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Home»Fan Fiction»HURDLES a way to love (last part)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

HURDLES a way to love (last part)

administratorBy administratorApril 14, 201610 Comments4 Mins Read
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have completed my piece of silence & ready to finish this ff too. I don’t get much tym to post so finishing this ff asap. Hope u understand. Moreover, I don’t get good responses so its better to end.
Swara looks at Sanskar with her hazel doe eyes. She was happy somewhere that she has a lover to love her lyk a mad. She was happy she had a soulmate lyk him to follow her & walk beside her till her death. She was extremely happy! Happy & more than that may be! She alwys wanted a happy lyf. She was adorned by her parents, her sister lyk frnd, ragini, her grandparents. But he is different.

Swara’s POV
Is this man mad? He has been scrounching for me since last 2yrs lyk a mad. If ragini & Laksh wouldn’t have informed about I would have just thought of him as my man! It doesn’t mean he isn’t my man! He definitely is!! He is my MAN ofcouse! But he had a respect in my lyf now. Which he didn’t have a minute ago. He earned it! Yeah! MY MAN EARNED IT!!!!!!!

Sanskar’s POV
Ragini & Laksh left to give us privacy. She turned towards me. I looked onto her but to my shock she didn’t speak nor did she scold. She just placed her lips on mine! Oh! Ah! That feeling was so different. We had kisses often but this was different. Different from others. What has happened?? She was still kissing and me on my dreamland. I picked her up in my arms & headed towrs room. I unbuttoned her shirt & put it out. Her hot body was visible to me now. She was hot as alwys. I met with her eyes. We kissed again. This tym more deeply. I sucked her lips out & god knows what happened to her? She pushed me out.
“What the hell??”
“what happened? All of a sudden?”, I asked as she enterd the washroom once again. She was puking.
I brought her out & made her drink water. “I don’t know whats happening? Its happening since 3days. I think my stomach is upset.”
She layed down to my shoulder. I caressed her head.” Its ok swara we will consult a doctor. Come!”
“Nah! I feel lyk having something spicy!!”
“spicy???? But ur stomach is upset na?”
“yeah! But I wanna have something spicy! Pls bring na?”
“no! its my tym of romance I think ur doing this to escape it swara! But u cant do that u know na?”
“sanskar pls I wanna have spicy food yaar!”
“ok but not know its too late1 we wont get any shop!”
“nah! I want it! Pls pls! pls”, she says with puppydog eyes.
“ok! Ok! But what u wanna have?”
“pani puri!”
“ok I’ll make it ok? U sit here.”, she nodded & he left.
He came in with a plate of pani puri.
“swara lo tumhara pani puri!”
“pani puri? Huh? Nahi shahiye mujhe!”
“what wat???? R u saying? U only said that u want na?”
“ya but I want to have ice cream now!”
“swara don’t test my patience ! I will not do anything as such!”, he turned his face in anger.
Swara started crying. He again turned towards her & started kissing her.
Swara- “Ahhh! Sanskar its paining”, she cried holding her stomach.
“drama queen will u stop it now!”, sanskar said unbothered.
But he froze when he saw tears in her eyes. She fell unconscious in his arms.

AFTER SOMETIME
Doctor checked her & came out.
“Dr. is she fyn? What happned so suddenly? She was alrght tody morning”
“Mr. Maheshwari it’s a good news !” sanskar was blank.
“Ur wife’s pregnant.”
Sanskar didn’t know how to react he was happy as well as worried.

1month later
Swasan married & after 8 months she gave birth to a baby girl SARA.
Thank you guys for bearing me these many months. Thank you so much. Will miss u!

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10 Comments

  1. Mitti on April 15, 2016 12:01 am

    Hey jaf ….missed u….but what about kavita marriage with sanky. …I can understand u wanted to end it but at least after few more update. …I loved ur ff….u ended it very cutely though…

  2. mou on April 15, 2016 12:26 am

    awesome yr.missing ur fiction…..

  3. L Khan on April 15, 2016 12:47 am

    Omg……..I didn’t expect that u will end it this way but anyways it was nce

  4. Bresh on April 15, 2016 1:54 am

    Aww soo sad…y u finished it so soon

  5. Ankita on April 15, 2016 5:11 am

    Hey yar nice but sudden end…..if ur writing any another ff plz tell me

  6. Shruthi jain on April 15, 2016 5:59 am

    I was waiting. For ur ff from. Many day plz don’t end na

  7. Sasha on April 15, 2016 8:04 am

    Hey this is not done yaar, y did u end!!!!!!bt as always this wpi was also very gud

  8. Kritika on April 15, 2016 10:33 am

    Y did u end it jaf….!!??? Do u hav any idea how much I love it… jaf…it was really awesome yr…I am really gonna miss it badly….:(

  9. Dev on April 15, 2016 2:57 pm

    Jaf will miss u yaar

  10. tanu on April 15, 2016 3:31 pm

    plz come back with same kind of ff plz

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