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Home»Fan Fiction»A Horror Story (RagLak) Part 4b
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A Horror Story (RagLak) Part 4b

bhuvanachandrikaBy bhuvanachandrikaMarch 27, 201726 Comments6 Mins Read
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Thanks for commenting, Sindhura, lovely, follybrave, akshitha, eba, sinni, ashnoor, shrilatha, mk, gayu, IQRA222, lucy, asra, megha, abi, rinitta, keerthu, arjuna, ammu, ritu, aishu, aimraglak, a.xx, srsl

I will follow your suggestion akshitha.

Also thanks to all the silent readers.

Next part..

“Did you become mad Lucky?” Shouts Sanskar on Lakshya. He was brought into guest house by Sanskar. There is Kavitha beside Sanskar.
Sanskar marries Kavitha who was locked by her mother kaveri all these years. Sanskar knows about her and frees her and kaveri is sent to jail. Kaveri was on mission to revenge on mm family, for that she decides to use swara soul.

“Mom asked not to come here but you..! Ok, you came. What is need to stay that long in rain?” Sanskar shouts on him.

“Nothing is important to me than Ragini and my daughter Janaki.” Says Lakshya looking out of window at their small room.

Sanskar cups his face. “Ok Lucky, i can understand you. But, let’s wait and change Ragini’s mind. Then we can take her room. All have excused her already. All are ready to accept Ragini back.”

Lakshya nods his head.

There Swara soul is talking with Kaveri.

“You have killed me know. Ragini just pushed me in river. I would have come back alive. But, you killed me pressing my throat. Why did you kill me??” Swara asks Kaveri.

“Because, i hate that mm family. My revenge started from you. From you I’m going to destroy all the family.” Says Kaveri.

“I won’t let that happen. I will save Janu at any cost.” Says Swara and flies away.

Next morning,

Ragini as usually taking Janu to school. Lakshya as usually following them. After dropping in school, Ragini is going to place of her work. Lakshya who was following her,

“What is the need of all these Ragini? Come back with me. Let’s go home.”

“I don’t have home. I don’t have anyone.”

“Don’t be silly. I asked excuse to you.why don’t you excuse me and start a life with me?”

Ragini was walking away silently,

“Your stubbornness is suffering our Janu.”

“Who are you to think about her??’

“I’m her father..”

Ragini shouts in anger, “Janu don’t have a father..!!”

Laksh gets angry with her words and holds Ragini strongly with his hands.

“Don’t dare to say that word again. Janu is my blood.”

Ragini jerks his hands.

“So, why did you betray your blood along with your wife that day..!”

Lakshya remains calm. Ragini runs away crying.

Lakshya returns back to school to see Janu. For his amazement that day, school is not there and Janu is waiting alone at the gate. Lakshya runs to her, janu moves back.

“Don’t be afraid beta, pappa has come.”

“You aren’t my dad.”

Her words hurts Lakshya. But he says,

“No beta, I’m your dad.”

Then Sanskar comes, “yes janu.. he is your dad.”

“Yes janu he is your dad” says kavitha also.

“Haa, janu beta.. he is your pappa” says PA also.

“Pappa…?” Janu amazes looking af Lakshya. Laksh nods his head in tears. Janu hugs him.

Lakshya wipes his tears and lifts her up. He kisses her cheeks. Janu too kisses his cheek.

“You want ice cream?” He asks. Janu nods head. Lakshya too nods his head and takes Janu with him.

Lakshya buys her ice cream, new clothes, many toys, he takes her to exhibition, he makes her play games…

He makes her call him, “daddy and pappa..”

Laksh feels extremely happy at last, he could have spend time with his kid.

Afternoon he returns to school to drop Janu before Ragini comes. But, they both are booked by Her.

Ragini shouts on Laksh, “on what authority you took my daughter with you? I would have complained on you..!!”

Laksh says, “I took her with the responsibility of a father. I have right to make my daughter happy.”

Ragini looks at Laksh in anger. “Janu, come back to mamma.” She says.

Janu nods her head negatively and hugs Laksh’s neck.

“Janu…!” Says Ragini.

Janu says holding Laksh, “He is my dad. I won’t come from dad. You also come with dad.”

Ragini gets tears, she looks at Lakshya.

“What medicine did you keep to my daughter ? Today she wants only you instead of her mother..!”
Ragini says in tears.

“Ragini….” says Laksh.

