Hell to Heaven (Riansh story) by Jasmine

 

HEY GUYS I’M BACK WITH MY 3rd TS (three shots) , THIS TS WAS REQUESTED BY @Akirti AND @Jayashree, AKIRTI AND JAYASHREE I’M REALLY SORRY FOR UPDATING LATE . I CAN’T UPLOAD MORE MY HEAD IS AGAIN ACHING , I DIDN’T EVEN CHECKED IT AGAIN , PARDON ME .
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RIDDHIMA’S POV
Hello everyone my self Riddhima , Riddhima Kabir Raisinghania , i’m living with kabir and Anupriya mom (kabir’s mom) , she taunts me a lot that i can’t be a mother , because of kabir i have to listen her taunts , i’m not at fault , kabir is at a fault , he is suffering from Azoospermia , but he strictly told me not tell her his problem , they treat me like a maid and torture me daily , always do work coz i can’t be a mother , like hell man is it my fault , its his fault . Once he slapped in front of society , what will they think about me , that what i did that he slapped in front of everyone , i told my parents that i want a divorce but , i’m ashamed because of them , i told them that it was his fault , and they said ‘ you’re a girl what will people think about us , our image will be ruin coz of you ‘ like hell man , like i have to suffer for their so-call-image .
POV ENDS
WHILE SHE WAS BUSY IN HER THOUGHTS SHE HEARD HER MOTHR-IN-LAW SHOUTING AT HER .
Anupriya ; wth where are you riddhima 😡.
RIDDHIMA CAME
Riddhima ; so..sorr..y mo..m i…wa..s just
Anupriya ; just shut up , pick up the call dammit
RIDDHIMA QUICKLY GRABED THE LANDLINE PHONE
ON CALL
R ; hello , Raisinghania Resident
Person ; hello , actually a person met with an accident and he is died on the spot , we found his wallet , it was written Kabir Raisinghania .
R ; (shocked) what
P ; yes , he is at hospital for post morten
LISTENING THE WORD FROM THE PERSON , THE PHONE FELL FROM HER HANDS M AND BROKED INTO MILLION PIECES , SHE WASN’T UNDERSTANDING WHAT SHOULD DO , SHE SHOULD BE HAPPY OR SAD , BECAUSE HE WAS THE MAN WHO HURT HER TO SUCH AN EXTANT , HE FORCED HER TO MARRY HIM . WHILE SHE WAS AGAIN LOST IN HERSELF , ANUPRIYA SHOUTED
A ; hey what happened
R ; (still Lost ) kabir
ANUPRIYA HELD HER FROM HER ARMS
A ; what happened to him , just blo*dy tell me
R ; he is died
LISTENING THE WORD ‘ DEAD ‘ , SHE COLLAPSED ON THE FLOOR AND STARTS CRYING . HAVING SOME COURAGE BOTH LEAVES TO HOSPITAL .
IN HOSPITAL
BOTH WAS CRYING , POST MODERM WAS DONE , KABIR WAS TAKEN TO HOME .
IN USA
I MAN IS SEEN SITTING ON HIS ROYAL CHAIR , WEARING A BLACK TUXEDO , FACING HIS BACK , ANOTHER PERSON IS SEEN ENTERING IN HIS CABIN , WEARING BLACK PANTS WITH WHITE SHIRT , 3 BUTTONS OPENED SHOWING IS ABS .
Person ; boss file is ready
Man ; good angre
Angre ; your flight is of evening and i have booked your private jet
Man ; ok angre you can leave
ANGRE LEAVES
THE NEXT DAY THE PERSON LANDS IN INDIA
SEEN SHIFTS TO INDIA
RIDDHIMA WAS SEEN STRUGGLING TO GET RID OF THE WOMEN WHO WAS HOLDING HER .
Riddhima ; leave me ,i said leave me !
Woman 1 ; hey , don’t disturb us , let us get ready you .
Riddhima ; but why the hell are you doing this ?
Woman 2 ; we’re getting you ready because of your husband’s last rituals .
Riddhima ; which rituals ?
SHE SHOUTED WITH FULL ANGER
Woman 3 ; in which wife has to die with her husband with in a bridal look .
Riddhima ; why
SHE YELLED
Woman 2 ; because you’re his widow
Woman 1 ; and now you aren’t pure
Riddhima ; who the hell are you to decide that i have to die .
SHE AGAIN YELLED BUT THE NEXT MOMENT SHE FELT HUGE PAIN IN HER HEAD , SHE WAS HITTED BY ROD IN HER HEAD BY HER OWN MOTHER-IN-LAW , AND SHE FELL UNCONSCIOUS.
Anupriya ; now lets take her to the morgue
