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Home»Fan Fiction»Humdard…… Part 4
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Humdard…… Part 4

Cheena2001CpBy Cheena2001CpJune 24, 201733 Comments4 Mins Read
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¡Hola! ? I am happy that you are liking this ff and specially the dialogs ?…..Now here is the fourth part , so let’s begin it …shall we??
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°∆° I chose to be your friend forever but falling in love wasn’t in my hands°∆°
There is a best feeling in the world and it is called love….Indeed it’s true because when you are in love , you are always lost in your beloved’s thoughts , you admire them ,you can understand them even when they do not speak, you do all sorts of stupidity for lovesake but it doesn’t seem stupidity to you because of Cupid’s magic….But in their story Cupid had shot his arrow at two hearts………..

After college TwiNjRaj were on their way to thier orphanage or rather their home…..As they were walking Twinkle saw coconut vendor selling coconuts so she wanted to have it….
Twinkle– Hey …woh dekho naariyal paani ..chalo naa nariyal paani piyee…
Kunj- Kya narryial pani hai tujhe?? Jab dekho kuch na kuch chahiye hota hai, kabhi ice-cream, kabhi samose,kabhi golgappe aur abb ye paani…
Twinkle–??? Sadu …..kitne bure ho tum …..

Uv is giggling seeing this…
Twinkle– chalo uv hum peete Hai , isse chodo, waise bhi bandar Kya jaane adrak ka swad…?
U –Haan Haan Chalo….
They both go to the vendor whereas Kunj is still standing there….
Uv– aa raha Hai yaa nahi…..chal bhao mat Kha chikne….aaja….
Kunj blushes and laughs [ chikne ke naam se blush ??]….
Kunj- Haan aa raha hoon…..
They took three coconuts and started drinking it …while drinking…

Twinkle– abb kyu pee rahe hoo???
Kunj– Meriii ……Marziii ??
Twinkle– huh!!?? And she continues drinking it ignoring Kunj ??….
While drinking they start walking towards thier home….

Kunj– Kitni pyaari hai ye ladki……ek dum bacche jaise…..lekin mature…bholi si…isse chidane mein kitna mazza aata hai….Muhje pagal Kar degi Yee, Meri Sherni, Meri twinkle…..ek minute Meri twinkle???……yeh kya hoo raha Hai mujhe???[ How sweet this girl is!……just like a kid yet mature…she is innocent……How much I love teasing her!?……She will make me mad someday…My Lioness….My twinkle….wait a sec….My twinkle??? What is happening to me???]…….
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They reach the orphanage …..
They see a nun caressing one child’s head….She is Sis.Mary[ In her late 50s]..She was the one who had taken care of them along with every child in the orphanage…..She was also well aquainted with the bond that the trio shared…….
TwiNjRaj go in front of her and wish her Good Evening……

TwiNjRaj- Good evening! Sis.Rosy…
Sis.Rosy– Good Evening children! How are you three?? Haa?did you do some mischief???
TwiNjraj– We are good sis. and we didn’t do any mischief rather saved someone from being bullied…
Sis.Rosy– oh that’s good!! May God bless you!!
TwiNjraj–? Good Night sis.
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Next day….They again went to college….
While walkingTwinkle didn’t see a pebble so she fumbled and was about to fall but Uv grabbed her before she could fall…
Twinkle– Ouch!!! Aaa….?
Uv– oye !! Dekh ke chal naa ….kidhar dekhti Hai?? ….Sambhal ke chal warna Teri saath mere haath- pao bhi tutenge…..

[Oyee!! Can’t you watch and walk??
Walk carefully otherwise along with my bones will also break..]
Twinkle– Sorry Uv!?( Puppy face)
Kunj– iss ladki hamesha ka yahi Hai…
Twinkle was fed up of his teasing so she marched towards him…
Twinkle– accha ….accha????and tickled him in his abdomen ,the most tickling prone area for Kunj??
And started laughing….

Kunj– HAhhaaa….chod de twinkle……aahh …haaa ????and started running ….
Twinkle — aaj naa chode ge hum gorii…
Kunj– ahh ….????haaha…
They both were lost in their fun while Uv was lost in his world!!
Uv– Twinkle looks so beautiful while laughing….she is so cute….just like a doll… I don’t know what happens to me when I see her?? God aap hi batao naa….
[ God you tell me…]

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Love is a very weird thing , can happen to anyone towards anyone…par Mitwaa ishq pe kise ka jor nahi………
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TO BE CONTINUED……
PRECAP– Realization of love in musical style…..

So here I end the fourth part…..Do tell me your views by Commenting… it’s​ good that you all Commented on the previous part warna gaana sunna padta??….lekin don’t forget to comment after reading this…warna….soch lo….
Byee??

