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Home»Fan Fiction»I can’t make you leave. #Riansh OS
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I can’t make you leave. #Riansh OS

Mennahussein55By Mennahussein55July 30, 202166 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys. Here is a new os of mine. I hope you like it. Do tell me your opinion on the comments.
So let’s start.
Riddhima’s POV starts:
It has been 3 days since Vansh has got to be in coma.
It is the most painful 3 days I have passed through it.
For everyone it is just 3 days, but for me they have passed as if they are 3 centuries.
I can’t be more alone without you Vansh.
I can’t live more time without you.
You have to get up now.
You have to get up for me.
Why you have done that in ourselves Vansh?!!!
Why?!!!!
What was the need to drive the car while you are being unwell?!!!!!
Why you are being that careless?!!!!!
Because of you being that careless, you have putted us on this situation now.
I was looking at Vansh while he was being on bed and he wasn’t feeling about anyone around him.
Me( raising my voice so Vansh could hear me): You have to get up Vansh. What you have done hasn’t just affected you only as it has also affected me. It has broken me from inside. You know how much I love you. You know that I can’t live without you. It is like a death to me. So please get up Vansh. I can’t spend more days without you. I can’t see you in this state. Please get up. Please Vansh get up for me. Please Vansh wake up for the sake of your Riddhima, your sweetheart, and your wife. Please Vansh get up.
I kept screaming and shouting on him.
I was wanting him to get up very fast.
I really can’t tolerate being away from him more than that.
I can’t bear that he is near me, but he isn’t talking with me.
I can’t bear that I’m feeling his presence, but he isn’t interacting with me.
I can’t make you leave Vansh.
You have to get up.
I have to make you wake up as soon as possible.
You have to be with me forever.
I have got closer to Vansh by putting my hands on his face.
Me: You know that you are the reason of my survive. You know that I’m too weak without you. You know that I can’t be on this world alone. So why you want to leave me?!! Why you aren’t replying me and responding to me?! Why you aren’t wanting to get up?!!! Do you started to get bored from me?!!! Do I have disturbed you that much that made you don’t even want to reply me?!!! So that’s why you are acting to be on coma so I could give up and leave?! Please say something Vansh. Say something for God’s sake. Your state is killing me from inside. Get up please. I beg you. Please get up for me Vansh.
I kept crying and crying.
I was feeling that my soul will get up from my chest due to the so much crying that I have cried it.
He has to get back to me.
He has to be with me.
He can’t leave me.
I can’t make you leave Vansh.
I have looked at him again while my whole face is filled with tears.
Me( crying): You can’t break your promise Vansh. You can’t leave me. You have promised me that you will never leave me. We both have promised each other that we will live together and will leave together. You can’t leave before me. We said that we both will leave this world at the same time. Either we will live in this world together or we will die and leave it together. So how you want to break this promise now?!!!!! How you could leave me?!!!! You are the great Vansh Rai Singhania who has never broke any promise to anyone so how you could break a promise you have given it to your wife?!!!! This isn’t good for your reputation Vansh Rai Singhania. Please get up for me Vansh. Get up please.
My tears aren’t wanting to stop.
It is keeping increasing everytime I look at Vansh and find him being in such state.
Doctors are saying that he could take time until he wakes up.
They are saying that not all the ones that are being in coma will get up after just 3 days and I have to be patient as this could take time!
How dare them to say that?!!!!
How they could say that my Vansh could take time until he could wake up?!!!!
How dare them to be that rude?!!!!
No.
My Vansh will wake up very soon.
He will not leave me.
He will not break his promise.
He will not break my trust and faith.
He will surely get up.
I can’t make you leave Vansh.
So please get up.
I wasn’t able to see anything due that so much tears.
I was praying to God.
I was begging him to make him get Vansh back to me.
I was crying badly and keeping praying while not even able to see anything properly.
Me( praying): Please God don’t make me lose my husband. Please God return him back to me. Please don’t make him leave me. I can’t live without him. I could die if he isn’t with me. Please God I beg you please make Vansh get up. Please God.
I was holding Vansh’s hand so tightly and I was crying badly.
I have putted my head above his chest and I was still crying.
I was feeling that I will collapse from crying that much.
Me: Please Vansh get up. I can’t make you leave me. Please get up. Please.
I was feeling that I will faint, but then I felt someone’s hand patting on my back.
Then I have heard a familiar voice saying:
“Relax sweetheart. I’m here. You have cried a lot which I can’t bear it.”
I have got shocked and surprised.
I was hoping that I’m not dreaming and I have really heard his voice.
I have got out from being above his chest to look at him and I have got surprised when I have seen him awake!!
I have seen him opening his eyes and looking at me with a smile that always able to melt my heart.
Me: Do you are awake Vansh?!!! Or I’m just the one who is dreaming and this isn’t true?!!!!
Vansh: You aren’t dreaming Riddhima. I’m really here with you. I got back for you and to you. I got back because I can’t tolerate your tears and breakdown. I got back because I can’t leave you and I can’t make you leave me.
I have immediately thrown myself in his arms.
I was wanting to forget all the pain and shatter that I have passed through it during those 3 days.
I was happy and on the 9th cloud seeing my Vansh being back from this stupid coma.
Me: I love you so much Vansh.
Vansh: I love you too sweetheart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The end of the os. I hope you like it. Thank you so much guys for all of yours love and support. It really means so much to me. I hope that you have liked this os and you have enjoyed it. I will be waiting for all of yours comments here. As all of yours comments is the thing that encourages me to write more os episodes. Your respond here is what will make me know if I will write a new os or not. I hope that you all could comment so many comments here and you all could break my previous record of the comments. So please guys keep supporting me the way you are doing. Please guys don’t forget your feedback in the comment section below.

