Fan Fiction

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam ( I Have Given My Heart Away Darling) RaIna FS Part 1

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam ( I Have Given My Heart Away Darling) Part1

I always wanted Veer Sanjana to realize what a mistake they did by dumping Naina and Sanjana.Though Sanjana got interested in Raghav when she turned rich as Aditi quit they did’nt develop that track and sadly Veer never regretted ditching Naina.This FS is based on this.

Naina sat on the mandap blushng as a beautiful bride.
Suddenly the bride groom Veer got up from the mandap.
V:No..I can’t marry Naina.
All were shocked.
Sanjana was relieved:Thank God..Veer refused to marry this behenji Naina.Now he will be mine.

Indumati Mehra:Veer…are you mad?
V:I was mad to agree to marry Naina for your wealth.But now I realized that I can’t be that foolish.
All were shocked.
Naina’s eyes became wet.
Raghav:What are you saying Veer?You agreed to marry Naina only for dadi’s property?
V:Yes.
Raghav:Veer…you are not understanding that the biggest wealth is Naina.Naina is a gem.

Veer laughed sarcastically:Are you serious Raghav?Naina is a gem?She is only a low class waitress.
Naina was shattered.
Raghav raised his voice:You are always ridiculing Naina that she is only a waitress.A waitress’ job is not bad.And another thing is that Naina is educated and she was a college lecturer in India.

V:Whatever…
Naina looked at Veer:Veer…if you hate me this much why did you talk so sweetly to me?
V:It was all fake Naina.I had to pretend to make dadi believe that I am happy with you.How could you even think that I will marry a girl like you?Oh come on Naina…Veer Mehhra has some standard.
Naina burst into tears.Her mother hugged her:No Neenu…you should not cry for such a heartless guy.
Raghav:Yes Naina.Veer who made you cry will cry one day for making you cry.

Raghav wiped her tears.
Suddenly Indumati slapped Veer.
All were shocked.
Ind:After betraying us you have no place in this house.Get out.
Sudha:Mummiji..what are you doing?
Ind:Your son Veer deserves this.Get out Veer.

V:Dadi…
Ind:Before I slap you again get out.
Suddenly Naina said:Please don’t ask Veer to go dadi.
Indumati was stunned.
N:Veer could’nt love me.What is his fault in it?Love can’t be forced.Right?I am thankful to Veer for letting me know the truth that he does’nt love me and not marrying me.Otherwise the whole life I would have regretted marrying a person who does’nt love me.

Veer smirked.
Indu:Did you hear Veer?Though you insulted Naina she is still supporting you.You are supposed to thank her.
Veer went near her:Thank you Naina.
Suddenly he said in a low voice:I know why you supported me Naina.Because still you have feelings for me.Because I am so attractive that girls can’t get away from me.
Naina stared at him:Attracted to you?Never.You have lost all attraction in my eyes Veer.

Veer became dull.
Naina walked off followed by her mother,brother and sister in law.

Naina removed her wedding attire and danced in full force.A strong Thandav in pain and frustration thinking of her moments with Veer and how Veera ditched her on the wedding Mandap.

he mitti pe khinchi lakire rab ne to ye tasvir bani
ag hava pani ko milaya to phir ye tasvir saji
ai hasti teri vishal ho qudarat ka tu kamal

he manamohini teri ada tujhe jab dekh le to phir ghata
barase jhar jhar jhar jhar jhar jhar sa ra ra sa ra ra
nache chamak chamak vo bijali divani hai bemisal tu gori gori anachhui
tujhame hai qudarat sari khoyi tujhame qudarat sari khoyi khoyi
he aha he he aha

mitti ki hai murat teri masumiyat fitarat teri
ye sadapan ye bholapan tu mahaki mahaki
tu lahaki lahaki, tu chali chali har gali gali
tu hava ke dhag sag sanan sanan
mera ang ang jaise jalatarang koi lahar lahar chali thahar thahar
pani ka mel tere tan badan jhar jhar ra jhar ra agare jaisa
tera rom rom hai dahaka dahaka agni ka khel tu agan agan

zara thirak thirak zara lachak lachak
kabhi matak matak kabhi thumak thumak
chali chhum chhum kabhi ghum ghum
dharati ko chum machi dhum dhum
chanchal badi tu natakhat badi tu bahaki bahar ras ki fuhar
tere tikhe nain tere kesh rain ye balakhana ye itarana
he aha he he aha

While dancng she became weak and fell in Raghav’s arms.

