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hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 3

administratorBy administratorJune 19, 201629 Comments5 Mins Read
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hy guyssss me maria again!!
well guysss m so happy to see ur supporting and respondings seriously guysss thanks alot once again!! ๐Ÿ™‚
always keep supporting loving and commenting like this ๐Ÿ™‚
so lets start:
(shravan and pushkar both reach kapoor villa ,they go inside and looks around there is no one in the living area)
shr: kahan hain sab??
(one maid come to both)
maid : hello sir (to shr) hello sir
(shravan signs pushkar to ask)
push: umm hum yahan sumo se milne aai hain kahan hai wo or sab ??
maid : sir sab terrace par hain or suman mam kisi kaam se bahir gai hai
shr: aate hi!!!???
push : ok no prob hum wait karlen gai
shr: ji nai koi wait nai kare ga jab us se mera…mera mtlb hai hum dono ka wait na kis toh hum kyun karen chal ghar baad mai mil lena!
push: bhai!! suno toh aray yr sab se toh mil lo…. preeti se toh milne do na!! bhai!!!!
(but shravan go outside in sit in the car )
(pushkar comes our sadly n sit in d car with him)
push : bhai kia ho jata agar wait karlen gai toh
shr: tujhe karna hai tu kar mai nai karopon ga or waise bhi saari umar ke liay aagai hai yahan pr phir mil lena na..!
(shr signs driver to start the car)
here pushman reach malhotra mansion :
push: bhai had ho gai hai ap ne mujhe preeti se bhi milne nai dia!
shr: abay saale tujhe bht tadap ho rai hai usay dekhne ki shaadi ke baad ji bhar ke dekh lioooo
push: shaadi mai boht time hai….
(here suman has reached kapoor villa after visiting the NGO)
suman enter in house n sit on sofa relaxing same maid comes to her with juice n say)
maid : madam ap se pushkar sir or shravan sir milne aai thai
sumo: pushkar or shravan!??! kab ? !!
maid: madam jab ap gai hoi thii
sumo: oooh god bechaare kitni mujhe toh late ho gaya hai kab aai thai or kitni dair wait kia??? (she feels bad for dem)
maid : madam 4:00 ke kareeb aai thai or wait nai kia ap ka puchaa or chale gai
sumo: they must be angry with me aisa karti hoon chali jaati hoo malhotra mansion bat kar leti hoon lekin i am so late aisa karti hoon kl chali jaaao gi hmm thats a great idea…
nexr day:
KV (KAPOOR VILLA)
(here suman is all ready to meet wid shravan and pushkar)
sumo: chalo bs nikal hi jaati hooon aisa na ho phir late ho jao
(she leaves 4 MM (malhotra mansion)
here MM (MALHOTRA MANSION)
(shr is busy in finding some books in his cabnet but he dosen’t find and of these )
shr:shit yr kahan chali gai pushkaaar!!!!
(push comes)
push:yeah bhai kya hoa??
shr: aray yr meri kuch books nai mil rahi tunneee dekhi hain kya??
(push nods no)
shr: acha tu jaaa ab lagta hai library se hi laani pare gi acha wo car keys de zara mai library ja rha hoon
(he takes the keys n leave)
(on the road both shraman cars cross eachother but they couldn’t see eachother title track plays in the BG)
(sumo reached mm and find push there )
sumo: heyyy there !!!!! pushkar (she happily hugs him) kaisa hai tu???
push: mai handome cute intelligent hoon tu bata tu kaisi hai?? ๐Ÿ™‚
sumo : mai beautiful charming or attractive hoon (naughtily)
(she looks around )
shr kahan hai she asked??
push: bhai library gai hoi hain tu aana beth aajain gai 1-2 ghante mai
sumo: ek do ghante…??!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ nai nai mai itna wait nai kar sakti mai library hi ja rai hoon us se milne see u soon byy!!
(she leaves)
in LIBRARY: sumo is trying to find shravan but couldn’t see him
sumo: aray yr ye kahan hai mai bhi kaisi pagal hoon uski pic tak nai delhi kabhi or aagai yahan usay dhooondne….
(she tries to find him)
sumo: yr plzz kuch aisa hi jai wo khud hi mil jaiii mujhe plzz god help me
(itne mai she collides with a tall handsome guy yes it was shravan)
both: sooory soory !!
sumo: i am so sorry i didn’t see u
(shr looks at her and is surprised)
(shr in his mind NGO girl!! )
sumo : kuch kaha??
shr: nai….nai toh
(sumo helps him picking up his books
she starts to leave but he call her)
shr: excuse me!! ap.wo i mean can we…..?
sumo: actually mai yahan kisi ko dhundne aai hoon wo wo mujhe mil nai raha so if u dont mind can i go??
shr: i will..!! nai.. mera mtlb hai wo table jo hai counter ke side pr lets go sit there may be jisay ap dhooond rai hain wo counter pr a jai
sumo: ๐Ÿ˜€ u r tooo smart let’s go
(dey sit on table)
sumo :hmm ?? toh tum konsi books lene aai ho ?? story books??
shr: amm nai mai course ki books lene aaya hoon
sumo: course ki mtlb??
shr: engineering part 2.
sumo: great!!! mai bhi engineer hi banna chahti hoon !!
shr: wow nice miss..??
sumo: oh so sorry forgot to introduce myself hyyy ! i am suman .. suman kapooor
shr: hy i m shravan malhotra….
(suddenly he realizes her name and looks at her in shock)
(she also looks at him in shocked n happiness)
suman: shravan…
shravan: tum…??? sumo…….
(screen freezes on both shocked faces)
precap: shraman convo..

