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Home»Fan Fiction»This Heart Of Mine Still Loves You ( Prologue)
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This Heart Of Mine Still Loves You ( Prologue)

GummiebearBy GummiebearMay 27, 201640 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey dear people starting a new fan fiction…..I hope I manage to entertain you this time too….Guyzz I don’t know whether you will like it or not….so do let me know should I continue or not…..even if it z a no do tell me frankly….till then love you all…..
It was a unfortunate night for all of them…..They had lost the most important person of their lives….they were sanking in darkness by each moving second….as they glanced at the dark sky all they remembered was that disastrous night…..they had lost their chashni whose only specialty was to spread light in this dark world…..all she knew was to spread happiness everywhere and now when she was no more all they had was emptiness….they were all dead bodies without their souls….

The huge maleficent mehra mansion was lost in darkness without its light……everything was lifeless….loveless….everyone was shattered…..that cursed and horrible night had snatched their bundle of immense joy now nothing was left…..

A man was staring at the moon without blinking his eyelids….. He was traumatized after all the horrible events of the day…..his eyes reddened and sore…..tears streaming doing his eyes…..every cell of his body was crying in pain…..every breath had only one name that was radhika…..his body was burning in anger…emptiness…. Loneliness…..all his senses were numb…. his heart was breaking every second…. All he remembered was his radhika who was dead for the world…. But he believed that she was alive somewhere…. If his heart was beating then how could her heart would have stopped….they were two bodies one soul…..

Suddenly he got up and marched to his master bedroom…. his room filled with his beloved soulmate’s portraits pierced his heart like glass pieces….. He felt a rush of extreme pain in his heart…he walked to her huge wallsize portrait hung exactly infront of his bed….he touched her brown beautiful eyes reflecting positivity and immense love for him…..his fingers lowered and stopped on her aristocratic nose….he acknowledged that it appeared slight red whenever she was angry….his fingers traced patterns on her glowing face…..he touched her cheeks which turned crimson whenever he gave her intense stares or touched her…..all the memories were flashing in front of him….

His POV….. You had promised me that you will never leave me alone….. Seven promises… seven lives you owed me….you couldn’t even keep one of them…..radhika if you wanted to leave me alone in darkness why the hell did you brought light in my dark world…..you only reminded me everytime that you are my panoti and panoti never goes away then why you broke your promises….. I can’t leave without you….he shrieked….. Did you hear me radhika arjun mehra I can’t live without you….even if God comes down and tells me that you are dead I won’t believe him…..you cannot leave me alone….I will find you by hook oror by crook…I will bring you back in my life…..you think you can get away that easily no you are highly mistaken….once you are back you will have to pay for each tear I have shed…..no one will be as bad as me that day……you torture me now I will return you all this torture the day I find you…..

He was brought out of his thoughts when he felt a hand on his shoulder…..his face lightened with hope to find his radhika…but he was terribly disappointed to find Sam infront of him….he barked…. Go away Sam….leave me alone….you think you can take radhika’s place in my life than you are terribly wrong….. She saved you from all dangers but you selfish woman never understood her love and affection towards you….just get out of my sight before I kill you….
Sam in a pleading voice…. Arjun I know its my fault….but I swear I didn’t do anything intentionally….

He spoke with pure rage in his eyes…..Sam don’t test my patience…. I am only controlling myself for Neil and radhika otherwise I would have killed you long back…..you know what’s the difference between you and radhika….her love was unconditional but your love was always selfish…. everything was a lie…. It was always about you and no one else…..you never loved and cared for anyone except yourself….. but radhika always thought about others….
He grabbed her hand in his ironic grip and dragged her outside the room ignoring all her pleadings…..

As he threw her outside of his voice….he spoke with immense hatred….Sam if I see you again this time I swear on all love I have for radhika I will kill you…..I hate you from the core of my heart but I love radhika more…..she loved you unconditionally so I can’t hurt her…..but I can never forget what you did with her…..I am only sparing you because Neil z important part of my life….I can’t lose him….Now get the hell out of here….

He left Sam in a ocean of guilt….she got on her knees and buried her head in her kness…..she was crying bitterly for her best friend whom she had hurt alot in last few days…..she wanted to apologize but her chashni had gone away with sparing her a chance to repent….all the disgusting words she said to radhika was echoing in her ears…..all that memories were to toring her apart….her body had given up but her heart was only refreshing one name that was radhika…..
So guys this z it….now tell me should I continue or not….

Precap…..Neil’s cold behavior towards Sam…..Arjun’s search for radhika…..all questioning his madness towards her….

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    40 Comments

    1. priya on May 27, 2016 2:09 pm

      dear it’s awesome …….too good ……….you should definitely continue this

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 4:54 pm

        Thanks Priya dear?will surely continue…..loads of love?

    2. sammy on May 27, 2016 2:19 pm

      Suppu darling …tussi chota packet bada dhamaka Ho…. yaar ab bad arjun ko khub talashne do radhika ko really …maza aa gya yaar ….love u a lot lil sissy:-) πŸ™‚

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thanks alot Sammy darling?love you?

    3. aastha on May 27, 2016 2:21 pm

      You brought out the immense pain of Arjun in losing Rads………..each wrd screams his pain…..felt sad 4 Sam though she deserves it………………plzzzzzzzzzzzz update the nxt 1 sooooooooooooo……………….love u my cutie pie…………TC………….

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 4:56 pm

        Thanks assthu?will update chp 1 soon…. Love you?

