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Home»Fan Fiction»Haseena tu Kameena mein – 4
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Haseena tu Kameena mein – 4

asheeyanaBy asheeyanaNovember 2, 201624 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys this is asheeyana back with another episode.

Next day,

Ragini was busy cleaning and dusting, while our Sanskar Sahib were acting to be asleep.. .

R- Sanskar I very well know that u r acting, so plz stop it and help me with this

No reply

R- ok fine then don’t blame me for whatever happens to u after this…..
S- I am in deep sleep
R- and who the hell is talking?
S- I don’t know

Aaaaahhhhhh……….

S- I will not fall in ur trap ragini……..
S- ragini?

He gets up and moves to see what had happened……….he sees ragini sitting down. A box was lying down and all the things from it was scattered all over the room…..

S- u call this cleaning?
R- eeeeeeeeeeee?
S-?

They both start picking up all the things……

R- this is….
(He sits beside ragini)
S- our 11 grade photograph.
R- u r looking very cute
S- and u r looking handsome
( Ragini slaps him)

S- what? ….u were complimenting me with cute so I did it with handsome
R- hahaha….very funny
S- see ……Vijay (points someone in the photo)
R- omg….he is sooo cute!
S- le! …..Again cute?
R-
S- but Haan in his case it’s fine…
R- and see Samaira, ur beloved crush
S- aaah…..what a girl man!
R- bas bas! U r drooling…..here wipe it.(she hands over a kerchief)
S- something is burning
R- oh plz….

S- bechara Roy ka shirt dekh! Full of ink stains
R-? hahahahahaa……..
S- u r laughing? …….U always play holy with his shirts
R- oh what did I do? ………..I warn him every single time not to flirt with me but he anyways does it……..
S- ? what a punishment!!
R- ?

Suddenly ragini gets hold of a photograph that had two smiling faces, the younger she Nd her dad.

R- Patha hei Sanskar, every day before he goes to work he has to wave me a bye and if he doesn’t I used to cry and make a fuss…….(sobs)…and for me he used to comeback midway and waves me a bye and then only goes back…………….

S- ?
( Hugs her)………my sherni! …..don’t cry and spoil d mood..

R- wipes her tears
S- something is burning!
R- why would it burn now…………oh god ……I dhoodh rakh kar bhool gayi.
..
( She runs to the kitchen)

S- looking at the photograph) u could have stayed a little longer in this world, atleast for ur daughter….

To be continued…..

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24 Comments

  1. Sindhura on November 2, 2016 10:13 am

    Nice

  2. Meethi on November 2, 2016 10:30 am

    Awesome..

  3. Ragz_teju on November 2, 2016 10:38 am

    awesome

  4. sethidisha002 on November 2, 2016 10:42 am

    osam

  5. Asw on November 2, 2016 10:51 am

    Good

  6. lovely on November 2, 2016 11:16 am

    Nice

  7. ammy on November 2, 2016 11:52 am

    Superb dear

  8. CrazygirlS.P on November 2, 2016 11:57 am

    Superb

  9. Fairy on November 2, 2016 12:53 pm

    Awww!!! M feeelng sad for ragini???? …update ws soooo entertaining dear????ragsan r chooo chueeet….waitng for nxt part..!!!keeep rocng n stay blessed dear?????????????????☺☺☺

    • asheeyana on November 2, 2016 5:03 pm

      Thaank u chooooooo much……..??????

  10. SPP on November 2, 2016 1:19 pm

    Awesome Superb

  11. Richa19 on November 2, 2016 1:21 pm

    reading ur ff for the first time n I’m totally in love with it … the story line is interesting n I’m loving it ………………. continue soon dear n keep smiling !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • asheeyana on November 2, 2016 5:03 pm

      I’m glad u read it and liked it……Thank u richa

  12. dharani on November 2, 2016 2:29 pm

    nice

  13. Akshata on November 2, 2016 4:58 pm

    awesome

  14. asra on November 2, 2016 7:29 pm

    amazing sis….loved it core….and miss u dear…..ragsan r crazy…love them lot..eagerly waiting for nxt one…plz update soon sis…tkcr dear…

    • asheeyana on November 2, 2016 8:45 pm

      Sure asra di…

  15. silent_writer on November 2, 2016 9:59 pm

    Woooow its something in this bonding…. I knw it is short but there bonding n understanding make me to fall in love wid themmmm loved ittt yrrr its awsme???

    • asheeyana on November 2, 2016 10:09 pm

      Awwwwwww…… Thank you chooooooo much

  16. A.xx on November 2, 2016 11:03 pm

    Loved it sooo much love their bonding and how he keeps her happy…
    waiting for next update.xx

  17. Sreevijayan on November 3, 2016 12:10 am

    Am loving this ff soo much..awesome update dear……

  18. tani on November 5, 2016 10:01 am

    Excellent

  19. Astha on November 6, 2016 5:25 pm

    hi my dear…… to be frank 1st epi was normal……. 2nd epi was good ragsan 1st convo was superb….. 3rd epi was hilarious….. the real ashu came out in 3rd epi only…… with full wing read 4th epi….. mind blowing my dear…… semma kalakkita….. inda epi sema comedy ah irunduchi…. enaku romba pidichiruku….. ragsan bonding semma…… rendu perukum marriage ayducha?
    waiting for next one dear. keep smiling…… 🙂

    • asheeyana on November 6, 2016 9:10 pm

      Illa akka they r best friends

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