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Happy Mothers Day….

administratorBy administratorMay 7, 2016Updated:May 9, 201682 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hii friends… Here is a short story dedicated to all Mothers n children on this mothers day… POV of a son My mom only had one eye. I hated her… she was such an embarrassment. My mom ran a small shop at a flea market. She collected little weeds and such to sell… anything for the money we needed she was such an embarrassment. There was this one day during elementary school. I remember that it was field day, and my mom came. I was so embarrassed. How could she do this to me? I threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next day at school… “Your mom only has one eye?!” and they taunted me. I wished that my mom would just disappear from this world so I said to my mom, “Mom, why don’t you have the other eye?! You’re only going to make me a laughingstock. Why don’t you just die?” My mom did not respond. I guess I felt a little bad, but at the same time, it felt good to think that I had said what I’d wanted to say all this time. Maybe it was because my mom hadn’t punished me, but I didn’t think that I had hurt her feelings very badly. That night… I woke up, and went to the kitchen to get a glass of water. My mom was crying there, so quietly, as if she was afraid that she might wake me. I took a look at her, and then turned away. Because of the thing I had said to her earlier, there was something pinching at me in the corner of my heart. Even so, I hated my mother who was crying out of her one eye. So I told myself that I would grow up and become successful, because I hated my one-eyed mom and our desperate poverty. Then I studied really hard. I left my mother and came to Seoul and studied, and got accepted in the Seoul University with all the confidence I had. Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. Then I had kids, too. Now I’m living happily as a successful man. I like it here because it’s a place that doesn’t remind me of my mom. This happiness was getting bigger and bigger, when someone unexpected came to see me “What?! Who’s this?!” It was my mother… Still with her one eye. It felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me. My little girl ran away, scared of my mom’s eye. And I asked her, “Who are you? I don’t know you!!” as if I tried to make that real. I screamed at her “How dare you come to my house and scare my daughter! Get out of here now!!” And to this, my mother quietly answered, “oh, I’m so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address,” and she disappeared. Thank goodness… she doesn’t recognize me. I was quite relieved. I told myself that I wasn’t going to care, or think about this for the rest of my life.

Then a wave of relief came upon me… one day, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. I lied to my wife saying that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went down to the old shack, that I used to call a house…just out of curiosity there, I found my mother fallen on the cold ground. But I did not shed a single tear. She had a piece of paper in her hand…. it was a letter to me. She wrote: My son, I think my life has been long enough now. And… I won’t visit Seoul anymore… but would it be too much to ask if I wanted you to come visit me once in a while? I miss you so much. And I was so glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. But I decided not to go to the school…. For you… I’m sorry that I only have one eye, and I was an embarrassment for you. You see, when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching you having to grow up with only one eye… so I gave you mine… I was so proud of my son that was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye. I was never upset at you for anything you did. The couple times that you were angry with me. I thought to myself, ‘it’s because he loves me.’ I miss the times when you were still young around me. I miss you so much. I love you. You mean the world to me. My World Shattered. I hated the person who only lived for me . I cried for My Mother, I didn’t know of any way that will make up for my worst deeds…

Never Ever hate anyone for their disabilities especially your parents. Never disrespect your parents, don’t ignore and under estimate their sacrifices. They give us life, they raise us better than they had been, they give and keep trying to give better than they ever had. They never wish unwell for their kids even in their wildest dreams. They always try showing right path and being motivator. Parents give up all for kids, forgive all mistakes made by kids. There is no way to repay what they done for kids, all we can do is try giving what they need and it is just time, love and respect.

Do something special for your mom on this mothers day…Make her feel special…

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82 Comments

  1. fiona on May 7, 2016 5:15 pm

    awesome work abhi

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:09 pm

      Thankyou so much?

  2. Ammu on May 7, 2016 5:16 pm

    Abhi ..
    Really nice present for every mom..
    I really liked it abhi..
    Have you written a ff before☺..

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:12 pm

      Thankyou Ammu..Yes i have written many ffs..2 of them are completed..its on swaragini..?

  3. Ani on May 7, 2016 5:19 pm

    It just touched my heart . A little bit my vision blured due to a drop of tear in my eyes. I just wanna tell u that really great work dear. I mau be new here but I am very happy to see a beautiful bond of mom and son I am a girl and for me my Mom is my ideal and my goal is just to be like her swewt loving caring and above all a heart of gold . I can say that I love you mom you are the best thing in my life be always like this ….
    Your story is real or imaginary
    . I just love it . Do you write any ff here . If yes then share all the links dear. …….

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:18 pm

      Thankyou so much….i never thought that I will get this much support for this post…Thanks a lot..
      Yes i do write ffs.,2 of them are completed.Its on swaragini..
      Here is the link of last episode..From this u will get the links of all the previous episodes..
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/always-youswaragini-episode-15-last-episode/??

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 11:35 pm

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/always-youswaragini-episode-15-last-episode/
      I think that link was not working..here is the correct one..

