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Home»Fan Fiction»my heart with u only (ragsan nd swalak) episode 16~pavani
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my heart with u only (ragsan nd swalak) episode 16~pavani

pavaniBy pavaniJuly 4, 201656 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hiiii darlings tnk u for ur wonderful love nd support

Rag:dadddd??
Dayal:yess
Rag immediately hugged him emotionally
Dayal:I told u naa Janaki she too missing mee
Rag released the hug
Rag:I really missed u dad nd u know wt I want (with a weak smile)
Janaki:if ur serial is completed then can we come in
Rag:sorry maa I missed u too
Janaki:lierr I know u loves ur dad more than mee (with fake anger)
Rag(with proud face):y not he is like that
Rag nd dayal gave hifi Janaki gave an angry look
Ram nd suji welcomed them
Dayal:wr is sanky??
Rag was shocked
Ram nd suji were abbout to say truth
Voice:iam hear unclee..
Ram,rag nd sujiwere shocked
ram rag suji (at a time):sanskarr
Sanky,dayal and janaki were surprised for their reaction
Dayal:y all r u were shocked
Ram:nothing voo he went to tour nd came suddenly that’s y??
Ram nd suja saw Sanky angrily
Sanky didn’t understand anything (he dont know that every one knows truth)
Ram:u came early??
Sanky:haa my work completed soo .
Dayal:very nice soo we can have some fun time then
Rag was still in a shock there were many questions running in her mind
Dayal:rag wr have u lost ?is everything fine ?
Rag came to senses
Rag:nothing just like that nd she saw Sanky questiongly

Scene shifts
Laksh was preparing breakfast while cutting onions he cutted his finger (as he is very disturbed he is thinking about swara)
Suddenly some one hold his hand
Laksh saw them
Laksh(with a shock):swara??
Swara:can’t u be carefull see how deep it was cutted
Laksh at once hugged her tightly
Laksh:u came backk
Swara was shocked nd she released the hug
Swara:u know it already
Laksh by bending his head :yess nd he explained her everything
Swara was crying due to happiness
She hugged him with lot of love
Swara:u know everything nd send mee with him
Laksh(with tears escaping from his eyes):u will bee happy naa
Swara:closed her eyes with pain .iam sorry laksh I didn’t recognized it till noww
Laksh:hugged her more tightly
(He have no words to tell about his happiness )
Swara released the hug
Swara:I want to tell wt happened there
Laksh:by putting his finger on her lips :noo need I trust u
Swara:hold his hand nd kissed it :I know u trust mee but I should tell u wt have happened there if any day in an anger if u point out my charecter then I can’t live .then ur respect in my eyes will become low which I can’t bare
Swara explained everything
He hugged her again
Swara:I love u laksh.
Laksh:I love u too

Scene shifts
Sanky:I will come by having bath
Rag gave a fake smile

Dayal was observing rag don’t know y he feels that there is something fishy

Rag:u too get fresh up dad nd mom we will have our lunch all together

Dayal:yehh I was also little tired due to travelling I will sleep for sometime
Janaki:I will help u in kitchen
Suji:noo need u too take some rest we two will managee
Dayal nd janaki left
Ram nd suji hold rag hand nd took her to her room
He saw Sanky there nd gave him a tight slap
Sanky was shocked he hold his cheek nd was looking with confusion
Suji:now y u came back .
Sanky:wt do u mean mom??
Ram:u really don’t know wt we r talking about ??
Suji pushed rag towards him
Suji:u never tought of her before running away with that girl.
Ram:how can he think of a girl when he never tought about his parents
Sanky and rag were shocked
Suji:u have done this much but still atleast she didn’t told us too as we will be heart broken if we come to know about ur truth
Rag was shocked after knowing that they came to know about the truth
Sanky saw rag who is crying nd feels very bad
Sanky was about to say the truth they heared a sound of a glass broken
Every one turned that side nd were shocked to see the person

Epi ends
Screen freezes with shocking face of rag,ram,suji nd Sanky
I know its smalll one but situation demanded nd sorry for not updating yesterday voo actually ur jijuu feels insecure that I gives much time to my home than him he he he actually he needs some attention when he is at home soo trying to give him some timee(otherwise noo net offer naa)

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pavani

    Fun loving .like to communicate with people will be happy with wt I get .

    56 Comments

    1. Sindhura on July 4, 2016 5:31 pm

      Ofcourse its dayal

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:11 pm

        He he he u know it

      • Sindhura on July 4, 2016 7:19 pm

        Ofcourse yar i can guess your writing now

    2. Akshaya on July 4, 2016 5:37 pm

      nice akka . is that janki?

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:12 pm

        Nop it is dayal

    3. Crazygirl on July 4, 2016 5:37 pm

      Supetb di

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:13 pm

        Tnk u crazy darling

    4. Priya15 on July 4, 2016 5:40 pm

      first of all….jiju is so possessive haaa…aap jiju se kahiye ki even we need time with our di….haha just kidding di…..emotional epi..waiting for next epi….and di u r enjoying my stress in studies haa??? u know di 11th is so interesting they are asking us to concentrate in academics then they itself say us to participate in all competitions..really lot of enjoyment with study load…i think i cant cmnt regular next week as i m having my mid term xm…it starts on 11th and ends on 18th…from 18th onwards i l cmnt…and ya i l try to cmnt whenever i get time..but surely l read it..but cmnt karna mushkil hai..par koshish karungi..aaj jaldi cmnt kar liya na……jiju ko bhi time nikhalo varna vo naaraz ho jaayenge ham sab par….haha just kidding di..love u dii…

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:14 pm

        He he he noo worries studies are main u carry on nd all the best nd I think iam going to end this before onlyy .

