Hello beautiful people!
Thank u so much for ur response on my current ff.
So…here goes the modified version of my os ESSENCE OF HATRED or os2 whose promo i uploaded….
Here it goes…..
HATE DESTROYED ME…..
A bride and groom were sitting in their mandap. They both looked really happy. The bried is revealed to be swara gadodia the daughter of shekar gadodia who is a business man . She had always been the apple of their eyes. They always cared for her the most. The groom is revealed to be sanskar maheshwari ,the business tycoon. His parents died when he was very small. Since then he lived alone. His parents property was even snatched by some business rivals. His childhood has always been dark. He has seen the darkest shade of life. That’s y he was an heartless and arrogant person. But ever since swara entered his life he has changed. Swara and sanskar loved each other. So this is a love marriage.
Soon swara and sanskar were taking rounds around the mandap. Swara face reflected happiness. While sanskar was smirking, his face showed another expression which was surely not of love.
Soon the marriage completed and swara and sanskar headed towards sanskar’s house.
Sanskar’s mansion ……
Swara was sitting in sanskar’s room she was waiting for him.
While sanskar was sitying in another dark room drinking and smirking.
Sanskar-[with hate] swara gadodia…..opps ….
Correction mrs swara sanskar maheshwari get ready to pay for ur parent’s sins. Get ready to bear my hatred. [Smirks] get ready to live in hell.
Sanskar stood up and went to his rrom where swara was waiting for him unaware of his hatred.
Sanskar entered the room . He looked towards swara and smirked evily. He walked towards her and placed his hand on her shoulder. Sensing his touched swara smiled and blushed. Suddenly sanskar made her stand roughly. Swara was shocked by his action.
Swara-[shocked] ahhh!! Sanskar what r u doing ?
Sanskar- [coldy] come i need to show u something.
Swara was shocked from his cold behaviour. Suddenly she smells the smell of drinks. She covers her nose.
Swara-[angry] sanskar what is this….u promised me that u will leave drinking what is this….go i am not coming with u….
She was about to turn. But sanskar stops her abruptly and places his finger on her lips.
Sanskar-[rudely] shhh……..shut up and come with me.
Swara was feeling bad bcoz of his behaviour. Sanskar took her to a room with was dark. Seeing the room swara understood that he was missing his parents that’s y he was behaving like this. Sanskar entered the with swara. His hand was rapped around her wrist. He touched a switch. Light appeared above picture showing the pic. He dragged Her towards it.
Sanskar- swara do u know who they r?
Swara- sanskar what type of question is this.
Sanskar-[little loudly] swara who r these people
Swara- sanskar[smiles] they r ur parents. Here is mom and this is ur dad who u love tge most[smiles]
sanskar-ok so u know them…..[leaves her hand] so u know how they died.
Swara-[confused with his behaviour] yes sanskar they died in a accident.
Sanskar-[denies] no swara it was not an accident it was a well planned murder[tears starts flowing from his eyes] business rivals killed them for our property…..t…t….th…..th…..they…..k….k…..ki….ki…..killed my parents. After killing them they snatched our property. They thought that i also died but no i was alive.u know bcoz of them i became an orphan.
Swara was shocked and broken seeing him like this. She cupped his face and said.
Swara- i am soo sorryyy sanskar…..but plz don’t cry….shhh……see now everything his fine…..sh…….
Sanskar removes her hands from his face.
Sanskar-[teary eyed] no swara its not ok…bcoz of them my life became hell…..i had to be alone …..in darkness ….i………i..i…….i……
Swara- [concerned ] shhhh sanskar ……
Sanskar-[wipes his tears] no swara i can’t calm down till i take my revenge….[eyes filled with hate] and u know swara i am very close in completing my revenge…[holds her shoulder] [sees her with anger] and i will take my revenge. And u know u is the killer….see this….he is the killer [harshly turns her]
sanskar presses a button and a light above a pic illuminates. The pic is of swara’s dad and mom. Swara is shocked seeing it.
Swara-[angry] sanskar what is this….
Sanskar brings some papers and show her. They r the proofs of them being the murder. Swara reads them and is shocked…paper falls from her hand. She Shockingly looks towards sanskar with teary eyes.
Sanskar-[angry] and u know who is going to pay for their sins.
He presses a button and pushes swara. A pic is shown which is of swara. Swara is shocked seeing her picture.
Sanskar-[whispers in her ears] now u will pay for their sins.
Swara -[turns towards him][tries to cup her face] sanskar u r lying na u toh love me na u don’t hate me right[controls her tears]
sanskar-[holds her hand and jerks them away] no i am not lying i hate u i hate u very much bcoz u r their daughter. And i will take revenge from u. every minute of life would become hell. And yes i could never love u bcoz i hate u i hate u very much.[holds her face tightly] u will bear my hatred for the rest of ur life. [Whispers in her ears] welcome to hell.
Swara looks shockingly towards him. She was not able to believe her ears. Tears fall out of her eyes.
Sanskar holds her hand and drags her from the room.
