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Home»Fan Fiction»HO GAYA PYAR TUMSE let’s feel it…. (shot 33)
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HO GAYA PYAR TUMSE let’s feel it…. (shot 33)

MeghuBy MeghuJanuary 13, 2021Updated:January 18, 20218 Comments6 Mins Read
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Abir comes to his room and sees Mishti packing her bag.

Abir:where are you leaving so abruptly leaving the job incomplete?

Mishti:I don’t want to stay here anymore!

Abir: what happened so?

Mishti:kuch nahi hua?

Abir nods no. Mishti frowns and continues.

Abir stops her. Mishti doesn’t listen. Abir drag the dress,Mishti also doesn’t leave.

They fall on bed.

Abir:bolo,what’s on your mind?

Mishti:I just want to leave from here.

Abir:are you scared?

Mishti:Not important to know, I don’t want to stay back.

Mishti pushes him and walks out.

Abir thinks.

Mishti sits somewhere alone reminiscing the incidents.

Abir comes there and sees her lost in thoughts…

Abir:Memories are some bitter
You tasted it,right?
Then forgot it
Move on with some memories
Which are made for your happiness
We are prone to changes…. but
Our heart is still
which was at the time of birth….
We have a stressful life awaiting us
In the long journey of life…..
Never ever forgot to smile….
Just smile…smile….smile….☺️

Abir goes in front of Mishti and looks at her.

Abir:what do you feel after listening to my poetry?

Mishti:I just want to kill you.

Abir:killer choti motu.

Mishti looks at him with a slight smile.

Abir:if you smile like this,then it’s difficult!

Mishti:I didn’t smile.

Abir takes her glass.

Mishti:what are you doing,Abir?

Abir:I have gone blind! You didn’t smile.

Mishti pinches him slowly.

Abir:I know Tarun has really gone mad and created a fuss. But we don’t want to get scared of him now,as he is in police station.

Mishti:he will harm you not me!

Abir:I can even die for you .

Abir raises his eyebrow. Mishti smiles

Mishti:Hero ki dialogues doesn’t suit you.

Abir:why not?I have saved you from villain,now I am hero.

Mishti:then,next I have to fall for you because of your heroic act?

Abir looks at her… Mishti looks around and leaves.

Abir:you can’t leave like this…

Abir walks to her.

Mishti:I just said like that…

Abir makes her wear the glass.

Abir:without this my choti motu is incomplete.

Mishti sighs and smiles.

Abir:are you sure you want to leave?

Mishti looks at him and leaves without a reply.

Abir:she is still on the shock!

Mishti is in room.Abir enters seeing her with bag thinks she has to leave.

Mishti sees him.

Mishti:take off your shirt!

Abir:what!? I am not like that!

Mishti: do you really think so?

Abir:let me see your hidden intentions.

Abir holds her and looks into her eyes.

Mishti:finished? You have injuries,you didn’t even say?

Abir:it’s not deep.

Mishti takes away his shirt without any further enquiry.

Abir looks at her.

Mishti makes him sit and applies medicine.

Mishti:its finished!

Abir nods. Mishti pulls away the suitcase and get into bed for sleep.

Abir looks at her.

Time passes…

Abir sees Mishti disturbed in sleep.

Mishti:nahi,I will not let you. Abir…

Abir holds her hand.

Abir:I am here,Mishti.its nothing everything is fine.

Abir senses temperature and check her,

Abir:she is having fever out of fear.

Abir makes her lay on his lap and cares for her.

Mishti suddenly shouts his name and gets up from sleep.

Mishti panic. Abir calms her down.

Abir (thinks):I can’t keep,Mishti here. She is right, I have to leave with her morning itself.

Mishti:sorry!

Abir lifts her face and makes her look into his eyes.

Abir:let’s leave morning itself.

Mishti:no,Abir! You are right. We will stay.

Abir:no you are right! I can’t see you like this!

Mishti:I am fine! I had some dream. I will have some water.

Mishti gets up from the bed.

Abir holds her hand.

Abir:I will leave,you can accompany me if you want!

Abir lays down saying that,

Mishti (thinks):He is leaving for me! I can’t let it happen

Next morning,

Mishti gets up from sleep and sees Abir taking the bags away,

Mishti:what are you doing?I said everything is fine.

