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Home»Fan Fiction»Hey roomie!- By Ninaku. Chapter 24
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Hey roomie!- By Ninaku. Chapter 24

NinakuBy NinakuSeptember 26, 201719 Comments8 Mins Read
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Back again with chapter 24 ???
Something icy cold is coming your way ??
Dhero enjoy and keep in the love and support coming as always ????
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With hands locked from behind, she kept hugging him untill she realises and tries breaking the hug.

While he grabs her hands again from front and tightens her hold.

“Another two more minutes. I miss my home now” he says closing his eyes and feeling her soft touch. She smiles and places her forehead on his back.

After 2 minutes, he releases his hold and turns to face her. He chuckles. “So, what’s with this Burkah thing?? It hides your pretty face” he says and pulls the head scarf. All her hair strands point different direction.

He chuckles again and starts hand-combing her hair to set it right.

“Well, actually… it’s a muslim wedding that we are event managing. So this was a dress code” she complains like a small child and gives him a tight smile. She takes off the burka.

He pouts looking at her innocence.
She finds him in the middle of trimming his beard. Beard on one cheek was trimmed while it was still 0.2mm longer on the other side.

She grabs his trimmer and starts trimming his beard. He was surprised yet chined up to get his free trimming done.



Suddenly, “Ahhh” he slips an audible sound. Anika was way more scared.

“Ahhhhhhhhh” she corally shouts and giving him a scared look.

“Where did i cut?? Tell me it’s not paining. Oh my god, it’s paining isn’t it? Damn it was my first time. Shit! I cut your neck. I killed you…” she keeps ranting untill shivaay cuts her in middle.

“Hey.. hey… im fine. Just a small cut. It was your first time. You did great by not chopping off my head” he jokes gaining a smack on his back from anika.

“Shut up. Wait here. Ill bring the ice cubes” she says running to the fridge.

Bringing some in hand she places one of it on his cut skin. He hissed. While she was hurt seeing gim in pain.

“Shivaay please punish me”  she whines casually without knowing the consequences.

Immedietly Shivaay picks one of the ice cubes and puts it behind her neck. It falls directly inside sliding down her back.

Widening her eyes, she starts jumping up and down. “Shivaay.. you dog!!!  Get this thing out of me!!!!” She shouts and continues jumping.

Shivaay laughs hysterically. And after getting a lot of screams from Anika he bites his upper lip and control his laughter.

Signalling her to stop he nears her. Moving shapelessly she tolerates the icy feeling that was tingling behind her back.

He gently snakes his hand behind her waist, sending shivers throughout her body. Ice cube didnt matter at all now.
It was rather hot in here, than the coldness the ice cube was creating. 

He trails his hand to the back of her neck and picks the ice cube out from her shirt. Fortunately it hadn’t gone too far down.

“Ice cube” she says and asks for it.
“Hot” he slips his tongue.
“What? She asks with a clueless reaction.

“It’s.. uh… it’s hot in here. See?!? The ice cube is melting!” He stammers and runs away to his room.

Anika chuckles and goes back to her room shaking her head.

Next morning, the two week of her rent period kept alarming his mind. “14 days” was what scaring shivaay.

Shivaay kept trying to talk to Anika while she kept rushing for work.

“Anika.. ek minute suno na..” shivaay goes behind her like a puppy.

“Hmm bol” she says but with absence of concentration.

“Arey.. Just look at me !!” Shivaay was quite angry now.

“Arey bol na.. mera kuch kaam hai.. jaldi bolo..” she says and continues rummaging through her files and folders.

Grabbing her elbow he pulls her behind which by the way finally results her to spin and fall on his chest.

“I said listen !” He says and lifts her chin up. She kept oscillating between both his blue-green eyes and had a look like she was expecting something.

“I just wanna tell you… It doesnt matter if your renting period is six months or shorter than that. You can stay here as long as you want to” he says and loosens his hold on her.