Swara- [sobs] sanskar plz listen plz…..
Sanskar throws her out of the bedroom and closes the door on her face.
Swara cries and bangs the door but their was noresponse. She slides down the door and weeps. After sometime she sleeps bcoz of excessive tiredness and crying. On the other hand sanskar celebrates his victory and sleeps. But there was a piece of his heart which was feeling pain. That part of him was broken. He ignored this emptiness and slept.
Next morning…..
Sanskar woke up and got ready. He opened his door and saw swara sleeping there. He looked towards her. She looked soo weak and pale. The glow of her face was lost somewhere. He goes and brings a bucket of cold water and pours on her.
Swara wakes up with a jerk.
Sanskar-[coldly] go and make breakfast for me.
Swara was seeing him blankly. Getting no reply he mad her stand and shouted.
Sanskar-[shouted] go and make food[pushes her]
tears fall out of her eyes. She was not able to believe and this the sanskar who cared and loved her. She was not able to bear his hatred. She moves and makes his food.
Like this 6 months passed. Swara always tried to change sanskar. But sanskar always insulted her. He tortured her both mentally and physically. Over and over again he was killing her soul. He took his revenge and showed his hatred in every way possible . But still a part of sanskar was not satisfied. That part felt hutt and broken each time he hurted swara. It felt like he was killing that part of him each time he showed his hatred, each time a tear fell out of her eye. But still he was determined to take his revenge. Also swara was determined to change him. Swara had a hope that he would change. But her hope was getting shattered each time he showed his hatred. But one incident completely destroyed all her hopes.
Flashback……today’s morning
Swara served sanskar his food. Sanskar tasted it and threw the plate with a jerk. Swara was scaredseeing his anger.
Sanskar -[angry] what type of wife u r …..u can’t even make food properly.
Swara-[scared] sorry sanskar…..but u also no na i don’t know how to cook….i….
Sanskar-[loudly] then go and learn ……if u can’t learn then tell me i will marry someone else.
Swara-[shocked] sanskar plz don’t say like this
Sanskar- i will…..i will only say like this …..
Swara- sanskar plz it kills me
Sanskar- i don’t care……if it kills u even then i don’t care……if u want u can go and die……
Swara-[broken] sanskar….
Sanskar-[angry] so what…i think its better for u to die….u r good for nothing.
Saying this sanskar leaves from there.
Flashback over…….
Bcoz of today’s incident swara was completely broken. She had had enough. Now she was no more strong to bear all this so she took a big step of getting free from this hell. He decided to end her life.
She took pen and paper and wrote a letter for sanskar. Then she took sanskar’s photo and hugged it tightly and cried her heart out. Then she took the knife and cut her nerve and left this cruel world forever. She fell on the floor with tears in her eyes and sanskar’s pic in her hand.
In the night sanskar reached home and got angry on not seeing the dinner ready.
He went to his room and opened door with a bang. He saw swara’s back it seemed to him that she ws sitting on floor. He angrily went to her. But the scene infront of him made him shocked. He was stuck to his spot. He bend on his knees. He looked towards her. With shivering hands he checked her pulse. After checking it he was confirmed that she left him forever. With shivering hands he touched her face. He looked towards her hand which contained his picture. He started caressing her face.Tears were continuously falling out of his eyes. He noticed a piece of paper in her hands. He took it and started ready.
Note…..
Hello sanskar!!
Today this is the last time i am telling something to u. Bcoz after that i would be no longer alive. Yes u read that right sanskar i am leaving this world forever. Bcoz i am tired of bearing ur hatred. I thought that some part of u loves me but i was completely wrong sanskar…..i was wrong. U hate me from the bottom of ur heart. This is the truth. But this truth kills me each time …..i can’t bear itsanskar..so i am killing myself for once and for all. U were right i am good for nothing. I am not even good for ur love. I am sorry sanskar from my parent’s side. I am sorry sanskar. And yes after i am gone plz don’t destroy ur life in this revenge. Plz live ur life and move on.
I love u sanskar and yes my last wish is plz don’t hate me….plz….plz don’t this hate destroy u…..plz…..
Ur wife/hatred/lover
Swara
The paper fell out of his hands. Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes. The part of him which felt hurt everytime he hurted swara. Today itfelt like that part is killed yes that part his killed and gone with his swara, his love. After loosing her he realised that she was his life. He was not able to believe that she left him . But still he wanted to say i love u. He wanted to rectify his mistakes. He wanted to destroy that hate itself which destroyed their love,which destroyed their life, which destroyed his love ,which destroyed him.
Sanskar took swara in his embrace an kept her head on his chest.
Sanskar-[whispers] i am sorry my love i am sorry….plz come back plz……..
He starts crying.Sanskar-[cries] i love u…….
Now he cursing himself. He was cursing the hatred. He hugged her more tightly and pecked her forehead.
Sanskar-[whispers] hate destroyed me…..
End…….
Sometimes its too late…..
Sorry for sad ending….i am really sorry for it….
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Bye……