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Home»Fan Fiction»Humari Adhuri Kahani (RagSan) Chapter 2: Robbery in the Bakery
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Humari Adhuri Kahani (RagSan) Chapter 2: Robbery in the Bakery

Charms22By Charms22August 7, 201711 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey Twistinians, I’m back with the first chapter of this story, I hope you all like it, if not then tell me, so that I can change it, to make it the way you guys want it to be. Do support me guys, your support encourages me. I would love to thank you all.

Ragini’s pov
“Working in the bakery is so amazing, I really love it!” I was working till 10pm, but there weren’t any customers here anymore, so I wanted to close the shop, but some people came and asked: “Oho, madam why are closing the shop?” “Because it is time to go home!” “But not for robbers!” He tried to take the money, but he couldn’t, so he asked me: “How do open this cashier?” “Dumbhead, how should I know how to open this!” “Because you work here!” The dumbhead boss said. I took my heavy?bag and started hitting them with it, the dumbhead started to cry: “owww, mooommmy save me from this chudhail, she is hitting me with a bag!” I was laughing my head off????tears were coming out of my eyes. “I’m very sorry, our boss told us to steal everything from you!” “Who is your boss?” “SANSKAR MAHESWARI(their real boss is someone else).” The dumbhead replied back, after that they ran away and I was walking home, when I met….
End of her pov

Vivek’s pov
“My plan is working, she thinks that my innoncent bestfriend Sanky send the robbers into the bakery and now she will hate him!” “What does that Sanskar Maheswari think or robbing my bakery!” She angrilly said, I’m mentally laughing my head of, because I’m the boss of the robbers and who got trapped, my so called bestie Sanskar or should I say Sameer. “Hello, can you please help and tell me where this address is?” I asked her and she replied back: “sure!” “What’s your name?” She asked me and I answered back: “Sameer!” “So Sameer, you have to go left at first, then right and around the corner is your destination!” “Thanks!” “You are welcome!” She said and then she went.
End of his pov

Sameer’s(Sanskar) pov
“Where’s my wallet?” I started to cry like a child. “What happened Sameer?” “Mommy, I can’t find my wallet!” I whined. “Oh, where did you leave it?” “I don’t know!” “I will look for it, but please drink this juice at first!” “Ok, mommy!” I said like an obedient child. I drank the juice, then I felt a bit dizzy, I went to my bed and to lie down.
End of his pov

Sujata’s pov
“What can I do to make my son forget the dreadful past and the reason why he is like that!” “Why did you leave us Ram, because of you our innoncent Sanskar is suffering!” I cried for my son, who was different then the others, he was and is very special to me, but now he is suffering for the rest of his life.
End of her pov

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    11 Comments

    1. shrilatha on August 8, 2017 3:12 am

      Suji is a bit doubtful but I hate this vivek..loved it Sam ..

      • AMkideewani on August 8, 2017 2:05 pm

        Thanks a lot Shriyu????

    2. A.xx on August 8, 2017 6:32 am

      fab but longer updates xx

      • AMkideewani on August 8, 2017 2:05 pm

        Thanks a lot?

    3. Rehna on August 8, 2017 10:44 am

      Awesome dear, waiting for more

      • AMkideewani on August 8, 2017 2:06 pm

        Thank you very much dear???

    4. Naymaz on August 8, 2017 12:21 pm

      copyright of course belongs to u
      nobody cn write such crazy yet lovable stories other than u di
      awesome one

      • AMkideewani on August 8, 2017 4:17 pm

        Thanks a lot Polly???

    5. Aditi.Ayansh on August 8, 2017 3:42 pm

      Awesome one Sam jaanejaan 🙂

      • AMkideewani on August 8, 2017 4:19 pm

        Thanks a lot Adi Jaan?????

    6. hemalattha on August 12, 2017 4:04 pm

      Awesome

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