Abir:breakfast is there. I have kept a pair of clothes get ready fast,

Mishti:what are you saying? I am asking you something.

Abir:you can check once again,if you want.

Abir goes. Mishti sits there,.

Abir sees Mishti coming.

Mishti:what will we say when Mehul uncle asks?

Abir: get in,Mishti!

Mishti:they will be feel bad.

Abir doesn’t pay attention to her,

Mishti (thinks):it’s of no use! He will not listen.

Mishti sits in back seat and looks away.

Abir drives and sees her through window.

After travelling for a while,their car brake down!

Abir gets out and opens the car front to see.

Mishti:do you know to repair?

Abir:no,usually when car brake downs all does like this.

Mishti: really! Call a mechanic.

Mishti turns and smiles. Car gets repaired.

Abir opens the back door for Mishti. Mishti gets in front side,

Abir:papa will be convinced by me. They won’t feel bad as we are not telling them about the incident.

Mishti:what if they come to know?

Abir:for now,no tension!

Mishti feels bad for lying.

Abir holds her hand.

Abir:telling the truth and making someone cry is better than,telling a lie and making someone smile.

Mishti:may be.

They reach Rajvansh house.

Mishti:it’s my Badipa’s car.

Abir:who is shouting inside ?

Mishbir enters and sees Family fighting. They stand confused.

Nidhi:you should have taken care,it’s your fault.

Jasmeet:your family doesn’t have any values…

Mishti:what’s happening ?why are you fighting?

Abir: papa,kya hua?

Kuhu:woh…

Jasmeet:ask them,Mishti!

They continue arguments. Mishbir look on without understanding anything.

Badipa:we should discuss what to do next.

Parul:what else can we do? All is done.

Dadu:still!it matters to both family.

Badima:no,we can’t accept it easily.

Kunal:what else can we do now?

Abir exclaims.
Abir:can anyone tell me what is the problem???

Everyone looks at him.

Kaushal:look there!

Mishbir are shocked.

Nishant and ketki in wedding attire.


They are married couples.

Mishti:how did this happen?

Abir:how can you two marry without anyone?

Nidhi:he made our daughter run with him.

Jasmeet:your daughter did back magic on my son!

Mishti:how can you react like this?

Jasmeet:are you supporting your sasural?

Abir:it’s not like that mami!

Parul:what if she does?

They get into a heated argument again.

Precap:CAN MISHBIR HELP THE NEWLYWEDS? ??

Thank you…

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    8 Comments

    1. Meghu on January 13, 2021 12:32 pm

      Thank you all my commentators,I can’t give individual replies as I got busy!!!

      Thank you avni,ananya,nitya,zingo and shital chauhan😊

      Shital,I have included more pics in this part? Hope you enjoy

      • Shital Chauhan on January 13, 2021 2:45 pm

        Ya I enjoyed it a lot……… ThankYou Waiting for the next FF

    2. Avni on January 13, 2021 12:49 pm

      It was an amazing chapter. I hope the problem get solved. By the way it’s right you are unpredictable.

    3. Bhuvaneshwari on January 13, 2021 1:35 pm

      It would be nice if Varun had threatened Ketu and Nannu married her to save her from Varun 😅😅. Amazing episode 😍❣️❤️. Post the next one soon

    4. Nithya on January 13, 2021 2:15 pm

      Amazing update!!❤❤
      Loved Mishbir scenes ❤❤
      Hope Mishbir will solve the problem.
      Pls update soon!😊😊

    5. Ananya on January 13, 2021 2:31 pm

      Amazing update!! Mishbir will definitely solve these problem..

    6. Shital Chauhan on January 13, 2021 3:37 pm

      Wonderful Update, waiting for the next FF
      Please upload the next update fast!!!!!!!!!

      I hope this problem gets solve fast..

    7. Zingo on January 15, 2021 9:40 am

      Literally, I said na Nishant is with Ketki…. I said na🤣🤣. Nishant + Ketki = Keshant or Netki or Nishki. Oops! I don’t know how to make Jodi names. 😂Choose the one you feel better

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