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Cheena2001Cp

    Jo hazaron , lakhon mein hote hain , woh hum khud haini!! ;)

    33 Comments

    1. Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 2:52 pm

      Hey! Please ignore if there are some words missing…I have not rechecked them…

    2. Ramya on June 24, 2017 3:22 pm

      Awesome cp
      U have defined love so cutely
      Amazing super
      Love you keep smiling

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 6:30 pm

        Thanks?

    3. Presha on June 24, 2017 3:35 pm

      Awesome…
      Loved it

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thank you?

    4. Ashitha on June 24, 2017 3:39 pm

      It was amazing. Plz post the next soon.☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thanks Ashitha?

    5. Sidmin ki sadia on June 24, 2017 3:53 pm

      (Kunj blushes listening. Chikna from uv )hehehe funny and awesome. Epi amazing. Post next soon didi

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 6:32 pm

        ??ya….Thanks ?

    6. Sameera on June 24, 2017 5:25 pm

      Amazinggggg yaar CP loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much hahaha chikne gori kunj ????…
      Yeah love n love yunj is falling ..
      Do cont soon …

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 6:33 pm

        Thanks Sam? and yaa??…Chikna??

    7. twinjfan.tamanna on June 24, 2017 5:39 pm

      Hey Meri Cp!
      That was absolutely Mind blowing! The bond between the trio is Just Love! Beautifully written! Loved it to the core! Looking forward for some emotional scenes. as I know bohot aane waale hain!???? Love Triangle! My love!???
      Post Soonest!

      With Love,
      Urs Tamanna

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 6:35 pm

        Thank you Tammy? and haa emotional scenes toh aayengi ??hi….?

    8. Sidmin ki sadia on June 24, 2017 7:28 pm

      Thankyou so much didi aapne mere comment ka reply diya
      Mein iss waqt saatwein aasmaan par ud rahi hun hehehe

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 9:05 pm

        ? aisa kyu???….Pichle baar nahi Kar payi thi?

    9. Sohi on June 24, 2017 7:53 pm

      Marvelous episode dear
      Liked kuvi’s realisation
      Waiting for the next update
      Do continue

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thanks sohi ??

    10. maha on June 24, 2017 8:47 pm

      awsm nice epi

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thanks ??

    11. Sidmin ki sadia on June 24, 2017 9:45 pm

      No aisa nai hai. Lekin. Mujhe ek doubt hai ki aap mujhse bade ho ya chote mein aapko didi bolo ya nai

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 9:57 pm

        Aree sab chodo call me Cheena or Cp

    12. SanamMel on June 24, 2017 10:04 pm

      Wow . Well done.
      I guess u r new . U r fabulous .
      Keep it up . love u ?

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 10:52 pm

        Well yes this is my first ever ff..Thanks ?for appreciation…?

    13. Aanya_pandey on June 24, 2017 10:18 pm

      Awesome update dear!!!! ??

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 24, 2017 10:53 pm

        Thankyou so much Aanya?

    14. Ayesha51 on June 25, 2017 12:07 am

      marvellous
      fabulous
      hilarious
      wonderful

      too emotional

      just loved it

      plz plz plz post asap

      love u a lot

      byee

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 26, 2017 6:49 am

        Thankyou Ayesha?

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 25, 2017 12:36 am

      Interesting

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 26, 2017 6:53 am

        ???

    16. baby on June 25, 2017 11:34 pm

      haye my cheeni….♥
      hahaha aaj cheeni meethi meethi kunki u gave twinj ki yeh nok jhok or gud gudi hahhahaa… 😉 😛
      loved it sooo mch bt pls kuch aisaaa krde yaaraa ki yuvi or twinkle ki shaadi hi nahi ho……..
      I knw m asking something impsbl bt kuch toh aisaa ho skta hoga naa………
      loved it…….♥
      love u lods………..♥
      post soon……♥

      • Cheena2001Cp on June 26, 2017 6:55 am

        Thank you baby jii? for your sweet saa Comment ? and yaa kuch toh hoga hi jisse in teeno ki life would change…stay tuned for that??

    17. Shalini15 on June 27, 2017 8:11 am

      Awesome amazing fabulous episode. Loved twinj nok jhok. Dialog was too good. Loved it. Do continue soon.

    18. yashasvi on July 1, 2017 9:45 am

      hey mena pad lia… woh shayad mene dekha nhi tha pehle bt today found in your posts…..
      awesome yrrr…
      post soon theek ab bye…
      hhw krna h

      Keep smiling and stay blessed????
      LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
      Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????

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