EVERYONE LETFS TO MORGUE WITH DIED KABIR AND UNCONSCIOUS RIDDHIMA  , JUST A FEW PEOPLE WAS LEFT . AFTER SOMETIME THE MAN CAME , HE WAS HEADING TOWARDS THE DOOR , WHEN HE LISTENED
Woman 1 ; I feel pity on that girl , kabir and anupriya always treated her like a maid , poor she , may kabir and her soul rest in piece
Woman 2 ; yet she is not died
Woman 1 ; after when she will burn with her husband alive , she will be dead na .
LISTENING TO THIS THE MAN WAS QUIET SHOCKED WITHOUT THINKING FURTHER HE RUNS TO THE CAR . WHILE GOING HIS HAND ACCIDENTALLY HITS THE NAILS , WHICH WAS ON THE TABLE , HIS HAND STARTS BLEEDING AND SAT IN IT AND DROVES TO MORGUE
MORGUE
TWO BODIES WERE VISIBLE , LYING ON THE WOOD BED , HALF COVERED WITH WHITE DUVETS , AND IT WAS NONE OTHER THAN KABIR AND RIDDHIMA . ANUPRIYA WAS SEEN DOING THE LAST RITUALS . FIRST SHE SETS FIRE TO KABIR’S PYRE , NEXT SHE WAS ABOUT TO SET FIRE ON RIDDHIMA’S PYRE BUT A VOICE STOPPED HER . THE SAME MAN WHO VISITED KABIR’S HOUSE
Man ; stop
A SMALL WHISPER MADE A WAY FROM ANUPRIYA’S MOUTH
Anupriya ; VANSH
(I VERY WELL KNOW YOU ALL GOT TO THIS IN THE BEGINNING EVIL )
VANSH CAME NEAR RIDDHIMA’S BODY AND REMOVED THE WHITE DUVET FROM RIDDHIMA’S FACE , HE WAS MEMORIZED BY HER BEAUTY , TURNING TOWARDS ANUPRIYA HE ASKED .
Vansh ; why was you going burn her alive
HE SHOUTS
Anupriya ; its a ritual
Vansh ; which ritual
He again yelled
Anupriya ; when the husband died , if the wife is alive , she has to died with him alive
Vansh ; and what if the she died’s first , also can you burn kabir alive
Anupriya ; are you mad , why will i burn my own son alive
ANUPRIYA YELLED AT HIM
Vansh ; so why the hell you’re burning her life , doesn’t she has the right to live
VANSH ARGUED
Anupriya ; no , what will she do after her husband died , no one will accept her , even her own parents will not accept her
ANUPRIYA SHOUTED , VANSH’S ANGER WAS NOW OWN PEEK
Vansh ; why
HE AGAIN YELLED
Anupriya ; coz now she not pure , (shouts) and who the hell are you to ask this , her husband no na , so don’t interfere in our personal matter
NOW VANSH WAS VERY VERY ANGRY , WITHOUT WASTING ANYTIME HE FILLED RIDDHIMA’S HAIRLINE WITH IS BLOOD , EVERYONE STOOD THEIR SHOCKED
Anupriya ; (shocked) vansh what you did
Vansh ; (smirks) now she is my wife , you can’t do anything with her
AND HE LIFTS HER AND STARTS MOVING TOWARDS HIS CAR , ANUPRIYA WAS SCREAMING FROM BEHIND BUT HE DIDN’T PAID AND ATTENTION TO IT AND SAT IN THE CAR WITH RIDDHIMA .
Vansh ; driver take me to vr mansion
DRIVER NODDED AND STARTS DRIVING , MEANWHILE VANSH WAS ADORING RIDDHIMA
VANSH’S POV
How can be someone so beautiful her cute little nose which red , her cheeks red like tomato , her rosy pink leaves , holly shit , what i’m doing (THEN IS GAZE FELL ON HER HAIRLINE) what i did , i married her without her consent , but i didn’t done anything wrong , i saved her life , leave it , let me tell you about myself . My self VANH RAISINGHANIA , currently i was living in USA from past 10 years , i was unknown from the fact that kabir was married , he didn’t even bother to tell me , although he was again jealous of my ego , my own cousin was jealous , but his wife..opps not his now its my wife (smirks) i’m fell for her , love at first sight ❤️ .
POV ENDS
AND THEY REACHES MANSION , VANSH LIFTS RDDHIMA AND TOOK HER TO HIS ROOM , AND PUTS HER ON THE BED
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SO HOPE YOU LIKED THE FIRST PART. GUYS I WANT YOUR HELP IN IDEAS AS NEXT EPISODE WILL BE HAVING SOME CUTE MOMENTS , SO PLEASE CAN YOU GIVE ME SOME IDEA . COMMENT DOWN IF YOU LIKE IT . BYE AND TAKE CARE .

