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HOLD MY HAND, I’LL SHOW U WHAT IS LOVE (DEVDAAN) – Devanshi (Part-1)

Here is the 1st part guys…..

I know I’m too early in posing the parts back to back.. but these are already written on wattpad… so I’m just posting them… hehehe

PART-1
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Mumbai…..

DEVANSHI’s POV

Today I’m so happy ? bcoz I got admission in business management from Geetam university in Hyderabad.

I’m going to stay away from home for 2years, I’ll miss my mom and dad a lot? but, I have to do this.

Thinking all this I stepped in to my parents room to know about their decision.

Dad was okay with it as he was always supportive of me. But mom,…. is she going to send me??

I hope dad has convinced her by now.

KNOCK KNOCK…..

I knocked their door and peeped into their room…. the atmosphere of the room seems to be hot…. ???

Matlab mumma is not ready to send me…. ohh noo and her one look…. gayi mein toh gayi…..????

Devanshi(puppy face): Mumma plzz…? let me go…. I promise I’ll be a good girl….

Roopa(serious): mein ne kaha na.. tum nei jaogi matlab nei jaogi.. bas….??
(I told u ryt?….. u won’t go that’s it!!)

I make my most possible puppy face but it didnt work on mom then I turned towards dad.???

He signs me that he will handle everything and I left them alone….

After sometime mom came to my room and hugged me tightly and started crying….

D: Mummaa.. kya hua… plzz ro mat…. Thik hai I won’t go aap rona mat….?
(what happened??. plz dont cry….)

Roo: no… I was being selfish not to send u….? even I want my daughter to stand on her own feet…. to be successful in her life….?but plzz mumma ko cal karte rehana okay?(keep calling mom okay?)

And she places a kiss on my forehead.

I cant see her crying.. I cant be selfish…. ?wait….. what????? selfish???????

Just now I heard mom saying selfish…. then it stuck my mind what my mom just told me…..???

Deva: whaaaaaaat????????? ?u agreeed… omg…… mummaaa u r the best…. and dont worry I’ll be fine…. and listen don’t dare to call my mumma selfish…. she is the best :)?
?

I said and hugged her tightly…. And dad joined us…. nd we had a group hug.

Deva(whispering): papaaa….. kya kaha apne mumma se??? vo kaise maangayi?????
(dad what did u say to mom? how did u convince her??)

I whispered into papa’s ears…. I was always a daddy’s girl… so there exists such secrets between us…. hehehe….???

Roo: u guys need not whisper, talk loudly, I’m going to set your luggage.

My mom is smart ???

She kissed my forehead and left two of us alone.

Papa put his hand around my shoulder and we walked to the balcony…. he is more of a friend to me than a father???

Some neighbours envy our bonding while some adore… till now there is no such thing I hid from him??.

I may hide few things from mumma… but Papa… nahhh never??

Omi: amma…. ye tumhari zindagi ka sabse bada challange hoga (this is going to be your life’s biggest challenge) U know y??

Deva: Bcoz I’m going to stay away from home for the first time papa??

Omi: ryt… not only that u r going to face the real world urself now… and remember one thing no one is going to help u in time of need… u need to fight for urself…. okay….☺

I nodded my head understanding his point and remembering something.

Omi: Good but koi bhi problem ho we r just a phone call away…. take care my baccha??

With that he placed a kiss on the side of my head…

Omi: tujhe pata… tu kitni bhi badi hoja…. mujhe toh aaj bhi meri vo nanhi beti yaad aati hai…jise mein apne upar puri raat sulaata tha? haha….. yakeen hi nei hota tu itni badi hogayi?
(U know how much ever u grow up but u r still the same little girl for me, who used to sleep on me whole night…haha… I dont believe u’ve grown up so big)

He said getting emotional and I hugged him tight…. :)?

I am very lucky to get my parents.

*****Two days later*****

Hmmmm finally I’m in Hyderabad and my parents accompanied me till university… dad went for some admission formalities and mom was giving me her “list of instructions”??
??

Koi mujhe bachaaooooo….(someone help mee….)???

Roo: Jamoon sun rahi ho ki nei????
(r u listeneing?)

