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hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 16

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Hy guys !! ๐Ÿ˜€
Thank u all fr cmmnting!! On prev prt !! Keep cmmntng n loving….! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Part 16:
continue frm prev prt…….
— Shr is thinking.abt Sumo—
—he remembers smthng n goes to ram n nirmala—
ยซยซ door knocked ยปยป
Ram : cm in….
Shr: hey dad……i wanna talk to u abt smthng…..
Ram: yeah sure…..
Shr: dad i will join company…….aftr i will get my engineering degree ๐Ÿ™‚
Ram is soo surprised n nirmala also she stands up…..
Nir: but u said u will nvr evr join malhotra industries as it is boring …….. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Shr: i said dat…….but now wat i am syng is my final desicion….
Nir: oh lekin is ka mtlb ye nh ke tumhari shaadi nh karwai jai gi…. ๐Ÿ˜€
suman se…… (she says naughtily)
Shr: AP ki marzi (he smiles) (n go bck to his room)…..
Both r cmpletly surprised by dis…….nirmala thinks smthng……—–…..—-
—-3 days pass lyk dis—-
At kapoors villa all r gather for dinner includinf shravan group—-
Nir: priya……actually i want to talk abt smthng if u dont mind…..
Pri: ofcourse u can y would i mind…..???
Nir luks at ram—
Ram: anurag….priya bhabi….hum Shr ke liay suman ka rishta mangana chahte hain… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
All r shocked—-
—-silence—- fr secs….
Shraman luk at eachothr—in shock—
Anurag n priya breaks d silence—
Aurag: ram ye hamare liay boht khushi ki baat hogi agr Shr se Sumo ki shaadi hoti hai……
Priya hugs Nir—-
All r happy except trisha……
Tia gives a thumbs up to Shr- ๐Ÿ˜€ — he smiles ๐Ÿ™‚
ram : aray ek bar baccho ki marzi toh pooch lo…… ๐Ÿ˜€
anurag: suman Shr kya tumhe ye rishta manzoor hai…???
Both say : if u r agree then i have no prob….. (n den luks at eachothr)
(both r happy vryyyy happy ๐Ÿ˜€ but didnt show their happiness)
Sumo cms to Shr: hey……umm…..tumne shaadi ke liay han kyun kari….??
Shr: kyun ke mom chati thi…… Or tum bhi toh yhi chahti thi na….?? ๐Ÿ™‚ (he smiles n walks awy leaving hr confused) she smiles ๐Ÿ™‚
Sumo: chati thi toh nai lekin ab chati hoon…..
Trisha cms frm behind:
Oooh Sumo how can u say yes fr marriage?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
s: y nt????
T: i think u dont want Shr to be happy…..huh??
S: wat u mean?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
t: babyyy……. Cant u evn c…..he is nt happy wid dis marriage….!!
S:wat…!!!???
T: yep!! he dont evn luv u how can he be happy!???
—-Sumo luks dwn in sadness—
S: but he said yes……….. ๐Ÿ™
T: dats because or Nir aunty……u knw that he nvr evr deny his parents order…..or phir us ne tumse khaa bhi toh hai ………..
Sumo is vry sad—–
Tr: luk at him…..( she makes Sumo luks at Shr)
He is so happy wid his frnds……. ( shr was laughing wid his frnds)
—-actually dey all r teasing him by d name of Sumo—–
—-n trishaaa ki bacchi knws dis—-
Tri: he is so happy……but if be will marry u his happiness will be ruined fr evr…..
S: no i….i cant see him sad….i….i love him
—–trisha is shocked—-
Wat!!?? U…u luv him??
Sumo sadly nods—–
Tri in mind– no no no…..Shr ko ye kbhi pta nai chlna chahiay…..
Tr: plzzz yr return him his lyf……..plzz
Sumo: Wat should i do……??
Tri: go back to London……..
Screen freezes—-

Precap: Shr to arrange a date fr Sumo ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ aaj mai usy bata doon ga how much i luv her!!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ Tia: i am vry happy fr both of u……on d othr hand Sumo to leave India forever…….

