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Home»Fan Fiction»MY heart is wid u….twinj ff ( episode 14)
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MY heart is wid u….twinj ff ( episode 14)

MABy MAMarch 13, 201720 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys i m back..happy holi to u…guys..nd again the comments decreased i dont understand in the same page many articles r there but only mine is getting so less comment… its ok..nxt part will be the last..as i think its a waste to write….

Link for previous episode
Episode 13

Episode 14…..

Its morning.. our twinj r seen sleeping peacefully in each others embrace… nd both was looking so cute… nd kunj’s sleep got disturb.. he looked at twinkle nd pecked her lips.. by his touch twinkle wakes…
Tw- good morning hubby…
Ku- good morning wifie..nd how was ur night.. i know its not for the first tym but whenever i touch u the feelings come new..
Tw- aww..kunj nd blushed than someone knocked the door…it was usha..
Us- kunj nd twinj now wake up..today is holi..
Tw- oh..fish..yaa..mummy ji we r coming…
Us- yaa..we r waiting for u..
Twinkle was about to go..but kunj held her hand..
Ku- jaan..itne saal baad hm holi manayenge..
Tw- han kunj..ab mujhe jane do.nd she left..

Nxt seen…

Kunj was getting ready nd he saw twinkle standing behind him he turned back..nd twinkle said..
Tw- kunj..hamari itni saal baad holi h..toh happy holi nd put the colors on his cheeks..kunj looked at her nd pulled her by her waist nd gone closer to her nd by his one cheek he put color on twinkle’s cheek..
Ku-happy holi jaan..
Than suddenly ruhi comes nd they parted away..
Ru- happy holi…mumma nd papa..nd put colors on them..nd said mumma i want a gift from u..
Tw- what baby..
Ru- a snall baby..than suddenly kunj coughs nd twinkle looks at kunj angrily…
Tw- y this sudden gift beta…
Ru- mumma..many childrens have small bro nd sis..i also want..
Ku- beta ur wish i will complete..
Ru- okk…papa..nd left..
Tw- kunj…ab..
Ku- ab kya..chalo..holi khelne..

Nxt seen…

The whole sarna family was playing holi..nd enjoying..(balam pichkari plays in background) all were dancing but uv was fully out of sense…cause he drank 4 glasses of bhaang…
Ku-uv apni halat dekh..kya hal bana rakha h..bhaang ke nashe mein pagal ho gaya h..
Uv- leave me..he took a flower nd sat on his knees in front of mahi..nd says..
Uv- hey..mahi..i really luv u..wi..ll.u accept me as ur husband nd he felt unconscious.. all was shocked…

Nxt seen…

The doctor checked uv nd said..
Doc- there’s nothing to worry just drinking so much of bhaang he felt unconscious… nd the doctor left..after 15 mins uv gain consciousness nd felt vry guitly..but everyone accepted his proposal nd mahi was too haapy..

Precap- twiraj..engagement…or marriage
Guys u must be thinks y i have written engagement or marriage cause u will decide it..ur comments..if i got suffering comments than i will not end if not than direct marriage..

Bye guys
Adeeba

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20 Comments

  1. maha on March 13, 2017 11:59 pm

    hey..don,t..b..heart..broken.for..less.comment
    i..luv.ur..ff..N..about..the..epi
    it..was..awsm..lovly..cute
    plzzzzz.dont..end..this
    post..next..one..soon
    show..engagement..first..then..marrige

  2. Sameera on March 14, 2017 12:02 am

    Awww adeebu soooo cute yaar ruhi wish hàhahah ????kunj too cute and don’t u dare end ur ff yaar i just loved it sooo much ?????? …
    Do cont soon …..

  3. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 14, 2017 12:25 am

    Amazing awesome fabulous….epi….

  4. mia12 on March 14, 2017 12:54 am

    Areh bapre chudail kya dhamki di hai tune..??.. ki apni ff end kar dungi bari ayi..??.. Sab ka to muje pata nai but mai toh comment karti hu na..?? Toh tu apni ff end kyu karegi..?? khabardar agar end kia toh..??.. Hope baki ki bat tu samjh gayi hogi,,??..
    Well epi ke bare mai bole twinj morning scean was AWESOME,,??????????.. And ruhi ki wish toh kamal hai bhai,,????.. Or UV toh full on bang ka nasha mai proposed karke behosh hi hogaya,,????.. well it will gud to see yuhis engagement,,???.. Ok jab time tab post karna ok,,??..
    .
    LOAD’S OF LOVE 2 U,,?❤?❤?❤?
    MUAAAAH MERI SOUTAN,,????

  5. Simiyy on March 14, 2017 2:26 am

    Hey Adeeba
    It was really good
    i found it really cute
    don’t be upset because of the comments
    post soon
    loads of love

  6. Sohi on March 14, 2017 4:14 am

    Oho so our adeeba is angry Haan
    Sorry dear for not commenting but from today I will comment daily inshallah
    Plz don’t end it so soon
    Episode was really nice
    But one doubt it yuhi or twiraj engagement
    Do continue

    • adeeba_zain on March 14, 2017 9:17 am

      Its yuhi..sorry for mistake .

