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Home»Fan Fiction»Hamsafar Kanchi OS part 1 by moonlight
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Hamsafar Kanchi OS part 1 by moonlight

Moonlight25By Moonlight25September 27, 201734 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hey guys! I am so sorry for not posting for a long time…but this is OS is like my apology letter to you guys…
And this OS is  dedicated to Annie….she is my inspiration….Happy birthday dear… I posted on your wall my birthday wish to you ..do see it ??❤❤

The story starts with a girl sitting on a bed wearing bride’s dress with heavy jewellery she was looking so beautiful…. she was Sanchi  who has turned into sanchi Kabir Kapoor.   yes!  she is married to kabir Kapoor –  one of the most famous and richest bussiness man in the country…
It was an arranged marraige for both Sanchi  and Kabir. Kabir married her as his mom wanted  him to get married soon and he liked  sanchi by seeing her photo… he admired her so he agreed… they didn’t talk to   eachother till the  marriage ….
Now Sanchi  was sitting engrossed in thoughts….

Sanchi’s pov
Life is really unpredictable…. “sometimes there is our weakness in what we want and what we choose”
I never wanted my marraige to be arranged i hate arrange  marraiges and secondly i love someone else and am here being someone else’s wife why God…why???
Yes i love Siddarth … Siddarth and i were college friends we both started to love eachother… and we decided to get marry but my dad he  always opposed of this decision …. i agree Siddarth  is jobless and he is a gambler… but i love him he will improve but no my dad got me marry this Kabir.
I told this to Siddarth that i am getting married to kabir despite making any plan of running away he idiot suggesred me to stay with him and act as wife so that we can take all his money on our name then will run away…. i didn’t  agree with him at first  but he somehow made me convince to get married to him…. and i can’t deny him so i agreed

Sanchi’s pov ends

Sanchi  to herself : but sanchi really you are doing right i mean if Kabir  is really good and what if he loves you?? so what i dont care i just want money because Siddarth  and i will run away  soon from this marriage and from him…

Her thoughts were broken by opening of the door…
Kabir  came in the room….
Her heart started beating fast if she wouldn’t control it it will pump out …

He  came and sat beside her….
Sanchi  was thinking what if he touches her and make physical contact…. no no she can’t let this happen as she doesnt want anyone to touch her except Siddarth ….
Sanchi  : hmm listen Kabir  g i am not ready for this as if now….
Kabir  gets surprised and touches her hands….
Kabir : Sanchi  i wasn’t gonna do anything against your wish…. Sanchi  we are married that doesn’t mean you are my puppet and  what i will say or what i will do you will accompany me… Sanchi  its your wish too and i will not take our relationship to next level when you will not be ready…..marriage is not about only physical contact it means understanding trust love that we share and i want it to be build up between us then only i will make you mine….
Sanchi  was just blown away from him….
Kabir  : i know it will be hard for you to adjust here but trust me mom dad really adore you alot and they will take good care of you…. and Sanchi  i wanna say something to you the day i first saw you i fell  in love with you and see i also want you  to love me but not in a way by seeing i am loving you and you too should love me  i…no i dont want that i want you to love me by all your heart and remember Sanchi  i always want truth even if that truth has many mistakes hidden i will forgive it but i dont forgive lies so don’t hide any  truth from me… and yes Sanchi  the day when you really will love me that day will be the starting of our journey…but as if now we can stay as friends right….
Sanchi  just nodd in yes
Kabir  : you can go and change as you must be very tired and haa dont call me Kabir  g….. Kabir  is  ok enough ….

Sanchi  smiled and moved towards the washroom….
As she entered in washroom the first thing she thought that what had just happened this man is really…. she is doing a sin to betray him…. but she controlled all her emotions and just thought of Siddarth.

Later that she came out of bedroom just to see kabir was busy in his deep sleep….
Sanchi  smiled and saw him sleeping like a baby on couch she felt bad as its his room his bed and he is sleeping on couch like a stranger….

Sanchi  then goes towards bed and sleeps….

Next morning she gets up while hearing water sounds….

She hits her forehead that how can she sleep so late….
Later she thought that kabir had gone  inside the washroom….

