I Hate You (Episode 24)

Hey guys! Are you liking the plot? Please tell me honestly. The number of comments have decreased. I’ve noticed this on all the other ff also. I don’t know if u guys are just too busy to comment or are not liking the plot. So please let me know. I’ll try to live up to ur expectations and I hope u will like it….Now let’s get on with the episode.

Recap: Twinkle and Kunj go on an unofficial ice cream date. Kunj surprises Twinkle by bringing Leela. it is revealed that Kunj explained everything to Leela and Leela forgave Twinkle. Twinkle decides to realize that Kunj is not that bad of a person and begins to form a soft corner for him.


(At College…)

Kunj and Twinkle arrive at college. Alisha sees them enter together and fumes.
Alisha thinks- Twinkle and Kunj, u two did not do good with me. U messed with the wrong person. U played with Alisha’s feelings. U will pay for this.
She clenched her fists as Twinkle and Kunj entered the classroom.

The Next Scene….

Twinkle entered the cafeteria, looking for Kunj. She spots Rishi.
Twinkle- Hey Rishi, do u know where Kunj is?
Rishi- Yea I saw him headed towards one of the back stairways. He seemed upset and told me not to come with him.
Twinkle- Ok thanks.
Twinkle thinks- Where did Kunj go?
Twinkle walks to one of the stairways and sees Kunj sitting on a step. She goes and sits next to him. Kunj was sitting there and fidgeting with his fingers.
Twinkle- Kunj? Tum thik toh ho na?
Kunj- Pata nahi Twinkle.
Twinkle- What happened?
Kunj was silent. After a few moments, he spoke.
Kunj- It was my dream to become a pilot. Ever since I was little, I wanted to fly. Now my chance has come. The aviation exam to get into a course for piloting has been released. I have to take this exam and course. But…
Twinkle- But?
Kunj- I don’t have the money for it. I may be able to manage something for the exam, but the course….
Twinkle’s heart fell listening to Kunj’s words. She didn’t know why, but his sadness had an affect on her. Twinkle reached over and held Kunj’s hand. They sat in silence until the silence was broken by the ring of the bell and the halls were filled by students.

(Twinj’s Flat…)

Kunj was finishing up his assignments while Twinkle was surfing through the internet. Suddenly her face lit up and a smile formed on her face.
Twinkle- KUNJ!
Kunj jumped up, startled.
Kunj- What happened!
Twinkle jumped up and held Kunj’s arms and started spinning him around.
Kunj- Twinkle!
Twinkle stopped spinning.
Twinkle- I found a solution to ur problem.
Kunj- What problem?
Twinkle- Are! Ur piloting problem.
Kunj- Really? What solution?
Twinkle- First tell me…..can u dance?
Kunj- What? What kind of solution is this?
Twinkle- Just answer na!
Kunj- Uh….
Twinkle- Chodo! U are a great singer and I know u can dance also.
Kunj- So?
Twinkle- So…..u can get the money by….
Kunj- By…..
Twinkle- Dancing on Jhalak!
Kunj’s face dropped.
Kunj- What! U mean Jhalak, as in Jhalak Dhikhla Jaa the dance reality show?
Twinkle nods her head.
Kunj- Twinkle, are you crazy?
Twinkle- Hold on. Listen to me first. Here look.
Twinkle shows Kunj the screen of her laptop. It showed an ad for a Jhalak competition.
Twinkle- It’s not telling u to participate for the whole season. This is just a dance contest that is coming to our area. Whoever wins, will be rewarded the prize money. So…..Kunj, u have a chance in winning.
Kunj thinks for a while.
Kunj- Twinkle, ur not going to do another siyappa again are you?
Twinkle- Offo Kunj! Do I always create siyappas?
Kunj (mumbles)- Siyappa Queen.
The Next Day….

Kunj and Twinkle went to sign up for the competition. On the way, a man saw Kunj and stopped him. Kunj was surprised to see the man.
Man- Are sir! U are here?
Kunj became nervous.
Kunj- I think u have the wrong person.
Man- Sir? Did u forget me? I am Aman.
Kunj- Bola na meine, I think u have the wrong person.
Man- But sir….
Kunj- Let’s go Twinkle.
Kunj took Twinkle and walked away, leaving the man baffled. Twinkle was shocked at Kunj’s behavior.
Twinkle- Kunj? Why did u have a sudden outburst like that? U are not like this?
Kunj- Forget it. He probably mistook me for someone else.
Twinkle thinks- Something is wrong. Kunj never behaves this rudely without a reason. It’s not like him to act this way.
Kunj went and signed up for the competition. There, he was assigned a choreographer, who was also his partner for the competition. Kunj practiced all day for the whole week for the competition. After practice, he came home all tired.
Twinkle- How was practice?
Kunj- Good. My choreographer is a really good dancer.
Twinkle- So, tomorrow is the big day…
Kunj- Yea. So I will practice one more time tonight.