AUTHOR

JASMINE KAUR

48 Comments
  1. Prabhleen 😊

    Awesome😍

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  2. Nice os dear ❤️
    I could feel it happening in front of me
    Keep rocking gurl!!😘
    U can write something like how Riddhima narrates her incident to vansh and how he feels bad for her and encourages her to do something on her own…
    (Even I am out of ideas)
    PS: after u complete this ts.. could you write something on press conference episode or how vansh deals with his snake family

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear for the idea🥰 and USA I will try it

  3. Tanya K

    Amazing dear loving it. Post soon.❤❤❤

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  4. This is really awesome!!

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  5. Stuti Abigail Tyagi

    Wonderful ❤️
    Next part can have something like Riddhima actually loving Vansh’s caring side n Vansh emotional hearing to Riddhima’s past sufferings. Please add if u can

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear for the idea 🥰 I will surely use it

  6. Super episode. Post soon 😍😍

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  7. Awesome

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  8. AarushiSoni

    Amazing.. unique too

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  9. Amazing

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰

  10. 1234Aayu

    Awesome!!

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear aayu🥰

  11. Attractiveuser

    This is wonderful ❤️! And though this is banned now it’s still practiced in some parts of idea🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧.

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Thank u di🥰 and ye this is still happening in some places🤧

  12. Annoyinguser

    Some idiot do this 😏. They differ between boy and girl. My slippers to them. What a story loved it. Post soon

    1. Thebhooth18

      My shoes kicks and slaps to them and then i will show them my hand writting and then they will die😂😂

    2. Annoyinguser

      Handwriting 😂😂 itni buri h?

    3. Jasmine kaur

      Thanks dear 🥰 also take my slippers 😁

  13. Thebhooth18

    Seeing this the old rituals which people do with the girl who husband died the cut their Hairs force to simple.food blah blah and i.think.some stupid people do this in this cetuntry also i had a idea please make Riddhima to do job and vansh to support her and help her and jasmine dil jeet liya tumne fir ek baar tum ho ek me hazar kaisi lagi meri shayari tumhare liye😅

    1. Jasmine kaur

      Wah wah kya baat hai , mash-ha alla 🤩

  14. Amazing episode

  15. @Mj

    Amazing💞.

  16. Aishwarya Wanjari

    Awesome really amazing

  17. Unique 🙂 post soon

  18. Priyanshi_13

    Amazing 😍

  19. Amazing os please post soon.

  20. Aisha08

    Amazing

  21. Niyati12

    Amazing😍😍

  22. Amazing dear ❤️❤️❤️

  23. Parita

    Awesome

  24. Priyanka Thakur

    Awesome OS dear eagerly waiting for next part

  25. N Ayesha

    Jasmin pls continue this story in 2nd part that vansh family has accpt ridhima as vansh wife.

    1. N Ayesha

      That vansh family shower love to ridhimma and ridhimma reveal their past pain .

  26. Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍😍
    Thanks for updates 😊😍

  27. Priyadharshini

    Super 💓💓💓💓💓💓

  28. Fantastic 😊👏😍❤️😍❤️😍

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