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Home»Fan Fiction»A Horror Story (RagLak) Part 4
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A Horror Story (RagLak) Part 4

bhuvanachandrikaBy bhuvanachandrikaMarch 26, 201726 Comments6 Mins Read
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Thank you all, eba, sinni, ritu, shana, lovely, iqra222, follybrave, ashnoor, prathi, sindhura, gayu, akshitha, rinitta, megha, ammu, sayana, abi, ammu, aishu, mk, sharanya, arjuna, asra, jazzy, rachna..

Ritu.. swara will be negative just for a while, but later she changes.

Next part

Ragini takes Janu to house.

She shouts on Janu,

“Why did you go with him..?” And Ragini raises her hand and Janu keeps hands on her and cries. Her face turns as apple.
Ragini feels bad looking Janu crying. Ragini hugs her.

“I’m sorry my princess. I said know don’t go near strangers.why did u go?”asks Ragini.

“Sorry mommy..” says Janu. Then Ragini kisses her cheek. This scene was all seen by Lakshya from window. He is very near to them, but he is still missing them. He feels badly to hug Ragini, to take Janu near. But, he couldn’t.

At some lonely place a lady digs the ground and takes out Swara soul locked bottle. She frees her.

“Why did you free me.?”
Swara asks.

“I will take my revenge, take yours with me.” Says kaveri smirking. Swara too smirks.

Thunders and lightings strikes and rain starts.

At night time,

The rain starts. Ragini wakes and tries to close window, but actually that window was broke. The rain water keeps start coming in wetting their small room.
Ragini tries to cover the room, but not possible.

After a while, the rain stops. Ragini takes breath. Janu was shivering, “mamma, I’m afraid”
Ragini goes and hugs Janu and sleeps.

It’s Lakshya who kept the water proof curtain, to window. Lakshya comes to the window and looks at sleeping Ragu and Janu in tears.

Swara’s soul straight comes near them. And Swara sees at Janu. She sits where Ragini and Janu are sleeping. Swara looks at Janu in big eyes. She tries to touch Janu’s cheek but, she couldn’t.

“How cute are you.” Thinks Swara.

Lakshya who was awake still looking t them, he couldn’t see Swara. His phone rings and swara looks at window. Laksh hides, but she knows Laksh is there.

Laksh talks in phone to Sanskar,

“Lucky, knowing it’s dangerous why did you come!”

“I came for my wife and kid, no one can seperate me from them.” Lakshya talks in phone.

Swara enters into Ragini. Ragini opens her eyes, she looks at Janu. Swara in Ragini touches Janu’s cheek and she gets tears.

“You are the one who has to born for me. But, Ragini became your mother. You must be mine.” Swara in Ragini says.

Then Swara goes away remembering something from Ragini.

Next morning,

Ragini wakes and see Lakshya who was sitting in a car outside. He was sleeping in the driver seat. She closes her doors again.

“What Laksh is doing here?” She thinks. Later she makes Janu ready to school. She scares to open door, that Laksh might be following them. She opens door, but Laksh is not there. She takes breath.

She steps out with Janu. Ragini looks around, but he is no where. She is taking Janu silently, but Lakshya was observing both of them silently from back. He smiles looking at them.

Ragini leaves Janu in school, Lakshya too looks Janu who is going away into school. Ragini feels someone close to her heart observing them. But, she ignores. Later, Laksh follows Ragini. She goes into a house to work as cook.

Laksh’s PA comes near him.

“Sir, from yesterday evening you are out only. You didn’t even eat properly anything. Come to guest house and get fresh up once.”

“I will come, when janu and ragu returns back to their room. And, is guest house is near to them.”

“Yes sir, it’s just beside.”

Lakshya nods his head and keeps drinking coffee offered by him. He was looking into the house for Ragini.
She comes out after a while. Ragini is hiding her rags in saree and she was wiping her wet hands to her saree pallu. Laksh feels bad looking her condition.

Later, Ragini goes to school for Janu. Janu comes and hugs her. Laksh smiles looking at them. Ragini carees Janu in her arms, then suddenly Rain starts again.

There is no place near to hide for sometime, Ragini covers Janu’s head with her saree, but still she is wetting.

“Mamma, I’m wetting,”

“We shall go home fast Janu..”

Then they feels on rain on them. Ragini looks up, there is umbrella and it is held by Laksh. He was getting wet putting umbrella to them.

Ragini frowns her eyes and starts going away. He is still following her putting umbrella.

“Mr. Lakshya, we need not want your help.”

She is about to go away, Lakshya holds her shoulder and pulls her back. She falls in him. Both are under umbrella now.