hope u guyss like today’s part plzzz plzz plzz comment guysss i will do my best to make u all entertain…!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
love u all…!!! [4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: โคโค
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?

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29 Comments

  1. sumo on June 20, 2016 12:22 am

    it was pretty cute… “tummm” part was too sweet.. โœŒ keep it up..

  2. maria on June 20, 2016 1:08 am

    thanks alot for commenting sumo di ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. sanjyoti on June 20, 2016 7:55 am

    Awsm I like it vryyyyyy much ,waiting for next part

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:25 pm

      Thanks u soooo much for commenting sanjyoti !! Definitely post my next 1…! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Fatarajo on June 20, 2016 8:20 am

    haha nice episode especially the last part and i appreciate the fact that u r writing this ff in both hindi and english

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:19 pm

      Thanks a lot fatarajo !! M glad that u like my ff and the fact of my writhing keep loving and commenting on my ff like dis always…..!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. LovelyLady on June 20, 2016 9:00 am

    awsm epi yar…..
    thw way u set the BG n other looks… is jst fab…..
    mujge to ab tensn h ki itne ache ff k samne mera ff kaun padhega?????

    • Khushi on June 20, 2016 9:41 am

      I will read di……main zarroor padhungi….infact all will read…..aapka concept Kuch aur hai and Maria ka kuch aur…..we can’t compare ur ffs di…..u both are amazing??

    • LovelyLady on June 20, 2016 10:01 am

      aawwwww thnks dear….
      love u a lot

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:18 pm

      Awww ๐Ÿ™‚ thank u sooooooo much for commenting lovely dii !! M very glad u like ๐Ÿ™‚
      Ap ko tension Leni ki Zaroorat hai hi nai kyun ke Mai ap se hi to inspired hoooon aur ap ka ff toh har koi parhe gaaaaaaaa Mai toh zarooor par hooon gi or phir ap ke concept ki toh kya hi baat hai phir…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    • LovelyLady on June 20, 2016 1:45 pm

      soooo cute…..
      love u :-*

  6. Shalini on June 20, 2016 9:03 am

    I am very excited for the next episode. Keep writing Maria.

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:22 pm

      Thanks a lot for commenting shalini …! ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Lily on June 20, 2016 9:05 am

    I loved it……. Nice epi n post ur next epi soon…

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:23 pm

      Thanks a lot for loving and commenting on my ff lily definitely post my next 1 ……! ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Khushi on June 20, 2016 9:39 am

    Wah wah wah…..Maria I m in love with you yr….kya amazing ff hai Teri…..I liked the shraman meet very much and the way pushkar and sumo talked ……it was very sweet…..keep it up dear…..and post soon
    …..love u alot

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:11 pm

      Aww thank u soooo much dear !! ๐Ÿ™‚ m very glad u like it !!!! Yeah definitely post my next 1 soon

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:21 pm

      Love u tooooo khushi a lot lot and a lot !! ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. niya sharma on June 20, 2016 11:02 am

    Nice love the way sravan stops sumo ask him to spend time with him by execuse
    Keep going

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 12:20 pm

      Thank a lot dear m really glad u like it !! Keep commenting like this ๐Ÿ˜‰

  10. Bhoomi on June 20, 2016 2:49 pm

    Superb Maria… Last part was best… Waiting for next part post soon….

    • Maria on June 20, 2016 3:24 pm

      Thanks a lot bhoomi 4 commenting bhoomi dii !! ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. BEING A SILENT READER on June 20, 2016 3:04 pm

    loving ur ff last part was really really really awesome waiting for next episode pls post it asap

  12. Maria on June 20, 2016 3:26 pm

    Thank a lot for commenting being a silent reader ! Definitely post my next par ASAP !! ๐Ÿ™‚

  13. WeirdSister on June 20, 2016 4:12 pm

    Nice keep it up!

  14. WeirdSister on June 20, 2016 4:12 pm

    Nice keep it up!..waiting for next part

  15. sona on June 20, 2016 4:22 pm

    Hey..maria..I too liked the last part..nice one..?โ˜บ
    Continue..
    Continue…??

  16. Maria on June 20, 2016 5:10 pm

    Thanks a lot weirdsister definitely post my next 1 soon !! ๐Ÿ™‚

  17. Maria on June 20, 2016 5:38 pm

    Thanksssss a lot sona di !!

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