  7. Presha on March 14, 2017 4:56 am

    Hey adeeba its just awesome yaar loved it to core….
    Dont worry comment mil jayenge yaar..
    Tu end mat kr ..
    Love u…

  8. SidMin23 on March 14, 2017 5:00 am

    Hey adeeba it was cute moment and ruhi wish was ???? Don’t u even think to end this ff adeeba it was cute and waiting for next episode From you and common people if your reading the ff then do comment to incourage writer as they are doing their best ❤️?

  9. Cp on March 14, 2017 6:47 am

    It is not like that dear ………?don’t end it ….?……..I toh give my comments always but sometimes I am also a bit busy?but some writers only reply to Thier best friends here?…{Sorry if anyone is hurt reading thiss}…Btw your ff is simply fantaaaasticc??????
    Do not end it and post next soon ?

  10. SidMin on March 14, 2017 9:40 am

    Loved it …. Awesome….. I really enjoyed the Holi part and Ruhi’ s wish ? just loved it …
    Love you post soon. … ❤and Don t worry the comments are less because exams are going on …

  11. RUTU..... on March 14, 2017 10:55 am

    Hey Princess,
    Its fab just loved it
    Don’t worry about comments it will increase soon
    Also loved the holi Masti,
    Love you so much ??????

  12. padu on March 14, 2017 12:01 pm

    soory for not commenting but there is a confusion why is it twirajs engagement or marriage it should be yuhis right post next one asap

    • adeeba_zain on March 14, 2017 12:46 pm

      Yaa..sorry it should be yuhi..

  13. Aamna_2690 on March 14, 2017 8:08 pm

    Hey Adeebu!
    .
    Waise yeh kya hai??How dare u say to end ur ff??lamba lecture chahiye kya? Ya phir mein bhi likhna band Karen ??Sochna bhi mat likhna band Karne ka?Aisa hota hai dear.. kabhi comment’s zyada hotey hain… kabhi less☺Don’t worry about them☺Abhi sabke exams hain isiliye…
    .
    Well teray siyappe ke chakkar mein yeh toh bhul hi gyi ?Episode was cute.. Romantic n Ruhi’s wish toh??post next episode jaldi ??
    Love u☺☺????

  14. Purvi128 on March 14, 2017 10:54 pm

    Hey adeebu or should I say my soutan..!
    U r not going to end it..! Is that clear???
    U knw mujhy bhi aj kal bht less comments mil rahy hain.., but don’t be sad yarr..! Don’t end it..!
    Its just awesome… amazing..!
    Twinj scenes were fab..
    Loved it..
    Ab post soon..,
    Nd don’t end..!
    Love you ???❤❤

  15. Amaya Bhardwaj on March 15, 2017 10:23 pm

    Hey adeeba,
    Solly Solly Solly Solly Solly yrr plz forgive me for not commenting on ur previous 2 Epi yrr Nd for commenting late too….. Actually I m busy with cllg asingnment ….. Isliye couldn’t comment on ur FF…..Or Iss week v bsy hoon toh comment ni Kr paungi…..BT NXT week SE pakka regularly comment krungi….I hope you are not angry with me yrr…..Or PTA Maine KL raat ko comment Kiya wo post hi ni hua…..
    Nd abt today’s episode dear it was soooooooooo cuteeeeeeeee sweeettt and lovely yrr…..I loved it….Toh Ruhi ki wish kab Puri Kr RHI h tu FF Mai or Thora or hot romance dikhade saadhi k functions k beech Twinj ka…..Or khabardar Jo Iss FF ko itni jldi end Kiya toh…..I want more than 50 episodes of it….. Samjhi tu…..
    Well love you
    Bye
    ??????????????????

  16. Amaya Bhardwaj on March 16, 2017 6:24 pm

    Hey adeeba,
    Yaar Solly Solly Solly Solly Solly yrr plz forgive me for not commenting on ur previous 2 Epi yrr Nd for commenting late too….. Actually I m busy with cllg asingnment ….. Isliye couldn’t comment on ur FF…..Or Iss week v bsy hoon toh comment ni Kr paungi…..BT NXT week SE pakka regularly comment krungi….I hope you are not angry with me yrr…..Or PTA Maine KL raat ko comment Kiya wo post hi ni hua…..
    Nd abt today’s episode dear it was soooooooooo cuteeeeeeeee sweeettt and lovely yrr…..I loved it….Toh Ruhi ki wish kab Puri Kr RHI h tu FF Mai or Thora or hot romance dikhade saadhi k functions k beech Twinj ka…..Or khabardar Jo Iss FF ko itni jldi end Kiya toh…..I want more than 50 episodes of it….. Samjhi tu…..
    Well love you
    Bye
    ??????????????????

  17. Ramya on March 16, 2017 7:48 pm

    Aduuuuuu it’s not fair
    If u will end ff na I’ll not talk wid u go
    But episode was amazing I loved datt part where ruhi asks about Lil sis or bro
    Lovely
    Sry for late
    Love u keep smiling

  18. baby on March 19, 2017 5:19 pm

    Ohhh addy luvd it amazing mast bindaas romantic cute adorable episode…. 🙂
    Lods of love….. 🙂

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