  4. jay on May 7, 2016 5:23 pm

    It’s True dear abhi…………..Love U Mom …………

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:19 pm

      Thankyou so much ??

  5. dharani on May 7, 2016 5:27 pm

    no words to say

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:20 pm

      Thankyou so much?

  6. Mitti on May 7, 2016 5:38 pm

    Absolutely amazing….thank u sooooo much for this beautiful update

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:21 pm

      Thankyou ???

  7. jasmin on May 7, 2016 5:40 pm

    Just loved it…
    u made me cry yaar…
    it is really true

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:21 pm

      Thankyou jasmine??

  8. Noora on May 7, 2016 5:41 pm

    I rly don’t knw wat 2 say its just out of the world……superb…..awsm…….mind blowing…. nd thanks alot for this…

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 6:22 pm

      Thankyou very much…???

  9. saya on May 7, 2016 5:51 pm

    Hi Abhi. you made me cry. really, a beautiful depiction and the last words which you wrote out as a message is so true. I’ll always remember your story. you portrayed everything beautifully. hats off for this. ?

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 8:09 pm

      Thankyou so much saya..Iam glad that u will remember it always..?

  10. bisha on May 7, 2016 6:01 pm

    Abhi, dont mind. But I read this story somewhere..
    Anyways, it was an wonderfully etched beautiful story. Loved it.
    Happy Mother’s Day to evryone.
    We should take care of those people who took care of us since ages. A wonderful message. Keep writing. You made my heart cry

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 8:57 pm

      Yes..this story is not made by me..its a story which my teacher taught me…
      as it is mothers day,i thought to share it…
      Thanks a lot..

    • S.Z.F.Z on May 8, 2016 10:52 am

      Ohhhhh….sister….you made me cry….This story touched my heart…..beautiful….Keep writing dear??

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 7:26 pm

      Thankyou so much?

  11. Roshni on May 7, 2016 6:18 pm

    Very heart touching… I am actually out of words.. Couldnt search any which will be correct for this lovely story.
    It was really a sad one and you truly depicted how a mother actually is! I love my mother ♡

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 8:58 pm

      Thankyou so so much??

  12. Anushka on May 7, 2016 7:17 pm

    I m just not getting words to appreciate u. I can just say that u left me speechless. It is really heart touching story. Abhi I m sorry to ask u, would u mind if I share this story on fb? Waiting for ur reply.

  13. Reev on May 7, 2016 7:51 pm

    Itz really very touched… Thank u Abhi.

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 8:59 pm

      Thankyou..n u r welcome?

    • Reev on May 7, 2016 10:20 pm

      🙂

  14. Ireena on May 7, 2016 7:55 pm

    Its real a awesome story…thanks abhi..i m sure thatur mom will be ery happy to see ur work
    I would like to request all f here on this day,plz understand ur mom…she just want only one thing frm us…our success and nothing else…
    And ever if u face any problem,share it with her first…it so happens that we first share it wih our friends, sometimes with unknown person…fear to share it with mom..but never know…mom is always there for u…only 4 u…to save u from all the PROBLEMS OF YHE WORLD…

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 9:02 pm

      Thankyou so much…,??
      n u r right..we should share our problems first with our mom…???

  15. Abhi on May 7, 2016 8:08 pm

    Yes..Anushka u can share it on fb…its my pleasure..Actually i have heard this story in my childhood…Iam glad that u guys liked it.?

    • Anushka on May 7, 2016 9:42 pm

      Aww Thanq u so much Abhi…

  16. Bhoomi on May 7, 2016 8:14 pm

    Superb abhi …. its really true …. Amazing job ……

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 9:03 pm

      Thankyou so much??

  17. ashu on May 7, 2016 8:59 pm

    wow … amazing …… it’s a true love of a mother for her child
    excellent work brother
    I am new here and I am in 9

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 10:21 pm

      Brother nahi sister…iam a girl,,Thanks a lot..??

  18. Honey on May 7, 2016 9:08 pm

    Thnk u very much for this story & really I love it abhi & I love u mom

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 10:20 pm

      Thankyou so much Honey.?

  19. priya on May 7, 2016 9:20 pm

    abhi.. nice one.. but are you a boy or a girl….. i wonder if you are a boy

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 10:20 pm

      Iam a girl…Thanks a lot..?

  20. alisa on May 7, 2016 9:52 pm

    Awesome story. Really loved it and i hope everyone of us learn from this. I remember a beautiful qoute by some i really don’t know it said
    I believe in love at first sight because since i opened my eyes i loved my mother.

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 11:02 pm

      Thankyou so much n that’s really awesome quote..???

  21. shruti on May 7, 2016 9:54 pm

    very nice story touch my soul

    • Abhi on May 7, 2016 11:03 pm

      Thankyou so much??

  22. Usha on May 8, 2016 12:25 am

    Very nice. Itz touching. I find you that you love your parents Espicially your Mom ?.
    Thanks for posting it. Show all these comments to ur mom abhi so that she will know how much u love her and Carr for her.