The Next Scene….

Kunj was practicing his dance routine. However, he was struggling to dance alone as the dance was a duet. Twinkle saw him struggling.
Kunj- Ahhh! This is impossible to do alone!
He saw Twinkle sitting and watching him practice and got an idea. He went over to her and took her hand.
Twinkle- Kunj? What are you doing?
Kunj- U know how to dance right? I need a partner to practice with me.
Twinkle- But…
Kunj- Shhh.
Kunj takes Twinkle’s hand and puts it on his shoulder. He places his hand on her waist. The performance was a sensual dance. Kunj turns Twinkle around and traced his finger up her arm. Twinj and Kunj shared an eye lock as Kunj dipped Twinkle. As he was bringing her up, they did not break their eye lock. Kunj suddenly went into a trance and started advancing towards Twinkle. Twinkle started walking backwards until she was stopped by a wall. Kunj moved Twinkle’s hair behind her ear and cupped her cheek. Twinkle closed her eyes from Kunj’s touch. Kunj leaned closer. Twinkle’s heartbeat started racing as she was able to feel Kunj’s hot breath on her skin. Kunj’s lips came into contact with Twinkle’s forehead. Twinkle tightly clutched the side of her dress. Kunj then kissed her cheek. His hand found its way and rested on her waist. Kunj leaned towards Twinkle’s neck. Twinkle opened her eyes. She ever so softly called out his name.
Twinkle- Kunj….

Precap: Silver Jubilee! ? So a pleasant treat…..

  1. Rashiverma2199

    Sara….lovely episode….. I really like ur story….one of my fav….awesome …..amazing….?????
    Waiting for the silver jubilee surprise…
    Loved the romantic dance part…..???

  2. Lama

    Woooooow sara…superbbbb…u r grt yr…in every episode a new twist…very nice yr…just love u nd ur ff from the core ????

  3. Ritzi

    Wow yaaarrr Sara….it was freaking awesome girl….u nailed it!

  4. Meeta

    Wow, re
    That was so Good.
    Next one soon.

  5. I think your ff is lovely but I think you should make it long

  6. Ayu

    ????dance brought them together!!! First my apologies…i had exams..so i could not comment but i’ve been reading it ever since its first part!!! N i am floored!!!! This epi was truely a treat❤️❤️❤️

  7. Anshikajainn

    Awesome episode

  8. Ria

    Hey Sara,
    The episode was superb. I loved it so so much. The Jhalak idea was something very unique and then, the dance. Kunj has already fallen for Twinkle and Twinkle is advancing towards the same?? … I guess though.

    Well, I can’t really imagine you completed twenty four episodes of this ff too.. like, you’ve already written 78 episodes and look at me I’ve not even written 75?? I mean only on Twinj..if I count all my ffs then, may be I’ll reach the same figure.

    Anyway, excited for the next one. Try posting soon and yeah, I forgot that time. All the best for your bio tests.

    Loads of love.❤

  9. Chiku

    Wowww it’s awesome ????? lovely episode. But suspense is der. What is kunj hiding????? Plz reveal it soon
    Lovely episode
    I am eagerly waiting for silver jublie ❤️?

  10. dreamer...arundhati

    sara darlo….omg…ctd soon..lovely

  11. Awesome dear
    Loved it

  12. Wow this was amazingly amazing ????.. the episode full of twinj ???.. all twinj scenes were fantastic.. n who was that man? I think he’s separated from his family i guess??? nice twist.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤

  13. Nice epi ♥ ♥

  14. Anam_sidhant

    I am loving the plot!?
    Just loved twinj scenes, shit man it was so damn cuteee!!??
    U know what i m in love with this episode and I m just reading this again and again?
    Just can’t wait for silver jubilee!??
    Please please upload it soon please! ❤❤❤

  15. Amazing Sara Loved it
    I think behind kunj behaviour der is sme reason can’t wait plssssssssssdss asap Loved it N love u

  16. Loved the episode…try posting soon

  17. Hey Sara! it was awesome amazing superb epi….. n twinj scenes were mindblowing…. todays epi was totally twinj’s….loved it….

    N I’m really very sorry for not cmnting ur pre epi… actually I’ve very busy sedule n bcz of that I can’t cmnt on every ones ff n os but jab bhi free hoti hu to kisi na kisi ke epi par cmnt kar deti hu… so pls yarrr dont be angry….

