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Fan Fiction Swaragini

my heart with u only (ragsan nd swalak) episode 5~pavani

pavaniBy pavaniJune 24, 201663 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hiiii darlings tnk u very much for ur love nd support

Swara came by listening to sound nd saw laksh hand bleeding

Swara:laksh!!!!!wt is this ??she immediately ran to him nd tied a hand kirchief to him

Laksh:iam sorry swara I didn’t mean to do that I was just……
Swara:shut up laksh wt do u think of ur self haa by doing all these I will love you .noo I will never love you nd she left from there crying

Scene shifts
Rag got ready nd elders came nd blessed her
Suji:ok now it is your rasoyi u go nd cook

Kichen
Rag:I don’t know how to cook what to do??
She called dayal
Rag:dad it is cooking test today wt to doo I didn’t prepared for this exam
Dayaldon’t fear when dayal hear
Rag:ok how can u help mee
Dayal:I will give u slip
Rag:u will give but I don’t know anything thing
In the mean time suji entered
Rag kept phone aside
Suji(in a low voice):I know u don’t know how to cook so I will prepare u stand there at the door if uncle comes then u come hear nd I will leave
Rag cutted the call
Dayal fells happy by listening to suji
Rag stood at the door nd suji complete sabji she is about to prepare sweet rag came running by saying ram is coming nd suji left from there by saying rag sorry
Rag:thank god aunty did curry but how will I prepare sweet in the mean time ram entered
Ram:have u completed ragini
Rag:ya uncle sweet is left
Ram:don’t worry ur dad told me already that u don’t know how to cook so u watch if any one coming I will prepare ur sweet
Rag(surprisingly):u know how to cook
Ram:yaa when i fight with ur aunty na then I used to cook .ok u see I will finish it
Rag smiled nd stood at the door nd ram completed sweet

At dining table
All ate sweet first
Suji:woww rag beta u did it very well
Ram ate subji
Ram:I don’t know that u can cook .it is very delicious
Rag :tnk u mom nd dad .I felt very bad for leaving my parents but I got them in u two nd ha dad mom cooked curry nd momm dad made this sweet .both look at each other nd felt embarrassed

Sanky was just smiling at them
Suji(in a teasing tone):ur hus didn’t helped u??
Rag:noo maa actually he don’t that I can’t cook naa
Suji:he don’t know ?really??I tought till now u have known each other perfectly (in teasing tone)
Rag:noo maa now we r trying to understand each other .yesterday we talked about that only .hee na Sanky??
Sanky who was driving water splitted it out nd really felt very embarrassing nd left from there

Rag:y he left??
Ram nd suji see each other faces nd suji signs ram to talk to Sanky

Sanky room
Ram:can I come in
Sanky:yaa come in dad
Ram:soo u don’t want to move on in your life
Sanky:I don’t love rag y can’t u understand
Ram:but u r married wt her now nd u should forget swara
Sanky:I can’t
Ram:u can nd u will I don’t want my friend ship to be spoiled by your deeds
Sanky left from there angrily
he saw rag at dining table nd dragged her to there room
Suji saw this
Rag:wt r u doing ??
Sanky:r u mad what is the need to tell everything to elders
Rag:wts wrong .nd I didn’t have a habit of hiding things (she turned her face with fake anger)
Sanky:are yarr there will be some private talks between hus nd wife that should not be talked infrount of everyone
Rag:really??
Sanky:u don’t know?
Rag:noo(with a pout face)my mom nd dad didn’t hide any thing from mee
Sanky:ohh my god y can’t u understand .ok leave it from now onwards told tell to anyone what ever happens btwn us ok
Rag:ok
Sanky left
Rag immediately dailed to dayal
Rag:dadd is there any rule that the talk btwn wife nd his should not bee told to others
Dayal:are budhuu there will be some private matters that we should not share to any one
Rag :ohh he told right only
Dayal was about to ask something she cutted the call

Rag came out with a confusing face
Sanky was passing through the way nd stopped by seeing suji ng rag talking
Suji:wt he did In room
Rag:we talked?
Suji:wt u talked??
Rag was about to say something she remembered Sanky words
Rag:noo I won’t tell
Suji:to mee also?
Rag:haa we should not discuss our ptivate matters to others
Suji:privatr?
rag:haa talk btwn mee and Sanky
Suji:who told u??
Rag:Sanky..
Sanky saw this nd hold his head with his hand