    Convey our wishes too to her.

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 1:01 am

      Thankyou so much..n ofcorse I will show this to her…??

  23. adu on May 8, 2016 12:52 am

    Abhi truly dear a heart wrenching story…my eyes brimmed with a thin line of tears reading this beautiful and soulful piece of work…truly too amazing…do keep writing always…

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:40 am

      Thankyou so much adu…??

  24. Mitali on May 8, 2016 12:59 am

    awesomee Abhi. really it touched my heart.
    Amazing piece on Mother’s Day.
    I’m still in tears.
    I hope Everyone in this world respect their parents.
    Happy Mother’s Day to every mom who is reading this.
    This is not just an article but it has given a moral to everyone.
    I loved it. too good.

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:40 am

      Thankyou so so much,.. ??

  25. Anu on May 8, 2016 1:21 am

    The same story once my teacher told me on Mothers Day. But the way you penned it down is commendable :):)
    I am so sure your mother must be proud of you being such an awesome writer. And thanks a lot for bringing those memories back!

    After reading this, inspite of knowing the story I cried like a baby. Credits to you and your way of depicting those emotions. Really glad to read this

    A wonderful thought ??

    Love ya!

    #Life’s Good with my Mom 🙂 ♥

    • Anu on May 8, 2016 1:24 am

      And I hope this story bring a change in heart of those people who disrespect their mom/dad or don’t give them the love they deserve cause they are the sole reason behind our own existence x x

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:41 am

      Thankyou so much for ur support di..u r right,,we should respect our parents..?

  26. Meethi on May 8, 2016 4:34 am

    Not an original story na.. hehe
    I hope that we can become better sons and daughters who respect, love and care for our parents.

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:43 am

      Its a story which I have heard in my childhood….donno its real or not…
      Thanks a lot..?

  27. Goldie on May 8, 2016 6:00 am

    Really nice article abhi. Gud job!!

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:44 am

      Thankks a lot,….?

  28. devga on May 8, 2016 9:32 am

    True story …. And thank u for this article …. Really I have seen this anecdote as a video and wen the letter scene was there I just burst out crying …. U know recently I read one novel while travelling and in that a very best frnd dies and without knowing I am in a bus my tears wer rolling down like anything …. Happy mother’s day all powerful mothers in this world ….
    Thank u maa

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:46 am

      Thankyou so much di..??

  29. A.K on May 8, 2016 11:16 am

    Its soooo EMOTIONAL and HEART TOUCHING!
    Liked it!
    Hope that where ever my AMMI is remains HAPPY

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 11:48 am

      Thankyou so much…?
      ur mom is not with u..???

    • A.K on May 8, 2016 1:33 pm

      Yeah ,but i pray for her everyday

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 2:48 pm

      Distance will not break relation..u proved it..?

  30. ahana on May 8, 2016 11:56 am

    Amazing abhi .You did a great work

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 2:40 pm

      Thankyou so much?

  31. Ameesha on May 8, 2016 12:36 pm

    Great work abhi.. Nd sorry for the late review!!!

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 2:41 pm

      Thats ok..thanks a lot?

  32. tara on May 8, 2016 1:58 pm

    it was awesome abhi…bt i read it somewhere..didnt mean to hurt u..bt just shared what i xprncd…bt u r a great writer.. 🙂

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 2:45 pm

      Thankyou so much..?
      Actually my tchr taught me this story,…

    • tara on May 9, 2016 7:56 am

      Oh i see

  33. Tanya on May 8, 2016 2:13 pm

    It touched my heart! I got tears in my eyes.Really parents r the one who only can sacrifice their fav things for their child’s not even a husband, wife or frnd does that for us. We should never hurt our parents. And if we pray god but hurt our parents and feel insult due to their disabilities and they cry because of us then we should shame on us. Because mom and dad r the only gods in the universe whom we can see!!!!sorry if anyone hurt

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 2:46 pm

      U r absolutely right Tanya di…v should never hurt our parents.,,They r the real god,..Thanks a lot di..?

  34. dia on May 8, 2016 3:29 pm

    I love u abhi for this fantabulous article..

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 4:12 pm

      Thanks a lot dia?

  35. fan on May 8, 2016 4:51 pm

    its very very nice . very emotional also

    • Abhi on May 8, 2016 6:09 pm

      Thankyou??

  36. sree on May 8, 2016 6:25 pm

    superb article abhi

  37. Bunny on May 8, 2016 7:48 pm

    its so awsome nd a heart touching article……
    LV U MA…..

    • Abhi on May 9, 2016 9:11 am

      Thanks Bunny??

  38. Abhi on May 8, 2016 8:21 pm

    Thanks sree di ?

  39. Roma on May 9, 2016 5:42 pm

    Awesome abhi…very beautiful…..thx for sharing this with us. ..the last para was very good. ..happy mothers day to all moms…love you loads

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