    4. Rosie on May 27, 2016 2:22 pm

      Ayeeeee…..supu dear do u really think we don’t like ur ff??? If that was the case then whose ff we like….u r amazing in every way…hope i can find u …then u even can’t imagine what I will do….m veryyy happy that you write another ff…supu standing ovation…lots of love dear…m spellbound now??

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 5:00 pm

        Thank you so much di…..you always encourage me….God knows what I will do without you….it z my hearty wish to meet you someday….hope it gets fulfilled…. will update chp 1 of this one soon….. Devil u will c by tom evening…. Love you….muaaah…tc?

    5. Sv on May 27, 2016 2:24 pm

      supriya pls do continue i wanna read more. this is an awesome start. love u dear.

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:18 pm

        Thanks sv dear…..will surely continue….loads of love….. Tc?

    6. Dhara on May 27, 2016 2:24 pm

      Superb πŸ™‚

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:19 pm

        Thanks dhara?love you?

    7. gayathri on May 27, 2016 2:27 pm

      Suppuu I luv my darling doll another ff grt dr I like it……… ds one is original track ????? Pls keep writing & update ur devil’s child missing dt ff badly……..bear hug& lots of kiss fr u ……. πŸ™‚

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:22 pm

        Thanks gayu darling?nope darling this z not starting from the the time she left him…..all that events have happened in their life but m exploring a new plot…..in this one she z dead for the world but arjun believes she z alive…. hope you got the brief…..loads of love?

    8. Rg on May 27, 2016 3:04 pm

      Hi supriya lovely ff. I loved d title and story. Is it by chance connected to d original mmz? It seems tat way. I mean too many things r similar. Whr is rads? It seems she has disappeared. If it’s so. Fantastic. If it’s another plot then awesome. Either way I love all ur ffs. By d way I was a bit late in commenting for love u forever. But I have commented. Pls check it and if possible try to answer d questions. By d way this one is toooooo gud . Pls update soon. Miss u. Tc. Hugs to u.

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:26 pm

        Thank you so much Rg…. you always encourage me I m really very grateful for that……abt this plot it z not starting from the time she left them to go to rishikesh….she z dead for the world but Arjun has a strong belief she z alive…..u will know more….. I will c ur comment on love you forever…will reply you soon…..loads of love….. Tc?

    9. Jessie on May 27, 2016 3:17 pm

      Supriya… very different start..do continue… but tell me Rads is alive isn’t.. Loved Arjun’s dialogues… expecting a different shade of Arjun too.. not a devdas..lol..

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:28 pm

        Thanks Jessie darling?loads of love?

    10. Gauri on May 27, 2016 3:23 pm

      this is amazing dear…pls update soon πŸ™‚

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:29 pm

        Thanks di?loads of love?

    11. subha on May 27, 2016 3:27 pm

      awesome episode please conti…eagerly waiting next update…….tc

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:30 pm

        Thanks subha dear?love you?

    12. Sweetie on May 27, 2016 3:44 pm

      It’s super duper awesome.. πŸ™‚ Plzz continue it dear πŸ˜€
      Stay blessed πŸ™‚

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:31 pm

        Thanks sweetie?love you loads?

    13. Brin on May 27, 2016 4:07 pm

      Interesting and amazing episode, please continue with the story. πŸ™‚

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:32 pm

        Thanks brin?loads of love?

    14. Roma on May 27, 2016 6:22 pm

      Whoaaa….supriyaaaaa. …what was this….rads dead….nooooo…..arjun…so mad on her leaving him alone n determined to find her….what had Sam done with chashni…..arjun’s anger n his murderous words to sam were very dangerous……this is very interesting, unique n heart wrenching plot…….kahan se laati ho itne mind blowing ideas my sweeeeeetheart???….I’m in for it…..plzzzzzzzzzz continue dear. …honeyyyy plz let me know your ID for chatting. …I wanna connect with you. …I’m on hangout….my ID is Roma A……keep it up honeyyy….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh, lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:37 pm

        Thanks Roma di?you are elder so calling you di…..just realized it sometime back…..you are such a darling…..m on the moon after seeing your comment…… di m not on hangouts you tell me your name on Fb…..will send you request…… will update asap…..love you…..muaaah…… Tc?

    15. Gianna on May 27, 2016 6:29 pm

      You should continue this Supriya very nice start. I loved it

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 8:37 pm

        Thanks Gianna?loads of love?

    16. suga on May 27, 2016 9:06 pm

      priya darling its really fabulous?✌? loved it?? specially arjun dialogueif his heart s still beating den how could her heart would have stopped✌? superbbbbbbbbb ?? but if arjun finds rads he can’t punish her coz she s his heart ?? love u darling??

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 11:11 pm

        Thanks alot suga darling?loads of love and million hugs for you?

    17. Emz fasa on May 27, 2016 9:18 pm

      Mindblowing awesome πŸ™‚ pls update next part today itself

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 11:11 pm

        Thanks emz dear?will update soon…..loads of love?

    18. anandi on May 27, 2016 9:25 pm

      awesome..all your ffs r too good

      and I m a silent reader and this s my first comment..

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 11:13 pm

        Thanks anandi dear for your comment?stay blessed?

    19. deeva on May 27, 2016 10:04 pm

      The only world came out from my side is…… awesome… incredible…… u r amazing…… plz continue and update soon

      • Supriya. on May 27, 2016 11:13 pm

        Thanks deeva?love you dear?

    20. susi on May 27, 2016 11:30 pm

      Wow jaanu…..pls continue soon …iam excited to read this new one…love u lot ..tc…

      • Supriya. on May 28, 2016 1:40 am

        Thanks sweety?loads of love?

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