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Hum Tum aur Shraman (ts) Part 3

PrettypreetiBy PrettypreetiOctober 15, 201622 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello hello hello thanks thanks sorry I didn’t reply personally actually I m little busy.
So thnko to sona di ,aru, my elder di,weirdy niyo,smile,uffu,zainu api aish and sumo I will definitely read ur ff not to worry dear.
Now happy my ruks is back thanks for appreciating me.blushing.

Now let’s start.
Shravo:why??
Sumo:cause I hate marriages. Marriage have always destroyed lives .It can never help any1.
Shravo:no suman at this point u r wrong.
Sumo:shravan u might luv marriage but in my life its worst.
Shravo:if u don’t mind can u tell me why.
Preeti:shravo I think u should not ask.
Sumo:no prets let him.u wanna know than listen due to marriage my mom and dad died they fight daily and at last they both were depressed they divorced I was feeling worst and due to depression they both died.Have u ever thought bout a girl without parents..
Their was silence for some time.
Sumo:so for me marriage is useless.But zaroori nhi might it can be good also.Shayad varun vandy marriage will be big success.leave it meri ram khata toh chalti rehegi let’s njoy.
All went..

Shravo:kya yaar yeh ladki show krti hai marriages pr aur in reality she hates marriages.kaha mai bacho tak ke sapne dekha betha hoon aur shadi ke naam se hi use nafrat hai.
Shravo was now thinking how to change sumo heart.
The engagement was over.
Shravo went to sumo.
Shravo:suman u know my mom and dad r living happily from past 25 years silver jumblee completed.
Sumo:good phir do u want I take their interview for my show.
Shravo:no I mean .
Sumo:OK see I said na some marriage could be happy.
Shravo:don’t u marry.
Sumo:no never I just hate marriage.
She went from there.
Shravo:yeah ladki kaisi hai koi aur tarkeeb soch shravan.
It was next day.
Sumo:vandy shadi kab thi Teri bhool gyi.
Vandy:shabhas.
Sumo:tell na.
Vandy:after 7 days.
Sumo:itni jaldi.
Vandy:mom have already shopped for my marriage.
Preeti:sumo how is pushkar sweet na
Sumo:oh my girl kisi ladke ko chod de.
Preeti:kisi ladke ko toh pakhad le.
Sumo:no need.

The 3 girls went for shopping .
It was mehndi time.
Shravo was curiously waiting for shravo .
Shravo:aaj toh sumo will change.
Sumo was enjoying mehndi function.shravo comes.
Shravo:tumhari mehndi kitni aachi lgi hai.
Sumo:thanks.
Shravo:Btw sumo tiwari marriage ke karan zindagi ko ek nayi shoruvat milti hai.Two person together could understand each other.now a times both girl and boy understand each other.
Sumo:why r u telling dis to me.
Shravo:suman tum fayade suno ladki ka toh fayada hi fayada hai pati ko jitna marji mar le.aakir chlti toh wife hi ki hai na.
Sumo laughs.
Shravo mesmerized seeing her smile.
Sumo(laughing):yeh toh fayada hai.
Shravo:so marriage bare kya socha.
Sumo:sochu gi
She went.
Shravo now daily tries to convince sumo.
(Chlo let’s reach to marriage now).
Every1 was enjoying the marriage.
Shravo:sumo shadi toh karvani chahiye .
Sumo:shravan tu toh piche padh gya.
Shravo:will u marry.
He stops.
Sumo:sochu gi.
(Sumo thought was changing but she was unaware and she was also started having feeling for shravo.Sumo don’t want to have )
Karan(shravo friend):shravo tere bhai ki shadi hai aaj toh ek song suna de.
Shaila(shravo friend)yup shravo one song.
Shravo:no mood nhi
Sumo:shravan do u sing song also.
Shaila and karan:yes.
Sumo:shravan please sing a song.
Shravo:u said so pakka
(Guys Maine bhut dhoonda lekin mere ko koyi ghanna nhi mila jo mai is situation me dhalna chahti thi so I have written a song from myself.plz marna mat.)
Shravo sings:tu ru ru ,
Pehli daffa jab suni uski awaaj.
Itni pyaari awwaj uske piche chupe itne raaj.
Socha tabhi hi ki kronga usse hi shadi bnaonga usse bhai ki bhabhi
Lekin dharta hai dil .
Kyunki shadi usko pasand nhi .
WO ho wo hoooo.
(Sumo was listening the song very carefully)
Haan shadi usko pasand nhi.
Pehli baar jab dekha maine use.
Dil mera dhakha tejhi se.
Zulfe uski dekh mera man khil gya.
Uski khoobsurat aankon se toh mai hil gya.
Rooo roo.
Uski hasi ne toh cheen liya mera Chen.
Ja kr puch use sabhi mujhe lge yehi baat kehen.
Lekin dharta hai dil.
Kyunki shadi use pasand nhi .
Tu ro rooo.
Ohh hoo hoo.