So guys how ws d ep n how ws d Precap…..!?? ๐Ÿ˜€
dont worry sm good moment will cm up soon ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
So here is d ques: Wat do u think will Shr find dat Sumo is leving him?? will he able to stop her???
Give ur views through Cmmnts …….! ๐Ÿ™‚
N yeah socho sochoooo ans bhi zarooir dena ๐Ÿ˜‰
silent reader m dsprtly waiting fr ur Cmmnts…..!
By frnds !!
Love u all!! ๐Ÿ˜€

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45 Comments

  1. Lily on July 3, 2016 8:58 pm

    Amazing … I am waiting for the next part…..

    • Maria on July 3, 2016 9:42 pm

      Thanks dear…..! Keep loving n commenting !! ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. sanjyoti on July 3, 2016 9:03 pm

    Plz don’t create misunderstanding btw them,n I think shravan will stop sumo n confess the feelings

    • Maria on July 3, 2016 9:42 pm

      Hahahah don’t worry dear I already sad in lasts at good things r going to happen soon!!
      Stay tuned……. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. WeirdSister on July 3, 2016 9:07 pm

    Very good….keep it up…waiting eagerly for f next epi
    ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Maria on July 3, 2016 9:44 pm

      Thanks a lot WS !! Keep loving n commuting like dis !! ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. sona on July 3, 2016 10:00 pm

    Maria..shravan..ya..suman..ka tho pata nahi..??par yadhi tum chaho..tho ek pal mey sub kuch badal sakti ho..?????
    Aur..mujhey lagta..hai..shr pakka sumo ko ROK lega ..aur ha..us good time k liye..him besabarisey..intzaar rahega..???โ˜บโ˜บ

  5. Maria on July 3, 2016 10:21 pm

    Hahah thanks a lot sona di!! ๐Ÿ˜€
    Nice tukka ๐Ÿ™‚ let’s see wat will happen ๐Ÿ™‚
    N yeah good tym and wala hai

  6. Angel_pari on July 3, 2016 10:31 pm

    Ahhhhhh this trisha!!!!!!!!
    Loved the epi ohhh i,m eagerly waiting for that good thing post soon

    • maria on July 3, 2016 10:57 pm

      I hate hr but dont worry us ka bhi ilaaj ho jai ga ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Thanks fr cmmnting Di!!!

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz on July 3, 2016 11:33 pm

    Ohhh Trisha ki bachiii ?? .. ep was superb … I think suman will not go … sharavan will stop her? .. waiting for shraman moments .. post soon ??

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:02 am

      Thanks alot dear……!!!! M really glad u lyked it….!! Keep cmmnting dear…
      Yeah their will be shraman moments soon… ๐Ÿ™‚

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:20 am

      Btw fatima will u be my frnd??

    • Fatimagulesarfraz on July 8, 2016 1:29 am

      Ohhh so sorry !!!! Mene apka reply abi dekhaaa … well frndship … I think I don’t know u … so m feeling hesitation? .. hopefully u will don’t mind Han ?

  8. Naina on July 3, 2016 11:53 pm

    Maria ap hum se itny questions pochti ho lekin ap ne abhi tak mery question ka reply nahi kiya…….kya ap sab i mean ffs writers and readers mujhse frndship karo gy …….mujhy apni shoti si ffs ki family ma accept karo gy????? plz yarr do reply I’ll be waiting

    • maria on July 4, 2016 12:59 am

      Aray naina dear i already said dat in my prev prt Cmmnts u can c….
      I m saying again dear y nt….. ๐Ÿ˜€ i will be very pleased to have such a nice frnd lyk u dear….!! ๐Ÿ™‚ welcome to our choti si family…… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ !!!!!
      Lots of luv…..!!

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:04 am

      Plzzzz yr ab tum bhi replyyy kari i am alsooo waitingg ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ dat if u read it dear…..!!

