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Home»Fan Fiction»I LOVE YOU ONLY YOU (Shot ~~four)
Fan Fiction Kumkum Bhagya

I LOVE YOU ONLY YOU (Shot ~~four)

SamyuSamBy SamyuSamApril 22, 20178 Comments12 Mins Read
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Haiii evryone…. Am going fastly,, as I need to complete it in my next shot itself…. Sry if u feel this update as illogical…. Am rushing too fast I know,, nd I will finsh this in my next update… but read this till final,, dnt stop reading in middle if u feel not a worthy of giving ua valuable time… nd if u like it plzzz doo comment below by giving some more ua valuable time to me…nd if u feel u can suggest me in improving my writing,, am ready to receive all suggestions… Nd plzzz bear with my spelling mistakes as am typing in mobile bcz as I said u bfre am really poor at typing in mobile…. Thank you all….

Shot four::……….

Abhi:pragya arora….
Pra:abhishek prem mehra….
Pra stood their with blank face,, abhi came out aftr dressing,, he came nd stood before pra…..
Now they both were stood facing eachother….. Pra looking down,, shez turning her dupatta around her finger…
Abhi looking at her,, trying to talk something. .
They both became nervous….with silence….
Abhi broke the silence…..
Abhi:soooo ua miss pragya arora…..????
Pra smiles looking intO his eyes nd says yess… nd ua mr.abhishek prem mehra….???
Abhi smiles at her nervousness nd says… yessss….. Its really unexpected ryt…. We travelled whole night bt we didn’t know Our names….
Pra: yesss…. Life gave me a big surprise today… am waitng to see u frm many years but I met u this way… in a low voice…
Abhi:what????? Did u say something. ????
Pra:nooo… nooo… nothing… I just asked u,, what ua dng here??
Abhi: shez my frnd…. Pointing towards tanu..
Pra:hooo… okkkk…
Abhi:sooo…

Pra:sooo…
Abhi looks at her….
Pra: I will catch u later,,I had some work….
Abhi:okkk take care….. Pra leaves from there hurriedly…
Abhi smiles at her behaviour…nd says intresting….
Pra goes to tanu nd dat whole day shez busy with her work… but abhi is looking fr pra,, he didn’t find her… he misses her a lot as she made him crazy towards her,, last night??..
At night after dinner…
Tanu comes to abhi…whoz sitting alone outside mansion
Tanu:abhiiiiiii…
Abhi:haaaa tell me…
Tanu:am calling u frm long time… wer u lost idiot….
Abhi:voooo nothng…. But tanu,, did u saw her today???
Tanu:who??????????
Abhi:u dnt know…..
Tanu:I know…. Am asking who is she to u???
Abhi:shez my frnd…. U know wat tanu,, I met her yestrday itself…. Nd says wat hapnd…
Tanu smiles nd in d whole while she notices only,, a sparkle in abhi eyes,, while telling abt pragya…
Tanu:I came to tell u abt her Only….actually shez is in guest room..
Abhi:what?????
Tanu:she became dull frm evening,, nd tooo tierd in designing my dress… why don’t u go… befre completing her sentence… abhi ran to guest room..
Tanu:i hope u will realise who she is to u…
In guest room…
Pra standing at window by folding her arms nd looking out….
Abhi came nd pated on door,,
Pra came to senses nd looked at door…
Abhi smiles,,, pra:why are u standing their… plzz come…
Abhi comes nd They both sit on sofa….
Pra is still thinkng abt something…

Abhi:I think ua not d girl I have seen yesterday….
Pra was confused by his words nd looks at him…
Abhi:d girl I met yesterday knows only nonstop talking nd smiling… but ua not d same girl….
Pra smiles nd says…. Am d same girl….
Abhi:then tell me what ua thinkng???
Pra remains silent nd abhi looking into her eyes can see tears starting to flow…
Abhi:if its personal,, I wont compel u…. Its okk…
Pra:nothing like that,, I just miss my family… says by looking other side to hide her tears…
Abhi:family…. It was only one day ua away from them….. Says by smiling
Pra: yess,, I know it will be silly for as u stayed away from ua family fr many years… but this is d first
Tym am staying away frm my family…. U know,, this is not my family, they are my world,, nd my papa loves me a lot,, aftr my mom passed away,, am only taking care of aravind nd bulbul… I didn’t spend not even single day without them,, nd one main thing is tomarw bulbul birthday,, dis is d first time shez celebrating her birthday without me… nd I wish dis should be her last birthday…. Nd now I have to spend 1 week here… am little worried abt dadi health also,, as she totally forgeting to take tablets now a days,, nd purab nd alia are also like aravind nd bulbul to me… am missing them all… by saying that she had tears in her eyes…
Abhi immediately hugged her tightly… pra was hell shocked with it….
Abhi realised what he did nd moved back..
Abhi:am sryyy,, I became emotional…
Pra understood him nd says,, noo problem..
Abhi:I just thiught to tell u onething wen I meet u…
Pra:what???

