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Hate Filled With Love!! Chapter-11

Hii guys….Gopika here again…Thank you so much for your support…and here we go with chappy 11 ?.


Neil at Avni’s home…He rings the bell…
Avni opens the door…and sees Neil …
Neil smiles at her …but she turns her head away and says “I will call Nevia”
By saying she goes inside…

It hurt him when she turned her head away…he felt a deep pain…but he determines to win her…to wipe off her hate…and he is happy as she didn’t make him away from Nevia…he is happy as her eyes say that she had accepted me as Nevia’s father…

Suddenly she gets off her thought hearing the laughs his little daughter…He was really excited to see his daughter running happily to him…It seems a dream to him..his daughter whose heart was filled with hate for him…is running towards him happily…. it was like the best moment which every father dreams…Tears filled his eyes ….it was the tear of his happiness…He was overjoyed, overwhelmed and completely ecstatic…

He bends in his knees…and opens his hand..to welcome her daughter to his life….his princess…

Nevia hugs him tightly…
Nevia(fastly); I missed you a lot…you really don’t know how much I missed you, papa…

Neil felt a mixture of things. It was one of the best feelings of his life

Nevia; papa I love you a lot….papa

Neil couldn’t believe his ears! He heard the word ‘papa‘ again. He cried with a weepy joy…

Neil; my daughter…

Nevia worriedly wipes Neil’s tears and asks; what happen? why crying?

Neil holds her and says “this is the tears of happiness…today I win my daughter in my life”

Nevia; your daughter will be always with you…

Neil happily hugs her hearing that…

Nevia; maa…made me realise you love me soo much…and you will be the best father…

That words straightly hits his heart…Avni his love…the one he hated for no reason…the girl she gave the worst life…the girl he didn’t show belief…the girl whose heart he broke…has given the best happiness for him…

Nevia; btw…papa…you are my king right…

Neil confusedly looks at her…

Nevia; aree…when I am your princess…you are the king right… I love you my king…and Papa you call me princess… I love to hear that from you…

Neil(happily); my princess…

Avni looks them from far…She was so happy to see father and daughter together…but still the reality that she hates him hits her painfully…

Avni looks lovingly at both of them…

Nevia; let’s take a selfie…

Neil nods and they happily pose for selfies…

Neil; call mama and come…and let’s take a family selfie…

Nevia; wah…good idea… I will just come…

Nevia comes to Avni…

Nevia; Maa…come on let’s take a selfie with you and papa

Avni; No..baby doll…you take photo naa…

Nevia; no…Maa…you should come…Come for me naa…

Hearing her daughters pleading…Avni’s hearts melt…

Avni; ok..for you…

Nevia brings Avni dragging towards Avni…Neil stands to stare at her…while she avoids him…

They pose for the photo…Avni didn’t give a glance at Neil… She just kept avoiding her…While Neil was eagerly waiting for her to look at him…to feel the love between them…

Nevia; Wow…what a photo…I will show this to Nani and come…

Saying she runs from there

Avni tries to go behind her..but stops hearing Neil’s voice…

Neil; I am sorry…I love you a lot..please come back…

Avni turns to him angrily
Avni(shouts); Stop this drama, Mr.Neil Khanna…Don’t cross the limits…You are nothing to me… I just before you because of Nevia…i don’t want her to live without her father…I consider you as her father…not more than that…you are nothing to me…Don’t try to waste your time by trying to bring me back in your life…because its never going to happen… .and go to hell with your sorry… A sorry cannot do anything… I am saying again don’t waste effort on me…Nothing is gonna change…I hate you and that truth is not gonna change…

Neil was controlling himself hardly…he was painfully hurt by her words…her every single word felt like someone was repeatedly stabbing him in his heart badly…But he manages to hide all that in the determination to win her back…

Neil holds Avni by her shoulder…
Neil; Please Avni….please forgive me… I will do anything to make you mine back… I will never stop my efforts to win you back… Because neither I nor you can live without each other…our happiness lies in us…You love me now also Avni….see that love…

Avni pushes his hand away shouting “Yes….you are saying right…I love you… I love you now also… and I hate you more than how much I love you now…and I will always hate you…Did you get that Mr Neil Khanna..”

By saying Avni leaves with teary eyes and a painful heart…

Neil stands lifelessly thinking of Avni’s words…
Neil(to himself); I will rub all that tears… I will bring you back in my life…You said wrong…you don’t hate me more than you love…but you love me more than you hate…

By saying he leaves…

After few hours…
At a park…
Avni; Bhaii…where is she… I am so excited to meet her…

Aman; I told her to be here… I will look and come…

Avni nods he leaves…

Avni looks around smilingly…Suddenly she hears Aman calling ‘Mitali’…She happily turns to see her brother’s love…but the one she saw wasn’t only her brother’s love…but was someone she know…her smile wiped from her face…she walks towards them emotionless…

Aman seeing Avni coming smiles and says to Mitali “see…she is my Avni..my pyaari sister..”
Hearing happily turns to see her going to sister in law…but her expression was same as that of Avni…Her smile wiped off…and some fear gets inside her..

Avni and Mitali stand face to face…

Aman; At last my too Special one’s meet each other…so…

Before he could finish…Avni slaps Mitali hardly…

Aman looks shockingly at Avni…

Avni(shouts); Why do you come back…you have destroyed my life by snatching my dream….now do you want to destroy my brother’s life

Aman(shockingly); Avni…what have you done…do you know her...

Avni nods sadly…

Aman; how?

Avni; She was my bestie…We studied in the same college…

Aman; that’s good that you know her…. then why did you beat him


PRECAP; Aman heartbroken…Mitali to challenge Avni….evil games…love in the air…


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