      • Aastha on July 5, 2016 7:55 am

        enduku akka intha thoraga end sesthunnanv….no akka …we want more from u…ofcourse akka net offer ki bawa kavali. akka nenu sepenu ragsan seperation kavali kani san susthey pavanga undi akka….try to post next part soon.

    5. Piya on July 4, 2016 5:44 pm

      Awesome part… post nxt part asap

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:15 pm

        Tnk u piya darling

    6. anjaly on July 4, 2016 5:45 pm

      as always awesome chapter

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:16 pm

        Tnk u anjaly

    7. j on July 4, 2016 5:45 pm

      superb if its possible today next part

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:16 pm

        Tnk j I will try for it

    8. jezzachinnuS on July 4, 2016 5:54 pm

      HEHEH GIVE MORE TYM TO JIJU AND UR HOME.
      NO WORRIES WE WILL WAIT DI..
      AND THANKU FOR THE UPDATE IT WAS AWSOME. 🙂
      WILL BE WAITING FOR NEXT EAGERLY.

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:18 pm

        Tnk u jezzz darling I will try to poste it soon

    9. Fairy on July 4, 2016 5:57 pm

      Wowwww….loved it di….its awesome…..plz update nxt part soon…i thnk dayal is dat person…

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:18 pm

        Tnk u fairy darling ya it is dayal

    10. lovely on July 4, 2016 6:12 pm

      nice akka, if possible make it long

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:19 pm

        Tnk u lovely darling ya I will try

    11. Lila on July 4, 2016 6:16 pm

      Awesome of course family comes first…take ur time

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:20 pm

        Tnk u lila darling

    12. Sanam on July 4, 2016 6:24 pm

      Itz janaki.. Plz update nxt prt soon yaar.. Iam eagerly waiting

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 7:21 pm

        Tnk u sanam darling I will try

    13. Ashrita on July 4, 2016 6:57 pm

      Fabulous slap… Nice dear so u r going to start ur way of story now… This Rag makes me remind of ha ha hasini ???

      • Pavani on July 4, 2016 9:05 pm

        He he I too like her character tnk u akshita Darling

    14. cute girl on July 4, 2016 6:59 pm

      very nice …

      • Pavani on July 4, 2016 9:06 pm

        Tnk u cuty

    15. sss on July 4, 2016 7:00 pm

      awesome episode Di..atlest swalak got together now its time for ragsan bechara shanky has to suffer so much n I’m enjoying it….n of course give some time to jiju but don’t forget us in that even we need our di to spent time with us also right…waiting for next part

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:25 pm

        He he yep he needs some attention from mee nd tnk u sss darling

    16. rafeee on July 4, 2016 7:06 pm

      hehe jiju is so possessive ri8??? ?… inik ff sama superb…. nethu panvnganu wait panite irndn rmba neram… anyways thanks akka….

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:26 pm

        Tnk u rafee but I didn’t get ur meaning I don’t know tamil

      • Aastha on July 5, 2016 7:57 am

        actually she waited a long time yesterday for ur ff but u didnt posted it. todays epi is superb….thats it akka.

    17. dharani on July 4, 2016 7:11 pm

      nice

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:28 pm

        Tnk u dharani.darling

    18. Amna on July 4, 2016 7:15 pm

      Nice epi. Jiju ko khush rakhiye or we will not get our updates.??

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:29 pm

        He he he yep I will nd tnk u amna darling

    19. Venni on July 4, 2016 7:22 pm

      Awesome

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:29 pm

        Tnk u venni darling

    20. sherin on July 4, 2016 7:27 pm

      very nice di….awesome…

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:30 pm

        Tnk u sherin darling

    21. pammy on July 4, 2016 7:37 pm

      Yeah dii..its good bt short anyway we can understand…so come bak with nxt epi as soon as possible

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:31 pm

        Yaa I will try to come back soon

    22. fira on July 4, 2016 7:51 pm

      Wow….what a epi sis….I have no words to express my feelings…..pls make more ragsan scenes and eagerly waiting for ur updates

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:32 pm

        Tnk u fira yaa now there will be more ragsan scenes only

    23. megha123 on July 4, 2016 7:57 pm

      Nyc akka bare sometime for ur husband .otherwise we don’t get our updates .haha ?? just joking ?? I can understand ur situation as my family also does the same thing especially my amma she scolds me 4 nt spending time with family and then will warn to snatch my mobile & I pad ????BTW today’s epi is awsm now it’ll be interesting to watch dayal so what he does with ragini

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:34 pm

        Yepp they always think only we r using our phones more wt can we doo nd tnk u megha darling

    24. SPP on July 4, 2016 9:08 pm

      Awesome Superb
      Now what will happen dayal came to know the truth
      Waiting for the next one ……….

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:35 pm

        Tnk u spp darling yaa I will update next one soon

    25. lisa on July 4, 2016 9:30 pm

      Love rrags so mich

      • pavani on July 4, 2016 10:36 pm

        Tnk u lisa darling

    26. Nami on July 4, 2016 11:33 pm

      Di u again ended it on an interesting note. Any ways no worries. It’s becoming really intresting now. Loved it. Try to post the next part soon. Till then enjoy with jiju??

    27. Yashal on July 5, 2016 3:18 pm

      Very

    28. Yashal on July 5, 2016 3:19 pm

      Very nice and sis plz tell jiju that even we need our di ☺

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