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Mennahussein55

    A very obsessed fan of immj2. Enjoy writing so much and I hope that I could publish my own novel one day and be a famous writer.

    66 Comments

    1. prapti0809 on July 30, 2021 11:02 pm

      amazing di loved it

      • Mennahussein55 on July 30, 2021 11:49 pm

        Thank you so much dear for your support

    2. Zara on July 30, 2021 11:05 pm

      Nice πŸ‘πŸ»β£οΈ

      • Mennahussein55 on July 30, 2021 11:50 pm

        Thanks

    3. Tanya K on July 31, 2021 12:16 am

      Lovely and heart touching.❀❀❀

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:04 am

        Thank you dear for your support

    4. ........πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ on July 31, 2021 12:33 am

      Superb diii

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:05 am

        Thank you so much

    5. Stuti Abigail Tyagi on July 31, 2021 12:37 am

      So touching ❀️πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί
      Loved it 😍

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:05 am

        Thank you very much dear for your support and encouragement

    6. Priya Singh on July 31, 2021 1:44 am

      ❀️

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:06 am

        πŸ˜‡

    7. Riansh Lover on July 31, 2021 1:56 am

      So beautiful dhi🌟…
      Riddhima and VANSH can do everything even if it’s impossible ✨
      I was really missing your updates ❀️
      Make more soonπŸ€—

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:10 am

        Thank you so much dear for your support and encouragement.
        I will try to post soon

    8. Prabhleen 😊 on July 31, 2021 5:46 am

      Amazing OS ✨. Lovely and heart touching. Missed your updates. Hope you are fine di. Lots of love❀❀. Take care.

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:11 am

        Thank you dear for your support

    9. Anannya07 on July 31, 2021 5:50 am

      Amazing

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:11 am

        Thanks

    10. AarushiSoni on July 31, 2021 6:31 am

      This was amazing.. wonderful.. ur ideas r creative.. loved it

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:11 am

        Thank you chocolate chip for your support and encouragement

    11. @Mj on July 31, 2021 7:05 am

      AmazingπŸ’žπŸ’ž

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:12 am

        Thanks

    12. Amyra on July 31, 2021 7:19 am

      Lovely

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:12 am

        Thank you

    13. Thakur Priyanka on July 31, 2021 8:49 am

      Amazing OS Chotti eagerly waiting for your next ff take care of yourself Chotti lots of love to you

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:12 am

        Thank you Prinko dhi for your support and lovely words

    14. Tanvi_5117 on July 31, 2021 8:55 am

      Amazing Di πŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’œ
      How are you?

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:13 am

        Thank you darling.
        I’m not good, but trying.

