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my heart is with you by sukor epi 12

SukorBy SukorMarch 15, 20176 Comments3 Mins Read
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Suraj’s pov
“Chakor, why would you come in front of me, why? If something happens to you then how will I live?”I cried.
“Suraj, I understand your pain but you need to go out of this room” Chakor’s mom said.
“Please, can I stay here? I can’t leave Chakor in this situation. It’s going to kill me” I begged.
“Suraj, you won’t be able to see her wound” she said.
“Is it that bad?”
“Yes, I am afraid so but it could have gotten worse. If you hadn’t pushed her a little to the side, she could have gotten hurt in the chest”
“We can’t even take her to the hospital because of the stupid, Kamal Narayan” I yelled in frustration.
“It’s ok, suraj. I’m here and I can handle all this. Don’t worry” she encouraged me.
“Now go out”

I went out of the room and sat on a chair in the living room. I saw Chakor’s picture on the wall. I started crying again.
“Chakor, I don’t want to lose you. I want to live with you, be happy with you, and share my sadness with you. Please don’t leave me”
Then I look at the small temple.
“God, please save my chakor. I never believed in you but chakor did so please don’t risk her life” I pray.
No one was allowed here because of Kamal Narayan. He had said that no one could be here except Chakor’s mom but I pleaded him to let me be here as well. He agreed after a while. I am so worried about Chakor. A minute feels like an hour and an hour feels like a day. I just prayed and cried while waiting. Then I heard a weak but strong voice.
“Suraj, Suraj”
I knew who it was. I ran to the room and saw my chakor. Her eyes were open, her hair messed up. She looked so weak.
“Suraj” she said

I ran up to her and took her in my arms carefully.
“Are you okay, chakor? Does anything hurt?” I ask impatiently.
“I’m fine” she said weakly.
“I’m so happy to see you recovered” I said happily.
“I’m so happy to see you alive, too” she said.
I kissed her on the forehead. She looked at me with her expression sweet as honey and we just looked at each other.
Someone coughed behind.
“I will go, I think you too need some privacy” Chakor’s mother teased.
We both looked at each other in embarrassment.

That is all for today. So about the twilight saga thing. I have a question. Do you guys want me to replace it with my other fan fiction, Me and you? Since not that many people read I thought I should replace it. Plz comment.

Precap: Happiness for Sukor and sadness for Kamal Narayan.

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    Hi, I am huge fan of sukor and swasan. my name is preet and I love reading and writing ffs about sukor.And I write 3 ffs, if you get time please read them and comment.

    6 Comments

    1. sukorlover on March 15, 2017 10:37 am

      Interesting update, happy that chakor is fine. Loved their romance.No need of replacing me & you. I love that story as well. You can write twillight story without replacing any ongoing story

    2. Aanya on March 15, 2017 1:48 pm

      Its also aweeesm.yes no need to replace.conti.please i lov ur ffs so much.

    3. sukorFan on March 15, 2017 2:05 pm

      Bring altogether another ff on twilight. Loving this story.

    4. vinlora on March 15, 2017 2:58 pm

      Loved the episode. ..Actually this is what I want in real udaan ..and somewhere I feel at the end of the bandwa track chakor’s life will be in danger while saving suraj. ..update next part soon dear. ..

    5. Tanvi on March 15, 2017 9:01 pm

      It was amazing! I really loved it. Please update ASAP!

    6. Dil d on March 16, 2017 10:14 am

      It was a lovely update. Dnt think tht less people read cz smtimes there cn be silent readers as well.even smtimes I also frgt to ccomment.i like the other ff as well. Do continue

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