“She is a kid, you might have given her many things which she wouldn’t have seen in her life. That’s why she is believing you. You bought her with such things.. I’m a poor mother, I can’t give her such things right. That’s why, today she likes this rich father than this poor mother.” Ragini says in tears looking at Janu.

Janu who can’t understand anything looks at a pout at Ragini. She only remembers kids like her always roam with their parents. But, why she is alone with her mom? Where is her dad? She only thought that.

“Ragini..nothing like that. What Janu can understand? It’s me who took her out.”
Says Lakshya.

“Laksh, at first you snatched my happiness. Only because of you I became murderer of my sister, then you snatched my dignity, now you are snatching my daughter. Till what is left? Take away my life too. Then, you will feel happy.,!!”
Says Ragini crying hiding her face in her palms.

“Mamma..” Janu cries.

“Ragini, don’t get upset like that before our kid, she will hurt,..”

Ragini looks at Janu,

“What do you know about your father? He is a betrayer..! He is a cheater..!”
Says Ragini. But, Janu is crying, her face is turned all red. Looking at Janu crying Lakshya feels bad,

“What made me a betrayer Ragini? For both of you I searched madly. Is this is called betrayal? I was waiting all these four years only for you, without marrying anyone. Is this is called betrayal? I realized both of you are here and I was heart broke to see my three years kid is suffering in poverty along with you. Is this is betrayal? Now, I want to take you back with me, why can’t you accept? Why do you suffer our Janu for my mistake??”
Asks Lakshya.

Ragini moves her head aside.

Lakshya keeps his hand on Janu’s head.

“I love you Ragini. I swear on my daughter.”

Ragini pulls Janu from him. Janu was holding Lakshya tightly. She was crying, “pappa..”

“Come Janu..!!” Pulls Ragini completely her from him. Ragini keeps taking away her. Janu cries looking at Lakshya. Laksh looks with tears.

Swara soul who was sitting on tree sees all this scene. “I can’t see Janu crying.” She thinks.

To be continued.

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    26 Comments

    1. gayu on March 27, 2017 5:15 pm

      Nice.

    2. Sinni on March 27, 2017 5:21 pm

      Awesome

    3. lovely7 on March 27, 2017 5:27 pm

      Awesome

    4. prathi on March 27, 2017 5:30 pm

      superb

    5. Ashnoor on March 27, 2017 5:48 pm

      Amazing dear

    6. Preethi on March 27, 2017 5:58 pm

      Excellent…..

    7. Follybraverl on March 27, 2017 6:00 pm

      Awesome poor raglak both of them are right at their point if view can’t blame anyone

    8. Rinitta on March 27, 2017 6:02 pm

      EVery emotional and good too

    9. shrilatha on March 27, 2017 6:03 pm

      Nice

    10. abi on March 27, 2017 6:10 pm

      Superb sissy

    11. Akshitha on March 27, 2017 6:24 pm

      I am feeling sad 4 raglakk…can u pls unite dem dearrr..??????

    12. SRSL on March 27, 2017 6:34 pm

      Emotional?? Swara is good….yipeeee

    13. Eba on March 27, 2017 6:44 pm

      Nice 🙂

    14. MEGHA on March 27, 2017 6:49 pm

      amazing

    15. jazzy on March 27, 2017 7:12 pm

      amazinggg

    16. mk on March 27, 2017 7:31 pm

      superb

    17. avika on March 27, 2017 7:51 pm

      Superr

    18. Fairy on March 27, 2017 8:37 pm

      Omggggg fab. Update dr…feeling bad for raglakkk…????post nxt part soon dr…keep rockng n stay blessed???

    19. Ammu on March 27, 2017 9:32 pm

      Interesting episode as usual and poor Raglak. Plz make them unite ASAP

    20. Arjuna on March 27, 2017 9:46 pm

      AWESOME

    21. Ritu on March 27, 2017 10:03 pm

      Fabulous. Swara will not let anything happen to Janu kids can change any one with their innocence. I love kids a lot.

    22. Malu on March 27, 2017 10:27 pm

      Superb part

    23. asra on March 27, 2017 11:19 pm

      awesome dear…..feeling bad for raglak jaanu….Ohhh noo thz kaveri only killed swara na….Thn y swara didn’t take revenge of kaveri….y she behind ragini….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    24. Anu on March 28, 2017 6:48 pm

      Pls unite dem dearer..??

    25. Affaa on March 29, 2017 2:03 pm

      Yaar I’m so excited yaar Really.. Story is so interesting…. Keep writing

    26. Akshitha on March 29, 2017 2:55 pm

      Pls unite raglak dearrr

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