She looks expressionless but says “Thankyou” with a tight smile and continues walking outside the house.



“I said such a deep thing and she replies me with a “thankyou”?!?!? The hell with her and her thankyou” he mentaly screams with a pissed off face.

Once outside the house, Anika quickly turning ON the video call with Mallika.. “Plan is working!!!” she squeals.

“Shhh.. dont ruin it with your mindless squeals. Just go by the plan.” Mallika directs her

Anika smiles and goes for work.

Later the night around 11:15, Shivaay keeps trying for Vicky’s mobile and even after the whole 14 full ring calls he didnt pick his phone up.

“Fhat the wuck vicky.. where are you?? Why dont you pick up my calls. I understand.. i avoided you just so you dont blabber stuffs to anika. But dont revenge me now. Anika’s been missing the whole day. She hasnt come back home. Nor she attended any of my 43 missed calls. God damn it, just pick up the call and help me find her you jerk” Shivaay shouts and throws down the iphone, worth my kidney to the floor, breaking it to a thousand pieces.

“Where are you anika??” Shivaay says with his dead voice and falls down to the floor cupping his face.

He keeps sobbing for a while and suddenly he gets a call. His face all brightening up and his pink nose all sweating he rises up and attends the call.

“Hello.. hello.. Anika.. damn it answer me.. where are you.. hello helllo. Shit! The signal!!!” He screams and runs to the terrace.

Moving his phone wherever possible to find network he was so panicking. Suddenly he hears a match stick being lit up.

He turns to see Anika holding a cake with Three small lavender smelling candles lighting up the piece.

She nears him and with a smile, “Happy Birthday Shivaay” she says sighing in relief.

Shivaay was breathless. He was looking all astonished. He wasnt in his conscious. He was totally perspirating and heavily breathing minutes back but his breath has stopped the moment he saw her.

Slappppp! His fingers were literally printed on her cheeks. She dropped the cake down and stood there holding her red cheek in her hands. Anika’s eyes start to well up.

Shivaay’s too. Jumping back from the trance.. he quickly held her shoulders and started to wiggle it.

“This was a plan?!?!. Not attending my phone calls? You scared me you fool. It’s ain’t funny to get lost for the past 5 hours. What if.. what if.. you were kidnapped.. what if.. what if.. you had an accident. This isnt a surprise it’s a deadly prank.” he says and tries looking into her eyes.

“Im sorry” she finally speaks up with a sad tone.

He quickly pulls her to a tight hug and starts crying on her shoulders.

“I raised my hands on you. Im ashamed of myself. Though you made a mistake it wanst right in my part to slap you. I ruined your surprise” he speaks between his sobs.

Pulling herself backwards.. “Idiot you ruined the chocolate cake! You have a whole 24 hours to celebrate.. but look at my cake.. It looked lot more tastier. I wanted to buy this cake as a formality for you to cut and i wanted to steal the remaining entire cake for myself” she whines like a kid.

Shivaay chuckles and hugs her tighter. “Sorry. And thankyou Anika.” He says and brushes her hair.

She pulls out again and gently placing her hand on his chest.. “The best part of the Surprise is still pending. I wanna tell you something important today. That will definitely be the best i promise” she says with a blush peeping in her cheeks.

“I’ll be waiting!” Shivaay whispers back to her ears and smiles.

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How was it?? ???
Do comment ❤ tell me how the story is going ?
Have a wonderful evening guys !!! ✌✌??

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    19 Comments

    1. Chaithu on September 26, 2017 10:40 pm

      Nice and cool one
      Waiting for next surprise

    2. Najma on September 26, 2017 10:55 pm

      Its really really cool!! LOUVE the sudden jatkaas you bring in the story!!!
      I keep finding myself drifting in this story more n more, each day!! <3
      Nailed it!! Amazing chapter!!!

      P.S. Sorry for not being a regular commenter tho!

    3. Priyasaki on September 26, 2017 11:24 pm

      It’s awesome ninaku….Lovely…..?

