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Home»Fan Fiction»I am your heart, you are my heartbeat (Kaanchi) OS by Niyu
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I am your heart, you are my heartbeat (Kaanchi) OS by Niyu

niyatiBy niyatiSeptember 15, 2017Updated:September 15, 201739 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hii my dear readers & silent readers,your drama queen is back with happy ending kaanchi os . A big thanks & lots of love to all who comment on previous one. I think i hurt many kaanchi fans. Hope u forgive me . This one is dedicated to all kaanchi fans . Koi galti ho jaaye toh maaf kar dena.

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Kabir P.O.V

I was usually busy in my work on my laptop like a workaholic . Suddenly,my heartbeats become faster. I could feel her presence that she is very near to me . She knock on the door & I look at her. Whenever she come in front of me , I lost my senses. Now , this only happen with me . I continuously looking toward her or u can say lost in her beauty.

Saanchi P.O.V

I knocked the door twice but he was continuously looking at me . His gaze make me uncomfortable as I don’t want to lost in his honey brown orbs.

This time I knocked with a lil bit irritiation & as a reasult he come in his senses.
“Come in ,Dr.Sanchi” He said to me . Embarassment is clearly shown on his face as I caught him while checking out. His condition was like that parents caught their children with their results. He is khadoos but sometime look so cute……Ahh….Sanchi what are u thinking? I just patted myself in mind.

“Sir, ur file which u want” I said to him & keep the file on his desk . I was about to go when Mr.khadoos call me. I turn toward him & give a questioning look to him. “What do u want now” I said sternly.He nod his head in no while I was leave from there.

I was blabbering” I don’t understand him . Everytime he called me with file . Am I looking his servant to him. Khadoos he never change ”

” O maharani maybe he think u as his wife . This work is for wife na” Pragya said to me
while Isha & veer chuckle on her statement . I nod my head in disbelief as they start their teasing session.

” Ohoooo look someone is blushing “veer said to me while Praish too join him.
“Shut up guys , I have no interest in that Kk.I am not blushing” I said in my defence though my cheeks turn crimson red but it is not visible to them as they are busy in thinking.

” What are u guys thinking?” I asked them.
“We tried to find out the meaning of Kk” Praishveer said together.I nod my head as I give him so much name to him & everytime they tried to understand the meaning of my names.

” I get it , It is Kabir kapoor right sanchi”Veer said to me .

“Nalayak , today i know u also have some brain”Pragya said to him while he make faces & Isha chuckel.

” No, it’s khadoos kapoor guys” I said sarcastically to them while they look at me with a shock.

“really u make my hottie khadoos. How many names u give him” Isha said to me while I start counting the names ” Akdu , Jailor , Khadoos.” They sign me to stop but once my train is started it never stop without met with an accident. ” Any name remain ” Someone asked me. “Ya, Hitler” I turn toward the person & shocked to see Kabir. I cup my mouth with my hand while my gang is disappear like Mr.India.

“Dr.Sanchi meet in my cabin after five minutes .Get it ,don’t be late” He said to me with attitude & turn other side. “Don’t be late” I mimick.

“Don’t mimick my words Dr.Sanchi” He said looking toward me while I look at him with shock.

I take baby steps toward his cabin & waste the time how much I waste as he forget about it. At last, I reached in danger zone but stand outside . He was holding a pen in his fingers.

“Come inside ,u already waist ten minutes Dr.Saanchi”He said while looking at me.

I crossed my fingers .

” What are u saying I am hitler,khadoos,& what not…..” He said to me .”You forget about jailor & Akdu” I said to him & he gave me a deadly glare.

” I think I am not feeling well, I am going” I said to him.

” Don’t behave like innocent soul” He said to me.

” Is this any manner to behave with ur senior” He asked to me while I said sarcastically to him” I am just talk about my first crush”.Finally when I realized what I said cupped my mouth with my hand & looking toward him who is smirking.

He move toward me & i think in my mind “Now u are gone ,fully gone saanchi. He will definitely kill u”. He start coming closer me & i move backward with a shock which I get from his behaviour. At last I got stuck between wall & him. He leaned down on me while I close my eyes. My heartbeats become faster . He whisper in my ear” first crush ..hmm”. I lost my senses & said ” No, it’s my first love “in a reply.He smiled sheepishly at my innocence.

” U decide it later whether it is crush or love but I already decided that it is love. I love u Will u marry me ? “He said while bend down on his knees. I get another 440 volt shock.

“Just give the answer” He said to me while I don’t know how to react. I just hug him with happiness . He too reciprocate .
” Ya, I will marry u . I love u too” I said to him while he placed ring in my finger. He is about to kiss me when Praishveer enter in his cabin while singing ” Ho gaya hai tujhko toh pyaar sajna…………….inkaar sajna”. He is hell irritated with this while I smirk at his condition. ” Shut up! What are u three doing here” He asked them. ” You guys are peeping from outside , I give whole one week record duty in punishment” He added this. ” Dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye”Veer sing while they two join him.I burst out in a laughter but this smile faded away with his words ” You too join them Dr.Saanchi for that names as rules are equal” .I look at him with shock while Praishveer chuckels.