Sumo was emotional listening dis song .she went from there.
Sumo started her car and went from there.
Sumo was talking to herself.
Sumo:nooo I can’t luv any1.I can’t change.I just hate marriage.I can’t marriage.I should now never talk to shravan.woh toh aacha hai ki mai waha se aa gyi varna aaj Maine shravo ko sab bol dena tha.
Due to sudden going of sumo makes tension for everyone.they call sumo and sumo says to them due to her show she went back.
Every1 were surprised with this sudden going
She reaches Mumbai.

Its morning.sumo have to do her segment 2day .
Sumo knows shravo will call so she have to face him .
Sumo:aaj shravan ne agar phone kiya sumo u have to control.
Her segment starts.
She was interview ing her guests when.the phones ringz.
She picks.
Voice comes:suman tiwari will u marry me.
Sumo listened it.she was emotional and started crying.
Voice was of u all know.
Shravo:whole India is waiting for ans.
Sumo was not able to control and she said yes
Every 1 was happy and after some time suman married shravan.
It was Saturday and sumo’s segment.
A voice comes: gud morning!!u all might be thinking whose voice is this.where is ur suman.actually today suman is our guest.
So guys today we r going to interview Mr and Mrs malhotra.
Suman and shravan malhotra.today segment is hum tum aur shraman.

The end

Guys sorry for disappearance actually WiFi problem.
Love u all

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    22 Comments

    1. sami on October 15, 2016 9:50 pm

      hi
      thank u very much ki aapne epi post kiya
      it was really awesome
      song toh dil chuuu gya
      I loved it but apne itni jaldi the end kyun kr diya

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:35 pm

        Oh ty sami a lot.
        Actually it was three shot thats why I ended it.
        I will write more.
        OK.
        Lots of luv

    2. Fatimagulesarfraz on October 15, 2016 9:58 pm

      Hey prettypreeti !!!!
      Awesome one dear ..
      Nd lol ??? that song was epic ??
      All the parts were just amazing ..
      Keep it up ..
      Take care ..
      Love ya ???

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:38 pm

        Fati ty.
        Glad u loved the song.
        How r u.
        Thank u sissy.
        Lots of luv

    3. sona on October 15, 2016 10:40 pm

      ?????seriously epic sng dear..
      And wt a coincidence u started it with the title him tum aur shraman ..and it ended with it only??????
      It was so nice…the was so cute of shravu…the way he proposed her ????
      Thank you..??

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:39 pm

        Sona di thank u a lot.
        Oh glad u liked it .
        I was missing u .
        I m fine .
        Think u again.
        Lots of luv

    4. Deotima on October 15, 2016 10:49 pm

      wooow great one preeti.. loved it alot… very unique dear.. continue to write more ..

