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Hidden Hate Open Love ( prologue )

administratorBy administratorJuly 1, 201621 Comments2 Mins Read
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hii frndzz I am not new here.. I am silent reader and on some fiction I comment.. so this is my second fiction so enjoy its prologue.

Prologue
A man is pointing a gun towards a 13 year old boy and in his eyes the anger is shown clearly.. by seeing his face anyone can say that at any moment he can shot bullet in the head of that little boy.. The boy is very scared and he is continuously crying..

At the other side some goons are holding a girl who is continuously shouting and crying and freeing herself from the grip of goons..

Girl- plzz king leave my little brother. plzz.. Plzz I beg u. U take my life but spare my brother don’t kill him.. plzz

The man who is pointing gun towards the boy comes to that girl and laughs evilly and with a smirk says
Man – oh u call me king no baby this is not fair.. (he touches her cheeks senseously)plzz call me by my real name.
Girl feel disgusted from his touch and he says no I will never ever call u by that name …
Man-ok u call me king only i have no objection and one thing i clear u that I don’t want ur life… but I want u..
Girl- (shouts angrily) I hate u sanskar…
Man- And I love u swara..

Frndzz comment plzz this is small prologue and plzz support me guys becoz from ur comments only I will get courage to write..so plzz comment if the comments were more then only I will continue and tell me that I should continue it or not..

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21 Comments

  1. Zzzzz (Charming).... on July 1, 2016 12:40 pm

    Nice…..

  2. ria on July 1, 2016 12:41 pm

    very nice

  3. Rizna on July 1, 2016 12:45 pm

    Pari pls continue becoz it’s really amazing.

  4. Jj on July 1, 2016 12:53 pm

    Hi, super I really like this type of love story of swasan. Please continue I am waiting

  5. s on July 1, 2016 1:02 pm

    nyc..continue

  6. Sumeeta on July 1, 2016 1:39 pm

    Nice continu

  7. bresh on July 1, 2016 2:05 pm

    awsome

  8. Jwala on July 1, 2016 2:08 pm

    interesting plz continue

  9. Madhu on July 1, 2016 3:11 pm

    Pari pls continue becoz it’s really amazing.

  10. mou on July 1, 2016 3:35 pm

    awesome. plz continue soon

  11. sanjana on July 1, 2016 3:46 pm

    Good… plz continue

  12. Niharika on July 1, 2016 4:06 pm

    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue its an awesome prologue . Plz update 1st part today itself only.

  13. SHAN on July 1, 2016 4:37 pm

    Awesome

  14. vyshu10 on July 1, 2016 5:02 pm

    interesting

  15. m on July 1, 2016 5:31 pm

    nyc..continue

  16. a on July 1, 2016 5:32 pm

    gud..continue

  17. pari on July 1, 2016 5:48 pm

    intrstng..plz continue….mee too a pari bt itz nt my real name……

  18. Tulina on July 1, 2016 7:57 pm

    Nice prologue…….update the next part soon………waiting eagerly to see a devil sanskar………

  19. Prakriti on July 1, 2016 8:14 pm

    Interesting Di…Waiting for next part………..Which is ur first Fanfic…

  20. Divyanshri on July 1, 2016 8:41 pm

    interesting…. plz post soon.

  21. AnuAnn on July 1, 2016 9:11 pm

    Nice continue dear

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