜€

  11. Sreeja on April 24, 2016 5:07 pm

    Super and heart paining story

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:08 pm

      Thnku dear β™₯β™₯ πŸ˜€

  12. Jerly on April 24, 2016 5:07 pm

    cute…..story……

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:07 pm

      Thnku…

  13. chery on April 24, 2016 5:13 pm

    veryyty awesome epiaode

  14. chery on April 24, 2016 5:13 pm

    veryyy awesome epiaode

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:39 pm

      Thnkuuu

  15. shan on April 24, 2016 5:14 pm

    awesome

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:39 pm

      Thnkuu

  16. Anu Ann on April 24, 2016 5:14 pm

    Awesome dear

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:25 pm

      Thnkyou anu

  17. sam on April 24, 2016 5:19 pm

    awesome loved it

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:25 pm

      Thnx alot sam

  18. samina on April 24, 2016 5:21 pm

    Nyc meher….day by day u become a new ekta kapoor ha….. n awsm epi

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:26 pm

      Lol… ekta kapoor πŸ˜› then i shld post nxt ff on smthng lyk nagin… πŸ˜›
      Btw thnx alot dear β™₯

  19. aanya on April 24, 2016 5:27 pm

    Superb and amazing

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:27 pm

      Thnku aanya πŸ˜€

  20. Shagun on April 24, 2016 5:30 pm

    This is the best one shotbof urs

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:27 pm

      Thnku shagun β™₯ πŸ˜€

  21. Samina on April 24, 2016 5:32 pm

    U’re just awsm I like ur all ff n one shot…n always waiting for ur ff….god bless dear

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:28 pm

      Thnku dear… keep reading…
      luv u loads β™₯ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰

  22. Sanu on April 24, 2016 5:35 pm

    Awesome…..

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:28 pm

      Thnkuu

  23. Anu on April 24, 2016 5:40 pm

    I love ur one shots dear. This was beyond amazing. I loved it ???

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:29 pm

      Thnkuu anu dear β™₯β™₯
      Luv u… β™₯

  24. Kavya on April 24, 2016 5:55 pm

    Awsum!! Meher frm where u get such grt ideas I love your ff’s nd one shots also?

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:30 pm

      Thnx kavya.. n i also think same πŸ˜› pata ni kaha se idea aate h bs aa jate h πŸ˜›

  25. L Khan on April 24, 2016 5:55 pm

    Omg it’s damm nce loved it

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:30 pm

      Thnkyou dear !! β™₯β™₯ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰

  26. Nita on April 24, 2016 6:01 pm

    aweeeeesomeeeee……

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:31 pm

      Thnkuuuuuuu πŸ˜€

  27. Aditi on April 24, 2016 6:29 pm

    Awsm yr

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:31 pm

      Thnx yr.. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰

  28. Haai on April 24, 2016 6:48 pm

    Awesome meherdi!!
    Waiting for another fantastic os frm u!!!???

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:32 pm

      Thnku lil sissy β™₯β™₯
      [I dont think u will mind ]

  29. Nicks on April 24, 2016 7:08 pm

    i m in love with your one shorts dear…each one is having grate concept…loved this one also… <3

    • meher on April 24, 2016 7:33 pm

      Thnkyou nicks… m happyyy that u hv read my os … πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰
      Keep smiling n keep reading β™₯β™₯ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰

  30. Anu on April 24, 2016 7:38 pm

    I ? this OS. It was amazing dear ?

    Specially Sanky and his kitchen joke. ROFL.

    And also Swara for being so selfless in love β™₯

    • meher on April 24, 2016 8:07 pm

      Thnx again… lol… that was new “galaxy” for him… u can imagine his struggle πŸ˜›

  31. Afra on April 24, 2016 8:26 pm

    Nice..

    • meher on April 24, 2016 9:33 pm

      Thnx β™₯

  32. sneha on April 24, 2016 8:31 pm

    Hey meher…i hv read all ur ff and alll one shotzz.. they are jst superb…but hv nvr commented ( dont know y;) ) but now itzz unresistable…i mst say u seem to be a creative person by ur ideas and writing skillzz…thnxx fr this lovely shot… πŸ™‚

    • meher on April 24, 2016 9:35 pm

      Sneah same pinch i rarely comment on ffs … bt i kno reason…:P i read them after a week so commenting is useless…

      Thnku sneha for reading… dear
      Luv u loads β™₯β™₯
      Keep reading πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰

  33. sujata on April 24, 2016 8:50 pm

    YΓ’ar meher u r too awesome. ..

    • meher on April 24, 2016 10:14 pm

      Thnku sujata… umm lets decide another name for u sujata is big πŸ˜‰

    • Anjali on April 24, 2016 10:20 pm

      we cal her SU!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

    • meher on April 24, 2016 10:28 pm

      Then cool.. su final.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  34. Dev on April 24, 2016 9:55 pm

    Touchy meher….an awesome os flick…..lovd it

    • meher on April 24, 2016 10:15 pm

      Thnx dev πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜€

  35. Rash on April 24, 2016 11:04 pm

    Awesome…….
    Fabulous……
    Loved it alot… .

    • meher on April 25, 2016 8:12 am

      Thnku..
      β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
      πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰

  36. Rosey on April 24, 2016 11:35 pm

    wow amazing

    • meher on April 25, 2016 8:22 am

      Thnx dear

  37. sree on April 24, 2016 11:38 pm

    Awesome meher di.loved it.i love ur ffs too.the galaxy part was very nice.

    • meher on April 25, 2016 8:22 am

      Thnx sree… πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

  38. RUPA on April 25, 2016 12:17 am

    it was simply out of the world. U r an OS queen, i know many of readers tagged u by that name and u truly deserve it.

    • meher on April 25, 2016 8:23 am

      Thnku so much rupa itz really a bigg bigggggg compliment for me ….
      Luv u…
      Keep reading β™₯

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