WTH…….I felt my anger rose up…..?????

Deva: mummaa… how many times do I have to tell u not to call me with that name…..huhh???

Roo: thik hai… bubaa… ab gussa mat ho
(okay fine now dont be angry)

I just hate that word… Huh…… ??

It has a story……once my neighbor told me “Devanshi… beta u r soo sweet like…umm.. haan like jamoon even ur cheeks are like jamoon”.. from then everyone started teasing me
with that name?…. I hate that woman and also that name… ??

Are koi itni badi ladki ko jamoon bulata hai kya??? huhhhh??

Just then papa came and completed the remaining instructions???

While they were leaving even I wanted to cry like my mumma did… but no I’m a strong girl… I cannot cry…?????

So I was hardly controlling my tears nd plasterd a smile???

I had to share my room with one more girl but I think she did not come yet…. so I was alone.

That night I couldn’t even sleep properly, only papa was on my mind…????

How papa used to make me sleep daily…? how he used to place my head on his lap and pat my hair until I’m asleep…. ???I miss those days….??? I miss u papa…. 🙁

Next day….

I woke up early as it was the first day to my college….. mumma pappa called me and wished me best of luck???… I’m a bit relieved after talking to them…

Now I’m pretty excited as well as nervous…. ????

I entered the college…. woww…. I’m gonna study here… cool…..it is so beautiful??

As I stepped in I saw a gang teasing a boy… n he had a puppy face….n I could see that they were bullying him…. he seems to be a fresher like me…

I went to them and lied to them that someone was calling them pointing to a man who seemed like a professor….

Guess what… ???my plan worked n they ran away??? haha…

When that boy was about to leave I stopped him

Dev: Heyy… stop!!! I saved u from them I deserve a thanks???

I told him with attitude…??

He looked at me bewildered then smiled ?a bit n said thanku n left….

Strange… I thought and shrugged n went to my class… as it was the 1st day, only intro was given…

I met few girls n became friends with them but none were my type???

Whenever a guy enters the room they start their drooling session….

Ufff….? I dont understand what is there to drool so much??

After the class I noticed the same guy sitting alone in cafeteria…. even he was in my class…

I went to him n sat beside him….

Deva: u don’t mind me sitting here ryt????

Boy: ummm nei jii no….☺

Deva: ?? jiii…..???? Do I look like an aunty to u????

I literally yelled at him…. he was startled by my reaction… hehe

Boy:??

He nodded his head in negative….

Deva: then y r u calling me JII….???

I asked him…. laughing mentally…. hehe dar gaya baccha…??

Boy: sorry I dont know ur name….

Deva: when u dont know anyone’s name u have an option called asking their name…. do u realise that?????

Boy:(smiling sheepishly)??? sorry whats ur name….?

Deva: Devanshi?? n u?

I asked him forwarding my hand for a shake n he accepted it….

Boy: Gulshan???

[Yes hez our golu g?]

D: y aren’t u sitting with any of the boys???

Golu: they r not of my type??

Then started our friendship….?

He was a little reserved…. but a fun loving guy when he opens up….

He doesn’t flirt with girls unlike others… he respects them a lot…

I had to do a lot of work to remove that ji… from my name… ufff?

As the days were passing our dosti became stronger…

Sometimes we studied together…? we helped each other in studies

He was my partner in crime?

I even spoke to his papa… he was so sweet but I never got the chance to speak to his brother…. I wonder how he would be???

Golu spoke to my parents… my mom liked him so much n they both were like long lost mother-son duo…. haha

Even Golu was attached to her??If they started talking they would even forget me…..such was their bonding…. same goes with me when I speak to his dad…..

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VARDAAN’s POV

It has been a week since we shifted Hyderabad
[Jaha heroine vahi hero? ]

The flat, company provided was pretty spacious for three of us…

Golu started going to college, I joined my work…. Papa also adjusted well here…

But the thing that is bothering me is Golu’s behaviour….

He was never this open, its good to see him changed, but I need to know the reason for this change….. ???

I know he would tell me if I ask him, but I want to find out for my self…. so I told him, I would pick him up from college the nxt day….