Abhi:thank youuu soo much.. For taking care of my family….
Pra smiles nd says: its my family too… abhi looks into her eyes…
Abhi:I know,, my family is very much attached to u,, as purab is missing u more than me..
Pra: even I too miss him… hez such a sweet boy…
Abhi:but not more like me..
Pra:nooo, even more better than u… by standing
Abhi:what did u say.. Nd tries to catch her… pra runs,, nd abhi follows her…
Abhi catches her by pinning to wall nd by guarding his both hands on either side…
Abhi is near to pra,, pra feels his breath,, abhi comes more close to her,, abhi:now tell me who is more sweet???… pra:uuu… in low nd shaky voice
Abhi:I cant hear u… by turning his face left side….
Pra sudenly bites his earightly
Abhi:uuuuooochhhhhhh… nd pra runs from their…
Pra smiles widely nd raises her eyebrows…. Abhi sees her smiling, felt happy…
Abhi: plzz keep smiling,, it suits u a lot….. U know d best part in u is ua smile,, which attract evryond…
Pra didn’t speak anythng.. Abhi:helooo.. Madam… I gave a compliment,,
Pra:thanks fr ua compliment Mr.mehra…
Abhi:Mr.mehra….????
Pra:u wont like,, me calling u by dat name…
Abhi:noo nothing like dat… its sound sweet wen u call…
Pra smiles… abhi:okkk… just go nd sleep now… gud night…
Pra:gud night… he leaves pra closes d door nd rest on her bed…
Abhi goes to his room nd checks d time.. It was 11;00pm… he calls to pur…
Pur lifts d call…
Abhi:hellooo purab…
Pur:whoz dis??? In a sleepy mode..
Abhi:heyyy bhuddhu…

Pur:haaa bhai….
Abhi:haa,, I want u to do onething… nd explains something…
He cuts d call….
At 11:57pm…
Pra Is sleeping,, someone comes nd knocks d door continuosly… she wakeup suddenly nd thinks who is dis time knockind d door…
Pra opens d door nd finds abhi,, she looks puzzled,, abhi rushes into her room nd drags her towards sofa nd they both sit on it nd he places a laptop on table wich faces opposite to them…
Pra is just watching evrythng,, nd donoo wats gng on…
Abhi opens skype nd suddenly a fully decorated place is shown…
Pra phone gives alarm, same time all shouts happy birthday bulbul… then bulbul face is shown,, who is closing her mouth with her two hands in excitement nd hapiness…
Pra gets happy tears wen seeing bul… alia, aravind, purab nd sanjay all wishes her… purab says evrythng to bul abt abhi plan,, she sees them in mobile,, abhi wishes her..
Bul:tqqq soo much… nd looks at pra..
Pra:happy bday my darling.. Nd happy tears flows thrugh her eyes… bul:diii.. Tqq soo much dii.. Am really happy now… nd gives flying kiss.. They starts cryng seeing eachother…
Abhi: hooo god… birthday baby should not cry… plzz cut d cake ma.. Its getting late..
All says yess… nd bul cuts d cake… all are happy…. Sanjay sees abhigya in phone,, nd feels some what disturbed…
All leaves to their house…
In pra room…
Abhi:are u happy….???

Pra:hugs abhi nd says tqq sooo much… u really made my day…
Abhi feels that moment should be freezed their…. Pra comes to sense nd says,, thnqq fr evrythng mr.mehra…
Abhi smiles nd leaves from their…
Abhi while going to his room… why I cant see her in pain??? Why am feeling mre coMfrtable with her??who is she to me?? He reached his room nd thinks to brushed off all her thoughts nd went to sleep..
Pra too thinks same nd slowly dozed into sleep.
Next day Abhi comes nd asks tanu abt pra…
Tanu:she went out with my aunt… I think for some shoping…
Abhi:okkk nd leaves from their… as they are only apart from eachother,, but their heart is thinkbg abt each other….
At night…
Abhi came to pra room aftr searching her whole mansion…
They started talking with each other,, As dat day passed abhigya became more close nd friendly…
Abhi talked abt his london life nd evrythng… pra talked abt her simole world.. Abhi is totally impreserd by her talks.. He feels more comfrtable with her…
Next day also passed like dat,, they went out for some time nd used to be togethrr always…
Marrigar also happened well.. Nd on reception(last day)…
All were getting ready for reception…
Abhi came down to reception nd feeling lonely without pra…
Here pra is getting ready in a beautiful navyblue colour saree… when she was wearing her blouse,, it was dat time abhi entered into her room without knocking nd saw her feeling difficult in tieing knot… abhi thought to leave d room but stoooed by looking pra…
He came near to her,, as shez facing d mirror,, nd she saw him from mirror nd turned back… abhi slowly turned her to face mirror again… Abhi by closing his eyes,, moves her hair oneside nd slowly moves towards knots,, But pra is breathing heavily,, By his warm touch of hands… abhi finally ties her knots…Pra turns to abhi nd abhi opens his eYes… they both look at eachother..
Abhi:I think we should go down,, as d function is started…
Pra nods her head… abhigya goes down..
While d reception os going on,, few couples dances… abhigya looks at eachother… tanu signals abhi to dance with pra… abhi denies first but finally with full of dare asks pra… pra Says okk,, aftr soo much of request… abhigya dance romantically…. Day passed…
Next day all are leaving nd abhi nd pra too has to leave… nd abhy booked d train tickets(as pra likes travelling by train)….
As abhi bids bye tanu… tanu: dis is d last time am saying u abhi… R u sure abt pra,, as shez only ua frnd…
Abhi:cant answer to her nd stands blankly…

