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Home»Fan Fiction»Gustakhi maaf kar de….prologue
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Gustakhi maaf kar de….prologue

taasfiaBy taasfiaJuly 1, 2017Updated:July 1, 201737 Comments2 Mins Read
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Annika was sleeping peacefully and then suddenly her sleep got disturbed by something.She mumbled,”Here comes Billuji again to disturb me,”she sighed.
It has been three months since she left OM.Life was going smoothly as she finally learnt how to live without Shivaay.But from the past two weeks,Shivay was trying to persuade her.He was trying to convince her to come back as he came to know from omru that Annika didn’t do it intentionally.She had a motive behind it.But Shivaay became very happy learning that his heart,his Annika cannot go wrong,so he came here to persuade her.
And from then Shivaay was living in a tent in front of Annika’s house.Annika remembered all these things and peeked through the window,there he was.
He was looking like the most handsome man existing in the world.With a mike in his hand,”Paanika,ab toh man jao,do hafte se is motto pe so solar meri Peeth akar gayi,air kuchdin wise rooka toh meri height kam ho jayegi.”
A smile crept on Annika’s face,
“There ,I saw you smiling,that means you forgave me,”Shivaay smiled.
Suddenly splash,And shivaay was there all drenched because annika splashed water on her.
“Shit,she didn’t forgive me,what can I do,even omru is with annika,lagtahe air mehnat karni paregi.”
Saying this he went into his tent.
“Kanji aankhon wali baagad billa.”Annika smiled.
“But I cannot come back.Otherwise pinky aunty will tell shivaay…..no I cannot go back.”
“Mujhko Ranaji maaf karna,galti marese ho gayi,”
Again Shivaay,
“Ab main iska kya karoon,”Annika sighed when she saw Shivaay was doing situps while singing.
“Shivaay,the song is from your mobile,right?”
“How do you know?”
“Because the song is sung by female ,shivay,stop making a fool of yourself and go from here,I will not go with you,understood?”she said with much difficulty.
Shivaay makes funny pout face and sings,”le jayenge le jayenge dilwale dulhania le jayenge….”
“What a tadibaaz.”
“Offo,why do I love him so much??”
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
This is it.The prologue of my first fan fiction.In will post it if I get many comments.Happy reading.

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    37 Comments

    1. salma on July 1, 2017 5:47 pm

      Awesome….plzz update soon

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 7:31 pm

        My first comment.yippi.thank you so much dear

    2. madhu.r on July 1, 2017 5:51 pm

      Nice

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:35 pm

        Thank you so much.Will try to post it asap

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:48 pm

        Thank you sweetie

    3. Niriha on July 1, 2017 5:56 pm

      Awesome

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:46 pm

        Thank you so much????

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:47 pm

        I feel blessed.thanks???

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:48 pm

        Thanks for your comment

    4. manya99 on July 1, 2017 6:10 pm

      excited for the next

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:47 pm

        Thanks dear

    5. Sairan on July 1, 2017 6:19 pm

      Lovelyy episode

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 6:49 pm

        Really?thank you

    6. Aashi on July 1, 2017 6:33 pm

      nyc

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 7:29 pm

        Thanks dear

    7. Shreya on July 1, 2017 7:00 pm

      You are marvelous dear please next one asap

    8. taasfia on July 1, 2017 7:30 pm

      Thank you so much.will try to post the next part asap

    9. UF on July 1, 2017 7:34 pm

      AWESOME CUTE FUNNY INTERESTING SUPERB??????

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 9:16 pm

        Thanks…..shukriya UF for such encouraging comment

    10. alekhika20 on July 1, 2017 9:02 pm

      Nice prologue

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 11:42 pm

        Thanks

    11. Ashlyn.G on July 1, 2017 9:02 pm

      Awsome starting Taasfia..???post next one asap….

      • taasfia on July 1, 2017 11:43 pm

        ??????

    12. Sagithya on July 1, 2017 11:15 pm

      Awesome.. great start yaar… Interesting too… Excited for the next part.. post it soon

      • taasfia on July 2, 2017 6:49 am

        Thanks dear

    13. Ankita27 on July 2, 2017 12:52 am

      Nice start.. waiting for the next update…

      • taasfia on July 2, 2017 6:50 am

        Thank you

    14. Banita on July 2, 2017 2:15 am

      Awww!!!!! Shivaay is sooo CUTE…. #Cute Singh Oberoi# Lovly prolouge dr….. Post soon…

      • taasfia on July 2, 2017 6:50 am

        ?????

    15. pooja26 on July 2, 2017 9:22 am

      nautanki shivay 😉 😉
      post asap……
      tc… dear

      • taasfia on July 2, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thank you sweetie

    16. Sairish on July 2, 2017 10:29 am

      an amazing one indeed …i am happy that I took the separation and re-union part in a light way and represented it in the Same way…looking forward for the next part..do post the next one soon

      • taasfia on July 2, 2017 1:12 pm

        Thank you for your wonderful suggestion and valuable comment

    17. Arthi on July 2, 2017 11:30 pm

      U know something I just feel for ur ff…..I loved it.. just visualising all the sentences it was fab……and do.post next part soon

      • taasfia on July 4, 2017 1:02 pm

        Thanks sweetie.

    18. nikita_jai29 on July 3, 2017 2:13 pm

      It is awesome dear.. Please post soon….

    19. taasfia on July 4, 2017 1:03 pm

      Thank you very much

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