She could’nt believe her eyes.
N:Raghav!
Rag:Yes Naina.I came here to see you.
N:To console me.Right?No need of pitying me Raghav.I am alright.
Rag:What is this Naina?What were you doing?
N:I was just dancing Raghav.

Rag:But this dance…
Naina’s mother came:Neenu dances when she is upset to relieve her pain.

Raghav felt upset and looked at her.
She looked down n pain.
R:Naina!
Naina burst into tears and embraced Raghav.He caressed her.

Naina’s mother thought:When you have a true friend like Raghav I have no worries for you Naina.

Raghav sat near Indumati.
Ind:Did you visit Naina?
Rag:Yes dadi.
Ind:How is she now?
Rag:She is sad.But she is suppressing it.
Ind:It’s my fault.I should have understood that Veer is not suitable for a nice girl like Naina.

Rag:It’snot your fault dad.It’s Veer’s fault.
Ind:Veer does’nt know what he did by dumping Naina.
Rag:One day he will understand it dadi.
Ind:I am waiting for that day.
Rag:Dadi..I want to make Naina smile.What should I do?
Indu smiled:You want to see her smile?
Rag:Yes Dadi.
Ind:In this family other than me it’s only you who wants to see her smile.
Rag:She has become my best friend in a very short time Dadi.
Indu smiled.
Ind:Girls love flowers.You give her flowers.
Rag:Flowers!Wow!Nice idea dadi.Thank you so much.

Raghav gave flower bouquet to Naina.Naina was surprised.
She smiled:Beautiful flowers.
She smelt them:So fragrant.I love flowers.
Raghav was lost in her innocent smile.
N:Why are you staring at me Raghav?

Rag:I feel very happy to see you smile again.
Naina smiled.
Rag:You look better with smile on your face.So always keep smiling.
Naina smiled:When I have a friend like you who understands my every emotion I am smiling automatically.
Raghav smiled.
Naina’s mother watched this from back and smiled.
\
After 6 months….

Raghav Naina’s friendship became more stronger and Naina started working as a lecturer in a college over there.Raghav started business with Indu’s help and it has started flourishing.

Raghav:Naina..you should dance for the cultural programme of Indian Association of Austria.
N:Here there are Indian associations?
Rag:Of course yes Naina.Indians in Austria gather together.It’s fun.
N:That’s nice.But I can’t dance as I dance only in my room..alone.
Rag:So what?I have seen you dance.Your dance is wonderful. So you need to show off your talent.

N:But…
Rag:Be confident Naina.I am giving your name to them.
N:But Raghav…
Rag:No excuse.

Cultural programme…

Naina appeared on stage.She was nervous.She saw Raghav showing her thumbs up and she got confidence.She started dancing .Naina’s family and Mehras were present there.

ai nimbuda ai nimbuda
nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda
are kancha kancha chhota chhota nimbuda laai do
nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda
are kancha kancha chhota chhota nimbuda laai do

are laai do laai do laai do
are laai do laai do laai do, nimbu laai do
jaa khet se hariyaala nimbuda laai do
nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda
nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda
are kancha kancha chhota chhota nimbuda laai do
are laai do laai do laai do
are laai do laai do laai do, nimbu laai do

jaa khet se hariyaala nimbuda laai do
nimbuda laai do, ha nimbu laai laai laai do

divaano ki buri nazar se bachna hoto sun lo
divaano ki buri nazar se bachna hoto sun lo
are khatto khatto nibu ko tez chhuri se sar pe kaato
phir chhota chhota nimbuda kya jaadu karega dekho
ke buri nazar vo khatti hoyegi
phir chauraste pe vo utar giregi
to laai do laai do laai do
to laai do laai do laai do, nimbu laai do
jaa khet se hariyaala nimbuda laai do
nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda
nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda nimbuda
are kancha kancha chhota chhota nimbuda laai do
nimbuda laai do, ha nimbu laai laai laai do

Veer was lost in Naina unknowingly.
He thought:How charming…so beautiful.Why did I not see Naina’s beauty before?

After the dance everyone clapped hands.
Raghav:Beautiful Naina.
Indu hugged Naina:I have no words Naina.You are a beautiful dancer like Raghav.
N:Raghav?
Ind:Yes.Raghav dances well.He did’nt dance today as he was so busy to rehearse.
Naina looked at Raghav with surprise.

Ind:I have decided one thing.Navratri is coming up.You and Raghav will be the dancing pair in the dandiya competition.
Raghav Naina smiled.
Naina held Raghav’s hand.

Veer got irritated seeing their closeness.
Veer thought:Why Raghav is always leaning onto Naina?

Share
Published by