Next day….

I was waiting for Golu at his college gate…. but what I saw made me shocked…… then angry…..???

As soon as he came….

Var: what the hell Golu????? r u coming to college for this???

Golu: (scratching his head) kya hua bhai….????????

Var: who is this girl??? Ur girlfriend….?? Is it the reason u appear so happy??????

I can see the girl getting angry….?

Var:(pointing to the girl) n u…. how dare u ??? Dikhne mei itni choti ho…. aur haan ye aankh dikhana band kar samjhi?????

Golu: woahhh… bhai… bhaiii….. shant ho jao…. this is Devanshi meri dost??? not any girlfriend…..

Shit?? what have I done….??

Var?: Umm…. thik hai thik hai… aur tujhe koi ladka nei mila kya….. iss ke saath ghoom rahe ho….?
(Okay okay… didnt u find any guy.. ur roaming with her??)

Deva: excuse me…. ?he is my friend…n its his choice to make friends…. n how dare u….(pointing finger towards V) think abt us that way?? GF-BF seriously????? and how
dare u point out abt my height…. mei choti nei hu samjhe??? ?

I can see she was hell angry… ?and then I observed her from top to bottom… she literally looked like a tomboy……? jeans… shirt with folded hands like a guy….

And I couldn’t stop my chuckle and chuckled a bit loudly………. ?

That made her more angry…..?

Var: Abey Golu…. ladkon dost nei mila toh…. tomboy ko dost bana liya kya tu ne???? haha? (pointing to D)tum na sirf dikhne me ladki ho… nature se tomboy ho hahaha??
(Golu..as u didnt find any guy frinds u made this tomboy ur friend hahaaha)

Golu(tensed): bhai..shhhhhh….. chup karo…. ??(to devanshi extra sweetely) Jamoon….?

Golu was trying to convince her…..n whattt???? jamoon like seriously????

I burst out laughing.???

Var: Hahahaha jamoon…..?????

Deva: shut up….. ?n Golu u… dare u call me with that name…..? Devanshi….. Devanshi naam hai mera….. tujhe na baad me bataungi…

Ohh god she was literally Chota Lady Gabbar… hahaha…..??

Golu: par Devan…

Golu tried convincing her

Deva: Chup…. bilkul chup…..?

I got angry seeing her ordering my bro…?

Var: ee ladki bohat jabaan chalri hai teri…. ? (heyy girl u talk too much)

deva(angry): u……. Mr.Khadoos Rasgulla….?? dont u dare interfere in between friends….. tumhe to mei baad mein dekh lungi…. huh….??

She huffed nd turned around to go… but……

Var: ahhhhhhhh…..!!!!!??

She stomped her foot on my leg and ran away…???

Golu: hahahaaha….??

I gave an angry glare to golu n he kept quiet….

Var: abey where did u find her…????? Khadoos Rasgulla?????? like really????? Battameez ladki…??

Seriously who gives such weird names…..??

My brain mocked me ” didnt u give her a name chota lady gabbar…. same way she gave u a name.” chal futttt I shoved my brain’s thoughts???

I have never seen such weird girl in my life…… uffff….???

Choti hai but cute hai 😉 but I cant believe.. she changed my Golu….?☺

After two days……

I was going to office and saw few guys teasing a girl on the other side of the road….

She was crying badly…urgggghhh y does she have to cry so much instead of retorting????

But I cant leave her like that and the road there seems lonely……

As I was crossing the road to go to her……..

THUDDDDD……..

I was shocked? to see someone slapping the guys nd

CRASHHHHH……

Oh… god it was a girl?….. who slapped them n now… she broke the glass cola bottle n she was threatening them….. but who is she????

As I crossed the road I could see the girl’s face…. damn… she is the same tomboy…. ??ummm whats her name….. chota lady gabbar… nei……. haan.. yes…..JAMOON…..?
?

Yaar ye toh badi brave hai…. ???

But it seems the fight was not over…. now slowly people started gathering there….. suddenly…

SPLASHHHHH……

???? paani phek di usne un gadhon ki mu pe….. aur bhagaadi une….???hahaha

I smiled at her brave act…..??

