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Hum hain raahi pyar k – Avneil – part 8- caring nature of neil

Neil’s eyes were full of tears as if… He could feel that pain which avni had suffered…
MitALI went to her Bt the door was locked from inside…
Nd they could guess that avni was badly hurt nd was crying.. They all know she is strong Bt this time may be she couldn’t control…

She want her frustration to come out.
Neil too came there..
Neil: avni I am sorry.. Plzz open the door
Avni no response
Bt neil could sense her weeping
Neil: bss ek baar baat krlo plzz bahar aa jaao..
Tumhe jitna gussa krna h krlo Bt bahar aa jaao
…bss ab agr tum bahar nhi aayi to Mai to Mai…. Bss Mai tumse bina baat Kiye nhi jaunga
He went outside nd got to her rooms window nd that too was closed.. He said plzz avni ro mt.. (he could see her from the glasses?)

Or drwaja khol do
After a while he punched the glass nd glass were broken he opened window nd jumped inside..
Neils hand was full of blood… Every step of his towards avni fell drop of blood on the floor..
He come to him nd said to avni
Neil: listen avni.. Meri trf dekho nd (made her face to face him.)
Listen.. I am sorry for all what I did.. Bt my intentions were not to hurt you..
Nd jo bhi Tumne face kia h I feel proud.. Tum bhut strong ho..
Mujhe nhi pta tha ki meri jungli billi itni jyada strong hogi..

Or jo bhi hua tha… Vo Tumhara past tha.. Ab usse Tumhe bahar nikalna pdega..
Avni still with a crying face..: neil mujhe Tumhare prank se nhi Bt mujhe andhere se Drr lgta h
…it just remind me what I had suffered… Nd that could never be understood by anyone.
Neil: Mai smjh skta hu avni.. Or Aaj k baad Mai Tumhare life me kbhi andhera nhi aane dungi.. I promise.. Nd if darkness came… I will be their holding ur hand
Avni can’t control her emotions nd hugged him tightly.
Neil too.. Nd they both were feeling so relieved…

Nd a tune of Ae dil hai mushkil played..
Then they came in sense nd broke the hug…
Avni saw his bleeding nd said.. Tum pgl ho ky neil Kitni chot lgwa li Ruko Mai first aid box laati hu
Neil: tumhari vjh se hi hua h tum agr drwaja kho deti to ye nhi hota
She came nd started bandaging
Neil: ouch
Avni: bhut drd ho rha h??  I am sorry neil..
Neil: Chlo Acha ab bahar chle?

AVni: hn Chlo
They stand nd opened the door… MitALI were outside the room nd listened every single words they were talking abt
Nd said thank god avni u came out.. Nd neil thnku so much.. Jo Aaj tune Kia h vo Esa lgra tha jaise tu… Nd stopped when they looked their faces
Neil got to know what mitALI were upto.
Nd he himself lost in his own thoughts

Neil to himself: what did I do just before,?? How could I said said??  nd usse rota hua dekh kr Mai khud ko control ku nhi kr paaya??  ky hogya h tujhe neil..
Even avni was little but confused with Neil’s behaviour.
Bt then mitALI said Chlo ab so jaate hn raat bhut ho gyi h.. Gn
In the room
Avni: Acha neil kl Dr k paas jrur chle jaana.. For injection
Neil just nodded yes nd said Gn

Avni POV
She was lost in Neil’s thought
Nd was neil ne jo kaha ky vo Sach kaha.. Ky vo Sach me mera sath dega.. Nhi nhi avni tu bhi ky soch rhi h?? 

Neil nhi nhi… Vo bss situation ko handle krra tha
On the other side neil was too lost in his thoughts with avni
They both tried to avoid the thought Bt couldn’t.

That’s called connection

Avni was crying Bt that pain felt by neil

Thnku guy’s.. Nd hope u all are loving this ff

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