Tanu:see now u dnt have any answer… u know abhi,, she is d only girl who made u to travel from mumbai to kolhapur,, I know bcz of her ua here,, from d day I met u in london… ua saying many things abt pra but am not sure dat time… now I can see ua love towards her in ua eyes… I think dis is love abhi… plzz dnt waste ua time, Follow ua heart abhi..
Abhi hugs her nd smiles…
Abhigya bids bye to tanu… they leave to railway station…..
At 10pm…
Same they again rest in their berths,, but both don’t feel sleeping,, they were talking to eachother in rest poition only by facing eachother,, it was almost 2am still they don’t feel sleep,, but rest of coach are sleepind,, they slowly headed downwards nd they went outside the lobby,, they ooened the door nd sat their… train was passing a jungle… they started their talks again…
Pra then started saying abt her mother…nd how she misses her….
Abhi felt sorry for her. Pra was not crying but abhi felt her eyes were moist.
Abhi was clueless what to do and what kind of behavior should he show to her, sympathy, empathy or just ignore? Abhi was a lot confused.
The train was running fast and abhi was feeling to give her a hug, a hug of comfort but being so confused of what to do what not to, abhi didn’t dare to do that but somehow abhi was also feeling the same with his life as he is also missing his parents a lot.abbi stopped worrying of what she would think, moved his face towards her and planted a kiss on her cheek.
Pra widened her eyes with a shock as She didn’t expect that, even abhi was also not in a position to realize what he had done just then. Abhi was standing being un-smart and was not daring to meet her eyes.

Abhi moved some distance from abhi nd says “ I really dnt know know when it haooened but it happened… when I came from london,, it was my entusisim to meet u first as am listening abt u much frm dadi nd purab nd alia… but I came to kolhapur just to see u immediately,,dat time I thought it was just a curiosity, but when we met accidentally in this train without knowing eachother nd became more clse,, I thought it was a destuny which is making us together… “
Befre he complete pra rushes to him nd hugs from back…
Abhi turns her side nd by cupping her face with his hands says “I love u… I love u soo much” shouts a loud…. Pra:”I love u tooo mr.mehra.. “ by hugging him…
They both hug… abhi took her hand in his hand nd drags her close to him,, he raised her height to his height by holding her waist,, her put his lips on her…. As it was going passionately… time was stopped in his watch… nd evrythng was stopped in nature…..
Screen freezes their….

Am really happy fr all ua sulort till now… I cant reply to evryone bt my hearty thanks to each nd evry commentors nd silent readers… nd plzz try to comment dear silent readers if possible….

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    8 Comments

    1. Reshma_Pradeep on April 22, 2017 7:17 pm

      AWESOMEEEEEE!

    2. Abhigya on April 22, 2017 9:08 pm

      I will really gonna miss you after the Last shot thanks for this shot really awesome but last part was simply superb and don’t end this and I will miss you soooooooooooooo much and not having words to express this shot in one word really want new words to explain.

    3. Saranya24 on April 22, 2017 9:42 pm

      Supr cute epi loved it a lot love u loads muuaahh?????

    4. di on April 22, 2017 9:44 pm

      wonder full dear u just rocking as only one part

      as really miss it………

      love u n happy sunday………………

    5. Anshu on April 22, 2017 10:24 pm

      Nice shot, great work dear

    6. priyanka on April 23, 2017 1:00 pm

      Superb dii. .loved it

    7. Lopez on April 24, 2017 1:04 pm

      awesome dear but sorry late comment

    8. Sugan on April 24, 2017 1:37 pm

      Awesome

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