Scene shifts
Laksh came to their room
Laksh:swara plzz
Swara was about to go hold her hand
Laksh:iam sorry plzz (with a pain ful eyes)
Swara was melted by seeing him
Laksh:it won’t happen again .iam really sorry .I am not doing all thise to impress u Iam just punishing my self for hurting u
Swara:plzz don’t repeat it I can’t see someone suffering for mee
Laksh(in mind):that’s y I love u .u can’t see mee suffering .I know some day u will come running nd hug mee nd tell I can’t live with out u .I love u laksh

Epi ends
Screen freezes with innocent face of rag ,irritated face of Sanky ,caring face of swara nd loving face of laksh

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pavani

    Fun loving .like to communicate with people will be happy with wt I get .

    63 Comments

    1. j on June 24, 2016 5:49 pm

      amazing Akka loved ragsan scenes ram suji rag bonding superb ka

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 7:55 pm

        Tnk u j darling

    2. Sindhura on June 24, 2016 5:49 pm

      When rags comes to knew truth she will break.
      I think then only sansky will understand her importance

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 7:56 pm

        Haa he will realise his love but that will bee late

    3. S priya on June 24, 2016 5:52 pm

      Akka akka oh god I just loved ragini was laughing while reading it so gud nd such an innocent girl…caring in laws too …
      Akka I dono whether can I call u like tat hw old r u??nd do u knw tamil???

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:32 pm

        U can call mee akka no problem nd my age is 24

      • S priya on June 24, 2016 8:45 pm

        Mine too pavani …I’m also 24 tatz y asked ur age…because here many r schl r coll gng girls nd I got oly one akka…so u knw tamil???I dono telungu dr…ten ill call u by ur name itself…

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:08 pm

        I don’t know tamil darling its ok no problem wt ever u call mee .r u married??

      • Aastha on June 24, 2016 9:05 pm

        neenga enku akka va???? nan ungala china ponnunu nenaichen. its ok. from onwards nan ungala akka nu kupuduren.

    4. Ragsan on June 24, 2016 5:54 pm

      Awesome ????
      Raginis so Sweet and innocent ????

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:33 pm

        Tnk u ragsan darling

    5. .... on June 24, 2016 5:58 pm

      AwesumAwesumm

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:34 pm

        Tnk u darling

    6. lovely on June 24, 2016 6:04 pm

      ragini omg!! her character is awesome akka

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:35 pm

        Tnk u lovely darling

    7. rafeee on June 24, 2016 6:07 pm

      he he rag so cute…. superb…

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:35 pm

        Tnk u rafee darling

    8. Prakriti on June 24, 2016 6:08 pm

      Wow di Ragini is so funny…You are awesome di…I was a silent reader of your ffs…I am swasan nd raglak fan but I also love Swalak nd ragsan..For me pairs doesn’t matter…Only story matters…
      All the best for your ff…
      Love U lots Di??

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:37 pm

        Love u too prakriti darling nice to see a person who don’t bother about pairs

    9. anjaly on June 24, 2016 6:18 pm

      ragini was so cute and the episode was mindblowing

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:38 pm

        Tnk u anjaly darling

    10. ammy on June 24, 2016 6:29 pm

      Superb dear.ragini is so funny

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:39 pm

        Tnk u ammy darling

    11. Aneri on June 24, 2016 6:36 pm

      Loved it

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:40 pm

        Tnk u aneri darling

    12. sherin on June 24, 2016 6:45 pm

      Awesome epi dii…loved it very much

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:41 pm

        Tnk u sherin darling

    13. anonymous on June 24, 2016 6:45 pm

      awww!!rag n San r so cute….lved today’s ff šŸ™‚

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:42 pm

        Tnk u anonymous darling

    14. Dhara on June 24, 2016 6:47 pm

      Awesome

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:46 pm

        Tnk u dhara darling

    15. Yashal on June 24, 2016 7:07 pm

      Ragini is so sweet
      Ragsan umahh n u too ☺?