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:40 pm

        Deo thank u.
        Surely I would continue.
        Think u .
        Lots of luv

    5. Deotima on October 15, 2016 10:50 pm

      song was great… u r a great lyricist as well..love u loads

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:41 pm

        Oh deo thanks again
        Great compliment.
        Luv u

    6. WeirdSister on October 15, 2016 11:21 pm

      Helllooooooooooo preeti…!
      That song was just…????
      Him tum aur shraman…wow..fantastic usage of d title…!
      Loved it..
      But it was too short…??
      Anyway..
      Love u loads..
      Be back wid another story soon…
      Take care..
      ?

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:43 pm

        Niyo thanks a lot.
        Oh yes actually it was long but I wrote three shot so I have to end it.
        Next time I will write seeing the weight age.
        Thank u.
        Lots of luv

    7. ufaaq on October 16, 2016 12:05 am

      Ohoooooo puni I waited for this part for sooooooo long
      Thank god now WiFi worked thank u miss WiFi
      It was ammmmmmaaaaazzzziiiiiinnnnnnnggggggggggg
      Song b nice tha
      Tune Jo na kaha song can also suit in this situation
      BTW it was nice him tum r shraman
      It was awesome
      Thank u for posting yar
      Ohk my bhangre wali take care
      Love u
      Keep doing bhangra

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:44 pm

        Uffu thank u a lot meri behna.
        I also thanks to miss WiFi.
        Oh itni tareef.
        Thanku uffu
        I will do bhangra
        Lots of luv

    8. Zainab on October 16, 2016 12:21 am

      This was so cute. Loved it so much. Wah jee what a song 😉 It was cute too. The way he proposed was so adorable. ?
      Please come up with more ff and os/ts. Missing you already.
      Much love. Take care ??

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:46 pm

        Zainu api thnko a lot.
        Oh thank u again.
        I m really glad u liked it.
        Lots of luv

    9. Ariana on October 16, 2016 5:16 am

      ohhhh cupcake it was suuuuuuuuuuchhhhhhhhh a sweet happy ending….. ekdom roshogolla (hope u got it) Shravu’s proposal was soooooooooooo unique. I went all awwwwwweeeeee after reading whole thing. And yah if u keep on treating me with sooooooo much of sweetness then I need to get a doctor’s appointment soon to check whether I got diabetic n high blood sugar or not.
      Plssssssss come back with morrrreeeeee shots. Don’t leave us. (I’ll kill u if u do)
      love u
      take care

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 1:48 pm

        Aru cuppy I m too happy to talk with u diabetes toh mujhe ho GI.
        Itna sweet comment.
        Mai toh mar jaongi.
        Meetha kha kr.
        Thnko u meri cuppu..
        Vaise I luv to eat maar from ur hands PR mai tujhe chod kr kaha jongi.
        I m here to eat ur head.???
        Lots of chocolate luv..

    10. Smile on October 16, 2016 2:43 pm

      Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh what a ending dear
      DIL GARDEN GARDEN HO GAYA
      SHR NE APNA DIL SUMO KE DE DIYA
      HAHHAHAH
      LOL
      IT WAS AWESOME DEAR AND SPECIALLY THE SONG U COMPOSED
      POST ONE MORE
      OPPPSSSSS
      FIRST CONGO U COMPLETETD ONE MORE FF

      • Prettypreeti on October 16, 2016 4:36 pm

        Oh my smile such a beautiful shyari.
        Thnks for ur luv.
        I m glad u liked the song.
        I m super happy with ur comment.
        Ohkay I will post more promise.
        Oh thnko for congratulating me its just coz of ur support.
        Love u

    11. Rukhsar on October 17, 2016 3:54 am

      Oh my pretty preeti…u posted sooo late but m glad that u at least posted it was amazing loved it ?????????❤❤❤❤❤

      • Prettypreeti on October 23, 2016 4:10 pm

        Thnku ruks.
        Oh sorry.
        But lots of luv

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