    15. Acchu on July 31, 2021 9:07 am

      Awesome 😍

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:13 am

        Thank you for your support

    16. Aisha08 on July 31, 2021 9:11 am

      Amazing dear

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:13 am

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    17. Priyanshi_13 on July 31, 2021 9:15 am

      Amazing

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:14 am

        Thank you so much

    18. Akshara on July 31, 2021 9:48 am

      Awesome

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:14 am

        Thanks

    19. TG on July 31, 2021 10:03 am

      Lovely

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:14 am

        Thank you

    20. Varshini on July 31, 2021 10:12 am

      Amazing 😍❀️. Keep posting

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 10:15 am

        Thank you dear for your support

    21. Rivan on July 31, 2021 10:54 am

      Awesome

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 2:54 pm

        Thank you

    22. Shurti S on July 31, 2021 10:54 am

      Amazing

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 2:54 pm

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    23. Akansha on July 31, 2021 11:38 am

      Awesome

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:00 pm

        Thank you

    24. Parita on July 31, 2021 12:18 pm

      Amazing di!
      Loved the OS❀

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear for your support and encouragement

    25. Alisha Roy on July 31, 2021 1:38 pm

      Beautiful

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:02 pm

        Thanks

    26. Jayashree on July 31, 2021 3:26 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😻😻😻😻
      U always rocking πŸ˜‰
      Thanks for updates 😊😍
      Keep rocking πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:32 pm

        Thank you so much dear for your support and lovely words

    27. Priyadharshini on July 31, 2021 3:26 pm

      Super πŸ’“πŸ’“

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:32 pm

        Thank you so much

    28. JJ on July 31, 2021 3:27 pm

      Wonderful 😊😍❀️😍

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:33 pm

        Thanks

    29. Vkjhp on July 31, 2021 3:27 pm

      Wow fabulous ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:34 pm

        Thank you dear for your support

    30. Sree on July 31, 2021 3:27 pm

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      • Mennahussein55 on July 31, 2021 3:38 pm

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    31. Anjela on August 1, 2021 1:01 am

      A very wonderful n emotional os Dear Menna. I enjoy reading your os very much. Poor Vansh is in a coma n Riddhima is trying to wake him n not make him leave her. Their love is strong. Riddhima was angry as the drs ssidcthst he may tske longer to wake n not just 3 days but Riddhima was determined to wake him as early as possible. She was crying so much n put her head 9n his chest n was saying ” please wake up. You can’t leave me or i will die without you. As shecwas crying n speaking to Vansh, she ft a hand on her shoulder n a voice saying i am back nni will not leave you.
      Riddhima saw Vansh but thoughtbitbyo ne a dreambit Vansh told her its not a dream but real. He couldnt leave her n so he came back for her. They hugged each other n Riddhima was happy that her Vansh was back with her. Well written Dear Menna n well done. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸŽ‰πŸŽ–πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ¦‹πŸ€—πŸŽ‰πŸŽ–. All the emotions, feelings n reactions were perfectly portrayed. Very very proud of you My Dear Menna πŸ˜˜β€πŸŽ–πŸŽ‰πŸ¦‹πŸ’ž. A excellent os. β™₯οΈπŸ˜πŸ˜˜βœ‹βœ‹πŸŒΌπŸŒ»πŸŒΊπŸ’πŸŒΉπŸ“πŸ₯πŸŽπŸ₯­πŸ‰πŸ«πŸ«πŸ¬πŸ¬πŸ§πŸ§πŸ¦‹πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ¦‹. Lots of love, hugs, kisses n loads of blessings flying over to you β€πŸ¦‹πŸŒΉ. Looking forwards to more os from you. Until then, please take care n stay safe πŸŽ‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ’žπŸ₯°πŸ¦‹πŸ€—. Love you soooo much My Sweet n Dear Menna. ❀😍😘πŸ₯°πŸ€—.πŸ’žπŸ¦‹πŸ’πŸŒΉπŸ’ž

      • Mennahussein55 on August 1, 2021 1:46 am

        Thank you so much and very much for such an awesome words and lively support.
        Thank you for always making me that happy.
        Your words are so special to me.
        Love you so much.

    32. 1234Aayu on August 1, 2021 1:51 pm

      Amazing!

      • Mennahussein55 on August 1, 2021 2:51 pm

        Thank you

    33. Riddhima Gauri on August 2, 2021 9:23 am

      Amazing.Keep Posting Di.

      • Mennahussein55 on August 2, 2021 10:10 am

        Thank you dear

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