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Home»Fan Fiction»I desire you BeHir SS Part 4
Fan Fiction Naagin Season 3 Tujhse Hai Raabta

I desire you BeHir SS Part 4

JasminerahulBy JasminerahulMarch 13, 2019Updated:July 7, 202014 Comments3 Mins Read
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I desire you Part 4

The next day…

Bela and Mahir were helping their friends who had programmes that time in college.

Unknowingly they sat next to each other.

Bela and Mahir felt something different in the fragrance.

Kuch na kahein, bas chup rahein
Khamoshiyan hi keh jaaye
Tham jaaye, yeh jahaan
Aur pal bhi, theher jaaye

They turned to their side .They saw each other.They shared a cute eye lock.

Mahir could’nt take his eyes off her.He was lost in her.She became conscious.Due to shyness she turned off her face.But that did not stop Mahir from looking at her.

Bela was called by Kalyani.

Kalyani:Bela…please come.Help me to wear my dance costume.

Bela went to dress her up.

Kalyani did a beautiful dance.

The college bell rang.

Kalyani:Bela,you go alone.You know that I am doing choreography for Juhi’s team.I need to make them practice.

Bela:Ok.

Bela was on her way.She saw a kid crying.She went near him.

Bela:What happened beta?

He:My kite flew away.

Bela looked up.The kite was flying.

Bela:Don’t cry.I will get it back for you.

Bela said to herself:But how will I get it by myself?

Suddenly she heard a voice from behind:I will help you.

She turned back.She was surprised as it was Mahir.She just smiled.

They both ran to reach the thread of the kite.Finally they caught the thread together.So they skin rubbed each others.They became shy.

They looked at each other sharing a beautiful eye lock.

Rahein na kuch bhi darmiyaan
Mitey yeh saari duriyaan
Milke bhi hain adhuri si,
Yeh daastaan…

Rehke bhi sang hain juda
Kyun nahi(?) bana kabhi jahan
Hain yeh alag hi daastaan…


Bela removed her hand from him.They handed over the kite to the kid.

Kid:Thanks a lot.

Mahir:Beta, be careful.Otherwise it will fly away again.

The kid ran away smiling.

Bela:Thank you for helping me to catch the kite.

Mahir:I have to thank you also for the same reason.

She smiled.

Mahir:And thanks for being a good dance partner.When my dance partner left me if you had’nt agreed to dance with me I would not have been able to dance.You were amazing.

Bela smiled happily.

Bela:Ok bye.

She turned backward and walked.Mahir called her.

Mahir:Bela!

She turned back.

Mahir:Won’t you be my friend?After all we were dance partners..

Bela was very happy.She nodded her head with a smile.

He walked towards her smiling and extended his hand.She held his hand.They shook their hands giving a beautiful beginning to their friendship.

After a few months…

Now Mahir and Bela are very good friends.

Bela’s eyes searched for Mahir.Finally she saw Mahir.But with Juhi.He was laughing and chatting with Juhi.Bela fumed with jealousy.She could’nt tolerate the sight.

Mahir saw Bela.Her eyes were wet and red due to anger.

Mahir:Bela!

She ran away.

Mahir:Oh no…

J:What happened Mahir?Why did Bela run away seeing us together?

Mahir did’nt have answer.Yash and Meera came seeing it.

M:Because Bela felt that there is affair between you both.

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    14 Comments

    1. Saniya fathima on March 13, 2019 5:16 pm

      Omg… Bela doubting mahir bt thank god they became i was happy wen i read tat scene wen mahir is trying to befriend bela nd loved tat scene wen behir 2gether helped boy by catching the kite.. As behir fans we want mre of behir’s romance that too in the past nd present well written sissy

      • Jasminerahul on March 13, 2019 11:28 pm

        thank you very much

      • Anu on March 17, 2019 10:32 pm

        Really nice story, you are a great writer and far far better script than nagin3, such a lovely track, all the best sister

    2. Saniya fathima on March 13, 2019 11:36 pm

      Ur welcme…. Wen wil u update next one eagerly waiting y did they broke up wat was d reason?

      • Jasminerahul on March 14, 2019 8:37 am

        i will post it next week.would you like to read my avneil TS?

      • Saniya fathima on March 17, 2019 9:24 pm

        Yes sure

    3. Shika on March 15, 2019 4:33 am

      Hopeless show .. Nagin 1 and Nagin 2 were worth watching .. probably Mauni Roy was awesome .. Please change Bela from show .. Karishma Tanna return is worthwhile watching …

    4. Saniya fathima on March 17, 2019 9:58 pm

      If u want u can send the link of it through which i can read bcuz there r many avneil ts so ?

      • Jasminerahul on March 18, 2019 11:01 pm

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/khamoshi-silence-avneil-ts-part-1/
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/khamoshi-silence-avneil-ts-part2-last-part/

        This is my avneil TS

    5. Saniya fathima on March 19, 2019 11:26 pm

      I read the epi sis bt couldnt able 2 comment in tat page bcuz it is closed bt the story was mindblowing i cant understand from where u r getting these new stories it was awesome cant express my happiness in words i felt it as a happy ending loved tat eventhough neil lost his voice avni didnt left him tats true love bt it is only fiction bcuz even i love PEARL V PURI alot tat i send gifts mails messages bt no reply i understand tat they have alot of fans so they cant keep replying 2 all

      • Jasminerahul on March 20, 2019 4:00 am

        thanks a lot.yes actors cannot reply as they are super busy

    6. Saniya fathima on March 19, 2019 11:33 pm

      Rather than story was fantastic mindblowing superb awesome nd last loved it alot i read the story repeatedly imagining the characters nd it gave me alot of happiness truly…. Thank u

      • Jasminerahul on March 20, 2019 3:48 am

        thanks a lot.is this about my avneil TS?

    7. Anuva on March 21, 2019 11:15 pm

      Both sharing eyelock is cute.Kite scene is nice. Behir helped the kid, meanwhile they share a romantic moment. Oh no, Bela misunderstood Mahir and Juhi’s friendship. Hope, it will be cleared soon. Awesome episode.

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