I went to them to talk to her….

Var: hey….jamoon..great fight yaar??

I complemented her but received an angry glare from her….?

She angrily left from there dragging the other girl with her….

Var: hey… wait….

I called her as she was leaving but then stopped realizing something???

Ek minute…. y am I even talking to a girl as if shez my friend…. when did I start praising a girl… that too when she insulted me calling khadoos????
????hu…. this crazy girl will make me mad one day…..

But I should have not called her Jamoon… but what to do I forgot her name…..

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Same day….evening…. devanshi was leaning on her room’s window and was thinking something deeply and a lone tear escaped her eye….??

DEVANSHI’s POV

Today I was returning from a store, I saw few guys teasing a girl and she was so helpless… n was crying

I immediately went there nd made those brutes run away…

But I can never forget the incidents that happened with me….

****Flashback…..

I was in my 2nd yr of college… we were a gang of 6 people…

It was HOLI…. we were at our friend’s hostel to celebrate ….

Bohat khush thi uss din… ??

We were playing jus out side the gate and were completely unrecognizable with colors ?

All of a sudden there came 2bikes each having… 3 boys on it….. they started sprinkling colors on us….. ?

[Spoilt brats u know]

Some of my friends ran away being scared and…. only me n my bestie were left out n we were trapped…. ???

Two boys got down nd sprayed colors on us… I kept quiet as I didnt want a spat n create issue over there…..???

Suddenly one of them was coming to break an egg on us, my bestie pushed me back n ran away leaving me alone….?? I gasped at the sudden happening… how could
everyone leave me alone like that????

I was literally shocked?? seeing my friends peeping from a distance but none came forward to help me….???

Were they even my friends????

But now I was hell scared bcoz both of the guys were forwarding with eggs in their hands….????

“Hey just one egg n we will leave u…hahahaha….” I heard one of them saying and laughing evilly….

I was backing but stopped by wall…. I was so shocked n terrified that…I was not even able to find my voice???

I pushed the one in front of me with all my strength n started running but…….

I fell down….. so badly……

“maaaaaa”….. I yelled in pain, I think broke my left hand… it was paining….even I got some bruises on my right hand…and they were bleeding…… suddenly I realized that those
guys were behind me…….

Those guys reached me n again I started panicking…. my physical injuries were nothing in front of my fear….?????

“Are aree gir gayi… chalo chalo get up…” saying this, they were touching me inappropriately…..

I shoved their hands away n got up…stumbled… but somehow balanced myself………ohh great…. Now I also got a sprain in my leg… n my palazzo was torn near my knees nd blood was oozing….

I was in tears… I felt so helpless…. ??

I can still see my friends peeping but none came out even after I fell down……???? its so painful…. to see ur friends’ true colours…..

I started limping n moved a bit…. but the guy again came in front of me nd said

“hey anda toh phod ne do”, Saying this he was about to break the egg on my head…

I was beyond fear now?…. how can someone be so inhuman…. is he blind not to see my injuries…?

My anger has overcome my fear…..

I felt my anger reaching peaks……. and yelled at him loudly pointing my finger….??

Deva: abeeeey…… ?? r u mad??? Or r u blind??? Go to hell…..????
[PS- everytime hero cant come to save heroine]

I can say he was taken aback by my sudden outburst n he backed off??

I dont know from where I got such courage… maybe bcoz of my so called friends who left me in the time of need????

I went limping then all my friends came to me showing their “fake” concern…. I didnt react.. but just faked a smile☺saying I’m fine….

Wowww… I hav got such a wonderful friends???

But thanks to them… they taught me a lesson…. and I remembered papa’s words…..?

NEVER WAIT FOR ANYONE TO HELP U, HELP URSELF

************Flash back ends ……

That day… I was helpless but I could save myself…. but today…

I thought of leaving the girl alone to help herself, but I couldn’t be like my so called friends when someone was in need of help…. I cannot be heartless????

I wiped my tears thinking all this… But wait… what was that AYM doing there????

And how dare he call me jamoon… hu..?? Khadoos Rasgulla kahika….?

Usse toh mei jaroor dekhlungi……??
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