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:46 pm

        Tnk u yashal darling

    16. Priya15 on June 24, 2016 7:22 pm

      Hahaha.. My stomach is paining…. I was just laughing.. Oh god love this ragini.. Kitni innocence hai usme.. Love this type of ragini to the core… Love u di.. Amazing part.. I m laughing now also thinking abt it…

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 8:59 pm

        Ha ha ha tnk u sissy I was happy to make u all happy

    17. SPP on June 24, 2016 7:25 pm

      Awesome Superb
      Ragini’s is really innocent and what Suji and Ram did was so adorable
      Waiting for the next one……….

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:00 pm

        Tnk u spp darling

    18. viviyen.mary on June 24, 2016 7:54 pm

      Super

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:01 pm

        Tnk u mary darling

    19. megha123 on June 24, 2016 7:56 pm

      Omg ragini is so…..cute with lot of innocence ???chala nice part akka love ragsanā¤?ā¤

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:04 pm

        Tnk u chelli

    20. Crazygirl on June 24, 2016 8:35 pm

      Awesome darling

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:04 pm

        Tnk u crazy darling

    21. Pammy on June 24, 2016 8:37 pm

      Awwwwww:-*:-*:-* too cute superb awesome actlly no words to xpress….i was grinning like an idiot nd my bro z giving me r u mad look:-P chaala bagundi chaala chaaala bagundi ragini aithe asalu entha cute undoo:-*:-* waiting fr nxt part eagrlyy

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 9:05 pm

        Tnk u very much pammy darling

    22. Maha on June 24, 2016 8:51 pm

      Awesome as usual

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 10:14 pm

        Tnk u maha darling

    23. Rasha on June 24, 2016 8:58 pm

      oh god this much innocents really rag is impressing sanky r not dnt no but am totally loved rag.. then laksh so loving he was..

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 10:16 pm

        Tnk u rasha darling

    24. Aastha on June 24, 2016 9:07 pm

      akka epi chala funny ga undi. ragini intha innocent ka undi. soooo cute. am saying again san is soooo cute when he smile. lak lage mugudu thoragaliku tavam seyyali. so sweet he is. love u akka. keep smiling.

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 10:16 pm

        Tnk u very much sanku darling.yaa every girl wants a hus like Laksh

    25. lata on June 24, 2016 9:09 pm

      Hilarious?? ragini is soo innocent.really loved ragini u lightened the my mood.ooh di love u .u ff is superb??

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 10:17 pm

        Love u too darling

    26. ragsan on June 24, 2016 10:04 pm

      Superb can u plzz give me the link of previous updates actually I missed them I tried to Google out but I didn’t find it

      • pavani on June 24, 2016 10:19 pm

        Tnk u ragsan nd ya I will try to give my previous link

    27. pavani on June 24, 2016 10:46 pm

      Tnk u darling

    28. little princess on June 24, 2016 11:46 pm

      Ragini rockz…loved ragini’s innocence… Never thought that she is this much innocent…loved kitchen masti…i was feeling bad for lucky…my poor lucky…sissy dont make my lucky suffer much..it was awesome episode…. Love u sooo muchhh

    29. sss on June 24, 2016 11:47 pm

      nice awesome…loved innocent ragini she is really cute in this character even lash so caring….waiting for next part

    30. Amna on June 25, 2016 12:11 am

      Ohh ragini is so funny ??? she is innocent like a child. And appi aisa sasural hme mil gaye too mere too din hi ban jaye.

    31. Nami on June 25, 2016 12:18 am

      Awww ragini is soo cute n innocent. M in love with ragini. It was amazing. I just loved it.

    32. pavani on June 25, 2016 12:24 am

      Tnk u

    33. lisa on June 25, 2016 1:38 am

      oh god ragini was helping her dad wid pummi aunty muah wat a innocent heart she has , pure soul love ragini alwayssssssssssssss

    34. Akshata on June 25, 2016 6:20 am

      ragini is so funny. i love this ragini. love the bonding between dayal and ragini. no words for ram and sujata, they r the best in-laws. wish every girl will get i-laws like them (including me). you just rocked it.

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