After sometime Kabir  came wrapping a towel around his waist and saw her sitting on bed…
Kabir  : good morning….
Sanchi : hmm morning why didn’t you wake  me up…. early
Kabir : hmm you were sleeping so peacefully that i thought why to disturb you….
While he got busy taking his clothes sanchi was just watching him….
He was looking so cool his white masculine body with abs he was so hot…. she was literally lost in his when suddenly she realise that what she was  doing she quickly ran  to baathroom….
While Kabir  turns around and saw that she has already gone he smiled…

Kabir  got ready and was going down when he saw someone coming from bathroom wearing pink saree her beautiful angelic face where water droplets from hair were flowing….

Kabir was getting lost in her….
Sanchi found his gaze on her….

Both look at eachother….
Kabir  decreased the gap between them…
He slowly puts her one strand of hair behind the ear…
While Sanchi  was just lost…
But when his fingers bruished her skin she realised their position…
She quickly departs…
Sanchi  : woh down mummy and papa will be waiting i have to go…..

She quickly rushes out wearing her mangalsutra and sindoor… while Kabir  smiled and thought she just need some time….

Savitri  and Anand kapoor were very caring towards Sanchi … while most mother in law shouts on their dil but savitri was very calm she was so polite with Sanchi ….
Sanchi was feeling so bad for doing bad to this family….
At afternoon she made a call to Sid ….

Sid : hey baby how are you…
Sanchi:  i am fine  Sid.bas i am just stuck  here….
Sid  : why is he bad….
Sanchi  : no sahil he is so good in nature this is the main problem his parents too are so nice…. Kabir  we are not doing right by doing this to them….
Sid : oh Sanchi  common stop talking rubbish just some more days then will run away taking all his money…
Sanchi  : oh common Sid why can’t you earn your money why are you dependent on his….
Sid : Sanchi  i am not dependent on his money i can earn my money too its just that you married the richest man and you can take advantage of the situation listen Sanchi  i dont want anything to listen….. what have we decided that will be done anyhow understood…
Sanchi  : kk
Sid : so he touched you…
Sanchi : obiviously no sid how can i let him touch me
Sid : uff duffer if you will do like this then he will understand that maybe you love someone else that’s why you are doing this things…
Sanchi  : what nonsense i cant do this things understand….just to prove i dont love anyone ok…
Kabir  : are…. i was just saying like this only acha leave it…we will meet soon ok and bring some money from your atm husband bye…
Sanchi sat down thinking what is she actually doing….
She is loving a guy who is more intrested to get close to another one just to make money…
And second she is married to that person who is in love with her not bothering to know of her past just want to live with her….
She was so much flustered….

Days passed Sanchi’s cold behaviour towards Kabir  didn’t change a bit he asked her for movies park and all but she always denied he started to come home early but she always got  busy in kitchen and then came to room late and sleeps wishing him good night…..
This was irking kabir so much….

Precap: What will happen?
Picture credit= Mix_colorful_creations

This is the first shot and I know it’s extremely stupid idea anyhow …my hands are extremely tired after typing this…i will post next part tomorrow…pinkie promise…
Love you all guys
Regards,
Tania

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    34 Comments

    1. niyati on September 27, 2017 10:21 am

      Wow moonie…..You make me speechless.Amazing……Khidkitod OS .Lovef it from bottom of the heart. Post next one soon dear.

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:24 pm

        Niyu di…thank you so much for this wonderful comment..and thanks for commenting…..being a great author you still commented…that means a lot…love you loads ❤?

    2. Khamoshi on September 27, 2017 11:35 am

      Happy Birthday Annie.

      Tania it was fantastic episode… hope sanchi fell in love with kabir soon..and kabir will show more patience ?? .
      Have Siddddd…

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:25 pm

        Mitali…thank you so much dear…you çommet me and a lot to me ……love you loads ?❤

    3. Palak.Sharma on September 27, 2017 11:47 am

      Just WOW!! Amazing, have to say Sanchi is kinda dumb in this OS. Who falls in love with a gambler over a rich businessman?? But this part was outstanding!!

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:29 pm

        Thank you so much Palak dear…yes Sanchi is kind of dumb…but she will understand it later…thanks for commenting…love you loads ❤?

