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Hate Filled With Love!! Chapter-4

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Juhi in her thoughts looking at Neil from outside the room…
Juhi; Neil… I will make everything fine… don’t worry… I will bring the smile to you…I am so happy and also angry today at the same time… happy as Shwetha aunty called me for help… And Angry at that stupid girl for coming back again in our life… I will never leave you Avni… I will kill you… now that’s the only way to get rid of you…..

Juhi leaves…

Neil is sitting in his room thinking about the change in Avni… Thinking about her was making him angrier….That incident was repeatedly coming in his mind…

Flashback;
Neil gets the call and leaves from office… He reaches the house where the caller told him…
He tried to call the number back but it wasn’t responding…

Suddenly he gets some message from an unknown number…
“Hey, Mr Neil Khanna… go inside and see the truth yourself…

Neil(in mind); Yes I will go and prove you that my Avni can’t cheat me… and then I will find out who you are… and will make your life hell …

Neil moves towards the house… He knocks the door.. but there was no response.. he again knocked no response… suddenly he realizes the door is not shut down…

Neil opens and goes inside…and was shocked to see
His Avni was hugging someone and also kisses him on his cheeks…
Tears roll down his cheeks… he slowly says; Avni…

Avni shocked to Hear Neil’s sound… she turns and was shocked to see her Neil standing lifeless…

Avni; Neil…

She holds him by his shoulder…

But he pushes her hand away…
Neil; don’t touch me… you lost everything…

Avni; What happen, Neil? How you came here?

Neil; Ohh yea you are right. I shouldn’t have been here so that you can enjoy…

Avni; What are you saying, Neil…

Neil; I feel ashamed of myself to see this…to see my wife in someone others hands…

Avni; what Neil.. how can you think like that…

Neil; I hate you Avni.

Avni was shocked to hear the words from him… she takes a few steps back… Neil leaves…

Flashback ends…

Neil; I can never get off that day… each and every day from that day when I close my eyes…. that seen comes to my mind…. Your betrayal comes to mind… every day I think what was that which was missing in me that you go to some others hands…
I hate you Avni. I hate you…

Neil suddenly gets a call…and he wipes the tears rolling down his cheeks and attends the call…
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Neil; who is this…why should I meet you…
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Neil; Ok… I will come to meet you at evening……

At Juhi’s room,
Juhi was looking at Avneil’s photo… She tears the photo into two….She laughs loudly….

Juhi; Avni…. Tommorrow will be your last day… why are you not going away from Neil’s life…that’s why I am gonna kill you… if you have gone away from his life forever… then I did not want to do this…When I was to kill you early…… I got a chance to create misunderstanding between you…… and you guys without any effort parts away. so I thought not to kill you….but know you came again… now its good to kill you as if Neil come to know the truth then he will never become mine if I killed you too… so I should kill you before he came to know the truth….Tommorrow you will take your last breathe… and will sleep forever and leave from Neil’s life forever…And Neil will become just mine……

At Avni’s home….
Nevia comes to Avni…
Nevia; mom…its time for my music class… I am going… see you…

Avni; ohh yea…its time… I will drop you there…

Nevia; no mama… I will go with Rama uncle…you don’t worry…

Avni; I will drop you…now I don’t have any work too…

Nevia; no mama… I want you to take rest…i will come back soon.. bye…

Avni; ok bye…take care

Nevia leaves…

Avni; Whenever I saw my daughter…that day comes to my mind… where my family and my love left me… while someone held me and give a reason to live…

Flashback;
Avni at hospital

Avni; Doctor…is everything okie…

Doctor; Avni….everything is ok…you should be happy…and its a good news Avni.

Avni(surprisingly); Good news…what doctor??

Doctor; Avni….you are gonna become a mother

Avni(happily); what? omg… I am so happy… I could not say what I am feeling now…Doctor, I should leave… I want to say this happy news to my family…ok bye doctor thank you…

Avni leaves from the hospital…and was driving to home thinking how will be Neil’s face when he hears this news… the brightness of becoming a mother was shining on my face… She keeps her hand in the stomach…“Hey, my baby… I am so excited to say about you to ur dad…”

Suddenly she gets a call…
She shockingly replies; “I will come their soon…”

She turns her car in other direction…. She reaches a place…An old man comes in front and says; “he is inside….”

She goes inside and sees a man sleeping in the bed… She was shocked to see him…She sits near him…

After few hours he wakes up…
He looks at Avni and says “Avni….”
Avni; You?? you are alive… I knew it…you will come back…you won’t leave me as easily… I am so happy…Saying he hugs him and kisses him on his cheeks...

But suddenly she hears her name being called…that was her Neil…
She looks at Neil…
Flashback ends…

Avni; You left me without even giving me a chance to say the truth…If Nevia wasn’t there in my womb that day then I would have not in this world now… I would have killed myself...

On the other side…
Neil was in a park
Neil; Who called me…? what was that important thing that I want to know.?? who called me here? if someone pranked… there is none to see here…Yea maybe someone pranked…. I also felt that sound was like a child…. I will get to know who was that and who was the one dare to prank Neil Khanna…

Suddenly he hears a voice from his back; I called you…
He turns back to see who was that… He sees a small lovely girl.
Neil surprisingly looks at her…

Neil; you called me.?

Girl; Yes I called you…I am Nevia…

Neil was surprised to see a Little girl talking with so much attitude…

Neil; why did you call me… do you know me early…

Nevia(angrily); you may not know me… but I know you.. btw you know my mother.

Neil; who is your mother?

Nevia; Avani…… also called as Avni before..

Neil shockingly looks at her

Flashback;
a few hours before…
Nevia was searching her drawing book in bookshelf…suddenly from a book, Avneil’s photos fall down…
Flashback ends…

Nevia; I am here to say you to go away from us… Today I came to know you are my father…so I am telling you to go away … I don’t want to see you….yea I may be your daughter but I don’t regard you as my father…because I don’t want my maa to get hurt… I love her a lot…I don’t what was the problem between you…..but I don’t want you in my life..because I see tears in her eyes… I don’t want that…so go away… I hate you… I hate you…

By saying this Nevia throws Avneil’s photo at him and leaves….
Neil stands their shockingly looking at Nevia running away…


Precap; Neil regrets….the actual truth in front of him…..


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