    4. SatyendraSharma on September 27, 2017 12:07 am

      I literally keep waiting for you to post.i am getting hooked to this story??????????

    5. R on September 27, 2017 12:09 am

      It was an awesome chapter

    6. Bubblu on September 27, 2017 12:12 am

      hi da..Its a long time that i visited TU…good work ..keep up the gud wrk da…Really luved the way the track has travelled to…eagerly waiting for Ani’s surprise….Sorry I couldnt be regular..but I promise..whenever I read I will never miss to comment….Really cant wait for the nxt episode….Luv u ma..take care

    7. Nahira on September 27, 2017 12:15 am

      Awesome Dr.Do you know?I had read it about two times.Loved it.You nailed it.Now do their confession soon.

    8. alekhika20 on September 27, 2017 12:46 am

      Superb update

    9. Banita on September 27, 2017 2:28 am

      Superb part dr….
      Precap- I m Excited 4 next…. Post soon….

    10. Hkaur on September 27, 2017 4:15 am

      Awwwwwwww it was so romantic and funny too. U are just damn good in this. I will be waiting for anikas surprise and pls do their confession soon. Update asap.

    11. Niriha on September 27, 2017 5:56 am

      Awesome???lovely waiting for next part update soon
      Love you…Take care and stay safe

    12. anri on September 27, 2017 6:37 am

      Superb..

    13. Shivika on September 27, 2017 9:52 am

      Amazing Update…..Loved it ❤
      Cuteness Overloaded!
      Shivaay was really tensed. The shocking part was he slapped her but is it something realated to his past? ?
      Eagerly waiting for Anika’s surprise ?
      Update Soon 🙂

    14. UF3355 on September 27, 2017 10:59 am

      AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING PERFECT SUPERB??????
      Dear Ninaku
      ShivIka Ice Moment??Shivay Slap Anika?Shivay Hug And Apologise Her Their Talk?Waiting For Anika Surprise I Hope She Propose Her??It’s Awesome Chapter???
      Take Care And Stay Safe?

    15. nikita_jai29 on September 27, 2017 11:44 am

      It is awesome dear… Lovely update… Shivika care about each other is amazing….. Love you dear…

    16. Maryam_ishq on September 27, 2017 2:18 pm

      Amazing episode!!
      Their hug which they both enjoyed and didn’t wanna let go of each other. Shivay turnin anika afroza back to anika and brushin her hairs which were spread out everywhere… he is srsly husband goals ??. Anika trimming his beard and gettin scared when she gave him a small cut… Shivay relaxing her down and tellin tht an ice cube would take of the wound. Anika tending to his wound and shivay puttin the ice cube in her back… tht chilled feeling ? and aftr a lot of laughin and her screaming he took it out frm her back and it suddenly became hot.
      Shivay pullin anika to himself to gain her attention and their brief eye lock… he told tht she can stay here as long as she wants amd with a thank you she left and once out she would have been jumpin arnd in joy like a monkey ?.
      Shivay callin vicky but to no use and 43 missed calls to anika ?. All negative thoughts poppin in his mind abt her and he was gettin more and more worried with each passin second. And when he saw her on the terrace…. a sense of relief as well as anger came up and he slapped her ? ( i agree he was worried abt her but he shouldn’t have slapped her… he should have shown his anger in some other way… but i guess this was a bit too harsh. )
      He apologised right aftr for tht and engulfed her in a hug and showed his concern towards her. Anika turned the situation light…. i wonder wht’s the surprise.
      Can’t wait for ur next epi… hope you didn’t feel bad. Take care dear and love u loads ❤❤❤❤

    17. Zaveesha on September 27, 2017 5:41 pm

      Amazing as always….I just love ur story…

    18. pooja26 on September 27, 2017 6:57 pm

      seriously lovely chappy……
      loved it!!!!!!!!

    19. Ankita27 on October 1, 2017 5:41 pm

      Wonderful update…

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