    • Naina on July 4, 2016 2:22 am

      Yeah i read it and thanks for accepting me can i do me a favor plz????? Can u introduce me wd ir choti si family????? Actually i love making frnds but mujhy samajh nahi aati k frndship ka start kesy karon

    • maria on July 4, 2016 10:48 am

      Yes ofcourse but kuch memebers aj kl missing hain such as Fatarajo lavwly Di n khusi
      baqi members angel Di nikita ufaq aff Sumo Di sona Di abhi kittu n many more….tum already is family ka part Jo dear…..!! Kisi se bhi baat karlo every treats u lyk a family member….! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • ufaq on July 4, 2016 9:21 pm

      Oh hod naina y r u asking permission of getting entry sweetu
      Anyway welcome to our family sweetheart
      Kese ho????
      Age kia h apki?????
      Kis class main parhti ho?????
      From where u belong????
      So sorrrry itne share questions k liye answers needed
      And ya will u be my friend main a
      Naina naina naina oh god I like ur name very much

  9. Pretty Preeti on July 3, 2016 11:53 pm

    Outstanding and I think shravan will definitely stop her and misunderstanding will be cleared soon

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:05 am

      Thanks alot Preeti dear…..!!
      Nice tukka lets c Wat will happen….!!
      I will be vry glad to c ur Cmmnts on next parts also dear…..!

  10. Pretty Preeti on July 3, 2016 11:54 pm

    By the way I am preeti and I love ur ff a lot

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:08 am

      I m Maria….! naam toh sunna hi hoga :D. hahha just kidding (its a dialoge of srk) thank u sooo much fr loving my ff dear……
      U also loved d way u described abt me n othr brillant ff writers ……..
      Dear u r amazing tooo i believe….!! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:09 am

      Btw Preeti will u be my frnd??

  11. Anamika on July 4, 2016 12:08 am

    Yeah my guess was right….. osm epi Maria …. waiting for nxt part….??

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:10 am

      Ur guess is always ri8 dear….! ๐Ÿ˜€
      thanksssss alot fr cmmnting keep loving dear…..!

  12. ufaq on July 4, 2016 12:12 am

    Knock knock Mario kese ho I hope u don’t mind if I call u Mario will u?? Anyway the epi was amazing but there should b no separation plzzzzzzz order h mera lol acha keep it up love u and ya plzzzzzz pray

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:13 am

      Opening d door………
      Hy api mai theek AP kaisi ho??
      Absolutly nt a problem Pyaar se Jo bhi kho ๐Ÿ˜€
      Thankssss alot api m really glad y lyked it!!
      AP ka order slakhon pr….. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Their will be a happy ending fr sure..!!

    • ufaq on July 4, 2016 9:07 am

      I m gud Mario and weather oh god garmi ki hakumat h

  13. ufaq on July 4, 2016 12:14 am

    Karachiiiiiii Mario halat tho hain wahan ke ?????
    And ya I don’t mind and I m from lower punjab

    • maria on July 4, 2016 1:16 am

      Hah!! ๐Ÿ˜€ halat sahi hain…….. Karachi kai!!
      Wow lower punjab !! ๐Ÿ˜€ nice how’s d weather their!??? ๐Ÿ˜€

    • ufaq on July 4, 2016 3:04 pm

      Karachi main garmi??? Seriously????

    • maria on July 4, 2016 10:50 am

      Garmi!!!?? same here ๐Ÿ˜€

    • maria on July 4, 2016 6:43 pm

      Yep !! Boht!!

  14. Pretty Preeti on July 4, 2016 7:32 am

    maria u r my friend already dear no need to ask

    • maria on July 4, 2016 10:40 am

      Awwww thanks alot dear….! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Pretty Preeti on July 4, 2016 2:51 pm

      BTW I m from Punjab

    • maria on July 4, 2016 6:41 pm

      Wow punjab !! ๐Ÿ˜€ btw India wala punjab ya pak wala ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Prettypreeti on July 4, 2016 7:37 pm

      India wala punjab

    • maria on July 4, 2016 11:10 pm

      Ooooohoo ๐Ÿ˜€ wow!!

  15. silent reader on July 4, 2016 9:11 am

    awesome story….waiting for the next part…plsss update soon…

    • maria on July 4, 2016 10:39 am

      Thanks alot silent reader…..!! I will be very glad to c ur commnts on my nxr parts also!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  16. Nikita on July 4, 2016 4:06 pm

    This was amzing..ShraMan ki shaadi but sumo leaving.. No… I think shravan will go to the airport n propose… Post soon

    • maria on July 4, 2016 6:43 pm

      Well very nice tukka dear…! ๐Ÿ˜€ lets se Wat will happen !! n thanks fr cmmnting!!

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