” You can never change.Mr.khadoos” . I said while they three leave as they don’t want no more punishment.
” Never leave me , We are always together like heart & heartbeats . I am ur heart & u are my heartbeat.” He said to me while holding my hand.
” Never khadoos” I said to him as this is new beginning of our life.

——————————————————————————————-Hope u guys like this. You guys are not bored with this. Don’t throw tomatoes on me warna TU mein mere aansuon ki baad aa jayegi. Do coment & Keep smiling. Be happy & stay safe.

With so much love & wishes
Niyu(Drama queen).

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    39 Comments

    1. riyarocks on September 15, 2017 8:43 pm

      haha Niyu dear…….such a hiarious one………tumne apna naam sahi bataya, drama queen…….haha…….. hmmm….tomatoes ki jagah kisses bhej rahi hoon…….pakad sako toh pakad lo…..haha……..u r so adorable dear……..just luv u………

      • niyati on September 15, 2017 9:26 pm

        Hahaaha Thank u so much di . Glad to know that u like this & I become the reason for ur smile. I caught ur kisses btw if u throw tomatoes,then i also i caught it just kidding .don’t mind ha. Luv ut too. Gn & Sweet dreamz .tc.

    2. Priyanshi on September 15, 2017 8:51 pm

      It was awesome episode.
      Pls try to make 2nd part if u don’t mind then
      It was fabulous.

      • niyati on September 15, 2017 9:30 pm

        Thank u so much sweetie pis for ur comment. I don’t mind anything . Ya,whenever I got time I planned a sequel fo u dearie.Gn & sweet dreamz.tc.

    3. Amnaa on September 15, 2017 9:30 pm

      it was soo nice

      • niyati on September 15, 2017 10:25 pm

        Aww,thank u soo much sweetie forc ur comment. Gn & sweet dreamz. Tc.

    4. Tiya on September 15, 2017 10:09 pm

      Hey niya… Can I call u niya?? If u don’t mind…nobody will throw tomatoes but everyone will ? love and lots of kisses and hugs to you… Sorry kuch jyada Ho gaya ….your episode is mind-blowing, excellent, marvellous etc.. etc.. etc

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 8:57 am

        Aww,thank u so much sweetie pie for ur comment. It really means a lot to me.Lots of love to you too . Gm . Have a amazing day.

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 8:58 am

        U can call me whatever do u like my sweetie pie.

    5. Abhilasha on September 15, 2017 10:28 pm

      Wow yr it was Ossm…. Loved it from bottom of the heart and plz add an epiloguefor it!!

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:00 am

        Aww ,thank u so much di for ur comment as well as for suggestions. Glad that u like this. Gm, have a amazig day.

    6. Dhruti on September 15, 2017 10:30 pm

      hii niyati it was just fabulous especially this scene:
      “How many names u give him” Isha said to me while I start counting the names ” Akdu , Jailor , Khadoos.” They sign me to stop but once my train is started it never stop without met with an accident. ” Any name remain ” Someone asked me. “Ya, Hitler” I turn toward the person & shocked to see Kabir. I cup my mouth with my hand while my gang is disappear like Mr.India.

      “Dr.Sanchi meet in my cabin after five minutes .Get it ,don’t be late” He said to me with attitude & turn other side. “Don’t be late” I mimick.

      “Don’t mimick my words Dr.Sanchi” He said looking toward me while I look at him with shock. ”
      ha ha what a scene!!!!superb one

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:03 am

        Aww, thank u so much di for ur comment . It really means a lot to me. Glad that u like this one & I become the reason for ur smile. Gm,Have a amazing day di.

    7. niyaaa on September 15, 2017 11:12 pm

      Hey drama queen happy to see u back with dhamakedaar os and sanchi aisa lag rha tha ki sanchi ki jagah tum ho drama queen seriously u r so sweet and ur ff too… Lovvv it a lot and plzzz ganga jamuna mat bahana agar bahani h to tumhare os ki bahana sweetie tc and post nxt soon i miss u …

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:07 am

        Hii di, Thanks for ur sweet & lovely comment . Glad that u like this.Awww, thank u so much di for so much praise btw u are too sweet. Ganga , jamuna nahi bahungi di .Ya whenever I got time i post next one . I miss ur comment . Gm.Have a amazing day . Luv u.

    8. anu on September 15, 2017 11:33 pm

      Nice story

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:08 am

        Aww , thank u so much Anu dear for ur comment . Glad that u like this. Gm,have a amazing day.

    9. RuCh23 on September 16, 2017 12:22 am

      Great one Niyati ???