“Don’t show anger on me to our daughter. She is also getting wet along with you. She catches fever again.” Laksh says. Ragini remains silent. They start walking under umbrella, Laksh was busy in looking at Ragini. Janu laid her head on Ragini and sleeping.

They reach home. Ragini makes Janu sleep on bed, and Laksh was looking lovingly at Ragini’s wet body.

“Thanks Mr. Laksh, you may go now.”

“Shall I go in this Rain? See, how heavy it is..! Don’t you have little mercy on me?” Laksh asks. Ragini doesn’t wanted to accept his condition, but feels a little pity. She silently goes near stove to prepare something, Laksh sits near Janu to play with her.

“Don’t touch my daughter..!” Ragini says sternly. Laksh removes his hand with smile.

Then he looks at Ragini’s stomach, where the water droplets are flowing into her navel. He gulps, goes near her and suddenly hugs her from beside. Ragini shocks, he moves his hands sensually on her stomach, Ragini falls back on him in temptation. Then he moves his nose tip on her curve of neck and breathing on her neck. Ragini holds his head and a smile crepts on her lips.

But soon, she remembers how Laksh made her betrayed. Soon she comes to senses, and pushes Laksh back.

Laksh looks at her. “Get out” says Ragini in tears.

“Ragini..” Laksh about to touch her cheek, Ragini turns her face aside in disgust.

Laksh looks at her painfully and goes out in rain. Soon, Ragini bolts her doors. Lakshya stands in the rain only out. His PA comes with umbrella.

“Sir, please come now.”

“No, I want to stay here.” Laksh says looking at closed doors. Ragini inside is crying holding Janu’s hands.

To be continued.

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    26 Comments

    1. Sindhura on March 26, 2017 5:50 pm

      Nice

    2. lovely7 on March 26, 2017 5:55 pm

      Awesome

    3. Follybraverl on March 26, 2017 5:56 pm

      Hey Bhuvi it was awesome just awesome loved to read it I am in love with your ff

    4. Akshitha on March 26, 2017 5:57 pm

      Feeling bad 4 lakshya…but he deserves it…poor janu…ragini s suffering a lott..???

    5. Eba on March 26, 2017 6:13 pm

      Awesome feeling sad for them 🙁

      But hope everything will go well 🙂

      It’s awesome bhuvi 🙂 🙂

    6. Sinni on March 26, 2017 6:23 pm

      Nice

    7. Ashnoor on March 26, 2017 6:56 pm

      Amazing dear …..

    8. shrilatha on March 26, 2017 7:29 pm

      Awesome

    9. mk on March 26, 2017 7:34 pm

      feeling bad for them unite soon dr

    10. gayu on March 26, 2017 7:50 pm

      Nice

    11. IQRA222 on March 26, 2017 7:51 pm

      awesome

    12. Lucy on March 26, 2017 8:00 pm

      Plzz unite raglak soon. Awesome update.
      Post soon
      Bye

    13. asra on March 26, 2017 8:49 pm

      awesome dear….feeling bad for raglak jaanu….Everyone in pain….ohh swara come back…y thz kaveri want revenge from raglak….she want revenge from raglak or maheswari family….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    14. Megha on March 26, 2017 8:51 pm

      Feeling so sad for raglak. Update soon

    15. abi on March 26, 2017 8:54 pm

      Superb

    16. Rinitta on March 26, 2017 9:19 pm

      Fantastic update dear

    17. Keerthu on March 26, 2017 9:49 pm

      Amazing dr..

    18. Arjuna on March 26, 2017 9:52 pm

      AWESOME

    19. Ammu on March 26, 2017 9:53 pm

      Awesome episode and poor Raglak. Plz make them unite soon. Loved Raglak scenes

    20. Ritu on March 26, 2017 10:13 pm

      Awesome as usual. I am happy that swara is not negative because I can’t stand swara as negative. I think swara will change because of Janu.feeling so bad for laksh.

    21. Aishu08 on March 26, 2017 11:16 pm

      Awesome update… Feeling bad for Laksh.. waiting for the next update

    22. AimRagLak on March 26, 2017 11:53 pm

      Awesome dear.Plz don’t end swara’s spirit leave soon.Her revenge plan will bring Raglak closer!

    23. A.xx on March 27, 2017 12:24 am

      fab but feel bad for rags more than lakshya xx

    24. SRSL on March 27, 2017 8:45 am

      Awsm….feeling bad for janu and ragu….?

    25. Akshitha on March 27, 2017 1:05 pm

      Dear pls dnt allow swara to use ragini 4 revengee…????

    26. jazzy on March 27, 2017 7:08 pm

      Amazingg episode yaar

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