    N ur ff is not boring…I really loved it to the core infact ur ff is one of my favourite…. so pls don’t say like that…..
    Well come soon with next epi….

    Loads of love


  18. Zuha Fatima

    Wow Sara Api! Just loved it like anything. And that JDJ part was freakingly amazing. Simply out of the box plot! And so many questions are rising in my mind…Twinj’s proximity, That man, will Twinkle accept Kunj and this marriage. And please post soon your silver jubilee 🙂

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  19. Sohi

    Wow yaar the episode was awesome after so many days i saw twinj romance by your writing good keep it up

  20. Sara this was beyond words I’m on cloud nine and kunj has fallen for twi waiting for the Silver jublee

  21. Paavu

    Hey yaar sara it was jst awesome awesome nic siperb amazing lovely mesmerizing undrrmine my brain ruled my heart are kya kahoon itba special epi tha srry kast yime cant commnt bt read it I always w8 fr ur ff my fav and wenrvr I open I just wush it is der and I brcome really vry happy abd start dance howling on seeing it and ya

  22. Adya

    U know what..
    Ur ff is one of my fav …..no no Sry..my fav….U write soo gud yrr di…..it’s really awesome….have u done a course btw.
    It was superb…..
    Nd damn excited for the silver jubilee….damn damn damn…..post soonest…..plsss di….plsss

  23. Apurva

    Awesome epi dear
    i hve no words to define it…
    Loved it

  24. Well dude, this was awesome. I loved it so damn much. The jhalak idea was so unique and cool. Moreover that dance, it has set fire to the whole thing. It’s clear now that twinkle is falling for kunj but kunj as well? I am so excited on how the story will shape up now.

    Wait a silver jubilee? You’ve come so far! Congrats dude! I started my ff before yours, like a month or two? and you are already so close to to the number of parts I’ve written. Anyway, try uploading the next one soon as I am really curious and excited as well.

    Moreover, I love your plot so don’t you think it’s boring. Well, what you’ve said is actually true, the comments are falling in all the ff’s and the reason is still unknown. Whatever it is, you try posting the next part at the earliest. Will be waiting! x

    Lovess! xx ? (plus I am sorry for such a long comment ? I guess I wrote too much ?)

    1. Ria

      You stupid!! Stupids always remain stupid. Don’t you know???

    2. Shut up, will you? ??

    3. Ria

      Never ever can I do that. You know it very well. Why are you even asking? Dumbo‼?

    4. Actually how stupid of me! I know an idiot like you can never stop talking nonsense, right? ??

    5. Ria

      Haha..joke or what? Even a stupid can’t.?? By the way, dude, I Love You!!❤

    6. All the way from arguing to love? ? Well, you are so predictably unpredictable ? Well, not so unpredictable actually. (okay, I don’t know what I’m even saying rn ?) Whatever, but darling I love me too ? Jokess, I love mee too, again! ?❣️

    7. Ria

      ?? I HATE YOU‼

      Sara, see this ain’t friendship goals..huh.?

    8. I hate you too ? okay jk,
      I love you ?❣️

    9. Ria

      Awwiiee!! Finally, the restrictions are removed. Yay!?

  25. Hey Sara I don’t know what to say coz I’m speechless…I’m having words lacking problem…this episode is legit out of box…I so loved the Jhalak Dikhla Jaa part…next episode is ur silver jubilee…congo dear ?? Sara please post next episode as soon as possible…

  26. Sara firstly a bada wala sorry for not commenting on ur ff.Pls forgive me as a friend.The epi was super amazing n romantic.Luved the twinj scene n luved the plot.Ur ff was my favourite from the start becoz I just luved ur concept about hate at first site. N u r right the comments are drastically decreasing,the number of comments were very less in my os n not only in my os but in all ff n os anyways luved it a lot.Congrats in advance for ur silver jubliee.Post soon n once again sorry.

    Lots of luv,

  27. KarthikaJasmin

    Oh SARA..
    it was awesome…
    waiting for d next episode…

  28. This was FAB
    Waiting for the next one please post asap
    (I’ve always been a silent reader of your ff from blind love,I hate you……I’m really sorry sara for not commenting before but I’ve always loved your ff…
    And love you too❤️

  29. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous epi…eagerly waiting for next part

  30. Shatakshi

    Hey Sara
    It’s the best ff and one of my fav ones
    Please don’t think like this
    N thanks for giving the precap
    It helps me to catch up the updates???
    Love u
    Do continue asap

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