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:10 am

        Aww ,thank u so much ru di for ur comment . Hope u don’t mind as I call u by this name . Glad that u like this . Gm,have a amazing day .

    10. Ashnita on September 16, 2017 1:29 am

      hi drama queen nice to meet sweetie iam thriller queen. just kidding. this was outstanding superb mindblowing ravishing lovely historic fantastic and many more

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:13 am

        Hii my thriller queen , thanks for ur comment. Glad that u like this.It really means a lot to me . You are too sweet .Gm.Have a amazing day.

    11. Moonlight25 on September 16, 2017 4:06 am

      Niyu di, I just loved it….it was so good….i couldn’t control my laughter throughout the OS…you are amazing dear and yea instead of tomatoes i am throwing flowers and kisses…plz catch them softly…you are great dear..love you loads

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:16 am

        Aww, thank u so much moonie for ur comment . Glad that u love this & I become the reason for ur smile. Ya I catch ur flowers & kisses very softly . You also a very great & amazing writer. Lots of love & kisses to u .Gm,have a amazing day.

    12. Sanjukta on September 16, 2017 7:58 am

      Awww hw cute wala os…just loved it..

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:54 am

        Aww,thank u so much cutie pie . Glad that u loved this. Gm, have a amazing day dear.

    13. AnahitaAnnie on September 16, 2017 8:18 am

      Superb one Niyati!!! It was a very cute happy ending.. And all the scenes and dialogues were awesome. Especially their cute arguments. I read it a lot of times.. And each time was totally magical..Totally loved it..?

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:56 am

        Aww,thank u so much Annie . Glad that u loved this as u are my inspiration. It really means a lot to me that u found this one magical.Gm, Have a amazing day sweetie.

    14. Alia on September 16, 2017 9:00 am

      Amazing

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 9:48 am

        Aww, thank u so much sweetie pie for ur comment. Glad that u like this one . Gm.Have a amazing day.

    15. Miss-golgappa on September 16, 2017 11:17 am

      Ye tho superb hona hi Tha aakhir tumne Jo likhi hai?……abhe Yar writing se mar nee ki iradha hai Kya……it was so so nice I just loved it and I laughed a lot….in Remo style I will give you 15+ …..niyu ese hi likh the rehna..

      Love you alot
      By your bestie

    16. niyati on September 16, 2017 12:01 pm

      OMG someone pinch me inni saari tareef mere liye ……………Abe yaar ab rulaogi kya ……..Thanks for ur comment sana,it really means a lot to me .It is the best feeling whenever I see ur comment in my post as u are one of my favourite writer as well as my bestiee. Glad thar u love this & i become the reason for ur smile. Keep posting ur ff. I am in love wirh that. Lots of love & kisses to u my bestie.

    17. japnaaz_gill on September 16, 2017 3:39 pm

      Lovely OS!!!! Though i dont watch this serial but i enjoyed ur OS,,,,,its too funny especially “Hogya hai tujhko to pyar sajna ” was hilarious….keep writing Niyati dear!!!!
      With lots of love 🙂

      • niyati on September 16, 2017 7:11 pm

        Aww , thank u so much di for ur comment .It really means a lot to me . Glad that u like this & i bring the smile on ur face. I am happy to see ur coment bcoz u are my di .Ya, I keep posting as this is my di command. Luv u too. Gn & sweet dreamz.tc.

    18. Ishika on September 17, 2017 10:09 am

      Damn funny Niyu di. I am silent reader of ur ff. Why u didn’t post dastaan . I am waiting for kaurwaki past. plzz don’t discontinue that ff.

      • niyati on September 17, 2017 1:48 pm

        Aww, thank u so much ishi for breaing ur silence . Glad to know that u like this one & i bring smile on ur face . I post next part of dastaan ,it is already published my dear. Take a look & I don’t discontinue that . I was lil bit busy & stay tuned sweetie. Ya, i disclose kauru’s past soon but it take some time dear.

    19. Jessicca on September 17, 2017 6:15 pm

      Niyu dear it was awesome… Fantastic… Outstanding and especially the dialogues.. Omg can’t stop laughing … Loved it yaar.. Thank you for writing this beautiful OS

      • niyati on September 17, 2017 9:21 pm

        Thank sweetie for ur comment. Glad that u like this one & i become the reason for ur smile. It really means a lot to me.

    20. Kashu on September 19, 2017 2:21 pm

      Awesome one dear.. Loved it a lot.. It was funny as well as romantic.. Really enjoyed reading it.. And so sorry for the late comment.. Actually, mere exams chaalu hai.. Iss liye maine itna late read kiya.. And whenever u would write something, plz send me the link.. I would love to read them..

      • niyati on September 19, 2017 2:35 pm

        Aww , thank u so much dear for ur comment.It really means a lot to me . Glad that u loved this one & i bring smile on ur face. Don’t say sorry dear as No sorry & thank u in friendship . All the best for your exams . Take care.

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