    4. Anee on September 27, 2017 12:07 pm

      amazing Tanu…..Keep write waiting for d next part.

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:32 pm

        Thanks a lot Anee…i will start writing the next part now…❤?

    5. anu on September 27, 2017 12:56 pm

      So so beautiful episode

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:33 pm

        Thank you so much Anu dear

    6. Anuradha123 on September 27, 2017 1:25 pm

      OMG moon u r awesome… I was missing your stories….i really loved it to the core of my heart

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:34 pm

        Thanks a lot Anu dear..that really means a lot…and thanks for commenting…i love your stories as well..❤?

    7. Dhruti on September 27, 2017 1:57 pm

      wow dear os was super, mind blowing, ek dam khidkitod i’m speechless and it was not boring it was awesome…
      update next one soon…

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:35 pm

        Than you so much Dhruti dear for this wonderful comment…..that means a lot me …..yes of course dear

    8. Anonymousaa on September 27, 2017 2:03 pm

      Nice shot. How can Sanchi do this to Kabir??? Hope she realizes soon.
      I am waiting for tomorrow to read the next shot.
      By the way how many shots are u planning for this???

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:37 pm

        Thank you so much dear…about shots maybe 1 or 2 more…not more than that….thanks for commenting ❤❤❤

    9. Tumpamoni on September 27, 2017 4:54 pm

      Really,it’s a vry outstnding story.. Can’t wait fr tmrrw.. Plz update soooo soon..#

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:38 pm

        Thank you so much for this wonderful dear…❤❤❤

    10. Amnaa on September 27, 2017 5:11 pm

      Amazing story… Loved it very much

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:39 pm

        Thanks a lot Amnaa dear

    11. Divya on September 27, 2017 7:59 pm

      Really saanchi is dumbo kabir aww so nice update soon can’t wait

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:39 pm

        Thank you so much Divya dear…

    12. riyarocks on September 27, 2017 10:27 pm

      wow Tania…….this reminded me of Humraaz movie……………enjoyed it a lot…………….I also think Sanchi will soon fall in love with Kabir…..his caring, sweet nature…..plz update nxt one asap………

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:40 pm

        Thanks a lot Riya dear…i will start writing the story now …thanks for commenting and good luck for your exams…love you so much ?❤❤❤??

    13. niyaaa on September 27, 2017 10:59 pm

      Amaz mindblowing os tania post nxt asap sweetie

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:41 pm

        Thank you so much Niyaa dear….i will post soon dear…❤❤❤

    14. Premamohan on September 27, 2017 11:42 pm

      Its not bad just awesome pls update next soon…

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:42 pm

        Thanks a lot Prema….

    15. Abhilasha on September 28, 2017 6:33 pm

      Wowwww really amazing… Just love the concept ……really excited for next episode….. Loved it!!!

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 12:43 pm

        Aww thanks a lot Abhi dear…thank you so much for commenting….that means a lot for me…love you loads ❤??❤

    16. Sanjukta on September 29, 2017 11:35 am

      When wl you post next yr…waiting eagerly…amazing concept…

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 2:46 pm

        Thank you so much Sanjukta…i have submitted the next part..

    17. AnahitaAnnie on September 29, 2017 11:50 am

      Aww, thank you moon for such a beautiful gift!!!! It means a lot to me that u dedicated this beautiful masterpiece to me!!!! I didn’t expect such a sweet gesture from my friends.. And being the inspiration of such a talented writer is like Oscar award for me!!! Thank you soo much for making me feel so special.. I love ur plot-lines. Everytime they are soo innovative. They have a realistic touch as well as a beautiful fairy tale romance. Any praise would seem small infront of ur infinite creativity.. I am loving how u made kabir the sweet one and Saanchi a little bit twisted one.. Its soo unique and different!!! Sweetheart, i need to give u an award for this OS.. And I am very veey exited for the next one.. Thank you soo much again.. I don’t have enough words to show my gratitude for everything u have done.. Love u loads..??

      • Moonlight25 on September 29, 2017 2:48 pm

        Aww Annie….thank you so much dear..your amazing words mean a lot to me…thanks a lot dear……this is nothing in from of your ff…love you loads dear…hope you enjoyed your birthday!❤❤❤

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