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It hurts me a lot…… Episode 7

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Hi friends, thank you so much for your sustenance.

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Continuously someone knocking the door. I start out scared. Slowly I go near to the door…

Me: whose that?

But no response from the opposite side, they continue to knock the door. I try to bring some strength to myself. Slowly opens the door, no one endures in there. Then I was close the doorway, but someone puts their foot in between the door. One boy stands, he wears a mask on his face. He gives me a red rose ?.

Me: hey, who are you?

That boy didn’t speak a single word, he sings to me to accept the rose from his hand. I try to pull him out. He holds my hand tightly, I get confused. I was trying to remove the mask from his face, but he was running from my home. I get too much of a scare, then I closed the door. I started to think about that Mask person. After the 1hr. Again, someone knocks, the door. I get an angry, I took one stick from the balcony, slowly I open the door. I watched the shadow, I try to rack up on the hand, but unfortunately that person holds my hand and wraps me. I get shocked to see his face. Because he is non other than Rishi. I really don’t know what to do now. We both are shared the eye lock. Rishi gets shocked to see my teary eyes.

Rishi: hey, what happens?

My hand is full of redness, because of swelling. He looks and leaves my hand, then apply the GEL•OX on my hand.

Me: I’m sorry. I guess that same guy is returned.

Rishi: what same guy? (I said everything to him). What? If anybody knew about you?

Me: No. I don’t know. (Rishi nods and try to quit) But…

Rishi: But what?

Me: you…

Rishi: yeah, me?

Me: why do you come here at this time?

Rishi: sorry I forgot to say that. I came to return your wallet, You lost your wallet in the temple.

Me: oh, I’m so sorry. Thanks.

Rishi: it’s ok. I really like your attitude. I mean, it seems like a good idea. Bye Good night.

I was so happy to hear this. Rishi left. I slept with the sweet memory.

At morning…

I woke up at 6 am. I was refreshed and opens the door. I shocked to see the bunch of roses and heart shape is drawn by Rose petals. I get angry, I am throwing the roses. One guy catches that.

Me: who are you? (That guy removes the bunch from his face. He is that Mask guy. He wears the same mask on his face. I was scared). He… hey, who… Who are you? What do you want?

He: I want more things from you…. Can you…?

Me: idiots don’t talk Rubbish. Who are you? (With angry tone)

He: hey babe, just cool. I’m

Me: just stop it. Don’t call me as a Babe.

He: ok can I call you as a sweetheart, darling, sweetie like that.

Me: just shut up and get out. Or otherwise I’ll call the police.

He: (laughed out loud) Actually, I came here to impress you. Why, because mean, I love you. And one more thing, I decided to marry you. I love you so much. Please take your own time, and tell your opinion. I expect the good news from you. You want to know who am I? Come to the park at 5:30pm. I’ll wait for you.

He left. His words have irritated me a lot. His words echo in my mind. I don’t know how to handle this situation. I decided to approach this to Rishi. I went to meet him at his home. Ma and Nandhi are getting surprised to see me. I get blessings from Ma. Ma compelled me to eat, she serves the food for me. I ate. I ask about Rishi. He is not in the home, I decided to go to meet him at the office. I leave the home, and went to his office. I was waiting for him in the office. I’ve waited for a long time.

Rishi comes out of the office and surprised to see me.

Rishi: hey, what are you doing here? Are you alright?

Me: I…. I…. I need one help.

Rishi: what? Do you want help?

Me: yeah.

Rishi: (suddenly holds my hand). Why you are looking too disturbed? Why your hands are shivering like this?

Me: (I get shocked) Aha… That guy again comes back to my home.

Rishi: what? Which guy?

Me: (in my mind voice. Really, he forgot or he acts like that) Yesterday night one guy, I tried to hit you…

Rishi: oops. I’m sorry I forgot that incident. Why, what’s a problem now? (I tell everything to him. He thinks deeply) Ok, come, let’s go.

Me: but where?

Rishi: to the park.

Me: what? But now the time is 1 O’clock.

Rishi: ok do one thing I have one important work. I’ll come in the park at the time.

I nod and leaves. At 5 o’clock I waited for Rishi. Rishi comes at 5:20pm. We both are waiting for the mystery person.

Thank you so much for all your support guys.

With lots of love smiley ???

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7 Comments

  1. nive on December 30, 2015 1:46 am

    hey dr it was nice …but update longer parts …

  2. Ananya on December 30, 2015 2:37 am

    Smiley this episode was mysterious.. Update nxt part sooon, I mean real soon. Want to know who is it??
    Update longer parts if possible..

  3. Hayathi on December 30, 2015 8:04 am

    Is hhe rishi i think it is rishi dr if it is correct just awesome

  4. Lakshmi on December 30, 2015 9:11 am

    Nice episode and who is he ,update next part soon.

  5. mira on December 30, 2015 9:21 am

    nice quickly update please

  6. advaita on December 30, 2015 12:49 pm

    Nice chapter. Wanna see who the mystery man is? Plzzz post next part ASAP. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

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